Dark Veela
kittyperry432 Reviews | 6.61/10 (432 Ratings, 0 Likes, 127 Favorites )
Severus Snape lies dying in the Shrieking Shack when he sees a vision of his mother.
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kittyperry
Member Since 2009 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 126 | 257 Reviews Written | 830 Review Responses
I'm a 30 something home-maker, writer and researcher. Harry Potter fanfiction is my passion and my great escape from everything. I am deeply in love with Severus Snape and he is the only man I would ever consider leaving my husband for. I am most fond of happy endings. Life is too full of angst and heartache, my dreams and thoughts need something more uplifting.
I was born in Sri Lanka and have lived in India, Poland and now, obviously the UK.
I love food, so many of my stories will have detailed descriptions of things I'm currently craving. I also love travelling, the arts and crafts, cooking, baking, oil painting, especially the pre-Raphaelites, literature and culture in general. My favourite colours are at present are royal purple, silver, emerald green, true red and fucshia. Colour is like music, it speaks silently to the soul when it needs it most.
Reviews for Dark Veela
love this story , one of the best I've ever read .more soon ?
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you for the review and the stars. More coming shortly.
The " Dark Veela " fits Severus very well.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much. Glad you think so. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story too.
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Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you for your first review. I am touched that you took the time to leave one. Please do continue to tell me what you think of the story. No worries about the odd typing :) Hope you are able to get it fixed soon.
Minerva is a good ally to have. :)
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Yes. Minerva is always a very smart and good friend to have.
I don't usually read "veela" stories... so I am very glad I gave this one a shot. It is very lovely so far and I can hardly wait to read more! Keep it up!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter at the moment. I am desperately in need of a beta though to help me post faster.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter at the moment. I am desperately in need of a beta though to help me post faster.
Well, hopefully things will work out now that she has her Slytherin plan moving into action!!
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Oh, and I forgot to mention how much I am liking the involvement of the Malfoys. It's nice to see Hermione get the mom she deserves, from such an interesting source!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you. Cissy of course is not lily-white, she has reasons for her behaviour. But then, who doesn't. It is good though that what started out as politically useful has in her mind grown to true affection and love.
You know, I have overlooked this story for the longest time. I don't know why, but somehow I came to the conclucion that the tittle of the story and that Severus met his mother ment that this story was some kind of vampire story, and most likely with a very dark Severus who would do his best to hurt and humiliate Hermione, and she would like a good, little doormat, forgive and forget any wrongdoings for the tiniest, sloppy excuse due to Severus doing whatever he did because he loved her. Don't ask me why and how I came up with the idea, just take my excuse for being totally wrong in my jugdement. I started reading this morning, it is now nearly the next morning and I have enjoyed every chapter. What a brilliant and fantastic story, I absolutely, truly, most sincerely love it. I just adore your characters, I love the bashing of Ginny and Molly, I love how you dealt with the aftermath and consequences of the war. Your Luna is priceless and I am more than willing to let Cissy adopt me too:-)) Again, an absolutely fantastic story and you wont know how much I look forward to read more!!!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you. I'm so pleased you finally felt like reading it and then fell in love with the story. It is such a compliment you pay me. I'm glad the characterisations aren't too beyond the realm of possibility. I hope to get more writing done soon.
I'm so glad to see that things just might work out between Severus and Hermione; even if he doesn't know it yet. I think the idea of a Halloween Feast is absolutely perfect. And I'm sure the Malfoy's won't pass up the opportunity.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you. The Malfoys are going to be making waves at the Feast :)
Yes, I definitely think that the more allies the better when going up against Severus. I just hope it works as well as she is wanting it to. I don't think I had quite realized the length of time that had passed since her birthday. They must talk soon! Hopefully this feast is a step in the right direction. Looking forward to more.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much. I think the Feast is going to do a lot to help advance their relationship. I think that Severus is smart enough to use what's given to him when he realises he has backed himself into a corner with his own stubborness.
I'm so glad that Hermione and Minerva were able to have such a good heart to heart talk--Cissy may be stepping into the role of surrogate mother for Hermione, but I always saw Minerva as a kind of doting aunt for her. And having a member of Hogwarts' staff on her side will be a bonus for her and Severus in the future.Liked the idea that Hermione's dark magic may have been influencing her earlier behavior with Severus--quite frankly, I'd forgotten that she was struggling with its influence as well as Harry, Ron and the others!Looking forward to the events of the Halloween Ball...maybe Harry and Luna can get in a dance before Ginny goes completely nuts...
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you for the review. Yes, I do see Minerva as a kind of doting aunt, sometimes annoyingly interfearing but always well meaning.Hermione's darkness is easily missed since she's not as overtly demonstrative but it is there. But I did want to show that just because one thinks one's got a handle on it that it does not really go away.Harry and Luna don't get a dance. But I think you will be pleased with the outcome of the Feast.
great update, really enjoyed it. So glad Hermione has loving parents in the form of the Malfoys. looking forward to the next update
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you.
great update, really enjoyed it. So glad Hermione has loving parents in the form of the Malfoys. looking forward to the next update
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you. I think although the Malfoys did have ulterior motives for their actions that they have grown to genuinely care for Hermione.
Tansy, the silent yet profound ceremony... oh, thank you!!!!!Sincerest congratulations on attaining your PHD!!!! All of that and "Dark Veela", too!I am so very glad to see you back, Ms.Kitty.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much. Don't you just adore Tansy? I was so delgihted to get a chance to write my own House-Elf. And she's a real bossy boots.
Response from HM_Roberts (Reviewer)
Oh, she is, but what a wonderful character! Kudos! Now waiting for more with baited breath!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thanks. I just need to sort out a proper beta. This story has taken so long that mine has gone on to bigger and better things.
Yay! Luna's back!!!!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Glad you love Luna like I do.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Glad you love Luna like I do.
Ooh a fancy dress party! What fun!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much for the review :)
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Thank you so much for the review :)
Luna needs to come back and fix Harry. And put a bee in Ginny's bonnet.Good chapter.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
I think so but perhaps Luna would be wasted on Harry. I don't think he's ready to adore her the way she deserves.
Interesting developments!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Loved Severus' comeback to the three Weasleys. It was well deserved.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
I'm so delighted with your lovely reviews. Thank you so much.
Very interesting take on Pure Bloods. I see some changes coming.And um, I PROMISE I wasn't looking. It just sort of jumped out. But, but, I found a 'that'.“That would be best,” replied Minerva. ‘They are waiting for you in the staff-room.’ I'm SOOOOORRY
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Excellent. Sharp eyes lovely. I'll do the changes. Much appreciated.
Ooh somefamily has their grumpy pants on. Good chapter.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Grumpy pants :) That's a great line. Love it.
Fooooooood(Good chapter)
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
That's what happens when you write while on a diet :)
Well I think Harry said to Dumbledore what most of us have wanted to. Good job. (And no food this time.)
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Harry's finally thinking for himself. About time he started really.
There you go with the food again. <drool>Ah poor Draco. It's a new world.Enjoying!
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
I was hungry when I wrote that. :)
Ooh good ending line. I suspect some romance may blossom between Harry and Luna.You're doing too good of a job describing food. Stop it (please). You've made me hungry (and it's 1 a.m.).
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
Diets and writing don't work. I tend to then write extensively about food :)
Good chapter. Glad to see Luna & Phineas involved.
Response from kittyperry (Author of Dark Veela)
I'm so happy to read your lovely reviews :)