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The Polyjuiced Soul
neelix145 Reviews | 6.53/10 (145 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )
Severus Snape reluctantly agrees to assist new Potions Professor Granger with a new project, with unexpected consequences.
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Reviews for The Polyjuiced Soul
So so beautiful! Just loved it!
Wonderful story!
I've been busy and while I was gone you finished the story! I loved it overall, especially the beginning parts where they are stuck as each other. The ending seemed a bit disconnected from the story to me (how was the girl finally able to get into a st mungos apprenticeship? What happened to hermiones Polyjuice contract?), but overall I think it was very enjoyable to read and well done. :)
Response from neelix (Author of The Polyjuiced Soul)
Thanks for reading. I think I answered both of your queries in chapter 20? Making the Choice?
indeed, i had to laugh aloud several times and even 9gag rarely makes me laugh aloud. one thing i don't really get was how phoebe got to be a healer... can you insert a few lines in to explain please? otherwise, u had everything down pat!
Response from neelix (Author of The Polyjuiced Soul)
Hello, thanks for reading. I did cover Phoebe in the extract from the Daily Prophet. Hope that helps.
Severus is doing a good job acting like Hermione when others are around. We haven't seen as much Hermione interaction, but I would assume the same. Is the potion allowing them to somewhat become each other on more than a physical level, or have they just spent enough time together recently to have some insight into how the other one operates? I'm not gonna lie to you, I'd love to see Severus have to suffer through a Weasley gathering as Hermione. :)
I think this brings up an interesting concept which is how much attraction between them is physical and how much is about the person inside. It is really hard to imagine getting all worked up while looking at yourself, you know? Severus didn't want to imagine kissing himself. We'll see how quickly he gives in.
I was wondering last chapter if they were going to tell anyone. Telling Poppy was the right thing to do, but I wonder if they will let anyone else in on it, or if they will perservere through the three months living as another person with noone the wiser. If this ends without them killing each other, it will be a miracle.
Oooh, this is too good. I have been away for far too long, and this was a great chapter to come back to. Severus and Hermione really are in hot water on so many levels: personal, social, and professional. I can't wait to see how it plays out. I don't know if it will make them resent one another, or appreciate the other. I did like that Minerva enjoyed the predicament. :)
OMG I loved this!!! I'm sooo glad to see Hermione and Severus so incredibly happy. They both deserved it. Absolutely wonderful story!!
My favourite fanfic in ages! Really good, laughed my head off several times. :) more like it, please!
Wonderful story. I read it from start to finish in a couple of days. I love how they got to see themselves through each other's eyes. Some people, like Severus, tend to be super critical of themselves and don't realize how others see them. It was quite endearing and entertaining.
The classroom duel, was exciting and unexpected, with a suprising outcome.
It was nice to see ,that Phoebe has followed her heart, and become a healer.
A lovely ending,with everyone so happy and settled.
Minerva was a bit slow to pick up on the changes in both of them, but the wedding must have been lovely.
I think Hermione did the right thing, getting rid of the personality spells, they could have ment disaster, for some poor soul in the future.
No need for three guesses for who's poisonquill,wrote the "Exclusive Report". Gaius Gilroy must have showered a lot of Gallions on dear Rita, for that peice of rubbish.
Awww It was so lovely that he couldn't stand to be away from her, for more than 1hour and 35minutes.
Sweet story, neelix! Glad they lived happily ever after.
Brilliant story, great ending. I'm really going to miss Friday update day. Shall reread the whole thing together tonight.
Great ending. I really enjoyed the duel !
What a great story this was I so enjoyed. I laughed cried got angry at both of them and was happy for them too. Beautiful ending, Thank you for makeing this story so beautiful.
Oh, the things one doesn't think about when one takes polyjuice! It's so funny seeing Severus lust after himself!
Haha, ooh my, they really didn't think things through, did they? I almost hope they are stuck for at least a few weeks so he can burst into rears in class and consume eight pounds of chocolate while wondering if he's bleeding to death lol. More story please! Once a week is torture!
I think it's hilarious that Severus and Hermione are experiencing each others' emotions. If they ever wanted to know how the other thinks, this is the way to do it. I think it will also be an asset for a future relationship. It'll give them a better understanding of how the other one thinks about things, or feels.
Not just yet, don't change them back yet. There's to much fun to be had.
Uh oh. I'm sure if there is one thing severus would hate more than hermione's confusing underwear, it would be her making him seem weak in front of his classes. This can't be good.
I don't think she's up for teaching this class.
Oh my what will they do now. I hope Severus will realize what happened to Hermione and help her get over her panic. Minerva's reaction was priceless. Great chapter.
Poor Severus and Hermione; 3 months as each other!! YIKES! And I don't think Severus-as-Hermione will be too thrilled when he finds out that Hermione-as-Severus fainted during class. Although, maybe it could be blamed on a stray hex. Minerva is having way too much amusement at their expense, even if it is sort of funny.