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Potions Under Duress No Loyalty in the Moonlight
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No Loyalty in the Moonlight

1: Leviathan

2: Beneath Her Dreams

3: A Pensieve Sky

4: Have This Dance

5: Ars Necronomica

6: Whistling in the Dark

7: The Dreams of Dying Men

8: Her Own Making

9: Make a Wish

10: The Innocent and Damned

11: From Grace

12: Into thy Hands

13: Sleeping Dogs Lie

14: Sparks Fly Upward

15: Crime and Sensibility

16: This Salted Earth

17: Passion

18: Instinct

19: Breath

20: Calling

21: Alas, Babylon

22: Revelations

23: Seeing Eyes Blind

24: Exodus

25: Lamentation

26: Acts

27: Through a Glass Darkly

28: Nor Words to Speak

29: Genesis

30: I

31: Judges

32: After You

33: The Valley of the Shadow

34: Of Dust

35: To Dust

36: Flights of Angels

37: Ex Hiberna

38: Adsum

39: But

40: Reparo

41: Epilogue

No Loyalty in the Moonlight

Ariadne AWS

351 Reviews   |   351 Ratings, 0 Likes, 211 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 87,495 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

*Complete* Because some secrets aren't meant to stay buried. Years after the final battle, Hermione will have to confront her own, including those she's kept from herself. Winner ~ Best Drama, 2006 OWL Awards.

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Chapters (41)

Chapter 1: Leviathan

Chapter 2: Beneath Her Dreams

Chapter 3: A Pensieve Sky

Chapter 4: Have This Dance

Chapter 5: Ars Necronomica

Chapter 6: Whistling in the Dark

Chapter 7: The Dreams of Dying Men

Chapter 8: Her Own Making

Chapter 9: Make a Wish

Chapter 10: The Innocent and Damned

Chapter 11: From Grace

Chapter 12: Into thy Hands

Chapter 13: Sleeping Dogs Lie

Chapter 14: Sparks Fly Upward

Chapter 15: Crime and Sensibility

Chapter 16: This Salted Earth

Chapter 17: Passion

Chapter 18: Instinct

Chapter 19: Breath

Chapter 20: Calling

Chapter 21: Alas, Babylon

Chapter 22: Revelations

Chapter 23: Seeing Eyes Blind

Chapter 24: Exodus

Chapter 25: Lamentation

Chapter 26: Acts

Chapter 27: Through a Glass Darkly

Chapter 28: Nor Words to Speak

Chapter 29: Genesis

Chapter 30: I

Chapter 31: Judges

Chapter 32: After You

Chapter 33: The Valley of the Shadow

Chapter 34: Of Dust

Chapter 35: To Dust

Chapter 36: Flights of Angels

Chapter 37: Ex Hiberna

Chapter 38: Adsum

Chapter 39: But

Chapter 40: Reparo

Chapter 41: Epilogue


About Ariadne AWS

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Ariadne AWS

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Reviews for No Loyalty in the Moonlight

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sunny33

Thermal etiquette? Neat expression. :)

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sunny33

re-reading this now it is complete.  Yes, still complex, evocative imagery. :)

0/10

ann1982

You did an amazing job, this is breathtaking. Poor Hermione, I don't think she is dark, she was just lost for awhile. Cassie and Neville are so sweet. Thank you SO much for sharing your story.

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pplhater2493

Wow. So, Ron's soul is in Harry's scar? That's weird. but interesting. I like these little twists you put in here. I hope you update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.

10/10

LaiksMarei

On its shelf in Minerva’s office, the Sorting Hat skittered a few inches sideways. Had it known how to Apparate to Hogsmeade, it would have.That one statement to me really resonates the gravity of the situation and just how desperate it is.  I am truly disappointed in Dumbledore at this moment and am glad that Severus and Minerva took him to task.  Sometimes one cannot see the forest for the trees.Once again this is a truly intriguing story that keeps me coming back with each chapter you post.  I look forward to more.

10/10

greenwood

Wow! What a wonderful chapter. I almost cried when Severus put the little dragon back together but it was still dead. What a statement. That whole scene with the little dragon and the little ghost was so intimate and sad...beautifully done. I thought the way you set up the exchange between Severus and Minirva was brilliant as well. The whole bit about the ring not fitting Minierva and how she let slip that it was suppose to automatically resize for the head of Hogwarts was very telling indeed! Wow! What an excellent story this is.

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Kailin

This is just so GOOD!  I do confess that I wasn't too sure what Hermione had done until this chapter.  And I'm really hoping that Severus can do what's needed to save her.  Thanks for writing!

8/10

KMJ

Wow... I rembember when this first started and i understood jack all, now i am sure i understand it. I am really enjoying this it really is testing my mind and making me think!

-karlamarie 

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kimjo2

wow...awesome update.  thanks so much

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nata

Beautiful, Ari. 

That's all I have to say, and I hope you understand.
Beautiful.

10/10

Muggline

you really surprised me with this fast update and I am quite glad I had so much work to do and am still up (4,30 am here)... Oh my - so much action in such a short chapter! It hurts to see Harry so spiteful towards Hermione. And for all the hope I have, I fear he might just go on like that in the next chapter...

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cmwinters

Woooooooooooooow.  Well, that was amazingly set up, and makes sense with the flow of the story, which is quite an accomplishment given the roller-coaster you've had us on!  :D

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Guinnevere

          She sighed, and blew the dandelion head.
          Reparo, she thought. Goodbye, Ron.

Oh dear. Even knowing that he's been trapped between life and death all these years, and how horrible that is... It made me want to cry, reading this. I'm not a Ron-hater, even though I really prefer to see Hermione paired with Severus, and although Ron is callow and clueless a lot of the time, he's actually good, and he's intelligent, and he loves his friends. Enough to die for them. Again.

**Sigh** Another good chapter, but such a sad one.

Good job.

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GryffKat

Love the story. Could you explain this bit "All over Britain, pink stains faded from the pillowcase garments of countless house-elves. Their masters and mistresses did not notice, or, if they did, it was to idly note that their elf seemed perkier than usual."Don't understand what the pink means and the perkiness.Ta, Gryffkat

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)

It refers to something in a very, very early chapter - the house-elves have been wearing pillowcases stained with Hermione's ink-stained tears for years.  So here they dissolved.  The perils of posting a story over such a long period of time. Thanks for reading!

0/10

rachow

Fascinating.  I really love your stories.  The way that everything unfolds forces the reader to continue with the story.  It's awesome.

10/10

sinbad

I love how Harry is so quick to judge others.  You would think after all he went through he would be a bit better about listening to his friends.  You find examples all through canon of both him and Ron jumping to conclusions, stretching the truth and racing to danger without a single thought. 

It was nice to see his behavior mimicked in this chapter although it would be nice to finally see him grow up a bit.

10/10

jessica

Wow - another update!

Beautifully written as always! What a showdown!

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Maggie

Wow... just wow.

10/10

nastygrl

Oh! These last few chapters have been just amazing!  I especially love this one, though.

Thank you!

10/10

Muggline

It's wonderful! a) you continued this story, b) things seem to lighten up c) it's as mysterious and great and (insert any positive adjective you can think of) as ever. Thank you!

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nata

I didn't get it. Again. This story does that nearly every chapter. It leaves me perplexed, but then when the revelation comes later, I simply wonder how I hadn't seen it coming...
Like now. Hermione's proclamation shows her understanding how to purge Ron out of Harry using the flower? Or does it register a property of what goes on with the flower seed and soul wishes that links the events to Harry? No, don't tell me. I enjoy this mystery so very much. All its sprouting questions included.

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cmwinters

Uh oh.  That sounds bad.  (I swear, I will leave more coherent reviews once the story is finished and I can reread it.  As for now, I've no bloody idea what's going on. Haha)

10/10

sinbad

Looks like this story is starting to wrap up.  I found this to be a somewhat sad chapter.  I'm not really sure why, perhaps because the story is starting to draw to a close?

10/10

jessica

Beautiful as always!

Harry...?????

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kimjo2

lovely and touching.  i especially love cassie.  thanks so much

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