Haha, lol.

Oh I love love love that twist! Brilliant! But then, you always are!

I should have known I was in trouble when I read the first chapter and came across:  "I thought you went off with that Legolas bloke you met back in the time of Middle Earth when your Time-Turner messed up! " I laughed so unexpectedly, I almost spit tea all over my laptop!You make me jealous that I can't write humor!

I love the element of metafictionality you've added - the story within a story, and also them writing the fanfic story, which in turn 'wrote' the story of them coming together.

Oh my, but that was fun!  I never expected that little twist at the end, and it was just perfect!  Thanks for giving me something to giggle over.  Severus and Hermione romantic comedy is my favorite genre, and there just isn't enough of it!  :)

Ch 2: RATFLMAO!!! Oh this is way too funny... Unfortunately it seems that we have read the same fan fics of which a large majority of your story comes from. The sad thing is that once I start a story I have to know what happens in the end.Thanks SW for bringing this little gem to my attention, and I shall read the rest tomorrow as I am tired. I had to drive for 7 hrs today.Bloody brilliant BTW. Sonia :)

 I love it already.  It's so deliciously bad that it's good!

Very funny...lol  I'm glad I waited to read it so I could go from beginning to end in one go.  Thanks!

Love you, love the story.

thanks for finishing it. 

Fabulous.  Thanks for updating ahd finishing this.  I really did not see this coming.

*wipes eyes that are tearing like someone turned on a faucet*

The sex scene, pet names and spells were BRILLIANT! It was like an episode of Bad Sex!Wednesday at Writers Orgasm. 

Hysterical! Great job! 

Brilliant story! i love the ending that was just classic mate! lol
honestly though there were some parts of your 'horrible version' that i had to skip, just like Hermione and Severus sometimes had to. thats how bad it was!
It was so funny and kept me laughing. thanks for writing it!
-karlamarie

Brilliant story! i love the ending that was just classic mate! lol
honestly though there were some parts of your 'horrible version' that i had to skip, just like Hermione and Severus sometimes had to. thats how bad it was!
It was so funny and kept me laughing. thanks for writing it!
-karlamarie

What a wonderful story :>)  It had me laughing so hard at times that I nearly wet my drawers :>)Cute story line and the ending was priceless.Thanks,Linda

*giggles*

That was a good ending. May I be the irritating sod that ask the uncomfortable question the author doesn't want and doesn't care to answer? Please? LOL Sowwy, but I'm still curious about the room... yep, I know, I should shut up and keep giggling about the chapter. *nods and giggles* 

I loved it! Great story. I'm still laughing at the ending. 

YAY!!!  I love it!  The perfect ending for the perfect couple.  Thank you for all the laughs!

Oh my god I cann't remember laughing so hard about a Severus fanfic ever! I was actually disturbing some other people in the room. I hope that my writing has never been that bad although I do know putting Britishism in is very iffy for me. I believe that I will have to take a potion to get the smile off my face. The last thing I read that this reminds me of is Snape the Lotions Master.Thank you so much for writing this.

just for the record...i think house elves are invoved somehow

lmao

OK, I laughed myself sick. Is there really an epilogue somewhere? I'm kind of new here so don't know where else you might have hidden it. Secret room somewhere?

Here I thought I left a review on this chapter right after reading it, but I guess not (I was kind of busy at work that week)  Sorry for the delay but here goes.  Of course I am enjoying the story very much and laughing with each and every chapter.  Talent just flows through those fingers of yours.  But in addition to that I wanted to give my opinion on who the mystery author is -- I think it is both Severus and Hermione -- from the future!  Having gotten together at some point after putting each other off they see how much time they wasted and use Snape's research to go back and get together sooner.  Just my thougths.  Look forward to the ending.  Thanks, JoAnne

Hey, great job- you've got the cream of the crop when it comes to fanfic no no's- good stuff.I'll be laughing about Mr Plonker for weeks ;)

Absolutely brilliant!!  I'll await the epilogue with bated (not baited) breath.  (And no - I'd rather not guess just now).

This is terribly, TERRIBLY funny. :P

Another funny chapter! Thank you!It's hard to guess who the author is, but my first thought was that there's more than one author. So I agree with wildcat and MistressSnape here. Please, update soon. I'm sooooo curious! Please, I beg you!