Luring the Enchantress
Southern_Witch_69213 Reviews | 7.38/10 (213 Ratings, 0 Likes, 421 Favorites )
~Complete~ Slytherin tactics are used by Severus to lure Hermione to his lair. This will be a story of deliberate seduction. Whose side is Severus on anyway? Winner of the Multifaceted Awards, Rd 6, Possibility Category, Best AU fic.
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I adore the world of HP. 
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Luring the Enchantress
Wow! Great chapter. I was practially crying before when I thought SEverus was dead. Thank goodness he's not!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Sorry about that. I was trying to be a bit sneaky. LOL Thank you!
Response from Leology (Reviewer)
I just went through and read a bunch of your stories. I really like your style. I was particularly intrigued by the HG/SS story where Severus molests/rapes Hermione. I thought the ending was really...elegant. I was surprised at how you portrayed Madam Pomphrey, but then again I knew someone who acted very similar to that after a similar experience...Bravo on handling such a delicate topic. Ever thought of tackling the LM/HG pairing?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Thank you for your kind words. I do have one LM/HG, but it's not posted. I'll have to dust it off and do so.
Ah, you Ron-hater. Killing the poor boy. *sniff* Now that was an excellent battle scene. Those are difficult to write, I know.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
I agree. Later on, I have another battle scene. I really like it. Can't wait till ya get there. Hope you like!! Yes, poor Ron, huh? Even I feel sorry, so I must not hate him all that much. Teehee...
Oh Yay! Y ay!!!! I'm so glad Severus is alive! Can't wait till the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Yep Yep!!Couldn't not have my man have a happy life after all they've been through.
Yay! I had a feeling Lucius would wind up helping out in the end. I'm glad he's not just pretending to be helpful.I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Severus gets back.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Don't you just love with Lucy shows up? hehe
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
*slurp* Yes, I most certainly do. I think that's why I love including him so much in mine. Severus needs a buddy after all.
Bring it home, baby, bring it home. I'll miss them too, dreadfully, but this needs closure now. What a brilliant ride it's been. I'm looking forward to re-reading when it's completed. I bet she did, btw. Bet ya! warty xxx
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
xoxoox Warty xoxooxox (hope you are feeling better)
Oh I love the incessant drunken prodding for sex. There is nothing like Severus on a mission...sigh. I love the story. There's nothing like poetic justice, seducer becomes seducee. 
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
LOL Thanks so much for reading. :)
Bad Tonks! Stupid randy girl! I could just smack her sometimes! :-) Thanks for the update!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
I agree! I'd like to smack her, too. 
More up soon. My beta is asking where the chapter is, so I'm writing away.
It was a sad chapter; but still good. I wonder if Hermoine & Snape will get back together
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
They will meet again. **smiles secretly**
This is so exciting. I just can't wait for the next installment. Lovely meeting between SS & HG.
Thanks for the update :) I really enjoy your work
Liked this story very much....at first I didn't like your severus, but midway I started to better understand what you were developing. He seemed too back and forth at the beginning: master of manipulation, arsehole vs. insecure, misunderstood, emotional. Then when they went to live with voldemort, it seemed to make more sense. I love a severus whose allegiance is a little murky. A self serving Severus. Interesting ending. You played it out well, so that it wasn't clear if he survived (I'd hoped so!!!). You put so much effort and soul into your work. I've enjoyed all your writing. (If you still read reviews on long published stories!!)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
I certainly do and thank you for letting me know! :)
That's quite an amazing ending for a fascinating story. I wasn't sure at first if I'd like the ambiguously-loyal Severus, but he grew on me. It was intriguing to watch him go through the depths of emotion, first only loyal to himself and then to Hermione as well -- it was breathtaking.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Thanks! That's what I was aiming for, and I'm happy that it came through. It was quite a journey. :)
I LOVED this fic!!!!!! I was nearly in tears thinking Severus was dead...I was on edge all the last chapter thinking it was only a dream that he was revived. You are a awesome writer! Thanks for a wonderful read!Missy 
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Thanks so much. :) I was very naughty to play with readers' emotions that way. ~Grin~ Cheers