What is there to add after two months of waiting for an update and instead coming across The Book? Only a plead. Please, write us more since JK ... well, let's not spoil it for those who haven't read yet.

That first section was wonderful , so poetic !

thank for this beautifully written story.

Wow ... just, wow.  I am very near speechless.  I've said it many times before , but I love this story very much.  Update soon please.

Incredible story. Incredible. Just plain heartwrenching. You write it in such a lyric way that one barely notices the smooth flow of plot. Images gently interleave, blend into one another, answers are provided carefully and disguised, the fundamental essence of the story remains mysterious even after more than twenty chapters. Incredible. Utterly incredible. Your writing is so complicated, yet full of drastic shortcuts that pound mountains of emotions into a single word. You hardly ever explain, leading us rather through a guessing maze with a firm hand. Incredible.I am deeply touched. 

wow.. Sorry about not reviewing earlier.. but this is the first time I've seen this story... It's certainly interesting. can't wait for more!

It's about bloody time someone said what everyone needed to hear, and I am so very glad it was Neville.  If I could but hug him tightly I would.I've been dying for an update to this story.  Imagine my surprise when I logged in today and there one was.  Exceptional as always!!

This story is enticing, sensual and intense, but it scares the hell out of me at the same time.  Brilliant, but scary!!

You lost my review for this chapter in the server debacle, so I ran back here (once gathering my wits about me) to leave another.

The intensity of this chapter was astounding.  The atmosphere you created with both words and formatting (white space!) was breathtaking, and long after I read it, I found myself thinking about it.  This is, in my opinion, the best chapter so far.   

I wonder if Harry will help his long time friend, or if he even can.

Incredible, I can't even begin to guess what's happening.

I wonder what will happen at the end so to speak, I think Severus will be the new Headmaster and Hermione, I just don't know.

It's absolutely fascinating to me... so very addicting! ;-)

Wow what an intense chapter. You have a gift with the subtle. Every moment, every movement, every sound has meaning and builds the tension. This chapter was very dangerous and eye epening. I can't wait to read the next one.

Very intriguing!  I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

This chapter sent a chill down my spine! What intense emotion. I loved your line "knew that tonight the Darkness would speak with Hermione?s voice." What a great image that was. I cant' wait to read a new chapter. The suspense is killing me.

Oh, Hermione...

My curiosity apparently far outweighs my mental capacity for understanding this story in its entirety. Maybe I will reread when my brain is less engaged elsewhere. Until then I await further additions.

Sorry I've not been leaving reviews, as I've been swamped, but I just wanted to say that I'm still reading and enjoying. I especially liked this chapter. :)

Jesus this is so painful to read sometimes, but I love it nonetheless.  I hope or the life of me that something is done soon to give her peace.  Also, a lot of authors write Albus as omnipotent.  It’s nice to see him from a different perspective.  Great Chapter!!

Punish her....or even better punish me! Here at the castle anthrax we all need punishment (smirk). I have no idea what half is happening in this story but it is super! I know when I get to the end I will stroke my long beard and go of course I saw these clues.

Awe, I am in awe...wow the emotion in the chapter, just wow

i have nothing else to say, 

-karlamarie 

All I can say is WOW. What a dark and moving story. You give it all to us - the sounds, the smells, the taste, the dreams, the sights....we are there! I hunger for more. Please update soon.

I just had to stop reading this story for a moment to comment. I don't think I have ever read a story with such vivid and surreal visuals before. You have crafted such a complex and stunning story here. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Very good chapter, with great atmosphere.  Can't wait to read more.