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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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10/10

shadowfire76

Holy Cow!!!  *sputters*  I would hate to be in Snape's postion right now.  How will  Hermione deal with this twist?  OMG Harry and Ron will go ballistic if they find out that Voldie is Snape's daddy. *sputters some more*  I can't wait until the next chapter.  

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Harry and Ron--that will be something to see, won't it?

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Harry and Ron--that will be something to see, won't it?

Thank you so much for reviewing!

0/10

Severessa

This is becoming more powerful with each chapter you write. I have no words that can describe the way the story draws the reader in, except that you really, really, REALLY should be getting paid to write. Should you choose to publish something, your ability to build a world with words would make you a very rich lady. You have no need for your day job.....You ROCK!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

What wonderful things to say to me! I promise, if I ever have a book to sell, I'll let everybody know.

But in the meantime it means so very much to me that you had this reaction. Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

What wonderful things to say to me! I promise, if I ever have a book to sell, I'll let everybody know.

But in the meantime it means so very much to me that you had this reaction. Thank you.

0/10

orm irian

Of all the twists you have dealt us, this one is the most bizarro.  Whew!  I'm not sure what to think...

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Hang tight. There is a method to the madness....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Hang tight. There is a method to the madness....

10/10

notplainjane

Holy cow!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I suppose I must admit I'm pleased with your response, and so I thank you very much for letting me know!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I suppose I must admit I'm pleased with your response, and so I thank you very much for letting me know!

10/10

Gemxk2

fucking hell. Wow.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I know. Believe me. I know. I've been a nutcase over this chapter. Thank you so much for responding.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I know. Believe me. I know. I've been a nutcase over this chapter. Thank you so much for responding.

10/10

ladyz

Unbelievable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!when you mentioned elfin crystal goblets in the 53 chapter i immediately thought :"is it a coincidence that the only thing that Severus has from his father is such a set? what role does it play? are the properties of elfin crystal such that they play a significant role or is it their existence only? or both in the end?and is Voldemport Severus' father? could he be? or am i overanalyzing and reading too much into this? and if he is, i better not mention my question in my review coz i will be ruining it!!"i thought  that Voldemort being Severus' father was me being obsessed with your story and digging up clues that don't exist but it seems that i am not seeing things,right?when the e-mail alert came i was ecstatic!!!!!!!!!i started reading and ended up rereading it 3 times so here we go..they were so weak and tired and crying in their sleep bloody tears that i was crying too for their desperation and pain and not knowing if the other is ok and where he/she is....i really detested Bellatrix for asking: “What did you do?” she asked, her voice a seductive purr. “What did you do to win his favour?” and Hermione alone during all this,the pain unbearable and she needed him holding her as much as he needed her but no they are on their own,Severus with the Death Eaters breathing down his neck and being jealous and Voldemort watching his every move and the concern for Hermione eating him and Hermione dealing not only with the pain-like Severus-but the guilt of her betrayal and the doubt for her choice to proceed in that way and  nothing to distract her from these feelings-oh how i long for them to be together again,whole...oh and the fact that she wet herself,she was that tired that she could not move or the need did not even register from the pain and everything?oh and: "She reached for a flannel but stopped. Did she really want to leave a bloody flannel behind when she left?"the fact that in the state that she is she has the strength to cover her tracks and  think according to her plan is what gives me hope....she could not warm the water-at that point i stopped reading the first time because the tears where in the way,u know..i continued after a while and stopped again after i read this:" Trying to ease the hollow ache near her heart. Searching for his arms." they got in the way again-stupid tears falling when i need to finish the chapter and falling on my keyboard too...and then when Senerus goes at Spinner’s End and Voldemort comes and Severus says:" “Their attentions were rather… cloying,” he finally managed to say with a curl of his lip. " it made me smile,it gave me hope..oh and that they were dying had me screaming hurry up find her!!!!and then Severus told him about the renewal of the oaths and the order meeting and my gut tells me he did good even if it did not appear like that at first...and then Hermione she is so tired but she keeps going,amazing!!!ok 4 coins,one galleon from the DA,one from Luna so they can write to each other,the old halfpenny is the portkey but the twopence her grandmother had given her so very long ago we don't know what it is for....can you share with me what it is? if i am ruining future use of it,do not answer...if i said sth wrong,correct me plz!!!she tekes strength from his scented shaving soap-which reminds them and me of course happier days....oh and she is writing to Luna-i wonder what she tells her!!!can u tell me now? if i am ruining sth leave it..and thet we are at the meeting where all Hell breaks loose:and then Severus not standing and Voldemort telling him to rise-i had goosebumps...and then the fact that Bella recruited him on Voldemort's orders...i really hate Bella now!!and then:"The Dark Lord drank deeply of the water. "But Severusss, not only does he have an innate sense of giving me what I want, he even on this night dared show me what I wouldn't want to see. He is a brave man, our Severusss, and perhaps, foolish. Perhaps… not."that was the part where my hope grew that Severus did good by showing him the order meeting earlier..and then the realisation that Voldemort is his father,i worked it out for good along with Severus because the first time i usually am unable to think thoroughly about what i am reading and i could not believe my suspicion was true...and then Severus thoughts that he does not deserve Hermione made me sooo sad!!!!!!!!!!the fact that they both betray the other in order to save and protect her/him is breathtaking and the way you wrote the last scene: He would do anything for her. Pain knifed up his legs as dropped to his knees yet again. For my wife. Pressed his lips to that sickly hand yet again. For my Miss Granger. And whispered one word. For my Hermione. “Father.” it blew me,i was openly crying and trying to get rid of the awful weight above my heart...i am not a person who cries easily but you really touched me,especially the For my wife,For my Miss Granger,For my Hermione part!!!!!!!!!!!Words can't express what you did in this chapter so that it is above amazing,brilliant and breathtaking!!I can only think one word: magic,i don't know how else to say it...So thanx again for sharing!!!!!!!!!!A big cheer to your betas,especially for GinnyW and her unique technniques-go girl,i am a COMC addict and i NEED the updates!!!Mia plz, pretty plz update soon,i am torn here like our heores!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!P.S. Congrats on the nominations!!!! You certainly deserve them!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be checking ur LJ for any sign!!!!!!P.S.2 In case i did not stress it enough throughout my babbling: Update soon,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

P.S.3 I almos forgot:Albus knew? Many,many questions formed in my head!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Update,i am drowning here!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, you have totally overwhelmed me and I can't thank you enough, omg. Thank you, thank you. I can't answer your questions about what is coming but can tell you that you're certainly noticing the right things, but I have to to tell you this:

The ending gave me fits. Fits. Fits. And much of what you love came from GinnyW.

She IS the best ever.

Best.

Ever.

Thank you for noticing.

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

and i just read a review mentioning :Severus Riddle?and i am thinking she was his wife,so Hermione Riddle?realisations and possibilities and much more questions everywhere,it must be magic!!!!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, the Dark Lord hasn't used Riddle in a long time. And Severus legally is a Snape, so for now, I think they're still Snapes, but I can't swear to anything in the future, the way this is going.

Um, Severus and Hermione Voldemort?

*kerplunk!*

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

that 's what i thought too,it just does not seem to suit them but still the implications of father Voldemort are still sinking in....personally i love Snape so for me Snape it is!!!!thanx for responding so fast!!!!i totally understand that you can not go giving away clues but it does not mean i do not wish u answered the questions...i know i am a hopeless case...promise you will try to at least work a little faster,plz!!!!!!!!i can't even count how many times i have hit the refresh button in tpp...hurry!!!Enjoy writing!!!!!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Believe me, I'm working as fast as I can, and will continue to. Thank you so VERY VERY much for your passionate response. It feeds my soul.

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

Believe me it could not Not be passionate,i had to write what i felt and thougth,it overwhelmed me!!!I am also visiting every day your LJ,so i feel like i have become your web stalker,hopeless case i tell you!!!Mia,Ginny W no pressure there but help a big fan!!!thanx for working faster!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*squishes you*

(I would glomp you but I'm not quite sure what that actually is, and it sounds slobbery. LOL!)

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

*squishing you back* (ok,no glomping,especially if i do not know what it is!!)ok i found it:to glomp NOT sexual, it is the action of one person lovingly (and dramatically) attacking another with a hug. A glomp is often preadatory and lies somewhere in the grey area between a caring embrace, and a flying leap to tackle someone. The term is used extesively in anime culture, as well as online in text form (anime because many anime characters do this often, and online because it is short and descriptive).  online: -*glomp!* =hi!.. *squeek!* cant breathe ^-^ -*loosens grip*So ok you can glomp me now that i know!!!!  

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, brace yourself.....

*GLOMP!!!*

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

*squeek!!!!* i would have glomped you first,but i did not know!!! So i actually owe 54 glomps-one for each chapter!!!it is more intense than a hug,which is exactly how i feel after every chapter!!! LOL!!! now i really can't breathe^-^!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

i still owe you 54,so from now on you get extra glomps in my reviews and of course chocolate and cakes and ice cream if u work faster and extra sweets and glomps for Ginny W of course!!!!!! *thinking:That is the Slytherin way,but i do not know if i was subtle enough!!! lol!!!*Enjoy writing the  next!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You're killing me! LOL!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

No,i want my favorite author alive and kicking!!!!!!!So *Glomp* and *Hug* and *sighes*...and stepping away from my favorite author,returning to my routine,no more pestering you just crossing my fingers,and waiting and hitting refresh at tpp and checking your LJ-being your web stalker  and making theories in my head about where this is going,leaving you to create in peace!!!!Have fun!!!!!!!!!!!!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

P.S.3 I almos forgot:Albus knew? Many,many questions formed in my head!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Update,i am drowning here!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, you have totally overwhelmed me and I can't thank you enough, omg. Thank you, thank you. I can't answer your questions about what is coming but can tell you that you're certainly noticing the right things, but I have to to tell you this:

The ending gave me fits. Fits. Fits. And much of what you love came from GinnyW.

She IS the best ever.

Best.

Ever.

Thank you for noticing.

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

and i just read a review mentioning :Severus Riddle?and i am thinking she was his wife,so Hermione Riddle?realisations and possibilities and much more questions everywhere,it must be magic!!!!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, the Dark Lord hasn't used Riddle in a long time. And Severus legally is a Snape, so for now, I think they're still Snapes, but I can't swear to anything in the future, the way this is going.

Um, Severus and Hermione Voldemort?

*kerplunk!*

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

that 's what i thought too,it just does not seem to suit them but still the implications of father Voldemort are still sinking in....personally i love Snape so for me Snape it is!!!!thanx for responding so fast!!!!i totally understand that you can not go giving away clues but it does not mean i do not wish u answered the questions...i know i am a hopeless case...promise you will try to at least work a little faster,plz!!!!!!!!i can't even count how many times i have hit the refresh button in tpp...hurry!!!Enjoy writing!!!!!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Believe me, I'm working as fast as I can, and will continue to. Thank you so VERY VERY much for your passionate response. It feeds my soul.

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

Believe me it could not Not be passionate,i had to write what i felt and thougth,it overwhelmed me!!!I am also visiting every day your LJ,so i feel like i have become your web stalker,hopeless case i tell you!!!Mia,Ginny W no pressure there but help a big fan!!!thanx for working faster!!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*squishes you*

(I would glomp you but I'm not quite sure what that actually is, and it sounds slobbery. LOL!)

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

*squishing you back* (ok,no glomping,especially if i do not know what it is!!)ok i found it:to glomp NOT sexual, it is the action of one person lovingly (and dramatically) attacking another with a hug. A glomp is often preadatory and lies somewhere in the grey area between a caring embrace, and a flying leap to tackle someone. The term is used extesively in anime culture, as well as online in text form (anime because many anime characters do this often, and online because it is short and descriptive).  online: -*glomp!* =hi!.. *squeek!* cant breathe ^-^ -*loosens grip*So ok you can glomp me now that i know!!!!  

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Okay, brace yourself.....

*GLOMP!!!*

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

*squeek!!!!* i would have glomped you first,but i did not know!!! So i actually owe 54 glomps-one for each chapter!!!it is more intense than a hug,which is exactly how i feel after every chapter!!! LOL!!! now i really can't breathe^-^!!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

i still owe you 54,so from now on you get extra glomps in my reviews and of course chocolate and cakes and ice cream if u work faster and extra sweets and glomps for Ginny W of course!!!!!! *thinking:That is the Slytherin way,but i do not know if i was subtle enough!!! lol!!!*Enjoy writing the  next!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You're killing me! LOL!

Response from ladyz (Reviewer)

No,i want my favorite author alive and kicking!!!!!!!So *Glomp* and *Hug* and *sighes*...and stepping away from my favorite author,returning to my routine,no more pestering you just crossing my fingers,and waiting and hitting refresh at tpp and checking your LJ-being your web stalker  and making theories in my head about where this is going,leaving you to create in peace!!!!Have fun!!!!!!!!!!!!

0/10

swerley

Holy Shit!Now, this is an interesting turn of events, isn't it? I'm glad this update wasn't as long in coming as the last, but I'm going to be chewing my nails to the quick now, waiting for the next chapter.Fantastic work, Mia!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I don't have any nails left!

I'll be chewing my elbows next.

I don't even know how long this update took compared to the last one. They're getting harder and harder to write, and I'm so relieved when the reactions are good, so thank you, thank you, thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I don't have any nails left!

I'll be chewing my elbows next.

I don't even know how long this update took compared to the last one. They're getting harder and harder to write, and I'm so relieved when the reactions are good, so thank you, thank you, thank you!

0/10

DeeMichelle

HOLYOh, my gosh!!! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I totally, absolutely fucking love your reaction!!!

Thank you!

Response from DeeMichelle (Reviewer)

lolyou're welcome.  I truly didn't know how to respond.  I'm gobsmacked!  :P

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And that makes me so very, very happy.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I totally, absolutely fucking love your reaction!!!

Thank you!

Response from DeeMichelle (Reviewer)

lolyou're welcome.  I truly didn't know how to respond.  I'm gobsmacked!  :P

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And that makes me so very, very happy.

10/10

Hypnobarb

There were a lot of possibilities.  I never once considered this one.I have absolutely no clue where in the universe you are going to take this one.  It's like riding a twisty turny rollercoaster, hanging on for dear life and hoping you don't get dumped out on your arse or splattered against the rails.I'm grasping the handles and hanging on, hoping for a gentle landing.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh my gosh, if YOU didn't see it coming....

Well, thank you. You weave such intricate plots, I'm proud to have surprised you.

Thank you so much!!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh my gosh, if YOU didn't see it coming....

Well, thank you. You weave such intricate plots, I'm proud to have surprised you.

Thank you so much!!!

10/10

AntiPixie

Oh... I... wow.  ::blink::  Wow.  I would never have... wow.  Um.  So.  Severus Riddle?  Um.  Wow.  That's... amazing, and fantastic, and... holy shit.  I can't possibly imagine how she's going to take it... or how he's going to take it once the knowledge really settles in, once he's not planning and committed to survival... and goddamn he must take completely after his mother cause Tom Riddle was one good-looking sonofableep.  I am flabbergasted and in awe.  Well done, to say the least.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You know, I can't remember where he says it, or what the Dark Lord says to him to make him say it, but there's one point where Severus actually makes that point. I need to go back and find it. Something about, "If you were my son..." And Sev responds about how he'd be handsome if he were, or something like that.

My brain, I don't know, I just can't hold everything in it.

But needless to say I've planted many little clues that this was coming, so many I don't even recall them all.

And now you know why I'm loving your fic so much. Angst, baby, angst.

Response from AntiPixie (Reviewer)

Heehee, yep, much angst.  Though mostly just in the first act... still not sure if I'm going in the right direction with what I've written for Act 2.  Not in the queue yet because I'm not getting any responses from the beta requests I'm sending out.  :(  Ah well.  But yeah, that bit about if you were my son sounds familiar, but it's been so long since I read the earlier chapters.  You need to put a notification in front of your last chapter once it's complete, so people like me can go back and reread the whole thing at once!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You know, I can't remember where he says it, or what the Dark Lord says to him to make him say it, but there's one point where Severus actually makes that point. I need to go back and find it. Something about, "If you were my son..." And Sev responds about how he'd be handsome if he were, or something like that.

My brain, I don't know, I just can't hold everything in it.

But needless to say I've planted many little clues that this was coming, so many I don't even recall them all.

And now you know why I'm loving your fic so much. Angst, baby, angst.

Response from AntiPixie (Reviewer)

Heehee, yep, much angst.  Though mostly just in the first act... still not sure if I'm going in the right direction with what I've written for Act 2.  Not in the queue yet because I'm not getting any responses from the beta requests I'm sending out.  :(  Ah well.  But yeah, that bit about if you were my son sounds familiar, but it's been so long since I read the earlier chapters.  You need to put a notification in front of your last chapter once it's complete, so people like me can go back and reread the whole thing at once!!

10/10

Elise_Wanderer

Please come to my house and explain to my neighbors why I just SCREAMED OUT LOUD!!!A real "Luke, I am your father" moment, and even more startling!  And yes, it does explain so much, including why he is still alive, and why Bella isn't in better graces with Voldemort (serves her bloody right, too!).And how will Hermione manage to do all she believes she must (I'm sure you/she will let us in on what in the hell she's got in mind!!) without her magic?  How will the greatest witch of our age become a witch again?Much less a wife!This is truly amazing, woman!  Fascinating how he believes he would do literally anything for her, but she would not.This whole soul magic concept is quite wonderful, too--you've taken Horcruxes and mixed in sacramental rites--magic from all sources, each gaining power from the other....I am not about to guess where you are taking us, I'm just hanging on for dear life, so lead on!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your enthusiasm is a balm to my soul, and believe me, my soul bloody needs it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Your enthusiasm is a balm to my soul, and believe me, my soul bloody needs it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

0/10

lipa

What a mess! Twisting and turning from chapter one, never telling where you are going. Interesting all the way. Hard to follow, harder to remember previous twists, but interesting.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I hope I gave you enough reminders to make this less hard to follow. You know, the Dark Lord has always had affection for Severus....

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I hope I gave you enough reminders to make this less hard to follow. You know, the Dark Lord has always had affection for Severus....

Thank you!

10/10

arynwy

LOL! You didn't. *innocently hums Anakin's Theme in the background*You did. You go girl. I think someone has miscalculated here. Both Voldie and Albus have done a disservice to Severus and Hermione. I hope you allow our beleaguered couple to teach them a solid lesson before the end.Another fine chapter, as always. Happy writing my dear.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You know, that's exactly what had me so worried about this chapter--that people would roll their eyes and mutter about Anakin and... well, you know. I hate it when a perfectly evil plot twist borders on cliche.... Thank you so much for your reaction!aeron's response: I don't find this cliched in the least. So far, you have managed to turn just about every fandom cliche or patho on it's collective ear, which I happen to find VERY refreshing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this evil plot. I am most certain it will be entertaining as always.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Wait.

You mean, I have to take it somewhere?

And keep it entertaining?

Shit.

Somebody shoulda warned me that....

aeron's response: *passes you a chunk of Honeydukes finest*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. Seriously. Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

You know, that's exactly what had me so worried about this chapter--that people would roll their eyes and mutter about Anakin and... well, you know. I hate it when a perfectly evil plot twist borders on cliche.... Thank you so much for your reaction!aeron's response: I don't find this cliched in the least. So far, you have managed to turn just about every fandom cliche or patho on it's collective ear, which I happen to find VERY refreshing. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this evil plot. I am most certain it will be entertaining as always.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Wait.

You mean, I have to take it somewhere?

And keep it entertaining?

Shit.

Somebody shoulda warned me that....

aeron's response: *passes you a chunk of Honeydukes finest*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. Seriously. Thank you.

10/10

firefly124

Oh WOW!  I'm just utterly stunned.  You've blown me away.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Aw, thank you so much! I needed to know that. Thank you.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Aw, thank you so much! I needed to know that. Thank you.

10/10

matts mom

so didn't see that coming. now very curious to see what happens next.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. I can't wait to get the next chapter written, myself!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you. I can't wait to get the next chapter written, myself!

0/10

Atrylindin

Wow! Severus being Voldemort's son was a totally unexpected twist! I feel badly for both Severus and Hermione. Hermione thought she was helping but it made it harder, and Severus is in a lose lose situation...I hope it all works out okay! I'm on the edge of my seat! I love the story and can't wait for more! It's wonderful, thank you so much for sharing it.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank *you* so much for your review. I especially needed reviews on this chapter because I was so worried people would hate it. I truly appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank *you* so much for your review. I especially needed reviews on this chapter because I was so worried people would hate it. I truly appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

0/10

FicklePen

Nuuuu! *flails* You... you eeevil angsty author!! Oh, you do enjoy teasing, mia *pouts* It's not fair, not fair, I tell you! Father?!? That is just a brain fart moment right there. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Teasing? I just enjoy angst and drama and then sit back and hope it hits the mark. Thank you so much for your reaction!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Teasing? I just enjoy angst and drama and then sit back and hope it hits the mark. Thank you so much for your reaction!

0/10

Mint Stick

Oops!And poor Bella. Realising she aborted her dear Dark Lord's grandchild... heh.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I knew the chapter ending would kind of steal Bella's thunder, but I so loved writing her in this chapter! Thank you for commenting!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I knew the chapter ending would kind of steal Bella's thunder, but I so loved writing her in this chapter! Thank you for commenting!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Oh wow. Are we ever on the same wave length? Fantastic. Thanks so much for this. Why isn't there a higher rating than 5 stars?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought a lot more people would be on the same wavelength, to tell you the truth. I'm glad it wasn't too obvious, but congrats on seeing it coming!

And you're too sweet. Five stars is plenty!

Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)

I used almost the same scenario in a fic I am working on at FF.net. I am amazed more folks haven't come up with that possibility. After all, it would explain so much.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought GinnyW was going to tell me it was a huge cliche. I was surprised when she didn't. Yeah, it does explain a lot, doesn't it?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought a lot more people would be on the same wavelength, to tell you the truth. I'm glad it wasn't too obvious, but congrats on seeing it coming!

And you're too sweet. Five stars is plenty!

Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)

I used almost the same scenario in a fic I am working on at FF.net. I am amazed more folks haven't come up with that possibility. After all, it would explain so much.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I thought GinnyW was going to tell me it was a huge cliche. I was surprised when she didn't. Yeah, it does explain a lot, doesn't it?

0/10

lora

Your writing fascinates me thruly . It has a lot of biblical stuf included . I wonder how it will end up because You put a lot truble infront of them. I am ancious or more.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for your review!!! I really appreciate you taking the time and effort to let me know how you feel.

Yes, there ended up being Biblical and religious stuff in this story, and believe me that wasn't my intention when I started.

I'm glad it fascinates you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much for your review!!! I really appreciate you taking the time and effort to let me know how you feel.

Yes, there ended up being Biblical and religious stuff in this story, and believe me that wasn't my intention when I started.

I'm glad it fascinates you!

10/10

missbluejuju

Just when I think I can rest for a little and have some down-time at Hermione's house, you throw THAT at us.  Holy crap.You, dear author, have a gift for this drama stuff.  You write beautifully, and it's still believable without getting over-the-top melodramatic.  I really, really can't wait for your next update.  You're killing me!  (The adrenal glands are long past repair, LOL.)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so sorry about your adrenal glands!!!

::wibbles::

And also relieved at your review--I fear the melodrama, but my drama queen soul does love skating on thin ice. It's a cross I bear.

Thank you so much!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm so sorry about your adrenal glands!!!

::wibbles::

And also relieved at your review--I fear the melodrama, but my drama queen soul does love skating on thin ice. It's a cross I bear.

Thank you so much!

10/10

slasher454

Bloody hell!!!I pride myself on pretty much always being able to see what's coming in fanfics, and you continually throw me for a fucking loop.And I love you for it.((squish))

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

((squishes you back))

I like throwing you for a fucking loop.

I have to earn my lovely artsees.

:)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

((squishes you back))

I like throwing you for a fucking loop.

I have to earn my lovely artsees.

:)

0/10

justjen

Woah - that floored me! I hope you have your next chapter up soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I have to write the next chapter first, so I can't promise "soon" but I can promise "as soon as possible."

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I have to write the next chapter first, so I can't promise "soon" but I can promise "as soon as possible."

Thank you!

10/10

missblue

Amazing, amazing. You carry us all along on this rush of adrenaline - but how, just with words? Extraordinary.It's all right. Do you know where this is going, I wonder? Because I have a faint idea, but...

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh yes--I know where it's going. I always know where it's going unless they wrench it out of my control and run with it! (Which happens, indeed it does.)

Thank you so much for your kind words!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh yes--I know where it's going. I always know where it's going unless they wrench it out of my control and run with it! (Which happens, indeed it does.)

Thank you so much for your kind words!

9/10

gabi1791

Now, I'm really anxious about what is to come. Looking forward to the next chapter.gab

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm anxious, too.

Thank you for reviewing. It does relieve my anxiety and make it easier to keep writing!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm anxious, too.

Thank you for reviewing. It does relieve my anxiety and make it easier to keep writing!

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