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10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

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debjunk

281 Reviews   |   281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 38 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 33,260 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

After hiding for five years, Severus Snape is found and convicted of Dumbledore's murder. His punishment is way beyond anything ever thought of before. Can Hermione help restore what Severus has lost?

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

gabi1791

Yes, hopefully!! Great chapter!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thank you!

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Stephanie76

*claps hands excitedly* Now we're hopping!  The fics in overdrive, and I am excited to see how this gets fixed.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Vroom, vroom... go, team, go!

0/10

mom7knox

yah! He's back - can't wait to see what's next!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yes, finally!  Hopefully the plan will work.

0/10

sunny33

That took a bit of convincing.  At least they believe in each other now. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yes, and that's important.  They'll work together better, among other things. 

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update. I am trilled that Severus went after Hermione and that they decleared their love for eachother, it wouldn't be fair to this magnificient story if chapter after chapter had been spent on them in "woe me who doesn't deserve to be loved" mood. I look forward for Umbrigde to get her due:-))

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thank you so much!  Although the 'woe is me' factor can be fun to read, I think this Severus has had an overabundance of time to think.  Being unable to do anything has made him take the reigns and go for it.  For him, there's no time to waste.  Carpe Diem and all that!

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Ugly Kitten

Ohhhh, gods, too many things can go wrong!! What if Sev makes the mistake of not acting properly? What if Umbridge goes to someone else with it? Does Harry know enough about Obliviates to alter memories if it does happen that way? What if Sev has to run? >.<

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Oh, what if all that happens?  Goll, hopefully it won't!  I think Severus' background would keep him from being found out.  But... anything can happen, right?  These guys are smart and quick, so hopefully even if the plan turns south, they'll be able to get themselves out of it.

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Clairvoyant

Yeah!  He's free, somewhat.  Umbridge is so in trouble, isn't she?

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Somewhat... I liked that.  Umbridge is definitely in trouble.  But the wench deserves it.

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kimjo2

a plan...a cunning plan!  what a superb update.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks, kimjo!  Glad you liked it.

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh I loved the scene with Umbridge. Especially the Oblivate! She so deserves worst. Too bad Harry didn't record or have a witness to her comfession. That would have been perfect. I'm glad Hermione decided to kiss his forhead. He needs caring and contact.  

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Umbridge definitely deserved worse!  But, for now, nothing can be suspected.  I think Hermione is very caring.  Despite her thinking that Severus probably hates her, she can't help herself but be kind.

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh and to think, Severus could hear all of that exchange! I hope Harry is successful and doensn't slip up with Umbridge.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Heh, heh.  He's a Slytherin, even when he's not trying to be!

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh gods! Umbridge wanted a Snape pet. Ug, I'm glad Hermione intervened.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yes, me too.  I don't think I could have stomached whatever Umbridge had planned for Severus.

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kimjo2

that was wonderful.  i hope we'll get more of severus' perspective.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Hmm, maybe.  ;)

0/10

kimbee73

Wow that seemed to easy...but then again like Harry said she really loves her tea!Well hopefully soon Severus will be back to normal and we will find Dumbledore and find out who did this to them...Then everyone can live happily ever after......Right?????

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Absolutely!  We just need to get all that done! 

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kimbee73

I hope that Umbridge comes clean....but that would be too easy....well anyway.....great chapter....looking forward to reading the next one.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Umbridge come clean?  When pigs fly!  That would mean she has a shred of decency in her.  I don't think there's any shreds there.

10/10

pookah

Clever Harry!  I'm glad he thought to Obliviate Umbridge afterwards.  Poor Hermione!  My mom was in a coma once, or near to it, and she could hear everything around her.  So I would hire someone to read to him all day and play pleasant music, if I was taking care of him!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Wow, that would be so frustrating!  I think Hermione might read to him all the time.  If she's not too busy looking for the cure.

10/10

BrenaMarie

So, While going through my emails I realized that I never actually left a review for this chapter.  Whoops.  Since I've already reviewed chapter 7 I'll just say that this story totally rocks and you're awesome, and I can't wait to see how things work out.  How's that?  Aweseome?  Great.  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Hopefully all will turn out awesome!  Thank you so much.  *Big hugs*

10/10

BrenaMarie

Hey There!  Thanks again for the update!  This chapter was awesome!  I loved how you didn't mess around with Harry getting the info he needed from Umbridge!  Totally awesome.  And I'm soooo embarrassed for Hermione!  I hope she doesn't convince herself too much that he's not interested.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Oh, wouldn't that just kill you to know that you blabbed your devotion and he heard!  I'd probably crawl under a rock.  Hermione is much braver than I.  Of course, she wants to cure him, but I don't think I could look him in the face, whether it was blank or not!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Harry's brilliant! :) However, now they have something to be working with, eh? Whoot! I'm sure now that Hermione's on the case, she'll get it done! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

She's no slouch, that's for sure.  And she won't stop until she's licked the problem.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Good plan Harry has. I think this "man" helping Umbridge is a Death Eater.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yup, I can tell you that he is.  I liked your quotes around the word 'man.'  It could be a woman, too, right?

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I feel so sorry for Snape, but I love that Hermione was clever enough to do what she did to get him!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I couldn't imagine a worse punishment.  Except maybe death... maybe.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Poor Snape!  I just had a thought. I think the man lying in the bed in the previous chapter might be Dumbledore. That would explain why he's not been about. hmmm

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

hmmm  A good guess.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

And the plot thickens. At least we know Kingsley would want to be fair, but of course that wouldn't stop these two. I wonder who that bloke was in the beginning (the one in the bed). Hmmmm. Good chapter.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Umbridge knocked the fairness right out of Kingsley.  Too bad for Severus.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Ugh, Umbridge. You've got her spot on, the biatch. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

She really is the character you love to hate.  I think sometimes I dislike her more than Voldemort. 

9/10

snapesslavegirl

Are we going to get a chapter with Severus' feelings soon? Please!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Eventually.  He is trapped within himself, after all.  I've kind of done it on purpose, to accentuate the awful state the poor man is in.

0/10

snapesslavegirl

Hopefully the plan will work on getting the info from that hag Umbridge. I think it's sweet how Hermione explained her feelings to Harry. Very selfless.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I know she can be a know-it-all, but I've always admired Hermione's capacity to think of others and put them ahead of herself.

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