Luring the Enchantress
Southern_Witch_69213 Reviews | 7.38/10 (213 Ratings, 0 Likes, 421 Favorites )
~Complete~ Slytherin tactics are used by Severus to lure Hermione to his lair. This will be a story of deliberate seduction. Whose side is Severus on anyway? Winner of the Multifaceted Awards, Rd 6, Possibility Category, Best AU fic.
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I adore the world of HP. 
Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.
Reviews for Luring the Enchantress
I wanted to slap your Hermione too, but it felt right for a girl that age. One wants to slap most of them :o)
Severus in the early chapters reminded me of de Valmont in Dangerous Liasons:
She's seen nothing. She knows nothing. She's bound to be curious. She'd be on her back before you'd unwrapped the first bunch of flowers.
I enjoyed this story very much! Thank you!
And people think I am wordy... Girl, sometimes, I wonder if I can make it through some of these. However, let me add at this point, everythingseems to fit this story well. Where the last long one I reviewed I stated seemed like it went on forever, this one did not contain extemporaneous wording, plot twists, and sub plots.
Very nicely done. Glad you didn't kill off either of the leads. Sorry Ron had to go, but at the same time, he really was a giant prat. LOL.
That was a wonderful read. I'm very impressed with the way you wrote the characters. Good job.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
I'm so happy you liked it. :)
I LOVE this story...very good writing and plot!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Thank you so much. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Thank you so much. :)
There we go! Now it's 5 star! :P
One step forward... two back.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Yep, but they'll be cruising along soon enough.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Yep, but they'll be cruising along soon enough.
Nice to see Harry being supportive.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
That's my fave kind of Harry.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
That's my fave kind of Harry.
The plot thickens. Will he die for her, only to be resurrected?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
That remains to be seen. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
That remains to be seen. :)
How sneaky can they get, I wonder?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:)
He took matters into his own hands, so to speak!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Yes indeed :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Yes indeed :)
Domestic bliss, sort of.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Sort of. hehe
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Sort of. hehe
Dear, oh dear, I hope things look up soon!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) Of course they will lol
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) Of course they will lol
All the action in that chapter. I am quite bemused.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Darn, was it that confusing? I enjoy action. Bwaahaha... Otherwise, I get bored. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Darn, was it that confusing? I enjoy action. Bwaahaha... Otherwise, I get bored. :)
You are killing people off left, right, and centre. You sure you haven't got a bit of Riddle blood running in your veins?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) Maybe.JKR kills off people, too. Might as well joine the crowd. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) Maybe.JKR kills off people, too. Might as well joine the crowd. :)
Evil plotting SW! :P
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Always
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Always
Oops. Hope she hasn't bitten off more than she can chew!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) I think for a while she does, but she can handle it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
:) I think for a while she does, but she can handle it.
Harry is such an innocent sometimes!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
yep. :) ~pinches his little cheeks~
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
yep. :) ~pinches his little cheeks~
Draco and Ginny huh?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
They were my first ship in the Potter World. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
They were my first ship in the Potter World. :)
How real are her feelings for him, or are they a product of his manipulation of her?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Hmm, that will be answered soon. :) I'd like to think she has feelings for him, but they are sprouted from his manipulation. hahaha
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Hmm, that will be answered soon. :) I'd like to think she has feelings for him, but they are sprouted from his manipulation. hahaha
Snape may or may not be on the side of the light, but he is not the nicest man. Hopefully he will learn how to behave more like a true gentleman from within, rather than the false front he is demonstrating at the moment.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Let's hope so. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Let's hope so. :)
Progress is being made, and in the right direction. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
lol imagine that! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
lol imagine that! :)
What a consummate Slytherin he is.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
But of course. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
But of course. :)
A plan so cunning, you could pin a tail on it and call it a weasel!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Ah, but a weasel is such a funky name. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Ah, but a weasel is such a funky name. :)
YOU MADE ME CRY!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Sorry to hear it. I certainly don't appreciate the three star rating however.
Response from ChristineDaae (Reviewer)
oops! I'm sorry! I meant to have 5 stars.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Oh, no problem. I just thought, "Wow, she's really angry about those tears."LOL:) Thanks for letting me know.
Response from ChristineDaae (Reviewer)
lol. No, I would never ever give someone a low rating just because they made me cry. Actually, I'd give them a high rating, because they're such an amazing author, they made me cry. lol.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Sorry to hear it. I certainly don't appreciate the three star rating however.
Response from ChristineDaae (Reviewer)
oops! I'm sorry! I meant to have 5 stars.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Luring the Enchantress)
Oh, no problem. I just thought, "Wow, she's really angry about those tears."LOL:) Thanks for letting me know.
Response from ChristineDaae (Reviewer)
lol. No, I would never ever give someone a low rating just because they made me cry. Actually, I'd give them a high rating, because they're such an amazing author, they made me cry. lol.