This was certainly intense! The confrontation in the Astronomy Tower was quite excellent, and I'm glad Snape's finally coming to understand certain things.

I don't exactly expect him to turn into a cuddly teddybear, but a bit of caring, even if expressed in an utterly Snape-like way, is something Hermione could use at this point, I think.

well Snape appears to be making up for past mistakes. And I'm assuming Hermione thinks she can't have an orgasm? - hopefully Snape will change her mind on that too :)

Oh wow... and finally Hermione starts to get something other than cruelty and accusations from the only person she can count on anymore.Good follow up to the terrible cliffie in the last chapter. Waiting in breathless anticipation for the next chapter to make its way through the queue.

Oh, Sev. *slaps forehead while shaking head sadly*  That was...not smart. Not good. Make sure to rinse your mouth out once your toes aren't touching your tonsils anymore.

 Can't wait for more!!

Oh no, this was a bit too much. He is really the worst prat there is! This line was particularly offensive: "Although … although now that I think of it, it explains so much." He was referring to her friendship with Harry and Ron and their closeness, right?. Oh, he is really a prick!

Nevertheless, this story is addictive. Please, update soon!

Man!  And things were (sort of) going so well!  How upsetting.  I wonder how Snape is going to get out of this one.  Nicely written.

Oh man.  Call me a sap, but with everyone else against them, don't they deserve at least a bit of happiness with each other?? 

Oh boy *waiting for sh!t to hit the fan* but actually, it has already. . . . . *sigh*

Question:  in your story, Snape is a pureblood, not half-blood?  Still find it a little hard to grasp that your Hermione made her dentist-parents story up.  Other than that, all's good.

Why is Snapey still calling her "Miss Granger"???  Everybody else calls her "Madam Snape." 

Dysfunctional? Lol.

Now, he's gone and hurt her feelings. Those two truly deserve one another. 

He owes her big time in my book. 

The unmitigated gall.  Stupefy would have been the least of his worries if that was me.  And that had started off so well.  Good chapter.  Really well written. 

So ah, that was awful! - not awful writing of course, I mean an awful situation to occur. I can't even imagine how he's gonna make this up to her. For that matter, I can't imagine how she's going to find any pleasure in sex and even life with her husband if all he does is take! Prat!! Maybe if he hadn't resigned himself to just giving her a quicky beforehand, he could have stayed himself long enough to do her at least a little justice during the event. Just want to say to him, 'Good Lord Sev! You're a grown man! Act like it!!'

Wow. He really is an ass. Hope she teaches him a lesson. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Oh, poor Hermione! She just can't seem to win with him. She gets him off brilliantly and he has the nerve to say such a thing? How are they going to repair this rift?

Ah Severus, a little stupid today. Why can't he just say "thanks for the blow job, love?"

Great Chapter :)

I love this fic, it has such a great blend of humor and angst. One of the most believeable MLC fics I've read, in terms of how they relate to each other, sexually and otherwise.  Thank you for the frequent updates - so happy to see the next chapter is coming soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!! 

I'm surprised she didn't hex his boy bits off for that comment.

Loving this ingenious story. 

Oh Sevvie, you prat!

what an ass hole but i love him that way hehe' Please update some more today PLEASEEE!

Excellent. Great pace, wonderful complications, misunderstanding and a bare minimum of angst. I wonder how you intend to bring them together. I guess there will somehow be at least one other (third) painful fuck.

I do hope she will not promptly forgive him the mistreatment. 

I had an idea (can't keep it for myself). If she decides to stop crying and manages to stop expecting anything good from him, she might prepare some lubrication for herself for the next Saturday. I can't see him understanding that as anything except her judgement of his sexual abilities.

Wonderful story. A very special, quite different take on the MLC. 

Snape!  What a rotten thing to have said!

I hope he does some serious grovelling in the next chapter.  He seems to have left Hermione with the idea that she is unattractive, that sex hurts, and that when she does try to please him - it makes her a whore.  Serious, serious grovelling.

Looking forward to the next chapter :) 

Oh man!  That was just so very, very Snape!  ::shakes him by the shoulders::  Poor Hermione. She just can't win.

Oh Snape, you damn malicious twat. What did he have to say that for?

Ohh, and the saga continues. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D