Discovered
Chapter 9 of 67
mia madwynVoted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.
Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC
ReviewedJKR owns the characters and world. The story is mine. The beta is divine. Thanks, Leigh-Anne!
9. DISCOVERED
He awoke to darkness with his wand in his hand, a curse on his lips and both aimed at something on the floor beside him.
Hesitation could mean death.
Yet, he hesitated.
His eyes adjusted to the darkness.
She was on the floor beside him.
Merlin's soul, what in fucking hell was she doing?
A soft moan.
He lit his wand to a soft glow and checked more closely.
Her hair tangled around her in a storm cloud, she tossed restlessly.
Tears streaked down her face.
Legil--
He stopped himself.
He didn't want to know.
He reached to wake her.
Stopped himself.
He'd leave her to her own nightmares.
He had plenty of his own.
He rolled over and off the bed, stood and glared down at her.
She probably would wail and moan to her friends about sleeping on the floor. Well, let her. He didn't tell her to do that. He hadn't even thought about it before. Wondering where she was sleeping was hardly on his list of worries in recent days.
He didn't even remember getting in the bed the night before. He remembered sitting in the chair ... then nothing. She must have done it.
She wore his shirt, again. In her tossing, she'd kicked off her cover, and her bare legs were covered with goosebumps. He recalled how silky and slick they'd been in the bath water and stifled a snarl.
He forced himself to stop staring at her.
He was awake. He had things to do.
He left her to her dreams and the cold night air.
After a stop at the bathroom he didn't flush, didn't want to wake her because he sure as hell didn't want company he paced back to his private laboratory.
The wards were down.
Fuck.
Wand at the ready, he used a hand wave and opened the door.
Where there had been melted cauldrons nothing.
Where there had been broken beakers and glassware not a splinter.
Where there had been spilled ingredients spotless surfaces.
The lab was pristine, if desolate.
On a worktable rested a parchment with a meticulous inventory of what was still there, another with an inventory of what had been destroyed, and a third with other possible needed items.
So. She hadn't spent the entire four days hovering over him in despair, it would seem.
Impertinent, over-achieving girl.
He sat on a stool to go over the lists and make corrections.
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Hermione stretched her arms and arched her back, stifling a yawn that threatened to turn into a groan. Her covers were tucked snugly up around her chin, and she snuggled deeper into them, wondering what time it was.
She opened her eyes and blinked blearily
And found Professor Snape studying her from above.
He leaned against the wall by the fireplace, arms folded, as if he'd been there for a long time.
She sat up quickly.
"So," he said in a voice velvety soft. "Is your plan to regale your friends with stories of sleeping on the floor alone while I sleep in the bed?"
The very thought of people knowing what transpired between her and Professor Snape made her ill.
"Surely I've provided you with ample ammunition to earn you the pity of everyone you know," he said bitterly.
"I don't want pity," she said sharply.
He glared at her through hooded eyes.
Clearly, she thought without any clarity at all, she needed to stop looking at his bare shoulders and torso because now that he was no longer unconscious they radiated intimidation.
He flung himself onto his bed and folded his hands behind his head. She felt him, still glaring, even though she refused to meet his eyes.
Tea. She needed tea.
She ignored him and busied her hands with the preparation, but unfortunately that left her mind all too unoccupied.
Why did he keep watching her? Didn't he have anything better to do?
Ungrateful bastard.
Well, what did he have to be grateful for, after all? She was the one with debts piling up higher than she'd ever be able to repay.
She forced herself to focus on tea.
Carefully swirling the leaves in the Brown Betty as she walked, Hermione crossed to the leather chair with the tea tray following her.
Green flames flared in the fireplace and the Headmaster's head appeared.
"Severus, I must request that you and, um, good morning, Miss Gran...I mean, Madam Snape."
Hermione blocked his view of the room and used her heel to kick her pallet under the bed. At the same moment, she felt the white shirt she wore transfigure into a floor-length nightgown. She looked up startled, and found Professor Snape staring through slanted eyes at the fireplace, his hand dangling languidly beside him.
"Could the two of you come to my office as soon as possible?"
Snape rose on one elbow in the bed. "You know I don't have time for a meeting, Albus. I have classes this morning."
The headmaster cleared his throat and appeared uneasy. "I think this supersedes your first class, Severus."
Snape's hooded eyes fixed on the old wizard's head in a glare, and he asked in a deceptively smooth voice, "Do we have time to dress, or would you prefer us to present ourselves as we were so rudely thrust into this world to take our first breaths?"
Hermione jerked a startled look at him. He wanted Dumbledore to think he was naked under the covers? Whatever on earth for?
"I do believe clothing is appropriate for this meeting." Dumbledore coughed. "Miss Gra...I mean, Mrs. Snape's parents are here."
With that, his head disappeared.
Hermione gasped.
"Miss Granger, might I impose upon you to share your tea?"
"But Professor Dumbledore said..."
"Really," he replied blandly. "Are you afraid of them?"
She looked at him, at his narrowed eyes and hawkish nose and arrogant expression, and felt her tension ease. "Of course not," she replied and realized she wasn't.
She quickly poured his cup, added milk and sugar, stirred it precisely three times clockwise and one time anticlockwise, then stopped just short of handing it to him. " I'm sorry, I forgot." She forced a very innocent smile. "You prefer tea from the kitchen."
He snatched the tea from her before she could move it out of his reach. "I'll force myself."
There was no way he could hide his pleasure as he sipped and the heat eased its way into his body. "Thank you," he finally growled.
She hid her grin as she prepared her own cup.
She had something to add to the list, "Ways to Make Professor Snape's Life Easier."
It was too late to change what had been done, but she was determined to make their situation feel less onerous to him.
They sat in what could almost be termed conspiratorial silence and sipped their tea. But finally, Hermione couldn't deny the unease that tightened her shoulders and roiled in her stomach. Her shirt was a shirt once again so she pulled on her jeans and the black robe she'd worn the night before.
She'd get Dobby to bring her trunk later. And Crookshanks.
She nibbled her lower lip.
Maybe she should ask about Crookshanks.
No. She wouldn't ask.
She'd deal with the aftershocks later.
When Snape was ready, they silently made their way through back corridors she'd never seen before and, after Snape barked out the password, ended up outside the Headmaster's office.
She paused and drew in a deep breath.
"Am I happy or miserable?" he asked with a glower.
She couldn't tell whether he was taunting her or wanting an answer so decided the straightforward approach was best. "Just be yourself, with all that entails." She cleared her throat and avoided his gaze. "There are things about me that you don't know."
She knocked on the door and entered before he could demand more answers.
XXX
What the bloody hell did that mean?
He followed Miss Granger into Albus's office.
Her chin raised and stubborn, he watched her move to the strangers across the desk from Albus. She offered each of them a cool cheek to well, to brush against their own cool cheeks.
Icy politeness seemed the order of the day.
One look at her parents, and all sorts of things clicked into place, even as others spun wildly out of orbit.
The mother was tall and angular and horse-faced. She had rather large teeth and stylishly-cropped, greying hair of a similar texture to Miss Granger. She wore tweeds that draped gracefully and expensively on her lean body, and she looked like she spent far too much time on a horse. She had ten years on Severus, at least.
The father was tall and even older. In his youth, he might have been good looking, in a narrow-nosed, weak-chinned, inbred way. He obviously had an excellent tailor, and it was doubtful he had shined his own shoes to such a high gloss.
"Mummy, Daddy, I would like you to meet my husband, Professor Severus Snape. Severus, may I present my parents, Sir Alistair Granger, Baron of Eastleigh, and Lady Granger?"
Clearly, these people were not dentists.
Clearly, they held everything within their line of sight in the greatest disdain.
Clearly, if there was anything Severus Snape could return with interest, it was disdain.
"Charmed," he drawled. He folded his arms and leaned against the doorframe, as if either too lazy or too bored to make the effort for more.
He didn't like the way the mother stared at him through assessing eyes.
He assessed her back.
"Well," she announced to no one in particular. "I'm beginning to understand a few things."
"Pray tell, Lady Granger, please illuminate us all. I myself haven't understood anything for five days."
He noticed that his Granger seemed to be fighting laughter. Interesting.
Lady Granger fixed her acid look on her daughter. "So we had to find out from the Dean of the Cathedral that our only child had wed?"
"I didn't think you'd want to be there," Hermione said calmly.
"You may think you have everything wrapped up in a neat little bow, young lady," the baron blustered, "but I intend to appeal this to the highest levels of Westminster and of Canterbury and put an end to this nonsense!"
"Neither the pillars of Parliament nor those of the Church of England tremble at your approach, Daddy, so you can stop your ridiculous posturing," Hermione huffed.
Oh, that seemed to find its mark. Well done. Perhaps he could watch this as a spectator and stay out of the way of hexes.
"And while we're on the subject," her mother added, "you claim all this came up last week, but we find the banns were published and arrangements made for a cathedral wedding, which has to be done months if not years in advance"
Finally, Albus decided to intervene.
"Lady Granger, please don't blame Hermione for this. There was no advance preparation, but it only took a bit of magical intervention to smooth the way backward, so to speak, so that everything is official. And as for the cathedral wedding..." Albus looked at Hermione questioningly. "I believe that must have been your daughter's, um, 'requirement.'"
Hermione looked surprised and aimed Severus a look of dawning comprehension. Perhaps she remembered him shoving her through first, so that it would be her 'requirements' that would be met.
She smoothed her robes primly. "I was baptized and confirmed in Winchester Cathedral, as have been more generations of Grangers than we can number. Of course I would be married there." Her smirk was only the tiniest bit smug, but quite a bit filled with sass. "And of course, impossible for you to challenge, Daddy."
"I'm sure the Board of Governors of this... institution," her father announced, "must frown on such a relationship as has obviously been ongoing between the professor and my innocent daughter "
Severus snorted.
"...and I intend to pursue this matter to the full extent of whatever law exists in this place!"
"You will do no such thing," Hermione snapped. "You will go back to your life and leave me alone in mine. And when you've learned to behave yourself, perhaps we can meet again on more civil terms. Until then, I have my education to pursue, and my husband has his job."
Her cheeks flamed, and her hair was a riot of tangles as she returned to stand beside him as if she belonged there, which upon consideration, he rather supposed she did.
She looked rather disarming when she was in a snit.
Her mother clearly wasn't satisfied. "Now that you're married to a member of the staff, how can you presume to continue your education with any semblance of integrity?"
And something inside Snape snapped.
"Madam," he said coldly, "you will never again impugn my wife's integrity if you wish to see her again in my lifetime, and I warn you, wizards live far longer than mere humans."
"Please, please," Albus protested, ever the fucking peacemaker. "Let's not let our tempers get the best of us, and let's not say things that will haunt us in the future. I believe I understand your question, Lady Granger, and agree it bears addressing. Hermione's grades have always been top of her class. There will be no question that if she continues to get high grades it will be because she earned them. My staff is beyond reproach. I'll appreciate your acceptance of that fact."
Lady Granger turned her gaze to Snape's and tilted her head. "And Potions? No one will question a student taking classes from her own husband?"
Damn but the woman was insufferable.
Snape felt Hermione tense to respond but cut her off. "Of course it would be inappropriate for her to sit in my classroom. In fact, I'll find it much easier to teach when the little know-it-all," which he attempted to sound like an endearment, which was an interesting challenge, "isn't there. As it is, I have to prepare for two if not three different classes simultaneously when I attempt to teach your daughter. She routinely assaults me with a barrage of questions, the answers to which only she and I would even comprehend, since she is so far ahead of any others in her year. Valuable time is taken away from those who are not at her level, and the rest of her time is wasted on what can only be termed busy work."
He gave a haughty sniff. "However, I will tutor her privately for her NEWTs, with the goal of having Madam Snape equal or better the highest score in Potions in the history of Hogwarts. I feel it is within her grasp, under my tutelage."
Both Hermione and Albus turned shocked eyes to his face, and he blithely ignored them both. Just because he would encourage her to beat his own scores didn't mean she had a shot in hell to actually do it.
"Now, if you have nothing else I have a class waiting for me, and Hermione has her own schedule to fulfill."
It almost worked. He almost managed to steer Hermione through the door and out of the office, but the harridan caught her breath and managed to blurt one last request.
"I won't leave I can't leave my daughter here until I see where she's living."
Fuck.
"Of course you can't, and I'm sure Professor Snape and Hermione will be delighted to show you their quarters. I do think it would be best if you Flooed in, as this is the first day of this school term and the corridors are apt to be a little disorganized."
Snape shot Albus a glare, but Albus ignored him.
As Albus began explaining the process of Flooing, Snape grabbed a handle of powder from the mantle, flung it into fireplace and dragged Hermione in with him.
When they landed in his quarters, before he could catch his breath, she flung herself into his arms, laughing. "You were brilliant!" she gasped, and before he could stop her, she kissed him.
He had sworn that wasn't going to happen again.
He jerked away, but not in time. Not before the surge of reaction rampaged through him, settling into his groin. He peeled her arms from his neck and turned her to face the fireplace a split-moment prior to her mother, her father and Albus stepping through.
And belatedly realized what they would all see.
Quarters that in no way had been altered to accommodate a second person.
Quarters that were selfishly and stubbornly unchanged from when he lived alone.
A disheveled narrow bed, suitable only for one person. Half-empty teacups, books piled everywhere, one reading chair, one table and chair.
Hermione's father seemed too stunned by the actual process of Flooing to take in anything. But the mother, ah, she was another thing all together.
Her eyes didn't miss a thing as they raked every surface, glanced into the bathroom (still in disarray), and deeper into his quarters.
"My private laboratory," he announced firmly. "Off limits."
She looked at him through narrowed eyes.
"I'd like to speak to my daughter. Alone."
"All right," Hermione said. "We can do that."
Albus herded her father back into the fireplace. Snape hesitated, but Hermione shook her head slightly.
"Are you sure?" he asked, pointedly ignoring her mother.
"Yes." She smiled half-heartedly.
He finally turned to the woman, offered his hand and said silkily, "Lady Granger, you are welcome to stay in our home as long as my wife welcomes you."
He made a dignified retreat out of the line of fire.
XXX
"Mummy." Hermione offered her mother the hard chair.
"No, darling, I won't be long. I just wanted you to understand that when you come to your senses, your father and I will be most happy to have you return. No choice you make can't be undone one way or another."
"Am I supposed to thank you for that?" Hermione snapped.
"I feel better having said it, so I hope you will forgive me for needing to."
Her mother walked along the walls, gazing at the books. "Can he afford you?"
"What?" Hermione was stunned.
"He's a teacher, darling. He lives in school housing, which is neither spacious nor luxurious..."
"Mother! I don't care about those things."
"Of course you don't because you've never had to." She arrived at the bed and stared down it, and then gave Hermione a knowing look.
"You're so transparent, darling."
Hermione was certain she was going to regret asking, but she felt compelled to ask anyway, "In what way?"
"The reason you wanted to marry him."
"I didn't wan--," she began, but broke off quickly. And then, "Oh, god." She shot a nervous glance around the room, wondering what other than a certain scholarly untidiness her mother "saw" that suddenly made her believe she was an authority on Hermione's relationship with Professor Snape.
"Don't 'oh, god' me, young lady. No wonder you were swept away by him"
Hermione couldn't stop her gasp. "By Professor Snape?"
Her mother looked at her, her expression almost pitying. She closed the distance between them and stroked Hermione's cheek. "Darling, are you trying to delude yourself or me? You'd have to be blind not to see it. Oh, I'm sure he wouldn't attract most silly young girls, but a woman sees these things. The man radiates power. He practically reeks of sensuality. And his eyes " Her mother laughed. "Well, they go beyond undressing you. He seems as if he could peer right into your soul."
Hermione felt a twinge of anger. Had Professor Snape used Legilimens on her mother?
She'd kill him.
"The problem with falling in love with your teacher..."
In love?
"...is that the day comes when your world is larger than a school room or even a magical castle, and you realize that the authority and power that overwhelmed you as a schoolgirl are small and dusty and stodgy compared to the real world you're ready to enter."
Hermione didn't even attempt to respond. Her mother had no comprehension of the "power" that existed in the wizarding world, and thus no comprehension of how Professor Snape stood head and shoulders above most wizards, even if he did spend most of his time in a classroom.
"He obviously has little room in his life for anything but books and work," her mother continued, "and thus was safe from undesired feminine distractions until..."
Lady Granger dropped her hand to her side. "Until a similarly-focused young woman was born a witch." She gestured toward the rest of the room and Hermione braced herself for more scathing commentary, but her mother surprised her. "All books, no furniture. You've found a man who shares your priorities," she sighed. "And, yet..."
"Please, Mummy. It's done. It can't be changed. I don't want it changed. Can't you just let it go?"
Her mother gave her a hard look, then sighed again. "You need your own reading chair. I'll send it along." She gave Hermione a cool peck on the cheek. "I'm going to go back and retrieve your father and glare one more time at your new husband, and then leave you to it. But don't think I'm happy. Let's just hope you are."
Hermione nodded, feeling like she'd gotten off rather easily. "Erm, I need you to double up when you send my PG Tips. It seems Prof... um, Severus, likes Muggle tea."
"I'll send it by owl." Her mother grabbed a fistful of Floo powder, tossed it into the flames and announced, "Headmaster's office," as if she'd been Flooing all her life.
Hermione had often been told she took after her mother.
She sank to the bed and sat, overwhelmed. There was so much to think about, she didn't even know where to begin.
She needed to make another list.
Several lists.
She was crossing to find some parchment on the desk when Professor Snape entered from the corridor.
"Well, they're gone," he announced. "She waltzed into Albus's office as if she owned it, wished me a happy life, collected your father and left."
"My mother finds you attractive," Hermione blurted.
He paled as if she'd squirted him with bubutuber pus. "Surely you don't think you don't mean your mother "
She burst into laughter. "I just thought it was information you might tuck away for future reference. A weapon, as it were, if you ever need to deal with her again."
At the even more horrified expression on his face, she laughed harder. "I didn't mean you'd seduce her, you big git! I meant, you know you'd just " She couldn't find the words. Unable to stand, she dropped onto the bed and held her side.
"Miss Granger, I don't have time for this nonsense. I think perhaps I should leave you to your hysteria and hope that you've come to your senses by lunch, when I can assure you that you will have any number of questions to answer, not the least of which is why you told everyone your parents were dentists!"
With a swirl of his robes, he billowed through the opening in the wall. As it closed after him, she fell to the bed and laughed until she cried and cried until she slept.
Which was not a bad thing.
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I've always loved this story.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
OMG, thank you so much! I've always loved your stories--The Price of Madness is one of my favorites ever.
I'M LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW THIS IS GREAT.
Beautiful ending! I loved that the baby self attached at the breast and that Hermione and her husband had an unassited homebith. I love Severus' frantic attempt at naming what he thought was going to be a boy. Since it was a girl Hermione was spared further worry. I love Winky's rebellion. Severus knows he is going to be a different dad. He deeply loves the mother of his child. They are family or pack from Albus' point of view. I know that dads are different than my dad and the other dads that waited in the waiting room for their wives to bring forth their childern. I've been a doula and IBCLC for over 2 decades and dads are different because they are present at the birth of their babes. They are different because they watch thier warrior wives birth babies so that they have a new respect for the mother of their child because they know in their hearts they aren't strong enough to do what we do. They are different because they get to share the awe of watching a new live come into the world and know that it is part of them. How much more different must those who help their wives to birth their own babes together and who get to be the one to see that new life emerge and be the first to hold that toasty warm soft body. I love how warm they are when they first come out. I know you poured your heart out with this story but I wish we got to find out what Hogwarts was waiting for. I wish I knew how Poppy got the gender incorrect and I hope that George isn't disappointed that his brother came out a girl. Thank you for a wonderful and enjoyable respite from reality. You are gifted with your story telling. I know that I will read this story again. Love,
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I loved following your comments through this read. I just warmed the cockloes of my heart! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I'm on Chapter 61. I really love and appretiate the Christian and Spiritual side of this plot. I loved the chapter with Severus seeking out Muggle Magic to heal Hermione. The story was too intense for me to stop and write any reviews until now. You mix Christianity with muggle magic and wizard magic and manage not to make it less or be disrespectful in any way. I'm a blood born Quaker and we don't normally celebrate any of the litergy or rites but I still love them. They help one focus. I really really enjoy this side of the story that makes this story different from all the other Marriage Law stories. I love the Hermione is a pureblood Muggle and her parent's aren't dentists. This whole thing is so creative and original. Thank you for giving us such an ejoyable, emotional, erotic, exciting, frightening, heart pounding read!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Again and again during the writing of this story, I worried that I'd finally crossed a line and that readers wouldn't forgive me. The spiritual and religious aspect fascinated me and so I explored it. I've found that religious people often assume that Hermione is also religious. Those who aren't. don't assume she is. That was deliberate on my part, because I didn't want to alieante anyone.
Severus is willing to betray both the light and the dark to protect his soul mate. He thinks he is making choices that bind him to the dark forever. But the war hasn't yet been fought.
Amazing! It is totally amazing how you give us a perfectly acceptable reason to sympathize with Severus enough to see why he would betray the light and choose Tom and the dark. We chose with him. He didn't pass Abraham's test, however. But the Dark Lord in pragmatic wisdom is forgiving him because he has a use for Hermione. Albus never saw this coming. He never looked deep enough. He never fully examined the circumstances surrounding Severus falling in love with Hermione Granger and she loving him. He is an old fool. But I guess no one is right all the time. I don't forgive him though. He would kill Hermione and would feel it was what had to be done just as he is willing to allow Severus to die. He needs to reassess his priorities. He loves Seveus like a pet, not a son. Pets can be put down when they have served their purpose.
Amazing! It is totally amazing how you give us a perfectly acceptable reason to sympathize with Severus enough to see why he would betray the light and choose Tom and the dark. We chose with him. He didn't pass Abraham's test, however. But the Dark Lord in pragmatic wisdom is forgiving him because he has a use for Hermione. Albus never saw this coming. He never looked deep enough. He never fully examined the circumstances surrounding Severus falling in love with Hermione Granger and she loving him. He is an old fool. But I guess no one is right all the time. I don't forgive him though. He would kill Hermione and would feel it was what had to be done just as he is willing to allow Severus to die. He needs to reassess his priorities. He loves Seveus like a pet, not a son. Pets can be put down when they have served their purpose.
"My darling boy!" She's in so much trouble though. Ginny needed to hear the welcome to grown up world speech. It hasn't been lost on me that she sounds more and more like Severus.
He feels safe in her arms. He knows she would die defending him and she is powerful and she loves him and he knows it. Fuck Malfoy! I'm sure he has his own adgenda, he clearly admitted it, but I don't remember what it is. I just know something very bad is going to happen but then it works out in the end and they are happy together.
What a beautiful chapter! All of their mutual revalations about the other on her birthday was so sweetly romantic and I loved it! What a wonderful birthday! He was exquisite. She's the luckiest woman in the world today. I know the sweetness can't last forever but it is so lovely to indulge as often as one can. It makes real life a little less bitter. Thank you, dearest mia. xoxoxox
OMG! They make everything so hard! But, I love it!!!! They are one big mess of embarrassment and resentment, self doubt, guilt, repressed desire and all manner of emotions for such suppossedly pragmatic and intellectual people. But, again, that is what we love about this particular Hermione Grander and Severus Snape. You are an excellent story birther. After a glass of wine and exhaustion from crying women and babies all day I can't think of the real word I want. Maybe excellent story crafter. You reach my emotions. Now! I musn't stay up half the night like I did last night and I must go to bed and hopefully, sleep. Good night dear mia. Thank you. xoxoxo
I had no business staying up past midnight reading this on a work night but the spell wouldn't let go of me. I'm on the chapter Lost and Found. It made me cry. I have to go to bed now and I know things are about to get worse. But I also know they end up all right. Thanks for a great read!
You did good, Girl!!!!! That Hermione is one smart cookie! She's so proud of him. She can give him so much more than that wanker Voldemort can. So he has that dark mark thing he does, but how often? And it isn't because he loves you it is to control you. What she can give him lasts a lifetime. She sees it all. I hope he is satisfied. Throw her a bone you arse. Give her some credit. Admit the love you two feel is real. She deserves it, Professor.
At least Hermione knew what vows she was taking and took them willingly. So she couldn't be under a compulsion. And you can't really take a vow against your will can you? If it is only words with no intent is it really a vow or just a lie? Well. I know some bad stuff is coming up, I just doen't know how soon. Yikes.
It seems to me his rage exceeds the crime. I know he hates to be controled. But he knows she bore him no malice. She was stupid and selfish and she admits it. What does he gain from making her suffer? What does he hope to accomplish? Does he want to break her? He is right about everything. She admits it. What does he want from her? She is stronger than I. I would be broken by his anger. To what will he drive her? Suicide? At this point I would be thinking that it would be better for everyone if I were dead. Oh but her Christian beliefs...my beliefs...is suicide always a sin?
That was beautiful! Poor man. I remember he's really upset about these vows. On to the Headmaster's office if I remember correctly. Dude! Calm down! Have some tea.
My goodness! He has his work cut out for him. Preparing the caldron indeed! We shall see his success in the next chapter I hope. I think I remember yes, but I'm not certain. So here I go!
I am sorry for poor Ron. But he isn't Severus. He isn't as deep as Severus is. His pain will heal and he will be able to move on. That is why Hemione needs Severus. He is a deep deep well of...I don't know what...he is more than any other wizard. Hermione is no normal witch. They need each other. What I don't understand is, what the hell is Albus Dumbledore's problem with it? Does he just prefer Severus miserable? Doesn't he believe Severus is worthy of such love and devotion or of Hermione? Does he really truely not trust his most important spy even though he endures near death to spy for him? I don't get or feel sympathy for this Albus Dumbledore. I hope Severus puts the pricipals of tea making, "preparing, bursting and releasing" to good use soon for Hermione's sake.
Bless their poor, poor hearts! They love each other and can't admit it yet because it's too raw and the ministry is watching. One moment he is proud of her and the next he is breaking her heart with accusations that remind her that she was being selfish when she asked him to marry her. They never get a break. Her friends certainly have something to think about now that they know that A. Hermione can do wandless magic, B. she loves Severus Snape, C. The headmaster assaulted her. I do so hope that Harry made that connection. Will he go ask Albus Dumbledore what the hell he did to Hermione? I do hope so very much!
For all of my complaints, I've felt that sigh and feeling of knowing you belong in the arms of my husband. It is wonderful. It's maked me put up with messy and lazy for 37 years.
What a fuck head Albus was to wonder why she was willing to die to protect Severus!!! As if Severus wasn't worth protecting. And she's his wife! How could Albus and Poppy underestimate Hermione so badly? She's Griffindor loyal! She would fight to the death to protect anyone she loves, those Ass Holes! Plus! What makes Albus so sure she doesn't have enough of her own power to resist him without needing a dark spell? Hermione rocks!!!!! I love this Hermione. She's the strongest I think I have ever read. I hope Albus is afraid of her now. He should be. He's lucky the two of them don't kick his self righteous ass!
I'm very surprised that when I've checked I haven't left you reviews on my first two readings of this incredible story. If reviews are payment for the enjoyment you bring to the lives of others, you dear mia, deserve reviews upon more reviews! I read many chapters last night without reviewing because I needed you and you were here to provide solace. I couldn't stop reading because you were keeping me from despair. I've loved this story. I love the way you keep us on our toes when we never know what mood Severus is going to be in. You have my complete sympathy for both Severus and Hermione. I'm perplexed and disgruntled regarding Albus and Hermione's friends treatment of her. The only person who made sense was Minerva. I love this version of her parents more than any other I've ever read, and I have read everything TPP has with this pairing. I pretty much exclusively read SS/HG. I'm grateful that her parents were really forgiving after a brief snit that had to be had for the sake of principle. I don't know if I could have been as gracious as her parents have been about her getting married with out inviting them under the circumstances. My own grown daughters have caused me a great deal of grief and I worked so hard to be the best mom that anyone could be. They have disappointed me, humiliated me and thrown away any opportunities I provided for them. They have made poor choices and I am the one paying for them. One must protect the little grandchildren. Thank you so much for all the work you have put into writing a wonderful romance adventure that a reader can immerse one's self in. Poor Hermione. She is about to face a terrible ordeal with Albus, that bastard! My lack of shorterm memory allowes me to read the same stories over and over only remembering the general direction of the story but not the details.
Yikes!!!! She's left the Headmaster's office thinking that all of Severus' feelings for her are fake because they are nothing more than the result of magical compulsions. I don't remember how they work this out at all. I only remember that some time in the future Hermione will make a crazy, mental, painful and destructive decision and act upon it to her harm and despair. I can't remember if this is what drives her to it. I need to go to bed but I can't stop reading!
Poor Severus! I hope he has better luck explaining this to Voldi than he had with his friends Albus and Minerva.
She has a lot to learn! I do hope he teaches her a lesson. Well, many lessons actually. She has a lot to learn especially about Severus Snape and about matrimony. I have terrible short term memory so I can't remember if this comes up but in her haste to save her education, I wonder if she has looked into any rules regarding students marrying teachers. Did it occur to her that if she marries a professor she may not be able to remain a student? Surely she has checked that out. Hasn't she? I'm loving it! You are witty and have great rhythm and flow.