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Care of Magical Creatures

1: Proposed

2: Sealed

3: Defended

4: Shamed

5: Mea Culpa

6: Punished

7: Wet

8: Gifted

9: Discovered

10: Rejected

11: Lists

12: Observed

13: Claimed

14: Hurt

15: Trusted

16: Marked

17: Lorded

18: Simply

19: Don't Look

20: Awakening

21: Revelation

22: Brewing

23: Tea

24: Bothered

25: Home

26: Bludgeoned

27: Rings

28: Sweetly

29: Tested

30: Friday

31: Cauldron

32: Potion

33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

34: Shattered

35: Unreal

36: Empty

37: Lies

38: Drowning

39: Obey

40: Disobey

41: Sinking

42: Lost, Then Found

43: Compromising Positions

44: Hogwarts: A History

45: Soul Mates?

46: Birthday

47: Something Happens

48: The Dark

49: Howling

50: The Hospital Wing

51: Names

52: Betrayed

53: Red

54: Scented

55: Vows

56: Instinct

57: Battle Plans

58: Godric's Hollow

59: Care

60: Leap of Faith

61: In Sin and Error Pining

62: Winter's End

63: Bearing Witness

64: April Fool

65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

66: Stuff of Nightmares

67: So Long As We Both Shall Live

Care of Magical Creatures

mia madwyn

2,762 Reviews   |   2,762 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1,039 Favorites )

Humor Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 287,804 Words 92 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Voted Best New Author (Lumos), Best SS/HG Romance (Amortentia) and Best SS/HG Angst
(Diffindo) in The New Library Awards.

Seventh-year student Hermione Granger decides to marry the one eligible wizard who did not ask for her--the horrid but powerful Severus Snape. All is not sweetness and light. Be careful what you ask for. Or, as has been said by many a wise witch, "Marry in haste; repent in leisure." MLC

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Chapters (67)

Chapter 1: Proposed

Chapter 2: Sealed

Chapter 3: Defended

Chapter 4: Shamed

Chapter 5: Mea Culpa

Chapter 6: Punished

Chapter 7: Wet

Chapter 8: Gifted

Chapter 9: Discovered

Chapter 10: Rejected

Chapter 11: Lists

Chapter 12: Observed

Chapter 13: Claimed

Chapter 14: Hurt

Chapter 15: Trusted

Chapter 16: Marked

Chapter 17: Lorded

Chapter 18: Simply

Chapter 19: Don't Look

Chapter 20: Awakening

Chapter 21: Revelation

Chapter 22: Brewing

Chapter 23: Tea

Chapter 24: Bothered

Chapter 25: Home

Chapter 26: Bludgeoned

Chapter 27: Rings

Chapter 28: Sweetly

Chapter 29: Tested

Chapter 30: Friday

Chapter 31: Cauldron

Chapter 32: Potion

Chapter 33: Miss Granger, What Have You Done?

Chapter 34: Shattered

Chapter 35: Unreal

Chapter 36: Empty

Chapter 37: Lies

Chapter 38: Drowning

Chapter 39: Obey

Chapter 40: Disobey

Chapter 41: Sinking

Chapter 42: Lost, Then Found

Chapter 43: Compromising Positions

Chapter 44: Hogwarts: A History

Chapter 45: Soul Mates?

Chapter 46: Birthday

Chapter 47: Something Happens

Chapter 48: The Dark

Chapter 49: Howling

Chapter 50: The Hospital Wing

Chapter 51: Names

Chapter 52: Betrayed

Chapter 53: Red

Chapter 54: Scented

Chapter 55: Vows

Chapter 56: Instinct

Chapter 57: Battle Plans

Chapter 58: Godric's Hollow

Chapter 59: Care

Chapter 60: Leap of Faith

Chapter 61: In Sin and Error Pining

Chapter 62: Winter's End

Chapter 63: Bearing Witness

Chapter 64: April Fool

Chapter 65: Rest, Unrest and Revolution

Chapter 66: Stuff of Nightmares

Chapter 67: So Long As We Both Shall Live


About mia madwyn

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Care of Magical Creatures recently received two awards on "Secrets of the Dark Vaults," a Russian fanfic site. Best NC-17 and Best Maxi Translation. The Nine-Year Plan was awarded Best Mini-Fic! I'm delighted to be in translation and to please the readers in Russia!





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About Mia

I came to the world of Harry Potter relatively early, after first resisting it because it just seemed too trendy. But when the first book came out in paperback in the US I picked it up at the airport when I was about to catch a flight, and two chapters in knew I would be ordering the original from amazon.co.uk in hardcover as soon as I landed.

 

I came to fanfic late, waiting until after I'd read DH. That means I've been totally obsessed with the fanfic world of Harry Potter, and most specifically the SS/HG ship, since August of '07.

I'm helplessly and hopelessly hooked.

 

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Reviews for Care of Magical Creatures

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elsolel

Maybe being ripped limb from limb would improve his disposition?Great chapter.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Well, it might improve Sev's disposition to get to do it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Well, it might improve Sev's disposition to get to do it!

0/10

elsolel

I'm very glad that they found a bed that wouldn't attack Hermione!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

It seemed prudent, eh?  Thank you for taking the time to review.  It's so wonderful to get to "read" your progress through the story!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

It seemed prudent, eh?  Thank you for taking the time to review.  It's so wonderful to get to "read" your progress through the story!

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elsolel

That's a twist!  Very neat.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I loved writing it!  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I loved writing it!  Thank you!

0/10

elsolel

I love that vow!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

That one snuck up on me.  I didn't see it coming.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

That one snuck up on me.  I didn't see it coming.

0/10

elsolel

Great!  Black and blue, broken bones, covered in blood:  she fixed all that, and he complains about whiplash.  hehehe

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Well, he's a bit of a prat at times, isn't he?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

LOL!  Well, he's a bit of a prat at times, isn't he?

0/10

elsolel

That is an Excellent way to handle laundry!  I approve.  They really beat him up. :(

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

In a word with polyjuice, I think the wise wizard would guard his stray hairs well.  ;)

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

In a word with polyjuice, I think the wise wizard would guard his stray hairs well.  ;)

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elsolel

That's intense.  I'm so sorry they had to rush everything.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm not sure things were ever destined to be good for their wedding and first night, but surely they could have been better.  Sigh.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm not sure things were ever destined to be good for their wedding and first night, but surely they could have been better.  Sigh.

0/10

elsolel

Very exciting.  I can't believe Severus missed that! 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, he wasn't exactly in best form....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, he wasn't exactly in best form....

0/10

elsolel

I can't put into words how good I found this chapter.  "X" Crossing my fingers for a good meeting with Voldie.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Maybe I shouldn't admit it. (Maybe I shouldn't have allowed it.)  But I just love him yanking her hair.  LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Maybe I shouldn't admit it. (Maybe I shouldn't have allowed it.)  But I just love him yanking her hair.  LOL!

0/10

elsolel

Another excellent chapter.  I can't wait to catch up and find out all that happens.  I read this with a big "I Found A Good One!" grin.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Squee!  Your reviews are thrilling me.  It's so fun to relive it with somebody who is reading it for the first time.  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Squee!  Your reviews are thrilling me.  It's so fun to relive it with somebody who is reading it for the first time.  Thank you!

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elsolel

ooooo.  Very nice beginnig.  He's not done!  Cool.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I'm so thrilled you liked it!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  I'm so thrilled you liked it!

10/10

potterbrat

I've finally stopped long enough to review... Oh, he can be such a complete BASTARD!!  I have learned to control my tears when I read stories at work, but this is one of those moments where my heart just ACHES for Hermione.  Ugh!  I'm really loving this story, by the way

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so very much!  I know, this chapter was fun and also very tough and angsty by the end.  Poor Hermione!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so very much!  I know, this chapter was fun and also very tough and angsty by the end.  Poor Hermione!

0/10

mischievous_t

Luke, I am your father.  

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*THWAPPP!*snapeaddiction's response: Ouch.snapeaddiction's response: Hey!  Death Eater / Death Star - it's a mistake anyone could make!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*fucking hell**did not see that one coming*snapeaddiction's response: OMG, those were my exact thoughts too.  snapeaddiction's response: Of course, they were followed by, 'this woman needs a feckin dictionary'.  So, fyi:  Fix:  1.  to repair; mend  2.  to put in order or in good condition.   To know and not to do, is not yet to know.  So, now you know.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Am fixing, am fixing!snapeaddiction's response: Um-hmm.  Go ahead and email me what you've got and I'll be the judge of 'fixing'.  snapeaddiction's response: So?  Are you fixin to send me some pages?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm attemping to fix the problem Snape finds himself in. That's the only fixing I'm doing.

Huff!snapeaddiction's response: Easy Hufflepuff, I was just being impatient obsessed helpful.snapeaddiction's response: Impatient & obsessed were to have lines through them, because they are obviously not the right words.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I think this website knows what it's doing.  (ahem)snapeaddiction's response: I suppose.  :::grumbles:::  is there at least a number yet?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Shhh.I'm writing.snapeaddiction's response: Mums the word, Obi-wan.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*THWAPPP!*snapeaddiction's response: Ouch.snapeaddiction's response: Hey!  Death Eater / Death Star - it's a mistake anyone could make!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

*fucking hell**did not see that one coming*snapeaddiction's response: OMG, those were my exact thoughts too.  snapeaddiction's response: Of course, they were followed by, 'this woman needs a feckin dictionary'.  So, fyi:  Fix:  1.  to repair; mend  2.  to put in order or in good condition.   To know and not to do, is not yet to know.  So, now you know.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Am fixing, am fixing!snapeaddiction's response: Um-hmm.  Go ahead and email me what you've got and I'll be the judge of 'fixing'.  snapeaddiction's response: So?  Are you fixin to send me some pages?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I'm attemping to fix the problem Snape finds himself in. That's the only fixing I'm doing.

Huff!snapeaddiction's response: Easy Hufflepuff, I was just being impatient obsessed helpful.snapeaddiction's response: Impatient & obsessed were to have lines through them, because they are obviously not the right words.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh, I think this website knows what it's doing.  (ahem)snapeaddiction's response: I suppose.  :::grumbles:::  is there at least a number yet?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Shhh.I'm writing.snapeaddiction's response: Mums the word, Obi-wan.

0/10

crazywriterchic

I love you. I hate you. Update soon.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  I"m sorry.  I'm trying!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you.  I"m sorry.  I'm trying!

10/10

amyjenc1

For the record my fan-girl just exploded. I love it!!!!  You killed my grandson Bitch!!! *snort* ...wait...ewww...incest!!!-ish.I have been around this story for oh about six months? Maybe...I love it...I love the emotions it pulls and kills...But this...where the Hell did it appear from...amazing! *all hail the plot-bunnys master*

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I just loved Bella getting the rug yanked out from under her that way.  Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I just loved Bella getting the rug yanked out from under her that way.  Thank you!

10/10

amyjenc1

. holy shit. holy f-ing shit. Your are a mad woman...brilliantly so. I think I might need a moment....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I understand needing a moment.  I've needed a few, myself.Thank you for reviewing!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I understand needing a moment.  I've needed a few, myself.Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

apisa_b

Admit it, you have been looking at a picture of Princess Anne when describing Hermione's mother.But what on earth do you mean with: "...she looked like she spent far too much time on a horse." *Pouts* Spending too much time on a horse is NOT a bad thing!Oh, I love it how you circumvent the cliches. Not Lord!Snape in a manor house, but an aristocratic Hermone. Priceless!And the way her mother hinted that she understood why she apparently had fallen for Snape... An chapter full of surprises!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, remember, it's Snape's snarky side that said she'd spent too much time on a horse. I would never say such a thing!

And yes, Princess Anne would be a very good representation of Hermione's mum!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Well, remember, it's Snape's snarky side that said she'd spent too much time on a horse. I would never say such a thing!

And yes, Princess Anne would be a very good representation of Hermione's mum!

0/10

apisa_b

Bite my arse.

Indeed - I nearly choked from laughing. That was a rather good one.

The bonding gift scene from Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw was very sweet. How sterotypically Gryffinor /Slytherin not to have thought of something like this.But little Peregrine saved the situation for Slytherin.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I think it's an indication of how far Hermione has been stretched that she would respond in such a way to a teacher! LOL!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I think it's an indication of how far Hermione has been stretched that she would respond in such a way to a teacher! LOL!

10/10

apisa_b

Ah, you went against one of my favourite pet-peeves: Virgin!Hermione gets multiple orgasms at her defloration. Of course the circumstances that led to her not-so-romantic wedding night were rather harsh.The wedding in the crypt was beautiful. You described the magic that flowed and sealed the bond marverllously. A great scene.The flight through the cathedral after they already were outside the Room of Requirement is a puzzle to me. Are going to explain that in future chapters?

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I think the situation at the cathedral will be explained to your satisfaction later (I hope).

I'll admit, I staged the wedding in the crypt for no good reason except that I loved the idea of it and have been in that crypt before, but there are ramifications so it was a lucky choice I made.

Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

I think the situation at the cathedral will be explained to your satisfaction later (I hope).

I'll admit, I staged the wedding in the crypt for no good reason except that I loved the idea of it and have been in that crypt before, but there are ramifications so it was a lucky choice I made.

Thank you!

10/10

apisa_b

What started out as a light, enertainig tale, has started to get a bit darker.I'm very curious what's going to await me on the ride. So far I have enjoyed reading your tale immensly.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  Yes, my original intention was for this to be light and fluffy and sexy but as soon as I went into Severus's pov the first time, his rage overpowered me and he wrenched the story away from me.I'm thrilled that you're liking it and that you're letting me know.  I really to appreciate seeing your reactions!

Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)

I'm reading your story offline, so I probably won't comment on every chapter. But I'm taking notes as I read along, so I don't forget to feed the author's muse.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And for that, the author's muse is VERY appreciative! She's soaking up all my energy at this point and needs all the sooting and petting she can get! Thank you!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you so much!  Yes, my original intention was for this to be light and fluffy and sexy but as soon as I went into Severus's pov the first time, his rage overpowered me and he wrenched the story away from me.I'm thrilled that you're liking it and that you're letting me know.  I really to appreciate seeing your reactions!

Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)

I'm reading your story offline, so I probably won't comment on every chapter. But I'm taking notes as I read along, so I don't forget to feed the author's muse.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And for that, the author's muse is VERY appreciative! She's soaking up all my energy at this point and needs all the sooting and petting she can get! Thank you!

10/10

apisa_b

She did not atually tell him that she had ranked Dumbledore and Lockhart before him on her personal list of husbands-to-be? Speaking about subtility LOLA promising start.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  And yes, you are absolutely right!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you!  And yes, you are absolutely right!

10/10

portugal_faro

My!My! My! This chaphter has left me practically speechless. You are are unique and absolutely brillant. Many,many thanks.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you, thank you, thank you. This really was a difficult chapter to write and I can't thank you enough for your response!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Thank you, thank you, thank you. This really was a difficult chapter to write and I can't thank you enough for your response!

10/10

Lkmaide

You bewitch!!!!!!!!  I wait for WEEKS for this and This is what you give us-- how many plot bunnies bit you my wonderful author?  Apparently they must have been rabid plot bunnies for these twists and turns.  Keep the good ship afloat and lets ride out the floodwaters to another update please please. . . .

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Speaking of floodwaters, it's pouring down outside and thunder is crashing overhead. Um, do you have direct ties to the gods? Because honestly, you don't have to wish my floodwaters; I won't be offended if you take that back!

Thank you SO much for your wonderful review!

Response from Lkmaide (Reviewer)

I was ready to see if maybe someone was building an ARK for a while there, but for now the sun is shining and I'll send you some as soon as you update.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Fortunately, the sun made a quick reappearance! In the meantime, I'm working on it, I'm working on it....

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Speaking of floodwaters, it's pouring down outside and thunder is crashing overhead. Um, do you have direct ties to the gods? Because honestly, you don't have to wish my floodwaters; I won't be offended if you take that back!

Thank you SO much for your wonderful review!

Response from Lkmaide (Reviewer)

I was ready to see if maybe someone was building an ARK for a while there, but for now the sun is shining and I'll send you some as soon as you update.

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Fortunately, the sun made a quick reappearance! In the meantime, I'm working on it, I'm working on it....

0/10

mutemoon

How delightful that your need to squeeze half blood Snape into the Marriage Law led to this. Cool. Like Snape's response, his feeling that he's betraying Hermione for the first time. I look forward to the development of that thought. Also, the father angle had crossed briefly across the surface of my mind before this, don't remember when, and that's good. It means you laid groundwork for it. But what I really wanted to tell you today was that every time I run across the words "too much" nowadays, I hear them in Snape's voice, when he's telling Dumbledore off. Which, awesome. You're in my brain, sister!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh my! I feel such *power* flowing from my fingertips into your grey cells!

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

Oh my! I feel such *power* flowing from my fingertips into your grey cells!

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

0/10

BlackTea

Damn.  Amazing.  Powerful.  Never would have seen that coming.  Thank you for updating. 

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And thank you for letting me know!

Response from mia madwyn (Author of Care of Magical Creatures)

And thank you for letting me know!

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