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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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10/10

potterino

Freaking awesome! Your fic really is my favourite.And the intrigue just keeps coming. Really well done. I cant wait to see how it all pans out.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

10/10

tacdogs

I really enjoyed this chapter, and got a chuckle out of Hermione starting to analyze the vows. If anyone can figure it out, she can!And I think Severus had a much needed mental shift, when he kept thinking about how Hermione was a silly, romantic girl, but then thought "she's the cleverest witch of her age." Maybe that thought will jar him out of his negative thoughts into a something more productive - I don't know if I'm explaining this clearly but it seems if he can move on and accept that they're bonded in an unexpected way, and that Hermione may be right that it's not a bad thing, then maybe that can be helpful to them (in the war as well as personally).  At any rate, I liked the way you wrote his thoughts and thought this was a good chapter (ok, they all are!), and am looking forward to the next one!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  He's struggling so hard trying to convince himself she doesn't know what she's doing, isn't he?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  He's struggling so hard trying to convince himself she doesn't know what she's doing, isn't he?

9/10

Katie616

Oh! Another sad chapter! I can't wait for the nest bit!

~Katie

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Expect it very soon!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Expect it very soon!

9/10

potionmistress60

Well wasn't the marriage "vow" magic a good little twist. Heh! Kudos to you! I'm not big on the SS/HG ship but do enjoy delving into it once in a while. I started reading yours this week and have been glued to it every little spare moment I have had. I'm loving the humor and the way you have been torturing Severus and Hermione's emotions. The old sexual tension rollercoaster ride you have been treating us to is quite fun. Now you have us wondering... is it hormones, dark magic or just some weird development of love and respect between the two . Guess I'll go back to reading.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm glad I'm making the story work for you, especially since you're not a regular reader of this ship!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm glad I'm making the story work for you, especially since you're not a regular reader of this ship!

0/10

Mint Stick

Hermione made some good points there, about the vows and the compulsions or not-compulsions. I'm interested to see where her analysis of the whole thing will take them.

Severus being summoned seems ominous, considering the previous chapter. I hope it's not anything horrible, but how likely is that? ;-) In any case, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  There's more to come on the vows!

The next chapter is waiting its turn in line!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks.  There's more to come on the vows!

The next chapter is waiting its turn in line!

9/10

JoKK2

Poor Severus.  You can see what has made him as he is if his survival depends on "embracing the emptiness".  Interesting research idea Hermione came up with as well.  They are quite the pair.  As always, I look forward to your next posting.  Thanks, JoAnne

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks -- it should join the queue tonight!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks -- it should join the queue tonight!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Hermione is right but she forgot to mention that she feels deeply for him also.  brilliant chapter.  More Please

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

I wonder why Voldemort summoned Severus. Hopefully not to tell Severus about a planned revel that includes Hermione. At least Severus and Hermione seem to be on okay terms after their "fight" in Dumbledore's office and afterwards. I am curious how long the contraceptive potion lasts. I am sure that Severus would be upset if he let himself get Hermione pregnant.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I really need to deal with that.  It's a 24-hour contraceptive so repeated "activity" won't be a problem, as long as once the 24 hours is up, she takes more before more activity.  He's been giving it to her appropriately.  She doesn't have to take it on days when they don't have sex.

So all this is in my head so I know they're safe, but it has never been addressed in the fic.  Am I holding back on that info, just in case I decide she needs to get pregnant after all?  I don't think so!

But it certainly hasn't been explained and I wondered if anybody else would wonder about it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I really need to deal with that.  It's a 24-hour contraceptive so repeated "activity" won't be a problem, as long as once the 24 hours is up, she takes more before more activity.  He's been giving it to her appropriately.  She doesn't have to take it on days when they don't have sex.

So all this is in my head so I know they're safe, but it has never been addressed in the fic.  Am I holding back on that info, just in case I decide she needs to get pregnant after all?  I don't think so!

But it certainly hasn't been explained and I wondered if anybody else would wonder about it!

0/10

pumkin

another wonderful chapter. please update soon.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!  It will be in the queue before the day is over!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!  It will be in the queue before the day is over!

8/10

Lkmaide

I got chills, no really its cold in here and in the lovely -2 weather we have right now.  But your tale is giving me chills in a good way and I'm wondering where you are going with this all.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, thank you so very much!  I'm so pleased.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, thank you so very much!  I'm so pleased.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

I am a Care of Magical Creatures junkie - I just can't get enough!

Brilliant chapter.  Loved Hermiones practical way of research and Severus' distress at seeing those words written for all to see in his classroom.

More. more.........................please. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks so much!  I just figured Hermione would be very cliinical and thorough in her research!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks so much!  I just figured Hermione would be very cliinical and thorough in her research!

0/10

cmwinters

The ending of this chapter (the Summons, etc) was fantastic. 

May I respectfully suggest a "put your food down" warning?  The bit with Dobby nearly killed me; I had a mouthful of food and nearly choked on it I was laughing so hard!  ;) 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Really?  I wouldn't have even thought to put one there!  LOL!

Thanks!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Well, maybe I'm just weird.

Okay, no maybe about it.  I *am* weird. ;)  

I suppose wait and see what your other readers have to say about that part of the chapter. :D

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, don't get me wrong -- I hoped it was funny, I just wasn't sure if it was!  So I was very pleased to see you comment on it!

You know, in any given scene or chapter the odds are that I wrote some things that I hoped were funny or at least amusing, and some things that were poignant or even angsty, and/or some things that were romantic.  And nobody can comment on as many things as I wonder about.  (wry grin)  So when somebody comments, it's usually greeted by a soft squee from me because I realize that whatever I did there worked.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Really?  I wouldn't have even thought to put one there!  LOL!

Thanks!

Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)

Well, maybe I'm just weird.

Okay, no maybe about it.  I *am* weird. ;)  

I suppose wait and see what your other readers have to say about that part of the chapter. :D

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, don't get me wrong -- I hoped it was funny, I just wasn't sure if it was!  So I was very pleased to see you comment on it!

You know, in any given scene or chapter the odds are that I wrote some things that I hoped were funny or at least amusing, and some things that were poignant or even angsty, and/or some things that were romantic.  And nobody can comment on as many things as I wonder about.  (wry grin)  So when somebody comments, it's usually greeted by a soft squee from me because I realize that whatever I did there worked.

10/10

sinbad

leave it to Hemione to list marriage vows and figure out 'muggle magic' lolo.  She is trying to so hard, I feel for the girl.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, if anybody can crack it, she can!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, if anybody can crack it, she can!

10/10

rhiannonofthemoon

  <-- crawling out of bum-dom to drop a review.  Excellent chapter, as always.  You've got a delicious blend of tension, angst and humor that has me trolling for updates.  Fortunately for me, you update frequently!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I love that little avatar?  Tea or coffee or firewhisky in that mug?

And thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I love that little avatar?  Tea or coffee or firewhisky in that mug?

And thank you!

10/10

Sharn

How can you say 'it's getting better and better' any other way than it's getting better and better.  Each chapter brings a new twist.  I can never guess what will happen next.  Wonderful story.  Very enjoyable to read.  Anticipating the results of Snape's summons.  Please don't keep us in suspense for too long.  Although, we, your faithful readers will try to patiently wait - not really, will you post the next chapter soon?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I'll get the next chapter coded and submitted asap!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I'll get the next chapter coded and submitted asap!

10/10

blue artemis

Severus is so tragically sad. I really love your story, and I'm still pushing for that happy ending.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  He is sad, but I think things will get better for him.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  He is sad, but I think things will get better for him.

10/10

harrypotterwanter

Ah, I love the wizard's shaving soap. That was ingenious! At least they probably could have used a charm or a potion to fix Hermione's hair if it had been affected. Anyway, great idea!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I wish I had some wizard's shaving soap!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I wish I had some wizard's shaving soap!!!

10/10

irishredlass

Please tell me that this is going to turn positive sometime soon.  Do not get me wrong it is well and beautifully written it is just so desolate.  Severus deserves happiness and love.  He seems to be tearing himself apart more and more

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Severus has a journey to make.  Thank you for caring so much, an for wanting to read it and follow it with him.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Severus has a journey to make.  Thank you for caring so much, an for wanting to read it and follow it with him.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh man, I'm enjoying this!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I appreciate it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I appreciate it!

0/10

mugglemom

I am very impressed with the development of your story. If I had only an ounce of your talent, I'd be grateful. I can't wait for the nex chapter.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Wow, thank you.  That's such a nice thing to say.  I'm honored!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Wow, thank you.  That's such a nice thing to say.  I'm honored!

10/10

Griffins Calling

Brilliant! Thankies for writing more! This chapter rocks!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!  I appreciate it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thanks!  I appreciate it!

10/10

Elise_Wanderer

This just gets better and better.  What an exquisite chapter (and the one before, as well - I've taken to re-reading the preceding one before savoring the new one, and you cannot write fast enough to suit me!).

You are managing the extraordinarily tricky task of keeping Severus in character as a snarky, difficult, complex, self-critical man, while also making the romance develop believably (slowly, excrutiatingly so!, but believably slowly!).  His internal monologue is beginning to make the turn that his external voice still cannot admit in actual words.

And this Hermione, who is continuing to learn so much and so much faster than her teacher, will, I think, have to be the one who will finally force them past the verbal formality of their means of addressing one another.  Though she still even thinks of him as "Professor Snape," she is on the verge of insisting on the equality that she is only just now becoming entitled to demand.  The next time she takes that face in her hands I think she must show him the power that comes with calling him by his first name.  All hell may break loose.  That's how powerful names can be.

And I can't wait until you write it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for your fabulous review!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for your fabulous review!

10/10

Minutiae

Wow - great chapter, best one yet, I think. I loved the ending. But he still needs to stop calling her Miss Granger!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!

10/10

livvy6

Poor Severus, he is fighting a losing battle! Just give in, dammit! Typical Hermione, she'd turn sex in to a lecture. LOL I can't beleive she had those words on the chalkboard! Oh my gosh! Keep up the good work.

Livvy 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Yes, she did everything but write a 3-foot parchment on the subject!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Yes, she did everything but write a 3-foot parchment on the subject!

0/10

La Mariane

Great story! update soon please. but I must say i cannot see what could be a problem whith muggle wedding vows in the wizarding world... (i understand about the "obeying" part, but loving and protecting can't be bad, tough)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

The vows may come clearer in later chapters. Thanks!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

The vows may come clearer in later chapters. Thanks!

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