ROFLAMO!!!!!! I love whow you ended this! I don't usually read parodys, but this caught my attention.

Love the use of soap titles.  The story is so,so cheesy.  lol

Love the 'book'. I wonder just who wrote it?  And how many were in this set up? ;D

Fun story - I enjoyed all of the cliches and did not realize how rife fanfiction land is with cliches. I guess writers just fall into ruts. Great twist at the end!

I loved this story!!  Actually I love most of your stories.  Looking forward to reading more  :-)

"Normally I think of lemons and Dumbledore together, what with his obsession"No this is just so wrong. Gah Sunshine how could you, please tell me you won't write twinkly wrinkly lemons in future. I don't think I could handle that.The story is really funny though.Cheers  MoepiAKA Michèle

thanks for an excellent read!

   > “But how? We only fucked those few times a few days ago.”Oh, I forgot, they don't have health care or biology lessons at Hogwarts. Maybe he shoudl ask Hagrid about the b.. erm, the Billywigs and the b... Bowtruckes?Truly a shame that wizards' furniture was of such lousy making! And of such mundane material as box springs.I love how "the real" Hermione and Severus aways have to go to the loo. It is quite the opposite of what happens in most stories. But I see that it is also the only place they can go.

Quite an acrobatic sex scene there, and what eloquence they show afterwards--amazing. I'm reading this at night and cannot risk laughing out loud; it's truly a shame!

WOW, I'm looking forward to a great story interlaced with horrible prose, wording, descriptions, etc. However, you know,   > ... remember reading something similarThis side will be much fun, indeed. But we have also written such things. Do we want to remember that as well? Probably we should blush a few times.Anyway, it is a promissing start, and I will immediately stop reviewing to return to reading.

Absolutly fecking hilarious.  I woke up most of the house laughing.  I can't wait to read more of your work

I absolutely LOVED this story. You had me laughing out loud so hard at times that my throat is now hoarse because of it. I wonder what my neighbours must think of me for laughing this hard, but I don't care. I had a GREAT time reading this and I didn't see it coming that they wrote that story, until they started writing it again. Wonderful! :) In a way, their future selves made sure their present selves got together. Brilliant idea!

LOL- lovely twist of events.   I hate leaving fics I started unread.

ahem.... these lines...Severus (SW69) grumbled, “Who cares what a cat thinks?”“Well, for one, I care,” Hermione (Droxy) said firmly. “He’s got feelings, too, you know!”Nice to see Severus being noble.

the fics they are reading from are hilarious.  The discoveries and dialog between them is reomantic.

I do love satire, and this is perfect!

This story was so fuckin funny! I laughed til I cried!

This was so much fun...all of it!

Okay. I finally read this. I giggled madly throughout. You did a wonderful job and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

This was hilarious and delightful.  Great twist at the end!

You rounded it up nicely. I guess it was fun writing the worst imaginable cliches. I can't help wishing you would write a really serious story about our heros, even if it hurt.

Cute!

Great story, Sun. I loved the chapter titles, very creative. They're banter will reading the story was wonderful. I especially like the last chapter, the irony that they're the author's of the story in the first place due to a botched potion is too much. Thanks for such an entertaining read!

A great finish my dear! Loved it

Oh that was awesome! I never expected that ending. Well done. I was laughing, in between shaking my head at some of the spells you created, the entire way through. Very funny.

Thanks SW, I needed that. 

Sonia :)