I soooo hate Lucius right now... and I love that Severus does not share *sighs wishfully*

This is BRILLIANT. I love the fact that it was done over a short period of time, not trying to smush lots of weeks and months in there. I love the humor.

Gorgeous as usual.  Loved the opening scene, beautiful and sweet.  Wish it wouldn't go dark though but I guess that part of the story has to be completed.  Update soon, your killing me between updates here. 

Ouch!  Lucius is a bastard.  Now Severus is going to have that thought in his mind that she coud cheat on him and he would never know.

A wonderful story, Im shocked its your first fanfic. So beautifully written I love the little subtle humours and atention to detail. Please say there will be an update soon!!

Severus is surely too intelligent to fall for Lucius's taunts at this stage... although the possibility of revels is rather scary. Intriguing!

This is disturbing, and I'm still pushing for a happy ending.

Lucius seems remarkably well informed for someone neither in Gryffindor nor at Hogwarts.

You can't believe a word a Malfoy says.   It is so fustrating watching them ignore their feelings for each other.   I hope Severus doesn't let her be in a revel.  He would lose her for sure.

Ohhh that conversation was absolutely hilarious. I laughed out loud. You have kept them in character perfectly - respecttt. I'm glad I've only just started reading it and there's so much more already up.. A-wahoo.

Loved the update - this story has so many wonderful twists to it - cannot wait for the next. 

Very enjoyable chapter, but oh, how I would like to kick Lucius Malfoy right in the nuts. He's nasty!

Very nice chapter. Oh, my gods, I'd love to be awoken up like that!! And Lucius - what game is he playing at?Please update soon....

Wow, Lucius is certainly spitting venum.  Why do I have a feeling my two favorite people are going to have a rough patch?

OK how did Albus KNOW about their night???

This chapter left me with a feeling of dread for what was to come of Hermione (I keep reading ahead but I come here to review). At the same time though, knowing that our couple is finally beginning to accept what they feel for each other (well sort of) allows the story to give positive feelings as well - you aren't sending the reader into a downward spiral that they have to claw their way out of later. lolAs always your writing is exceptional, allowing the reader to feel what the characters are feeling without bashing us over the head with wordy explanations. Absolutely incredible writing skills! Great work!!

oooo this just get more evil.  I would love to hex LM myself!  Well, done.  Irish

Wow! What a wedding! What a scene. I hope you are feeling all right, not suffering burnout or anything.

Oh shit, what an intense chapter.......brilliant and scary!

EEEEeeeeeeeehhh. This is SOOOO good!!! That's all...
It's my crack!! :P And I'm a total junkie!

I would have left you reviews for all the chapters I have missed, but I simply could not stand to pause until I had read to this point! Wonderful, as always. You have managed to weave so many elements into this story. I am very much looking forward to more. :)

This was one of my favorite chapters! I like how we get to see Snape's issues with his past, and that he had to face the reasons his mother behaved as she did. I also really like the 'is it magic or is it real' aspect.

Wow, that was ...well...intense! So heartbreaking. He really does care about her but how much is him and how much is the vow-magic? I'll just pretend it's all him...

I love it, as always!

Wow.  Simply wow.  Well, I no longer have any idea what happened at the beginning of this chapter (I'm sure it was wonderful though!), but phewee, nice smut, hun!  Totally captured all the emotions there, the haste, the desperation.  I'd say you should take up poetry, but no, don't do that, I want more chapters like this :D

Oh please tell me more is coming soon--  I'll be madder than Bella if there isn't more soon!!  OOOHHHHH!!!  This was so hot and natural and wonderful  Happy New Year indeed!