So Action Packed! I was on the edge of my seat with every heart-wrenching sentence. I am eagerly awaiting more! Great chapter, Mia!

I don't like battles  but this was very different. What else should I expect from you. Stop giving me angst I want happy now..Oh well its up to you but i really would ask nicely for happy.Extremely well written chapter. thank you

Wow, Too many thoughts to express, but I'd say you did a good job of meeting the challenge of writting the battle scene. I'm slightly confused as to how Darco ended up with Hermione and not Luscius, but I'm sure that will work its way out. Great Job.

Another amazing chapter.  I definitely plan to go back and reread the whole story when it's finished, as I'm sure there are things I'll pick up on the second time through that I didn't the first.I love this story and can't wait to read more.

Ahhhhh... Beautifully done... so much tension and uncertainty.  How lovely that their connection breaks through the Imperius -- and will (I hope) restore Hermione... *holds on tight

wow  breath taking!!!!a beautiful chapter as always

I bow to you, darling.  My God but you must be proud of this.  It's wrenching and powerful and full of beauty.  Brava, Mia.

oh my! You are a story line goddess!! this is bloodly fantastic! I love every word!! MORE! Bring us MORE!!!

EEEEE! An update!  This chapter was awesome!  I can't wait to see what happens next.

What a HORRIBLE place to STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!Oh my gosh, I feel like I just staggered off Colossus at Magic Mountain, holding on for dear life to what's left of my mind and my sanity, gasping for breath:)What a ride:)I salute you!{{hugs}}Fizzabella

Well, now it's over and Snape wwill have to save Hermione. Another nail biter!Livvy

Oh my God!!!!! I get to read it first! Lucky Me... Um... that wasn't what I meant to communicate...Wonderful, wonderful final battle. You were fully entitled to get excited over it. Love the symbolism of Godrics Hollow and that nothing was decided or inevitable about anyone’s actions. Finally their back together! You've been killing me with all this anguish and she still doesn't know its over and Severus didn't betray her. So now onto healing and fluffiness... 

*breathes in deeply*You honestly had me worried here. I seriously thought that you might do a The Dark Won and/or One of Them Dies! type of story, and you didn't... I think... wow. What a breathtaking chapter! Very well done. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole darn time! And at the end... oh, Albus is alive, thank God... so sad about one of the twins... Bella is fucking nuts... I adore Draco here, freaking Malfoys trying to cover their arses... Wow.Severus is brilliant here. The angst is going to kill me, seriously.Two Mia updates in one day. Whatever are we to do with ourselves?! :-)

Tantalizing! Go on then!

Oh my, oh my. How VERY in-character they both are.

I know you said this is going to be dark, but I hope not TOO dark. ;-D

Lovely start. 

Just found this gem and I'm so excited. I happen to love  the Marriage Law stories and there are so few new ones. So far this one is a winner, new twists and turns....I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers 

What, oh what, does Severus have up his sleeve?

And the sense of foreboding is starting to set in that maybe things are going to get rather dark rather soon. 

yay, another interesting chapter!

Snape is clearly having his own reasons for accepting Hermione's proposal. Can't wait to see what they are!

And now, the show begins!

Hmm, what is Severus up to?  I can't wait to find out what his ulterior motives are.  I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next!

I love this story!  Is it based on the WIKTT marriage law challange?  I always loved that challange and so many promisising ones were never finished.  I can't wait to see more of this.  Don't let this 'stone gather moss'.

ooooh I like it! *wags tail*  keep going you've got me hooked.

What is Snape up to?  It is really fun so far. 

Oh. My. God.  Every story I've read of yours I've loved but this, oh this exeeds everything. This review is for all chapters up to this one, Ch. 20, as it's the first review I've written for this story. So far I've read this in two chunks, staying up until the early hours (it's 2am and I'm up again at 7 - that MUST tell you something) as I just can't tear myself away.  Quite simply, this is wonderful; breathtakingly, beautifully written, the essence and plot of the story is remarkably clever and the characterisation is exquisite; you KNOW Snape, you really do.  I love this; words fail me.  Thank you x