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No Loyalty in the Moonlight
Ariadne AWS351 Reviews | 351 Ratings, 0 Likes, 211 Favorites )
*Complete* Because some secrets aren't meant to stay buried. Years after the final battle, Hermione will have to confront her own, including those she's kept from herself. Winner ~ Best Drama, 2006 OWL Awards.
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This story is very thought provoking.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Again, I thank you...~ Ari
I'm trying to figure out the little ghost, she seems important but I can't quite put my finger on what her purpose is.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smiles* She is important indeed... poor thing... her purpose is still a mystery, but I will say... pay close attention to what she's doing when Hermione's doing other things... *twirls quill*~ Ari
wow! if this gets any darker we will need a few dozen torches to find our way to the end...
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*hands you a few dozen torches*~ Ari
Oh boy, I hope there will be a happy ending at the end of this story it seems to me that they both suffered enough.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smiles again* The ending's not written yet, but I can assure you that much will change, although how much and how obviously remains to be seen...Cheers,~ Ari
Interesting, another layer is comming to the surface. Very good
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smiles* This was one of the most difficult chapters to write in terms of delicate handling... so pleased to hear the effect is as I'd hoped! ~ Ari
Severus made several comments that hit so close to home. I suspect he will be the one loyal to Hermione in the end.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
I suspec that you're quite right about that... how strange that things could come to this... *smiles*~ Ari
Thos story reminds me of a rescipie I have for a German Torte cake, layers after layers in the end something very satisfing.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smile deepens* German Torte cake, in very dark chocolate... okay, now I'm hungry ;) Cheers,~ Ari
I'm betting from the description that the seeded flower was a dandilion.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
You are spot-on. It's a dandelion. *smiles* I loved those when I was a kid...
This story gives me major chills, it's hard to describe. I'm glad I finally started to read it.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
I'm glad you're reading it too,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
- and very grateful for your kind words! I'm deeply gratified to learn that it gives you chills - it does me when I'm writing it... ~ Ari
I love this story so far.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smile deepens* *heart warms* My thanks to you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
...~ Ari
I'm glad Severus seems to know what's going on, I get the impression that Hermione is in some serious trouble and all I can do is read on.......
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
He can be very frustrating with how little information he shares versus how much he gets out of the people he's talking to... serious trouble indeed... glad you're enjoying so far! ~ Ari
Impressive, cold, scary and thrilling.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*grins again* I have a soft spot in my heart for this chapter... flying at night in the winter-time - *shudders* I'm glad that the coldness worked for you on multiple levels! Cheers,~ Ari
I'm sitting on the edge of my seat so I'm not going to say anything else. Damn good story so far.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Wow :) Thanks!~ Ari
Wow. That's all I can say.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*grins* Thank you! This chapter sprung almost fully-formed from my head on a dark and stormy night just before Halloween... I'm glad you enjoyed it! Cheers,~ Ari
This story astounds me with it's detail and passion, excellent work.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you... you're making me blush, and I'm so, so pleased the the story has fallen into the hands of such an excellent reader...~ Ari
I feel so sorry for that little ghost, she loved that statue. I feel sorry for Hermione damned and I don't think she even knows or understands it.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*nods* Poor dragon, poor ghostie... poor Hermione... and poor Severus. So much is broken, and so permanently...~ Ari
Dang I'm still on the edge of my seat with this story, I suspect I will be in this position to the very end.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*smiles* Perhaps it will let you breathe occasionally... 'though it hasn't let me breathe yet... ~ Ari
I love the puzzle, and how it is starting to get put together.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*twirls quill* Thank you! This puzzle has been a great challenge to write so far; I can't tell you how much your reviews mean to me!~ Ari
Very good chapter, and even better, it was swift in coming. Thanks for a contuing good read!
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
- I'm really pleased to hear you're still enjoying the story! I had a huge lag due to some large RL issues and am quite happy to get back to writing and posting. There are three more chapters ready to go (one still needs art, but I may not wait) - so more will post soon :)Thanks so much for taking the time to review!Cheers,~ Ari
Oh my goodness, that was amazing!
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*twirls quill* *bows* Thank you!~ Ari
This is one of the stories I love to read, and have to read more than one time to fathom what is going on, and just out of reach to understand everything, fascinating. I hope you have some sort of "happines" in store for Hermione and Severus. I love the pictures before the chapters, are they also of your making?
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
:) I'm so glad to hear that the words that won't let me be are fascinating to you... this is a strange story to write, but I confess I enjoy it. As for "happiness" - I'm glad you put that word in quotations, because the traditional happy ending just can't satisfy for these two - I would say that Hermione's fortunes changed for the better the day Severus returned to Hogwarts (and possibly the day he started reading her published work). His too, although his life may have been easier before. :)Thank you for mentioning the pictures! Yes, I make those too - you're the first reader to have mentioned them - I'm thrilled that you love them! I have fun with them.Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you're enjoying the story...~ Ari
Machshefa recommended this story, and I am very glad. I am enjoying this web of intrigue you're so eloquently spinning.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
I'm so pleased you're enjoying it, emmeline :) Thank you for taking the time to review, and I hope the intrigue continues to captivate!Cheers,~ Ari
what on earth has she done Madam Mysterious Author ?? This is so intriguing !
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*huge grin* So glad the mystery has bewitched your mind! ~ Ari
Your writing is achingly beautiful. This story transcends its genre. I eagerly await the next chapter.