So many remarkable things in this chapter.First his almost - love - confession and then the way she stood up to him in front of the Order.Oh yes, they use him, but trust him?I'm sure Albus has a few things to twinkle upon now.The twins were great. One has got to love them.

Oh, so much trust.That really must be a burden.Still loving the ride on the rollercoaster you are taking your readers.

He surely must be the first, not poyjuiced man to live through a female orgasm.That experience must be life-altering for any man.

I can't help, but when you mentioned his weapon of choice, I was thinking of Romeo and Juliet.Waiting up for someone you love to return home savely ... you wrote that scene very touching.I like your Madam Hooch more and more with each appearance she makes.

They'd treated her vagina like it was a railroad station complete with rails ... *Snort*Those revels ... I wonder what you plan with them.

You delivered a good explanation to the scenes of Snapes childhood we know from canon!There's much to process in this chapter.I like Hermione's realisation that she has no place of her own anymore - and what the Room of Requirement offered her.Oh, and Snape's reason for marrying Hermione. It's good that she knows it - she had to know it eventually, but the time and how it was delivered must have really hurt.Your Snape is so full of self-loathing, doesn't trust himself because of actions out of his past. It was high time he got a loyal and loving partner at his side.

I cannot believe that I have not read this earlier! AND I believe that there is some other story by you up to be read, and I haven't read that either, and thus am failing terribly as a fangirl! *searches for a lamp to Dobby-smack self*Erm. Yeah. Anyway, here I am finally now, thank GOD, and as always another marvellous chapter. Sadly that's about the limit of my reviewing abilities at the moment. But take it as said that I cannot wait to see (albeit with some trepidation) where this one is heading... *hugs*

OH.Oh, Mia, HE PUT HIM UNDER THE IMPERIUS CURSE!  Gah!  And invited him to wallow in the pain and the anger and the hatred ...He's got to throw it off, Mia.  I know he can; Harry Potter can do it, and so can Severus.  I have full faith in him.They'll be together again soon ... oh, they need one another so badly!*hurts*

Hee.  Is there a marriage law attached to this?

I think she may have   put her foot in it there.

 Oh yes.

Snerk 

Ack...too old too rut.  So misguided...Great story so far though.

It doesn't seem like Hermione actually thought her plan through as thoroughly as she thought she did!

An interesting start, certainly.

"Care of Magical Creatures", indeed!! In addition to forgetting some pertinent facts relating to the man in question, Hermione also appears to have forgotten the English translation of the Hogwarts school motto -- "never tickle a sleeping dragon". Damn, she didn't just tickle it -- she gave it a great big slap on the rear! And I always thought that she was supposed to be the smartest witch in her year...? Something tells me that Hermione may have botten off far more than she can chew this time!  I love your characterization of Severus -- seemingly very true to canon, in all his waspish glory.

This is really exciting. And LOL about speaking of good old times relating to fanfiction. as if we were already that ancient... or maybe we are?

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( its done? *sniff*

I don't think Hermione has any idea what she was getting her self into.  I have a feeling Professor Snape is going to be as difficult as possible, but isn't that what makes us love him.  Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

I am so glad I started reading this, I have truly enjoyed this first chapter.  They are both so true to character that I can totally imagine them saying these things to each other.  I can not wait to get to the next chapter.

That was beautiful.  Excellent.  Even the ending was good and I've read a lot of fanfiction with endings I didn't like.  I laughed and cried and felt anxiety these characters and I'm so glad Severus has a happy ending here.

oh god!  Sooo overwhelming!

wow.

What are you doing right now?  Write.  Now.

It's like I can see you in my minds eye.  Computer screen glowing, face scrunched, fingers flying across the keyboard... putting to bed chapt 57.  Yes. Divination. I have the gift.

how in the heck will you get them out of this.  AGGG.  Poor Severus, Poor Hermione.  This is so painful!

OMG this is so terrible and painful and sad.  I must keep reading.  I can't stop.

Oh NO, how is he going to get out of this.  Always, the man is backed into terrible corners.  Poor Severus.  He deserves better.