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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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With the completion of Care of Magical Creatures my fanfic output is going to slow way down, but if you want to be sure to know when new fics post, please follow me on twitter.  I don't tweet much, but I'll surely tweet that kind of thing. 

About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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dynonugget

Dumbledore?  WTF?  Completely uncool!  I hope Snape gives him triple helpings of what for!!Argh, Hermione!  I'm proud of her, and LOVE Snape taking care of her...Another fantastic chapter!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much! Again, I can't even express how much I'm loving reading your reviews!

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

I'm glad you're enjoying them.  I know how I feel when I get reviews, too, LOL.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much! Again, I can't even express how much I'm loving reading your reviews!

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

I'm glad you're enjoying them.  I know how I feel when I get reviews, too, LOL.

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dynonugget

Another very good chapter!  Loved "Ah, there's my girl." He said MY...I love it!  The progression of their relationship is just wonderful and I'm loving it...looking forward to when they finally make love!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh yes, I love that he said it and WHEN he said it! (After she said, "Bite my arse." LOL!)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh yes, I love that he said it and WHEN he said it! (After she said, "Bite my arse." LOL!)

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dynonugget

Hermione seems to have an amazing grasp of what Snape needs from her -very mature in that regard.  Woefully naive in others - which is part of why we like her so much.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. I can't pretend I had a lot of analytical control over any of this, but it's the way she unfolded herself to me and I'm really glad you like it.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. I can't pretend I had a lot of analytical control over any of this, but it's the way she unfolded herself to me and I'm really glad you like it.

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dynonugget

Have I mentioned how much I detest Voldemort?  This was such a poignant chapter!  I loved it, you know!  Beautiful, romantic, and very Snape-ish!  LOVE seeing this side of him.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  Theirs is such a slow developing relationship but I loved letting it unfold bit by bit....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  Theirs is such a slow developing relationship but I loved letting it unfold bit by bit....

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dynonugget

Good progression of their relationship.  I love how Snape is fighting his feelings for her.  Funny how he chided her for swearing!! LOL

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

This is one of my very favorite chapters. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

This is one of my very favorite chapters. 

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tinytexans

Belated adolescent rebellion! LOL Seriously though, Dude! WOW. WOW. Brilliant, really. Damn Bellatrix! Damn her!!!!! Love it love it love it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you do!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you do!

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dynonugget

OH, they're getting attached.  Excellent!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, finally!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, finally!!!

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dynonugget

Geez, he can be such a freaking prat!!  I think Hermione got more than she bargained for, yeah?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

So did he.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

So did he.

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dynonugget

Oh, my.  I never did like Ginny, but Harry's reaction surprised me a bit.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

He feels betrayed.  I mean, he truly loathes Snape, and so it's as if she went over to the Dark side!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

He feels betrayed.  I mean, he truly loathes Snape, and so it's as if she went over to the Dark side!

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dynonugget

Possessive Snape = HOT as hell.  Interesting you paint Snape the way you are, but Draco, not so nice...

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, in this story Draco is not nice.But yeah, I like Possessive!Snape (who is trying very hard not to care)!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, in this story Draco is not nice.But yeah, I like Possessive!Snape (who is trying very hard not to care)!

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dynonugget

Hmmm...wonder how that conversation with Harry and company will go.  I doubt Ron will be very pleasant.  Though I liked that Snape would summon them for her...almost sweet of him. :)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Almost being the operative word.  LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Almost being the operative word.  LOL!

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dynonugget

Well, that was an interesting turn of events!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*I was tired of dentists.*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*I was tired of dentists.*

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dynonugget

"You tasted unlabeled potions? You, Miss Granger," he hissed softly, "are an idiot." "And just think, you left your life and welfare in my hands." She popped a bite of baked apple into her mouth and smirked. "What does that make you?"ROFL!!!  So funny!!The end of this chapter was bittersweet, but hopefully a bit of foreshadowing, as well.  Perhaps they will both live through the nightmare to come?  Perhaps someday they will have a child, one that is very much wanted by both?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so glad you liked that!  It cracked me up writing it.And the ending--that caught me off guard, too.  I honestly had no idea they were going to say those things until they were saying them.

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

You know, I like that you admit your characters sometime take you by surprise, and you don't know every thing they'll do until they've done it.  It's so true!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I've agreed to answer questions about this story once it's finished, but I'm worried that when people realize how little control I have over it, they'll start finding all the holes!  (wry grin)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so glad you liked that!  It cracked me up writing it.And the ending--that caught me off guard, too.  I honestly had no idea they were going to say those things until they were saying them.

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

You know, I like that you admit your characters sometime take you by surprise, and you don't know every thing they'll do until they've done it.  It's so true!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I've agreed to answer questions about this story once it's finished, but I'm worried that when people realize how little control I have over it, they'll start finding all the holes!  (wry grin)

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dynonugget

Oh that man is SO complex!  What a life!  I daresay, he has more going on than we (and Hermione) are seeing just yet.HOPEFULLY a bit of that will creep out soon, so we can fall in love with him.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Snape revealed himself very slowly, and that goes for me, too.  I thought this was going to be a light-hearted romp but he simply would not allow it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Snape revealed himself very slowly, and that goes for me, too.  I thought this was going to be a light-hearted romp but he simply would not allow it!

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dynonugget

Best line was, "He looked very odd, enveloped in blood red with a fluffy, rose-spangled duvet covering him. She was quite sure he would dock fifty points from Gryffindor as soon as he saw it."Another great chapter!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

For all that she tries so hard not to be a nuisance, she has a way of decking him out with flowers that amuses me!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

For all that she tries so hard not to be a nuisance, she has a way of decking him out with flowers that amuses me!

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dynonugget

Holy testicle Tuesday!  Does Voldemort have shitty timing or what???  Gah, that couldn't have gone much worse, could it?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, that wedding night was far from romantic, alas.  (Holy testicle Tuesday?  I'm dying here-that's hysterical!)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, that wedding night was far from romantic, alas.  (Holy testicle Tuesday?  I'm dying here-that's hysterical!)

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qui_quae_quod

Wow. I must say that this was not at all what I was expecting when I read the summary of your story!  I mean that in a good way though!  You never fail to keep the reader on the edge of her seat with all the twists and turns you've made.  I'm also amazed that you're writing this as you go...it must be exhausting (mentally as well as emotionally).  I stand in awe.  I've been catching up on your story over the last few days and was so wrapped up in it, that I was a bad little reviewer and am just reviewing your most recent chapter.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for letting me know.  I love reviews. (Of course!)  If you come up with a better summary let me know.  I just couldn't figure out what to say about this story, since the fact that it's an MLC pretty much sums it up, and to say, "Only different" is also the same that a lot of other summaries say!Writing it as I go is exhausting and exhilarating.

Response from qui_quae_quod (Reviewer)

Your summary's not bad or anything.  :)  Maybe it's the 'yet another' at the very beginning that detracts from it a bit.  Perhaps switch up the sentences so that the 'yet another' is further down in the summary (?).Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. Yet another Marriage Law Challenge fic in which all is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure."I don't know.  I'm certainly not a summary expert!  And yes, I've also noticed the 'only different' bit everywhere recently!  :)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Good point.  I put the "yet another" being kind of cheeky because I know how many there have been, but switching that out might be a good idea.  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for letting me know.  I love reviews. (Of course!)  If you come up with a better summary let me know.  I just couldn't figure out what to say about this story, since the fact that it's an MLC pretty much sums it up, and to say, "Only different" is also the same that a lot of other summaries say!Writing it as I go is exhausting and exhilarating.

Response from qui_quae_quod (Reviewer)

Your summary's not bad or anything.  :)  Maybe it's the 'yet another' at the very beginning that detracts from it a bit.  Perhaps switch up the sentences so that the 'yet another' is further down in the summary (?).Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. Yet another Marriage Law Challenge fic in which all is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure."I don't know.  I'm certainly not a summary expert!  And yes, I've also noticed the 'only different' bit everywhere recently!  :)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Good point.  I put the "yet another" being kind of cheeky because I know how many there have been, but switching that out might be a good idea.  Thank you!

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dynonugget

Ah...a drunk Snape is always very interesting.  At least he came back from Voldemort in one piece- well, physically.Ooh, I can't wait to see McGonagall's reaction to finding Hermione there!  That's going to be so good!!Great job!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I absolutely loved writing a drunk Snape.  Quite different than I expected him to be, to tell you the truth.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I absolutely loved writing a drunk Snape.  Quite different than I expected him to be, to tell you the truth.

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dynonugget

I loved McGonagall's righteous indignation - that was great!And yeah, I think Snape DOES have ulterior motives.  Poor George, though, haha...

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, yes, poor George, indeed!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, yes, poor George, indeed!

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hidden

I've joined TPP just toget the next chapter""

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I hope you liked it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I hope you liked it!

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MollysSister

SNape and Hermione singing a duet huh? I am surprised Albus didnt question him more about how he healed her. Bigger fish to fry I assume. Oh and don't think I didnt notice yet another comment about muscle tone. This time Hermione's, out with it sneakypants what is going on???I really enjoyed Albus' reminder that Hermione was an adult before her marriage. Ha!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, Albus is quite unpredictable.  You never know whether his comments will support them or point out the error of their ways....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Yes, Albus is quite unpredictable.  You never know whether his comments will support them or point out the error of their ways....

10/10

MollysSister

Well I'll have you know that I hooted with laughter while reading this story. Thus I have alerted my coworkers that I am not, in fact working. Hermione and her howlers are a thing of beauty. I am worried about that bed, and Voldy and if she will be up for a quickie tonight. Or should I say will Snape be up for it??

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh dear, I hope I didn't get you in trouble at work, but I did love writing about her Howlers.  Hermione is a force.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh dear, I hope I didn't get you in trouble at work, but I did love writing about her Howlers.  Hermione is a force.

10/10

MollysSister

My goal is to get caught up with this! I seem to pull to within a few chapters and then <<shiny>> I am off again.

 

Ginny’s description of Harry’s power and how he has changed physically is kinda freaking me out. Is there something more sinister going on? Not that you would tell me…

 

I was really glad when Severus asked Hermione to cease with the “Mummy” crap that was getting on my nerves too.

 When Draco said that Hermione has been “glowing” guess what popped into my head? Yup pregnancy. I hope they are not under some crazy spell. I would like to think their attraction is love. Call me I romantic!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  I had to go back and look at it to figure out what you were talking about (Mummy) but that's what I love about reviews.  I love being reminded of things I've forgotten!Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  I had to go back and look at it to figure out what you were talking about (Mummy) but that's what I love about reviews.  I love being reminded of things I've forgotten!Thank you so much!

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dynonugget

Reading for The New Library Awards, and so far I'm really enjoying this!  I've gasped, laughed, and snickered.  It's only chapter 2!Off to read your next...

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  I love it when people still post reviews early in the fic, since so many times it's just easier to wait until the end.  And I'm very glad you like it!

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

I agree...it makes the author feel all warm and fuzzy. :)I love TNL!  There are so many great stories I wouldn't have found, otherwise.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I agree 100%! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  I love it when people still post reviews early in the fic, since so many times it's just easier to wait until the end.  And I'm very glad you like it!

Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)

I agree...it makes the author feel all warm and fuzzy. :)I love TNL!  There are so many great stories I wouldn't have found, otherwise.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I agree 100%! 

10/10

Evangeline Potter

This is such a great story!  You truly deserve the awards.Now, let's have the next chapter!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.  There are a lot of wonderful fics nominated.  If you haven't alrleady, you should go check out the others by following the link.And I'm working on the next chapter now!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.  There are a lot of wonderful fics nominated.  If you haven't alrleady, you should go check out the others by following the link.And I'm working on the next chapter now!

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