I just wanted to say that I've really been enjoying this story.

What else can I say I loved it! Fang sounds alot like my husband!

Ok I will admit to being a bit confused by Hermione's state of mind... but I trust you and know that all will be explained in the next chapter.  I am torn between somekind of Voldemort induced spell or just an emotional rollercoaster due to her magical exhaustion.  But there seems to be some illogical fierceness to it.  As always I look forward the next steps.  Thanks again, JoAnne

I can't begin to tell you how much i enjoyed this. I have read without stopping (apart from one very quick loo break!) right to chapter 20, and there are precious few stories that have made me do that. This is an absolutely wonderful story, told with charm and intelligence. I am so glad to have discovered it, and so glad that you reviewed my story, because that is precisely why your name caught my eye. I am so looking forward to more of this. Absolutely wonderful!

I am SO glad I decided to check this out. I love your style - your pace is punchy and it's very witty. i would write more, but I want to read more instead. Bravo!

this is awesome! can't wait to read more :)

I must admit, I have been reading this story from the beginning and thoroughly enjoying it, yet this is the first review I have left.This chapter blew me away. I have read it multiple times and think of it often.  I think the line ... "The first time she awoke, she felt ..... embraced." should be nominated for the top ten fanfiction lines along with the rest of the chapter.I check back often for the latest updates.  Will this story extend beyond Voldemort?  Given the complexity of the situation Severus is in, it is hard to imagine a good romantic outcome with Voldemort alive.Thank you, please keep up the frequent updates!!!!

How absolutely heart wrenching - and so very sweet.  You could feel the love radiating from the page. 

oh, very sweet...

Lovely!!!!  I'm enjoying this story so much! I'm a little behind in comments... the chapter where Severus asked Hermione to promise not to strike her child was so poignant - you wrote that so well!And now, brave Hermione, what a fighter! And this chapter was so sweet. Thanks for the update and I look forward to more.

Sweet. Could it be he finally "gets" it?

Keep it coming . . . pls pls pls ;-D

Loved the symmetry here of their mutual realisation of their need and affection for one another.  Short, sweet, and significant.

Lovely as always. 

good

Awesome Chapter!  I really enjoy the way things their relationship is progressing!  This is a great story!  Keep up the good work!

Brilliant!

That was just lovely! So sweet. It's so good to have moments like this between them - especially as I assume it won't all go perfectly from now on either! But at least there is caring.

Truly, what else was there to say?  That was absolutely beautiful.  Thank you for that one.

That was good!Noone had better not mess with Hermione with Severus around!Can't wait for the next chapter.

Perfect.  Just the right touch.  I can feel how their bodies relax when they are together.  Short but definately sweet. Thanks, JoAnne

Perfect, just perfect. I love how you keep them as they are in this story. You can tell they are the same people with the same attitudes even if they have begun to feel differently towards each other. You're doing a great job. I await the next chapter anxiously!!!!

What else can I say? 5 stars, as always. 

Oh, that was sweet.  I'm so glad they worked it out. 

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love. love love love. 

OHHHH! I love it when he gets all lovey like that. Snuggly-snuggly! Can't wait for the next chappie!

 YEAH!

Livvy 

This story is awesome, I'm glad to be along for the ride (and even more glad for the quick updates!)

Short or not, that was awesome! Great chapter! "His" awww. :)