Chapter 11
Chapter 11 of 13
debjunkAfter hiding for five years, Severus Snape is found and convicted of Dumbledore's murder. His punishment is way beyond anything ever thought of before. Can Hermione help restore what Severus has lost?
ReviewedChapter 11
Dolores Umbridge appeared in a deserted field. She looked around, searching for her contact. He hadn't arrived yet. She tapped her foot impatiently. Her hands wrung in front of her nervously. She looked to and fro, but her partner was nowhere to be seen. At long last, a man appeared out of nowhere. She gazed at her partner. He'd chosen a thin, balding man to mimic through Polyjuice. Dolores moved toward him.
"What are we going to do? Snape has been released from the spell!" Umbridge cried.
The Locator Spell that Harry had used to track Umbridge automatically deposited him several hundred yards away from Umbridge's point of arrival so as not to be discovered. He hurried along under his Invisibility Cloak to the small, squat, pink figure that was waiting in a clearing. Suddenly, he saw a tall man Apparate near her. He raised his wand as he closed in on the two conspirators.
"He needs to be taken care of... now!" Dolores tittered nervously.
"Now, now, Umbridge, don't get all excited. This will be simple to remedy. I will just kill him."
"Kill him! He was to suffer, not be killed!"
"I can do both. I'll torture him, and then I'll kill him," Lestrange said in a calm, calculative voice.
Dolores grinned evilly. "It will have to be a very long torture for him to get what he deserves."
"Of course... He will suffer... oh, he will suffer."
"I want to be there. I want to see it!" Dolores cried triumphantly.
Harry had heard enough. He waved his wand in a circle and sent a dispersed Petrificus Totalis Spell at the two criminals. Both Umbridge and Lestrange were enveloped in light. They quickly froze, their precarious positions causing them to drop to the ground.
Harry pulled the Invisibility Cloak off and smirked down at his captives. Their eyes shifted back and forth in fear. Harry bent low over Dolores Umbridge.
"I don't think the Ministry will take kindly to you conspiring with a known Death Eater, Dolores," he said before straightening up again. He went over to Lestrange. "Your days of freedom are over, Lestrange."
He levitated both of them and pushed them close together. Pulling a shrunken Portkey that looked like a rag out of his pocket, he enlarged it. He placed the old, tattered blanket over the two petrified bodies and touched the edge. Before he knew it, they had snapped out of existence and reappeared in Hermione Granger's living room.
Much to Harry's embarrassment, Hermione and Snape were in the throes of some passionate kissing. They didn't even notice the three newcomers, despite their rather loud arrival. Harry cleared his throat.
Hermione pulled away and gave Harry a startled look. Snape glanced up at him indifferently and pulled Hermione back for one last kiss. Harry grimaced. Supportive or not, this relationship would be a bit for him to swallow.
Releasing Hermione, Severus carefully rose so as not to dump her out of his lap and onto the floor. They both straightened themselves out at last, and walked over to Harry and his captives.
"That didn't take long at all," Hermione said, visibly blushing from being caught snogging Severus Snape senseless.
"Not long enough," Severus muttered.
Harry chose to ignore them. He looked at Lestrange. "We'll have to wait for the Polyjuice to wear off before we can confirm that it's Lestrange," he said.
"We can still question him," Severus commented as he stared at the petrified man.
With a flick of his wand, Lestrange was bound in ropes. "Finite Incantatem," Severus chanted, and the Petrificus Totalus Spell was released. The ropes stayed firmly in place, keeping Lestrange from moving much.
Severus hoisted the man up from the floor and threw him into a chair. He pointed his wand at him.
"Are you Rodolphus Lestrange?"
By this time, Harry had done much the same to Dolores Umbridge. She too was bound and sitting in a chair, opposite Lestrange.
"Heavens, he's not Lestrange!" she cried.
Severus' head shot towards her. "You, woman, are one of the most obtuse people I have ever met. You don't even know when you are consorting with a Death Eater!" he sneered.
Umbridge shut her mouth quickly, but gave Severus a withering look. Finally, she was able to speak again. "It can't be him. I would have known."
"You couldn't see past your own desire for revenge! You are a sorry excuse for a witch," Severus snapped. "You sold yourself to the highest bidder. I hope you can live with yourself for your decisions."
Severus turned back to Lestrange. "Why don't you tell her who you are, Roddy?"
The thin, balding man snarled at him. "Why should I give you the pleasure of knowing who I am?"
Severus closed the distance between them, bent low, and glared at Lestrange. "I already know who you are. Do you think I cannot tell your gruff, rumbling voice in an instant? I knew the second you cast the spell upon me who you were. Now, why did you do it?"
Lestrange struggled against his bonds, trying to get at Severus. He was unsuccessful. Instead, he grimaced at Severus.
"It's no more than you deserve, you cowardly traitor!"
Severus straightened and wiped a bit of spittle that had landed on his face from Lestrange's outburst.
"If this were just about revenge, you wouldn't have bothered. It wouldn't have been worth it for you to come out of hiding and risk your own life just to get to me." Severus' wand dug into Lestrange's cheek. "Now tell me why you've done it."
"I'll never tell! You'll have to kill me first!"
Umbridge was whimpering in her chair, unable to believe that she'd been duped by a foul Death Eater. Her usually prideful, snobby face was now filled with shock. She glared at the man she had trusted without a second thought. Her hatred radiated about her.
Severus bent low again, so that his eyes were level with Lestrange's. "We can do this the easy way or the hard way. Which do you choose?"
Lestrange narrowed his eyes at Severus. "I'll take my secret to my grave!"
Pulling back, Severus trained his wand on Lestrange. "Legilimens!" he chanted.
Lestrange's slim face dropped in disbelief, and his skin went ashen as he realized what Severus was doing. Too late, he tried to put up some defense. Severus crashed through his mind until he found what he was looking for. All was revealed to him within a matter of minutes. He pulled out of Lestrange's mind as the Polyjuiced man fell forward, limply.
Severus turned to Hermione and Harry, who had been watching anxiously from the side. His face was grim.
"Lestrange has Albus," he explained.
Hermione gasped as her hand went up to her mouth. Harry looked on with concern.
"Where... how?" he asked Severus.
"It seems that when Dumbledore Portkeyed out of the tomb, his mind was a bit addled. He wandered around near the town where he appeared. Unfortunately for him, it was the town where Lestrange was living. No one knew that he had a small house there. He would go there after a raid to avoid detection. Dumbledore literally stumbled down his street. In his weakened state, Albus was easy to catch."
Severus' mouth thinned as he looked back to Lestrange. Rage filled him at the thought of Dumbledore's fate these past six years.
He continued the tale for Harry and Hermione. "Lestrange developed a variant of the Body-Bind Spell that froze Dumbledore indefinitely. He's been a statue on Lestrange's bed for all of this time. Lestrange knew I was searching for Dumbledore. He set out to make it impossible for me to ever find him."
"Why didn't he just kill you... and Dumbledore for that matter?" Hermione asked as she glared at Lestrange.
"That's where the revenge part comes in. He thought it a fitting end to have the greatest wizard in the world reduced to a stiff, corpse-like being. Better than death, even. Instead of alerting Voldemort to the deception, he decided to use Albus as a bargaining chip. If ever the Dark Lord found Bellatrix or him in disfavor, Lestrange was ready to use Albus' survival and capture as a means to avoid Voldemort's wrath.
"After the Dark Lord's defeat, he wanted to punish me for turning against Voldemort, so he developed the Hollowing Spell. It would have been simpler had he just killed us, but Lestrange doesn't think that way. He wants to inflict the most heinous punishment imaginable. He felt that Dumbledore's awareness, yet inability to move, would be the worst possible punishment he could receive. He felt the same about the Hollowing Spell with me." Severus grimaced. "I believe he was correct on both accounts."
Everyone in the room was silent for a while. All that could be heard was the tittering sobs of Dolores Umbridge. She muttered to herself about the fact that she'd let herself be duped into following the whims of a Death Eater. She worried aloud about what the Ministry would do to her for her folly.
"Do you know where Lestrange is keeping him?" Harry asked.
Severus nodded. "I will Apparate there and bring him back here."
"Do you know how to release him from the spell?"
"I do," Severus said in a clipped tone. Turning to Hermione, he looked at her seriously. "I will be back soon," he told her.
"Do you want us to come with you?" Hermione asked.
"No, I must do this alone."
Hermione's hand came to his arm. "You're sure?" she asked.
Severus gave her a quick nod before Disapparating.
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Hurrah! But seriously, why aren't all of these on your ffnet account? SO glad I joined this website...Great story! I kept almost-crying, and I'm at uni at the moment, so that would have been... well, most inappropriate.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
Most inappropriate indeed! ~tissue? This is a great site. I'm glad you found it. There are so many stories here that I haven't had time to upload to FFN. Also many of them are drabbles for Saturday Night, and I don't think to load them up until it's way late. But I should, and I probably will at some point. :) Glad you liked this.
WOW! What a neat clean up job you have done with the villains and thanks for the happy ending! I read this straight through and loved every minute of it. I hope you win!!!! This was very 'in canon' and I give you an Outstanding!
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Thank you so much,
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! I'm very glad you enjoyed it and thought so highly of it. Don't forget to vote in the challenge. Whether you vote for this fic or not, the more people who vote, the better it is for all of us!
I really liked this story and am sad it is ending.But you gave us a happy ending and the villains have been punished.Thank you for writing your take on the challenge. I liked it very much.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
I'm glad you liked it apisa. It was fun to write. Thank you for following it to the end.
So, I love how you handled the Dumbledore thing. I love the idea of him being stuck with his own thoughts for so long and only being able to dwell on what he did to everyone.
I'm glad Severus got the appology he didn't even know he needed. I can only imagine how huge of a weight that would have been lifted with those words.
I'm also glad to see the toad and Lestrange being hauled of to Azkaban, may they rot forever.
Much Love
~ Brena
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
Oh, they'll rot all right! And Severus really did need that from Albus. After searching fruitlessly, he was feeling pretty guilty. Now he knows he doesn't need to. Opens the door for him to begin a new life... filled with Hermione.
Wow, I didn't realize I fell so far behind with my reading! I pulled up this fic today to start trying to catch up and I see that its already completed!
I'm very happy that the bad guys have been foiled and even more excited that we know what happened to Dumbledore. I hope there aren't any huge repercussions from him being Staute-Man for 6 years. I'm just going to have to go to the next chapter and see for myself!
Much Love,
~ Brena
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Slacker! That's okay. We all live in the real world. I'm glad you are catching up. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Bravo for happy endings.
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Yes, they're wonderful, aren't they? Thanks so much!
Beautiful ending, Hermione and Severus get happily ever after, and Umbridge and Lestrange get life in Azkaban prison. Everything is as it should be.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
Heh, dang right! No escapees here. Umbridge and Lestrange will spend the rest of their days with the kitties. And Hermione and Severus will spend the rest of their days with each other!
Thank goodness Dumbledore didn't waste away in his own mind for the time he was prisoner. I am so glad Umbridge finally got her dues!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
Dumbledore is a calculative and clever wizard. Luckily, he was able to keep his mind from slipping into insanity. That would have truly been tragic... despite his penchant for meddlesome behavior.
Hmmm. I thought it was Dumbledore that was being held prisoner. I just hope that being stuck like that for 6 years has not made him insane.
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And you were oh, so right! At least he had a good reason for being gone and untraceable for all that time.
Meddling old man. He nearly completely ruined the first spontaniously ramantic thing Severus has ever done. I really loved this story.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
That's a good way of putting it! Lucky that Hermione is quick thinking and helped to save the day. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for all your wonderful and thoughtful reviews.
Ha! I love Hermione's revenge on Umbridge's precious kittens. At least now they are getting to the bottom of things.
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They are. They'll have all the pieces soon.
Yes! I knew Hermione would get it in the end. Now they need to kick some Umbridge ass!
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Indeed they do!
What a terrible situation. Niether of them being able to communicate with the other.
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It's frustrating as all get out for Severus, and poor Hermione only knows that he can hear her, but not what he might think of anything she says.
Yay! She sang like a canary. One would think she would have been more wary of the ex-student she tortured for a year. Good for Harry. Now let's hope Hermione can save Severus.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
You would think she would be. I think, though, that Umbridge is very full of herself. She would never imagine that she could be duped or that anyone would have the guts to even try.
Ha ha. Turn about is fair play. I hope she spills her guts! Poor Hermione. She really did not think about what it would be like to have Snape like that araoun all the time.
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
I think it's like most things. You have an idea of what something will be like, but it's always much more intense than what you expect. How horrible it would be to have to see someone you respect, and well, love, be like this.
Oh my. That is definately a worse punishment that death would have been. Thank goodness for Hermione's quick thinking.
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Yep. We've already established what a @!$% Umbridge is. If he'd wound up with here there might have been little left to save.
Evil, twisted, coniving B+*@ch. I hope there is some magical residue left that explains what happened in rhe trial.
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She's all that, all right. It's amazing how evil she is. And willing to work with who-knows-who to achieve her goals.
Whew. Severus has absolutely no chance against those two terrible plotters. I think I may have a slight suspicion as to who the imprisoned wizard may be...
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And you may well be right on the mystery prisoner. Severus really is in it deep. He has no idea how twisted everything will become soon.
Wow. Somebody really has it in for Severus. I can't wait to find out who it is. At least Kingsley has the good sense to follow the old addage "keep your freinds close and your enemies closer"!
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
True for Kingsley. Poor Severus really does have an enemy.
Ok, I'm sadistic - I think that Umbridge and Lestrange got exactly what they deserved. Did part of their duties incluse scrubbing toliets? Say yes and make my day! Please....Oh, and Merlin, but leave it to Albus to pop the cork before the party started! Goading Severus like that.I love how it took Hermione a while to catch on that he wasn't jsut showing her. Very nice ending. That you so much for this story, you did a great job and it was quite enjoyable.
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Scrubbing toilets was one of the nicer things they had to do. I think some of the Aurors made them kneel on the floor and shine their shoes... the Muggle way.
Thank heavens Hermione saved the proposal by keeping a clear head. Albus really doesn't know when to shut it, even after all that time as a statue.
Whooot! Umbridge is off to the pokey! Yippeee!I almsot expected a Polyjuiced version of Dumbledore the way he was babbling so OC until he said how he'd had nothing but his memories to keep him sane. I suppose a good long mental reevaluation was in order. At least Kingsley has seen the light!
Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)
LOL, yeah. Who would have thought he'd act that way, right? I think he felt a tiny bit of guilt which became a lot of guilt given the lack of other things to think about.
Interesting beginning. I can understand the Ministry being adamant to round up every last Death Eater, but I thoight Kingsley would be more leniant.
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Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest of it. I think Kingsley feels a little pushed into the corner by the adamancy of the Wizengamot. Silly him, being the Minister, but he's new... well, not that new!
Great story. I've enjoyed reading all of it, though it was hard when Severus had been Hollowed, I'm glad that Albus also was found. And happy endings make me happy! *g* Thanks for taking the time to share this wonderful fic with us!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though poor Severus was 'out of it' for a while. That part was hard for me too, but the knowledge that everything would work out in the end kept me going.
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And off they ride into the sundset... on two brooms, of course.
Very fitting ending to this tale! So nice to see everything is rounding up quite nicely and some things never change *giggles*.
Author's Response: Some things definitely never change! Albus better watch it, or some day he's going to really get killed by an irate Snape!