I dont know if its because its five in the morning, and Ive been reading this story since eleven, but I am absolutely blown away.  It seems so... real.  Your characters are people, not just steryotypes stolen  from the books.  Not that I really mind those stories either... but this is really different and refreshing.  I was really hoping that this was the end, so that I could sleep, but now I am finding that it is not complete! So update soon!!!

The part about the NEWTs was so unexpected, I was laughing so hard!  This is one situation where ROFL might not actually be misplaced. (Even though I am lying on the couch, and didnt actually make it to the floor)I really like this story, so far!  The characters are wonderfully in character, the plot is much more believable than other "marriage law" fics I have read, and much more interesting!  I am completely and utterly spellbound, if you'll forgive the pun.

Okay, I HATE that he keeps calling her Miss Granger, especially after what he did with the whole seduction thing! Now, What's up with the new fly in the ointment? Can these people please just get happy? URGHH!

But its good, I just want him to stop calling her Miss Granger!

Livvy 

I can imagine this is one of the advantages of marrying someone older. The man has proved he has patience, intimate experience, and excellent observation skills. It appears he put forth such a great effort that he was swept away himself. I can see her perspective perfectly; the insecurity of wondering "am I normal?"

Wow!  What a powerful and lovely scene!  Really moving and beautiful.

What an exquisitely patient, observant man. Although to teach a subject like potions, I suppose he'd have to be.

Lovely chapter.  Sometimes lemony scenes can become a bit impersonal and mechanical - but the fact that this was an emotional, as well as a sexual, climax for them both made it sexy and meaningful. 

And then you leave us biting our nails over the last lines again!  Mercy!

Will they ever stop arguing? LOLNice lemons I must say

LORD. Were you having sex while writing this?this is like,, written orgasm if that makes sense... haha really great, tormentuosly great if that's a word :)

Nice! :-D 

Now I'm getting quite curious about those wedding vows.

I just can't handle how bloody addicted to this I am.

It makes my heart roar, my mind reel, and my life ache.

Ashwinder just doesn't update fast enough. I've had to come here to feed the bloody addiction you have created.

More, please, dear. Don't keep us waiting. 

That was some powerful writing. I love your characterizations in this chapter. Not sweet, but strong and compelling. You get a big WOW from me. If I don't get an update soon, I am joining the mob of angry cheerleaders. We will toss you in the air until you agree to post.Cheers, Kat

Wow.  Simply wow.  That was so sweet!Can't wait to see what Severus has to say about the vows though!

Absolutely fantastic so far!  I love that Hermione has her secrets as well as Snape, I love the way she gives in to him and fights back all at the same time, very well captured!So I downloaded it all to my computer the other night to read while hubby dearest is on the net, and came back here to leave you a review and imagine my grin when I realised you'd put up another chatper!  Thank you!

I have to go to Nashville on Friday for a cheerleading competition so it would be nice if you tell me what she has done before then so that I don't have to worry and stress all weekend long.  OK??  Otherwise, I may have to email you on an hourly basis from my cellphone and then, if you still don't comply, send an angry mob after you!!

Angela 

Well, that was a heck of an ending after all that brewing. I was about to say coughing, but you wouldn't get the joke.

Took me all day to read up to this point (with lots of distractions through out the day) and now im sad that its over. I cant wait for moreee to READDD!! =D

Thank you, I think I need a cigarette now and I don't even smoke!

OMG that was so beautifully written, what a joy to read and what a cliff hanger.  I can't get enough of this wonderful fic and after so many chapters I finally get some decent lemons.  Please, please don't stop now keep updating this is just superb.....

oh dear, I think Im going to be one of these annoying people who constantly checks back for updates. Fortunatly, I have you on bookmark, so the lovely people at this site tell me when you have updated. God thats useful!Fabulous chapter, loved the whole scene, please can i have another chapter soon?

Oh no, Hermione! 

Now I wish I would have had that line in MY wedding vows, that's lovely.

I just kept waiting for her to say the potion needed stirring, but thinking more on it, that would be rather trite, wouldn't it?

Looking forward to the next installment!

Oh, no!  What has she done???

Well, I'm glad she finally let loose a little. Nice to see Hermione finally enjoy herself - at least for a minute or two. Too bad the '[happy ending' had to end so quickly :) Back to the reality of her situation.

I can just imagine what Hermione did without knowing.   Now they are probably bound forever.  If Severus is hurt or killed  Hermione will have some kind of effect.  Like death or pain or both.  I'm sure that is not what Severus wanted.  That is if I'm correct.

Wonderful! But is the blasted man EVER going to STOP calling her MISS GRANGER??