No Loyalty in the Moonlight
Ariadne AWS351 Reviews | 5.24/10 (351 Ratings, 0 Likes, 211 Favorites )
*Complete* Because some secrets aren't meant to stay buried. Years after the final battle, Hermione will have to confront her own, including those she's kept from herself. Winner ~ Best Drama, 2006 OWL Awards.
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I don't like ever admitting this, but I am confused, and intrigued. So what is the significance of the first year ghost, the crack in the glass, the ink stain that is always on her pillow, and now Ginny Weasley's Arithmancy qualifications?
This story is really good and I am eagerly awaiting the next parts.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
I am so pleased you like the story thus far... and I promise that the significance of all of those things will come out as the story develops. :) A hint: it is not insignificant that the ink is red and that Weasleys all blush around their ears when they are embarrassed or ashamed.I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and the answers to your questions as they unfold... Thank you for reviewing!~ Ari
as so as i think I'm understanding this story, i go and get confused once more, still, ill get it eventually...lol
-karlamarie
I'm enchanted again! You are a master of secret-keeping and tension rising. By the way, is the entire story already planned at least in your mind?
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! I blush, I blush!Yes, the entire story is planned. I am racing to catch up with posting here, but yes, the plot is complete. *taps head* *grins*Have a great weekend! I'm submitting the next two chapters to the queue here in a moment - I hope you like them.Cheers,~ Ari
*Glares* How could you leave it there?!?!?!?!?! Update soon please!~Sarah
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Eek! *runs and hides from glare* *grins**peeks out carefully* More's coming soon, Sarah! Glad you're enjoying the story so far...*hides from glare again*Cheers,~ Ari
Oh sooo dark... Your atmosphere is written just fabulously. No matter what secrets will be revealed after that - I like the style, and I like the timing (many years passed). Go on, please, don't stop it!
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Thank you again,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
... the story is practically writing itself at this point - more chapters to queue up today; I hope you enjoy them! And thank you again for your compliments on the writing style... *sighs happily*Cheers,~ Ari
I love this story! i'm addicted to it already i hope u update soon!
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, beachblonde! More is coming soon - so happy to hear you're enjoying it :)Cheers, and have a great weekend,~ Ari
I'll keep reading your story; it's very well written. I've no idea what's going on yet, though. Something seems to be niggling at the back of my mind, but I cannot put substance to it. I am intrigued.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, Jessajohns! Your compliments to my writing quite make me blush...The niggle at the back of your mind is shared by Severus; he's a few steps ahead of things at the moment, for the moment, but all will be unveiled in time... I truly appreciate your review, and wish you the best of weekends,~ Ari
The atmoshere is great! So dark though without any visible scary events. You do is artistically! And I like that they are all so grown-up, mature, if you will. I'll be waiting for your story updating.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! I'm so pleased that you're enjoying the story so far, and I blush at your wonderful compliments... More is coming soon...Cheers, and have a great weekend,~ Ari
I just don't get it yet, but it is keeping me intrigued, if for no other reason than to find out what is going on with hermione. Hopefully it will become clearer to me in future chapters, I will keep giving it a try at any rate.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you for your review, wilder... I'm pleased to hear that you're intrigued by the story's mysteries. I promise that all will be revealed, over time... I appreciate your reading, and wish you an excellent weekend!Cheers,~ Ari
Ahhhh this story is becoming clearer and clearer i understand now and i like...
-karlamarie
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, Karla Marie! Cheers!~ Ari
Hooked doesn't begin to cover it. I expectantly await more. The premise is beyond intriguing and even more questions appear as some are answered. Well thought out and written. I am thoroughly enjoying this.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you so very much,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! I blush...And I hope you enjoy the next chapters - I'm queuing more today.In the meantime, I wish you the best of weekends.Cheers,~ Ari
Anonymous
This is a really great beginning. Please keep it up and update soon. I'm really curious to find out what's going on with Hermione.
Author's Response: Thank you, swtcaro - I'm blushing that you liked the story well enough to track down the rest of the posted chapters - I'm queuing up two more on this site today; trying to catch up!
I hope you have a great weekend,
~ Ari
ok i sort of have an idea but still it is leaving me very confused... i hope the next chapter comes through soon so i can work my way past my own mental block!
-karla marie
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Hi Karla Marie...:) I'm a little behind on responding here; my apologies! I'm glad you're enjoying the way the story's mystery is unfolding... more chapters are coming soon, as always; I hope you enjoy them!Cheers,~ Ari
I'm caught up so far and am looking forward to finding out what more is behind Hermione's actions.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! Pleased to hear that the story's mysteries have you intrigued, and I hope you enjoy the next chapters...Cheers, and have a great weekend,~ Ari
I'm hooked. Tomorrow's the last day of the first quarter at school which means that I should be inputting grades and other nonsense, but for some reason I just want to keep reading! I love the little ghost and am glad that Neville made an appearance. What's going to happen to Slughorn's soul? What other unpredictable things will happen? How will our hero and heroine fare? And what about everyone else? I have to say that I was really shocked when Minerva just up and died--now I'm worried that nobody's safe! I'm very curious to find out what will happen. By the way, I love the physics stuff at the beginning although it's pretty clear that I need to brush up on the stuff that I forgot since college (at least I remember Newton's First Law, though).
Ok...This is getting confusing, but I am intrigued despite myself. What on earth is going on, will all these half answers and secretiveness be explained fully anytime in the near future or will I be doomed to making assumptions I will never understand.Still it is an interesting read-karlamarie
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Hi KarlaMarie, and thanks for your review.This one unfolds slowly, but it will unfold. If you're enjoying the ride, grand! If not... you'll probably be frustrated with it. I promise I won't doom you to making assumptions you'll never understand - I'm not mean. :) Maybe waiting until several more chapters come through the queue would help you enjoy it more? I hope so.Cheers,~ Ari
My gosh this is good! Wow. I love it!!! 
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! Your review warms my heart... I hope you enjoy the rest of the story ~ the next two chapters are in the queue now...Cheers,~ Ariadne
Wow! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, Heskie! The next two chapters are in the queue now ~ I hope you enjoy them!Cheers,~ Ariadne
Color me intrigued. Seldom have I read something this well written and engaging. I expectantly await more.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you very much,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! I blush, I blush, indeed. I hope you enjoy the mystery as it unfolds.The next chapters are in the queue now.(Oh, and up there when I said, "blush," you may wish to insert a rather undignified "squee" noise... if you wish...)Cheers,~ Ariadne
This is intriguing. I can't figure out what's going on yet. I hope you won't keep us in suspense too long.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Hi
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
, and thank you for your review...There's no way to figure it out yet; the mystery of what happened in the past and what's wrong with Hermione now and how it all ties to Slughorn is going to unfold a wee bit at a time. With the arrival of a certain Tall, Dark, and Snarky in the next chapters, pieces shall reveal themselves. I hope you enjoy the suspense and the story as it unfolds...The next two chapters are in the queue now, and there are more to follow those...Cheers,~ Ariadne
I'm really rather intrigued--part of me wants to stop because seeing Hermione like this makes me feel kind of depressed, but a bigger part of me wants to know what's happening. This has really great writing. I notice it's 37 chapters and still not completed--how many more will there be?I'm always partial to stories where Hermione teaches Arithmancy because I'm a high school math teacher. Although I don't terrorize my students (well, maybe a little, but only when they deserve it).
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Hi
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
,Thanks for the compliments; the story has 41 chapters total (it is finished and I'll finish posting soon)... I can promise that I am no way going to leave our Hermione like this. No way. *hands you candle for the darkness* :)Ooo, you teach math? I'm thinking of getting another degree - in math. I love math! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story - neither Severus nor I will let her stay this way... she has a little bit to go through first, though. Just keep your eye on the little ghost if your heart hurts too much, and she'll get you through ;)Cheers,~ Ari
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Hi
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
,Thanks for the compliments; the story has 41 chapters total (it is finished and I'll finish posting soon)... I can promise that I am no way going to leave our Hermione like this. No way. *hands you candle for the darkness* :)Ooo, you teach math? I'm thinking of getting another degree - in math. I love math! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story - neither Severus nor I will let her stay this way... she has a little bit to go through first, though. Just keep your eye on the little ghost if your heart hurts too much, and she'll get you through ;)Cheers,~ Ari
The way you have woven each thought, word and action is spellbinding. I was completely entranced by this chapter and was a little disappointed to see it end.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
*touches writerly heart* *smiles* Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
... "entranced" is a word I shall wrap around some of the colder places this story takes me to as I write it...~ Ariadne
Good first start,I feel bad for Hermione though it seems like hakf of her soul is missing.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, Nick...The state of her soul is a problem, indeed, although perhaps not literally... *sighs* I feel bad for her too.I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.Cheers,~ Ariadne
An intriguing first chapter, looking forward to seeing the mystery unfold.
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you,
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
! It unfolds slowly, but the next several chapters are written, and two more are in the queue now... I hope you enjoy it.Cheers,~ Ariadne
this is soooo cool, its erie and well you actually turned Hermione into Severus and thats just brilliant!cannot wait for the next chapter, i really want to see where this is going and i want to know more of this Hermione turned Severus.-Karla Marie
Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of No Loyalty in the Moonlight)
Thank you, Karla Marie :)Poor Hermione's in a bad way, indeed. Cheers,~ Ariadne