Claimed
Chapter 13 of 67
mia madwynVoted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.
Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC
ReviewedIf only these characters and this world were mine, but alas, they are not.
As always, kudos to my fabulous beta, Leigh-Anne, who dubbed my Sev & Hermione "the dysfunctional duo" for good reason!
13. CLAIMED
She didn't need Draco Malfoy to tell her she wasn't the professor's type.
The expression on his face when she'd undressed for him when he'd even gone so far as to transfigure her bra and knickers twice before giving it up as a lost cause still stabbed her like a pike.
Logically, she knew he didn't like her white knickers because he had changed them, after all.
Neither black lace nor pastel silk had been improvements, from the expression on his face.
She snorted in disgust at herself.
She knew it wasn't the knickers and bra; it was what was in them. (Or wasn't.) It took more than sexy knickers to make a body sexy.
And his last effort her nude body had clearly been a futile last resort or a giving up on the cause.
Not that she had been in any way surprised. But none of it helped her plan for tonight.
She couldn't imagine herself in any sort of lacy peignoir or sleeping robe.
The white shirt would have to continue to do the job.
She climbed out of bed and padded into the bathroom to the mirror. She Accioed the shirt, which she'd already freshened. (She really did need to get a magical housekeeping book.)
She slipped it on and tugged off her jeans and examined herself critically.
Her legs were... okay, she supposed. But didn't the shirttail hit her just at the spot that made her knees look knobby? She shortened it. Lengthened it a bit. Went shorter again. She turned around and looked from all sides, even bending over to check out the rearview. Somehow she thought perhaps it was best when it still covered her bum barely when she bent over.
Finally she was as satisfied as she was going to get with the length.
The neck was an entirely different matter. There was very little in the way of cleavage to expose, so a deep plunge looked rather sad. On the other hand, if she didn't wear a bra and if it was unbuttoned just so.... It hinted a little. A slight swell peeked out when she moved, without actually revealing anything. Maybe tonight she should just leave that one extra button unbuttoned.
Again, from all angles.
This time, she called it a loss. She buttoned the button. He knew what was there, and no "slight swell" was going to fool him. Best not to emphasize her deficiencies.
Which brought her to her hair.
It was more of a mare's nest than ever. She seemed to be too distracted and busy to even bother lately.
It's not as if he had room to talk.
Of course, he must like it a little. He had saved her from losing it all, hadn't he?
She couldn't do anything about the frizz, but the color... She loved Ron's hair. It was so glossy and shiny and rich. She angled her head and wondered how she'd look ginger.
And while she was contemplating glamours, she had the most ordinary eyes. Why couldn't she at least have blue? Or green like Harry's. Harry had the most beautiful eyes she'd ever seen.
Ron's hair and Harry's eyes.
If she could only come up with a satisfactory body...
Oh, and learn to do glamours while she was at it!
This sex thing would be a piece of cake.
Well, she didn't have time to learn any glamours today so Professor Snape Severus? She shook her head quickly. She couldn't imagine saying that name, and until he insisted, she wouldn't even try. After all, he'd never once even suggested it, which had to mean something.
She started the water running in the deep tub. She'd at least wash and condition her hair. Plus, she needed another good hot soak in the tub.
X
Thunder cracked in the distance, and the dark grey haze of rain approached.
He'd hoped a brisk hike into the Forbidden Forest would take the edge off his anger, but such was not to be.
He was the one who made one sacrifice after another to save the lives, perhaps even the souls, of ungrateful children. Spoiled brats, all of them.
Draco and Potter at the top of the list.
He'd spent his adult life sacrificing, certainly never having the time or opportunity to fret over sex and friendships and petty betrayals, but the four brats could whinge about nothing but.
Another crack of thunder.
Rain pelted down from overhead.
He took the front steps of Hogwarts two at a time.
He was weary. So fucking weary.
X
Hermione rubbed herself dry and pulled on the shirt and a pair of knickers. She had clean denims in her trunk.
She finally gave up on her hair. It was clean. It was dry. That was the best she could do on a night that crackled with electricity and heavy moist air.
She hung the damp towel over the edge of the tub and emerged from the bathroom.
Professor Snape sprawled in his leather chair, one foot propped on the footstool and the other leg stretched straight.
He seemed to be asleep.
Her pulse pounded at her throat and she felt sick rising in her throat. This morning, she'd been so happy, so sure. Now...
Could she? Could she really?
She closed her eyes, remembered the list, the careful notes she'd made, and the research she'd read.
If she startled him, he'd hex her into next week before he even knew whom he was hexing.
Once he realized it was she, of course, he'd keep hexing.
That made her smile.
She crossed the floor softly and rested on her knees before him.
She considered using her wand, but decided against it.
She studied the face under the strands of heavy black hair. The sharp contours of his cheekbones, the elegant black eyebrows, his strong (she'd decided she liked that word better than the others she'd heard used to describe it) nose and surprisingly supple lips. What was it about his lips that made her tingle and burn and long for things?
He'd never given her a truly proper kiss, but the merest brush of his lips set off a tantalizing and dark reaction in her that nobody else had ever managed in the few long snogging sessions she'd shared before giving up on the activity as not worth the effort.
She forgot to be afraid.
Of hexing.
Or anything else.
She cocked her head and nibbled her lower lip and reached for the top button of his frock coat.
There.
She'd unbuttoned it, and nothing had happened.
She reached for the next.
And the next.
And somehow, she managed to open one after another, until his coat was hanging loose, and yet his breathing was unchanged.
Her own breath quickened.
She licked her lips.
She began to love his buttons. Each time she released one, she released a bit of her own apprehension. Each time the fabric loosened, she felt her own tension loosen. Her mouth flooded with moisture as she began exposing his chest beneath the softly wrinkled white linen.
She hadn't seen it like this since he'd been recovering from the Cruciatus. She'd cared for him, rubbed unguents and massaged potions and even bathed him when she realized the very idea of pointing a wand at his most sensitive parts terrified her.
She longed to stroke his skin again, to touch the sleek, soft black hair that dusted from his sternum down to disappear beneath his waistband and beyond, but dared not... did she?
She glanced up at his face again and saw nothing change again.
She started on the buttons of his trousers and felt her breath catch in her throat. Where before they'd been snug across the crotch, now they... strained.
And still, his breath came in measured, even rhythm.
His lashes rested long and lush on his cheekbones.
She no longer believed he was asleep.
She watched his eyes as she released another button, and another.
He wasn't asleep.
He wasn't hexing her.
And finally there were no more buttons to unfasten, only soft, gaping fabric that hinted without exposing, and a sleek Slytherin snake hypnotizing her with his pretense of sleeping.
And she felt a charge of tantalizing power.
She had yet to touch, to tease, to pleasure.
Yet already, he bulged.
She remained frozen, her fingers still trailing on the last released button, as she watched his eyes. And waited.
The tension mounted.
And then, glittering slits as he let them open to spy, and then they opened slowly until they were fixed upon her when he realized she was staring at him, wanting him to watch. And when she knew he was watching...
She moistened her lips.
He swallowed.
She slid her fingers beneath the edge of the black wool, over hard, hot flesh. She dragged her fingertips down the length of him.
He gripped the arms of the chair.
Her heart thudded in her chest, and her pulse raced as she released him from the bonds of his clothing and, still staring at his face, felt the length and girth and heat of him spring free and throb against the palms of her hands.
She no longer relied on the careful list, the project, but instead simply leaned forward and brushed the mushroom head with her lips, surprised at how soft it was. She couldn't resist tasting its salty surface and found she loved the salt, the softness against her tongue. She stroked, first around the circumference, then found herself tracing runes across him
And found herself dumped hard on the stone floor. Sitting, gasping, and gaping up at him as he towered over her, his penis glistening near her face.
"Miss Miss Granger," he ground out, enraged. "What in fucking hell are you doing?"
"It's the seventh day," she said hoarsely. "We have to..."
"You don't have to do this."
"But I want to."
He leaned over, grabbed her arms, and jerked her to her feet. He drew her face close to his, and she thought for one wild and wonderful moment that he was going to kiss her. She strained forward, her eyes drifting closed, but instead
He sniffed her breath.
"What have you been drinking? Did you get into my potions cabinet?" he snarled.
"Why? Don't you believe I can be a wife without a potion?" She closed her hand around his penis and stroked it and thrilled at his response. Her smile was triumphant.
And before he could push her away, she dropped to her knees and took him into her mouth as far as she was able and reveled in the power as his angry words stopped in a choking groan and his hands dug deep into her tangled hair.
"Please," she said, releasing him, and then blowing down the length of his wet flesh. "Let me please you."
She let the tip of her tongue dance the ridged circumference of his head, then washed him from nested base to the moisture gathered at its tip with the flat of her tongue.
She daintily, oh so daintily ... nibbled.
And gloried when that rapier-sharp intellect, that dark chocolate voice could only express itself in a harsh groan.
His fingertips rubbed trembling circles on her scalp. Had he pulled her tighter she might have broken loose, would have had to, because already she had taken him as far into her mouth as she could without choking, but he must know that, mustn't he? His fingers trembled and massaged, and his gasping groans filled her senses, and then she remembered something she'd read
She opened her mouth, and he released her head, thinking she would pull away.
Instead, her mouth still full of him, she forced her throat to stretch into a yawn and when it opened, took him in to the hilt.
His gasp drove him even deeper.
She didn't, couldn't, move ... at first.
Neither did he.
But her tongue could move, she was astonished to realize, and she wasn't gagging or choking, and she wanted to laugh, to exult, as she gifted this man with the deepest pleasure in her power and knew that it was good.
And suddenly, he was groaning and thrusting, and she hollowed her cheeks and sucked, clutching his arse like it was an anchor, and it was, it was, she would fall, would collapse if she didn't have him to cling to, with hands, with mouth
And he yanked away
She cried out in protest
He flung her across the bed
She strained up to capture him again
He pressed her head back into the mattress with one hand fisted in her hair as he groped at her knickers with the other between her legs forcing her legs open, moving the elastic edge aside
And plunged into her.
It hurt.
He thrust.
It hurt.
He stiffened.
It hurt.
And filled her with hot semen.
And she didn't care that it hurt because she could only watch the sensations play across his face, his beautiful face as he hovered over her, braced on his arms. She tentatively moved, squeezed him with all her might watched his mouth open and his neck tense in a gasp beneath the fall of black hair.
And again, her power surged.
She could bring him pleasure.
She clenched herself around him, angled up to meet his thrust, unable to tear her eyes away from his face, his mouth, his chest, his arms tightly wrapped with lean muscle cataloguing each reaction that tremored through his body.
And when she could stand it no longer, she reached and took his raspy jaws in her hands and cupped them, and pulled his face down to hers, and strained up to kiss him.
Their lips touched like lightning touches and his eyes flew open, and he pulled away, leaving her cold and draining on the bed as he dragged his fingers through his hair and stared at her, his eyes drugged and confused.
"You...you've got to let me..." he gasped. "I had to finish inside of you, but you didn't you didn't give me a chance to to prepare you."
She reached again for his face. All she wanted was to feel his lips on hers, to feel his skin against hers. That was all; it was enough, but she needed it, like she needed air to breathe....
But he pulled away. He fell onto the bed beside her, his chest heaving, his penis still swollen though no longer stiff. He stared at her, his black eyes furrowed with confusion. "Where on earth did you... "
She fought a tremor of unease and rolled over to smile down at him. She felt so damned needy having to actually say the words, but say them she did, because she did need. She needed to hear him say that she had pleased him, that she wasn't a ruddy failure at everything but had found at least some way to make him happy. So despite a cold fluttering in her stomach she forced a smile. "It ... it was good?"
He frowned in disbelief. "Miss Granger, your modesty seems a bit disingenuous," he drawled as he winced and tucked himself back into his trousers, began the long process of buttoning. "I had no idea you had such hidden talents."
He rolled his head sideways and stared at her through hooded eyes. "Although ... although now that I think of it, it explains so much."
Her smile made her cheeks ache. He was paying her a compliment, in his own way. But still...
"I presume I'm not the first to have told you so."
What...what had he said?
Her blood froze in her veins.
Not the first to...?
She rubbed her hand across her mouth, and when he'd rolled away from her
She grabbed her cloak and ran for the door.
She would not let him see her cry.
She slipped through the wards and ran blindly for safety.
She would not let him see her cry.
And when she heard him try to follow her into the corridor she flung a breathless "Stupefy!" over her shoulder, saw the bolt of red hit him in the chest, and kept running.
She would not let him see her cry again.
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I've always loved this story.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
OMG, thank you so much! I've always loved your stories--The Price of Madness is one of my favorites ever.
I'M LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW THIS IS GREAT.
Beautiful ending! I loved that the baby self attached at the breast and that Hermione and her husband had an unassited homebith. I love Severus' frantic attempt at naming what he thought was going to be a boy. Since it was a girl Hermione was spared further worry. I love Winky's rebellion. Severus knows he is going to be a different dad. He deeply loves the mother of his child. They are family or pack from Albus' point of view. I know that dads are different than my dad and the other dads that waited in the waiting room for their wives to bring forth their childern. I've been a doula and IBCLC for over 2 decades and dads are different because they are present at the birth of their babes. They are different because they watch thier warrior wives birth babies so that they have a new respect for the mother of their child because they know in their hearts they aren't strong enough to do what we do. They are different because they get to share the awe of watching a new live come into the world and know that it is part of them. How much more different must those who help their wives to birth their own babes together and who get to be the one to see that new life emerge and be the first to hold that toasty warm soft body. I love how warm they are when they first come out. I know you poured your heart out with this story but I wish we got to find out what Hogwarts was waiting for. I wish I knew how Poppy got the gender incorrect and I hope that George isn't disappointed that his brother came out a girl. Thank you for a wonderful and enjoyable respite from reality. You are gifted with your story telling. I know that I will read this story again. Love,
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I loved following your comments through this read. I just warmed the cockloes of my heart! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I'm on Chapter 61. I really love and appretiate the Christian and Spiritual side of this plot. I loved the chapter with Severus seeking out Muggle Magic to heal Hermione. The story was too intense for me to stop and write any reviews until now. You mix Christianity with muggle magic and wizard magic and manage not to make it less or be disrespectful in any way. I'm a blood born Quaker and we don't normally celebrate any of the litergy or rites but I still love them. They help one focus. I really really enjoy this side of the story that makes this story different from all the other Marriage Law stories. I love the Hermione is a pureblood Muggle and her parent's aren't dentists. This whole thing is so creative and original. Thank you for giving us such an ejoyable, emotional, erotic, exciting, frightening, heart pounding read!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Again and again during the writing of this story, I worried that I'd finally crossed a line and that readers wouldn't forgive me. The spiritual and religious aspect fascinated me and so I explored it. I've found that religious people often assume that Hermione is also religious. Those who aren't. don't assume she is. That was deliberate on my part, because I didn't want to alieante anyone.
Severus is willing to betray both the light and the dark to protect his soul mate. He thinks he is making choices that bind him to the dark forever. But the war hasn't yet been fought.
Amazing! It is totally amazing how you give us a perfectly acceptable reason to sympathize with Severus enough to see why he would betray the light and choose Tom and the dark. We chose with him. He didn't pass Abraham's test, however. But the Dark Lord in pragmatic wisdom is forgiving him because he has a use for Hermione. Albus never saw this coming. He never looked deep enough. He never fully examined the circumstances surrounding Severus falling in love with Hermione Granger and she loving him. He is an old fool. But I guess no one is right all the time. I don't forgive him though. He would kill Hermione and would feel it was what had to be done just as he is willing to allow Severus to die. He needs to reassess his priorities. He loves Seveus like a pet, not a son. Pets can be put down when they have served their purpose.
Amazing! It is totally amazing how you give us a perfectly acceptable reason to sympathize with Severus enough to see why he would betray the light and choose Tom and the dark. We chose with him. He didn't pass Abraham's test, however. But the Dark Lord in pragmatic wisdom is forgiving him because he has a use for Hermione. Albus never saw this coming. He never looked deep enough. He never fully examined the circumstances surrounding Severus falling in love with Hermione Granger and she loving him. He is an old fool. But I guess no one is right all the time. I don't forgive him though. He would kill Hermione and would feel it was what had to be done just as he is willing to allow Severus to die. He needs to reassess his priorities. He loves Seveus like a pet, not a son. Pets can be put down when they have served their purpose.
"My darling boy!" She's in so much trouble though. Ginny needed to hear the welcome to grown up world speech. It hasn't been lost on me that she sounds more and more like Severus.
He feels safe in her arms. He knows she would die defending him and she is powerful and she loves him and he knows it. Fuck Malfoy! I'm sure he has his own adgenda, he clearly admitted it, but I don't remember what it is. I just know something very bad is going to happen but then it works out in the end and they are happy together.
What a beautiful chapter! All of their mutual revalations about the other on her birthday was so sweetly romantic and I loved it! What a wonderful birthday! He was exquisite. She's the luckiest woman in the world today. I know the sweetness can't last forever but it is so lovely to indulge as often as one can. It makes real life a little less bitter. Thank you, dearest mia. xoxoxox
OMG! They make everything so hard! But, I love it!!!! They are one big mess of embarrassment and resentment, self doubt, guilt, repressed desire and all manner of emotions for such suppossedly pragmatic and intellectual people. But, again, that is what we love about this particular Hermione Grander and Severus Snape. You are an excellent story birther. After a glass of wine and exhaustion from crying women and babies all day I can't think of the real word I want. Maybe excellent story crafter. You reach my emotions. Now! I musn't stay up half the night like I did last night and I must go to bed and hopefully, sleep. Good night dear mia. Thank you. xoxoxo
I had no business staying up past midnight reading this on a work night but the spell wouldn't let go of me. I'm on the chapter Lost and Found. It made me cry. I have to go to bed now and I know things are about to get worse. But I also know they end up all right. Thanks for a great read!
You did good, Girl!!!!! That Hermione is one smart cookie! She's so proud of him. She can give him so much more than that wanker Voldemort can. So he has that dark mark thing he does, but how often? And it isn't because he loves you it is to control you. What she can give him lasts a lifetime. She sees it all. I hope he is satisfied. Throw her a bone you arse. Give her some credit. Admit the love you two feel is real. She deserves it, Professor.
At least Hermione knew what vows she was taking and took them willingly. So she couldn't be under a compulsion. And you can't really take a vow against your will can you? If it is only words with no intent is it really a vow or just a lie? Well. I know some bad stuff is coming up, I just doen't know how soon. Yikes.
It seems to me his rage exceeds the crime. I know he hates to be controled. But he knows she bore him no malice. She was stupid and selfish and she admits it. What does he gain from making her suffer? What does he hope to accomplish? Does he want to break her? He is right about everything. She admits it. What does he want from her? She is stronger than I. I would be broken by his anger. To what will he drive her? Suicide? At this point I would be thinking that it would be better for everyone if I were dead. Oh but her Christian beliefs...my beliefs...is suicide always a sin?
That was beautiful! Poor man. I remember he's really upset about these vows. On to the Headmaster's office if I remember correctly. Dude! Calm down! Have some tea.
My goodness! He has his work cut out for him. Preparing the caldron indeed! We shall see his success in the next chapter I hope. I think I remember yes, but I'm not certain. So here I go!
I am sorry for poor Ron. But he isn't Severus. He isn't as deep as Severus is. His pain will heal and he will be able to move on. That is why Hemione needs Severus. He is a deep deep well of...I don't know what...he is more than any other wizard. Hermione is no normal witch. They need each other. What I don't understand is, what the hell is Albus Dumbledore's problem with it? Does he just prefer Severus miserable? Doesn't he believe Severus is worthy of such love and devotion or of Hermione? Does he really truely not trust his most important spy even though he endures near death to spy for him? I don't get or feel sympathy for this Albus Dumbledore. I hope Severus puts the pricipals of tea making, "preparing, bursting and releasing" to good use soon for Hermione's sake.
Bless their poor, poor hearts! They love each other and can't admit it yet because it's too raw and the ministry is watching. One moment he is proud of her and the next he is breaking her heart with accusations that remind her that she was being selfish when she asked him to marry her. They never get a break. Her friends certainly have something to think about now that they know that A. Hermione can do wandless magic, B. she loves Severus Snape, C. The headmaster assaulted her. I do so hope that Harry made that connection. Will he go ask Albus Dumbledore what the hell he did to Hermione? I do hope so very much!
For all of my complaints, I've felt that sigh and feeling of knowing you belong in the arms of my husband. It is wonderful. It's maked me put up with messy and lazy for 37 years.
What a fuck head Albus was to wonder why she was willing to die to protect Severus!!! As if Severus wasn't worth protecting. And she's his wife! How could Albus and Poppy underestimate Hermione so badly? She's Griffindor loyal! She would fight to the death to protect anyone she loves, those Ass Holes! Plus! What makes Albus so sure she doesn't have enough of her own power to resist him without needing a dark spell? Hermione rocks!!!!! I love this Hermione. She's the strongest I think I have ever read. I hope Albus is afraid of her now. He should be. He's lucky the two of them don't kick his self righteous ass!
I'm very surprised that when I've checked I haven't left you reviews on my first two readings of this incredible story. If reviews are payment for the enjoyment you bring to the lives of others, you dear mia, deserve reviews upon more reviews! I read many chapters last night without reviewing because I needed you and you were here to provide solace. I couldn't stop reading because you were keeping me from despair. I've loved this story. I love the way you keep us on our toes when we never know what mood Severus is going to be in. You have my complete sympathy for both Severus and Hermione. I'm perplexed and disgruntled regarding Albus and Hermione's friends treatment of her. The only person who made sense was Minerva. I love this version of her parents more than any other I've ever read, and I have read everything TPP has with this pairing. I pretty much exclusively read SS/HG. I'm grateful that her parents were really forgiving after a brief snit that had to be had for the sake of principle. I don't know if I could have been as gracious as her parents have been about her getting married with out inviting them under the circumstances. My own grown daughters have caused me a great deal of grief and I worked so hard to be the best mom that anyone could be. They have disappointed me, humiliated me and thrown away any opportunities I provided for them. They have made poor choices and I am the one paying for them. One must protect the little grandchildren. Thank you so much for all the work you have put into writing a wonderful romance adventure that a reader can immerse one's self in. Poor Hermione. She is about to face a terrible ordeal with Albus, that bastard! My lack of shorterm memory allowes me to read the same stories over and over only remembering the general direction of the story but not the details.
Yikes!!!! She's left the Headmaster's office thinking that all of Severus' feelings for her are fake because they are nothing more than the result of magical compulsions. I don't remember how they work this out at all. I only remember that some time in the future Hermione will make a crazy, mental, painful and destructive decision and act upon it to her harm and despair. I can't remember if this is what drives her to it. I need to go to bed but I can't stop reading!
Poor Severus! I hope he has better luck explaining this to Voldi than he had with his friends Albus and Minerva.
She has a lot to learn! I do hope he teaches her a lesson. Well, many lessons actually. She has a lot to learn especially about Severus Snape and about matrimony. I have terrible short term memory so I can't remember if this comes up but in her haste to save her education, I wonder if she has looked into any rules regarding students marrying teachers. Did it occur to her that if she marries a professor she may not be able to remain a student? Surely she has checked that out. Hasn't she? I'm loving it! You are witty and have great rhythm and flow.