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Care of Magical Creatures
mia madwyn2,762 Reviews | 6.75/10 (2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )
Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.
Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC
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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!
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About Mia
I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.
I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.
I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.
Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures
Freaking awesome! Your fic really is my favourite.And the intrigue just keeps coming. Really well done. I cant wait to see how it all pans out.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you!
I really enjoyed this chapter, and got a chuckle out of Hermione starting to analyze the vows. If anyone can figure it out, she can!And I think Severus had a much needed mental shift, when he kept thinking about how Hermione was a silly, romantic girl, but then thought "she's the cleverest witch of her age." Maybe that thought will jar him out of his negative thoughts into a something more productive - I don't know if I'm explaining this clearly but it seems if he can move on and accept that they're bonded in an unexpected way, and that Hermione may be right that it's not a bad thing, then maybe that can be helpful to them (in the war as well as personally). At any rate, I liked the way you wrote his thoughts and thought this was a good chapter (ok, they all are!), and am looking forward to the next one!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much! He's struggling so hard trying to convince himself she doesn't know what she's doing, isn't he?
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much! He's struggling so hard trying to convince himself she doesn't know what she's doing, isn't he?
Oh! Another sad chapter! I can't wait for the nest bit!
~Katie
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Expect it very soon!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Expect it very soon!
Well wasn't the marriage "vow" magic a good little twist. Heh! Kudos to you! I'm not big on the SS/HG ship but do enjoy delving into it once in a while. I started reading yours this week and have been glued to it every little spare moment I have had. I'm loving the humor and the way you have been torturing Severus and Hermione's emotions. The old sexual tension rollercoaster ride you have been treating us to is quite fun. Now you have us wondering... is it hormones, dark magic or just some weird development of love and respect between the two . Guess I'll go back to reading.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I'm glad I'm making the story work for you, especially since you're not a regular reader of this ship!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I'm glad I'm making the story work for you, especially since you're not a regular reader of this ship!
Hermione made some good points there, about the vows and the compulsions or not-compulsions. I'm interested to see where her analysis of the whole thing will take them.
Severus being summoned seems ominous, considering the previous chapter. I hope it's not anything horrible, but how likely is that? ;-) In any case, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks. There's more to come on the vows!
The next chapter is waiting its turn in line!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks. There's more to come on the vows!
The next chapter is waiting its turn in line!
Poor Severus. You can see what has made him as he is if his survival depends on "embracing the emptiness". Interesting research idea Hermione came up with as well. They are quite the pair. As always, I look forward to your next posting. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks -- it should join the queue tonight!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks -- it should join the queue tonight!
Hermione is right but she forgot to mention that she feels deeply for him also. brilliant chapter. More Please
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much.
I wonder why Voldemort summoned Severus. Hopefully not to tell Severus about a planned revel that includes Hermione. At least Severus and Hermione seem to be on okay terms after their "fight" in Dumbledore's office and afterwards. I am curious how long the contraceptive potion lasts. I am sure that Severus would be upset if he let himself get Hermione pregnant.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I really need to deal with that. It's a 24-hour contraceptive so repeated "activity" won't be a problem, as long as once the 24 hours is up, she takes more before more activity. He's been giving it to her appropriately. She doesn't have to take it on days when they don't have sex.
So all this is in my head so I know they're safe, but it has never been addressed in the fic. Am I holding back on that info, just in case I decide she needs to get pregnant after all? I don't think so!
But it certainly hasn't been explained and I wondered if anybody else would wonder about it!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I really need to deal with that. It's a 24-hour contraceptive so repeated "activity" won't be a problem, as long as once the 24 hours is up, she takes more before more activity. He's been giving it to her appropriately. She doesn't have to take it on days when they don't have sex.
So all this is in my head so I know they're safe, but it has never been addressed in the fic. Am I holding back on that info, just in case I decide she needs to get pregnant after all? I don't think so!
But it certainly hasn't been explained and I wondered if anybody else would wonder about it!
another wonderful chapter. please update soon.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks! It will be in the queue before the day is over!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks! It will be in the queue before the day is over!
I got chills, no really its cold in here and in the lovely -2 weather we have right now. But your tale is giving me chills in a good way and I'm wondering where you are going with this all.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, thank you so very much! I'm so pleased.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, thank you so very much! I'm so pleased.
I am a Care of Magical Creatures junkie - I just can't get enough!
Brilliant chapter. Loved Hermiones practical way of research and Severus' distress at seeing those words written for all to see in his classroom.
More. more.........................please.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks so much! I just figured Hermione would be very cliinical and thorough in her research!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks so much! I just figured Hermione would be very cliinical and thorough in her research!
The ending of this chapter (the Summons, etc) was fantastic.
May I respectfully suggest a "put your food down" warning? The bit with Dobby nearly killed me; I had a mouthful of food and nearly choked on it I was laughing so hard! ;)
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Really? I wouldn't have even thought to put one there! LOL!
Thanks!
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Well, maybe I'm just weird.
Okay, no maybe about it. I *am* weird. ;)
I suppose wait and see what your other readers have to say about that part of the chapter. :D
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, don't get me wrong -- I hoped it was funny, I just wasn't sure if it was! So I was very pleased to see you comment on it!
You know, in any given scene or chapter the odds are that I wrote some things that I hoped were funny or at least amusing, and some things that were poignant or even angsty, and/or some things that were romantic. And nobody can comment on as many things as I wonder about. (wry grin) So when somebody comments, it's usually greeted by a soft squee from me because I realize that whatever I did there worked.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Really? I wouldn't have even thought to put one there! LOL!
Thanks!
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Well, maybe I'm just weird.
Okay, no maybe about it. I *am* weird. ;)
I suppose wait and see what your other readers have to say about that part of the chapter. :D
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, don't get me wrong -- I hoped it was funny, I just wasn't sure if it was! So I was very pleased to see you comment on it!
You know, in any given scene or chapter the odds are that I wrote some things that I hoped were funny or at least amusing, and some things that were poignant or even angsty, and/or some things that were romantic. And nobody can comment on as many things as I wonder about. (wry grin) So when somebody comments, it's usually greeted by a soft squee from me because I realize that whatever I did there worked.
leave it to Hemione to list marriage vows and figure out 'muggle magic' lolo. She is trying to so hard, I feel for the girl.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Well, if anybody can crack it, she can!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Well, if anybody can crack it, she can!
<-- crawling out of bum-dom to drop a review. Excellent chapter, as always. You've got a delicious blend of tension, angst and humor that has me trolling for updates. Fortunately for me, you update frequently!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, I love that little avatar? Tea or coffee or firewhisky in that mug?
And thank you!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Oh, I love that little avatar? Tea or coffee or firewhisky in that mug?
And thank you!
How can you say 'it's getting better and better' any other way than it's getting better and better. Each chapter brings a new twist. I can never guess what will happen next. Wonderful story. Very enjoyable to read. Anticipating the results of Snape's summons. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long. Although, we, your faithful readers will try to patiently wait - not really, will you post the next chapter soon?
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you! I'll get the next chapter coded and submitted asap!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you! I'll get the next chapter coded and submitted asap!
Severus is so tragically sad. I really love your story, and I'm still pushing for that happy ending.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you. He is sad, but I think things will get better for him.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you. He is sad, but I think things will get better for him.
Ah, I love the wizard's shaving soap. That was ingenious! At least they probably could have used a charm or a potion to fix Hermione's hair if it had been affected. Anyway, great idea!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I wish I had some wizard's shaving soap!!!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
I wish I had some wizard's shaving soap!!!
Please tell me that this is going to turn positive sometime soon. Do not get me wrong it is well and beautifully written it is just so desolate. Severus deserves happiness and love. He seems to be tearing himself apart more and more
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Severus has a journey to make. Thank you for caring so much, an for wanting to read it and follow it with him.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Severus has a journey to make. Thank you for caring so much, an for wanting to read it and follow it with him.
Oh man, I'm enjoying this!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you! I appreciate it!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you! I appreciate it!
I am very impressed with the development of your story. If I had only an ounce of your talent, I'd be grateful. I can't wait for the nex chapter.
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Wow, thank you. That's such a nice thing to say. I'm honored!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Wow, thank you. That's such a nice thing to say. I'm honored!
Brilliant! Thankies for writing more! This chapter rocks!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks! I appreciate it!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thanks! I appreciate it!
This just gets better and better. What an exquisite chapter (and the one before, as well - I've taken to re-reading the preceding one before savoring the new one, and you cannot write fast enough to suit me!).
You are managing the extraordinarily tricky task of keeping Severus in character as a snarky, difficult, complex, self-critical man, while also making the romance develop believably (slowly, excrutiatingly so!, but believably slowly!). His internal monologue is beginning to make the turn that his external voice still cannot admit in actual words.
And this Hermione, who is continuing to learn so much and so much faster than her teacher, will, I think, have to be the one who will finally force them past the verbal formality of their means of addressing one another. Though she still even thinks of him as "Professor Snape," she is on the verge of insisting on the equality that she is only just now becoming entitled to demand. The next time she takes that face in her hands I think she must show him the power that comes with calling him by his first name. All hell may break loose. That's how powerful names can be.
And I can't wait until you write it!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much for your fabulous review!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you so much for your fabulous review!
Wow - great chapter, best one yet, I think. I loved the ending. But he still needs to stop calling her Miss Granger!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
Thank you!
Poor Severus, he is fighting a losing battle! Just give in, dammit! Typical Hermione, she'd turn sex in to a lecture. LOL I can't beleive she had those words on the chalkboard! Oh my gosh! Keep up the good work.
Livvy
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
LOL! Yes, she did everything but write a 3-foot parchment on the subject!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
LOL! Yes, she did everything but write a 3-foot parchment on the subject!
Great story! update soon please. but I must say i cannot see what could be a problem whith muggle wedding vows in the wizarding world... (i understand about the "obeying" part, but loving and protecting can't be bad, tough)
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
The vows may come clearer in later chapters. Thanks!
Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)
The vows may come clearer in later chapters. Thanks!