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10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

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debjunk

281 Reviews   |   281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 38 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 33,260 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

After hiding for five years, Severus Snape is found and convicted of Dumbledore's murder. His punishment is way beyond anything ever thought of before. Can Hermione help restore what Severus has lost?

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

makaem

So Umbridge will finally get what she deserves? This story is so much fun to read, I hate that it appears to be ending.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

It's getting there, but we've still a couple chapters left.  Umbridge will get her punishment.  She definitely deserves to suffer for what she's done.

10/10

sinbad

I see the story is wrapping up.  Enjoyable chapter, I can't wait to see what Albus has to say about all this.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

That will come in the next chapter!  We've a couple more to go.

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kimjo2

how exciting!  i hope umbitch suffers!  great update.  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks, kimjo!  She will get her punishment.

10/10

gabi1791

Great chapter, I'm so glad they got them!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Harry did a good job, didn't he?

10/10

beaweasley2

Umbridge gets what she deserves! Severus is rid of this horrid wizard.   Dumbledore will be saved!  Severus 'Black Knight' Snape to the rescue!  Oh, and Harry did a good job capturing them.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

LOL, yes, all that will happen.  Thanks!

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sunny33

Interesting development! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yup.  Hopefully, Dumbledore will be freed soon.

9/10

mimmom

Still enjoying this story.  Looking forward to more chapters!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thank you.  More to come soon.

10/10

Sampdoria

Oh my, what a developement. I hope nobody let Umbrigde get off to easy by claiming that she didn't know it was Lestrange she was dealing with? That toad should spend the rest of her days in a cell next to him in Azkaban!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I definitely agree.  She won't escape punishment.

10/10

Nessa

I think it was best Harry decided to be a little quicker than he should have, who knows what he might have apparated into lol. I hope Severus Brings Dumbledore back safely.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

That's true.  He's good at his job and has a sixth sense for when to do things.

10/10

braye27

Just goes to prove the point that no one should underestimate the talent and cleverness of Hermione Granger or Severus Snape!But I wish that Severus wouldn't go to get Albus all by himself without telling anyone where he was going.  But if something awful and unexpected happens, and push comes to shove, Hermione and Harry could give Lestrange a bit of Veritaserum to find out where his "hidey-hole" is located.Great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more SSHG snogging, etc.  Especially the etc.  Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Severus feels he needs to do it himself because he feels responsible for Dumbledore's disappearance.  Hopefully, everything will work out.  As you said, there's always Veritaserum!Mmmm, more SSHG snogging... yum!

10/10

MuseAmusant

Hmm...maybe Azkaban should take a cue from those Texas prisons and make the prisoners wear pink uniforms. As long as Dolores could bring her precious kitties along, she should be right at home.

I'm not so sure that Severus going off on his own to LeStrange's is such a good idea, though. Lord knows what kind of nasty surprises await him there. And God only knows what mental state Albus will be in after all this time. Yikes.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Too true.  There might be some surprises.  Severus feels the need to do this alone to 'repent' for letting Albus disappear in the first place, I think.  Hopefully, all will work out well.As for the prison cells, we don't want Umbridge too cozy now, do we?  Maybe Lestrange should have the uniform and the kitties?HermioneDiggory's response: Good point about Dolores, so definitely the pink and the kitties for Lestrange.

As for Dolores' punishment at Azkaban, she should have to wear ugly Chudley Cannons orange uniforms and have plates of rottweilers and pit bulls on her walls. That should send her right round the bend!

10/10

blue artemis

Umbridge deserves some serious punishment.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

That she does!

10/10

indigo_rose

No Severus, don't go alone!  Without telling anyone else the name of the town, or the street, or the house number, so that when you get into trouble no one will know where to look for you... arrgh!!!  What kind of a double-agent are you, anyway!?  Seriously though, I'm glad things are moving quickly and that Umbridge was shown just how foolish she'd been.  Not that I imagine she's sorry for what she did to Severus, just that she was used by another Death Eater...  Still, I'm sure there will be some time served in Azkaban for her duplicity, and perhaps all her little kitten dishes can be there with her for company.  Make the place homey and all that.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

That's it exactly with Umbridge.  She's mortified to be associated with a DE.  I don't think she deserves homey where she's going.  But that will be up to the Ministry!Severus feels he needs to do this alone as he feels very responsible for what happened to Albus.  (Like it's his fault!)  But that's Severus.

10/10

indigo_rose

Whew, got three chapters to catch up on and just one to go!  This one was absolutely hilarious!  Holding the kitty plates for ransom, Umbridge's "I'll get you..." remark, and finally the return of one of the kitties as a hairless wonder!  Reminded me of Doctor Evil's cat in the Austin Powers movies, Mister Bigglesworth.  Then I thought of a bald Umbridge, which took me to a Very Bad Place...  Can't wait to see where Umbridge's trail leads, and hopefully soon someone will be able to find and save Dumbledore!  On to the next chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

I'm glad you found all that entertaining.  I must admit, I too thought of Dr. Evil's cat while writing this.  It's truly fun to wrangle Umbridge.  She always makes such a fuss when it happens!

10/10

BrenaMarie

OMG, this chapter was awesome.  And a whole lot of fun.  I was seriously scared when they were strolling thru the ministry.  And I loved how Hermione handled Umbridge when she got in there!  Very awesome, I was kinda suprised that threatening the kitten plates actually worked!  Very funny.  Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what happens next!  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks, Brena!  I think that those plates are the closest thing to a family that Ubridge has.  So, of course, she wouldn't want to see her little darlings hurt.  My Aunt had real cats.  (Only two, although we called her the crazy cat lady when she wasn't within ear-shot.)  She'd never been able to have kids and she treated those cats just like family.  Perhaps she was even more protective of them than she would have been of a child!

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kimjo2

oh joy!  the umbitch will get her justs.  jkr didn't do anything about her so it's up to you!  thanks so much

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Well, she did have her dragged through the forest.  And I'd like to think that the Centaurs were... well... not pleasant to her!  We'll have to see what happens now.  Hopefully they'll burn her at the stake!

10/10

Nessa

I've caught up! This is brilliant. Hermione you are the brightest with of your age. So glad Severus is back with us and that he was able to express his feelings to Hermione I think i'd burst with all that emotion inside of me not able to release it. Now it's up to Harry i'm sure he'll do a fine job.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Yay!  I'm glad you've caught up!  The pent up emotions were a great deal of the torture, I think.  It would be so frustrating to not be able to say or show anything!  But, yay to Hermione and her brains for setting him free.  (It worked out pretty good for her, too!)

10/10

mimmom

This is gonna be goood!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Let's hope so!!!

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mimmom

OMG this is so agonizing.  Poor Severus.  I'm glad you updated!  I will keep reading.

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Thanks

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.  I think this is by far the hardest chapter.  Severus' predicament is so frustrating, and there's nothing he can do about it.  Go, Hermione, go!

10/10

makaem

Can't wait to see how that goes over with Umbridge.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Heh, heh.  Well, hopefully everything will go as planned.

10/10

beaweasley2

Lestrange? Didn't see that one. I approve of using Umbridge as bait. Then turn her into a Jabernoll and hit her with a Siliencing Hex!  Thar wtich belongs in a cage!

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Great ideas!  I'll pass them along to Severus.

10/10

braye27

Yes!   *pumps fist in the air*   I was so worried when Hermione chose not to be with Severus when Harry revived him, but the Potions master was not about to let this opportunity slip through his fingers.I hope their plan to expose Umbridge and capture Lestrange bears fruit, and that Dumbledore can be brought back, as well.Very nice chapter, dear!Beth

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks, Beth!  Hopefully everything will work out as planned!  As for Severus, he'd been trapped without being able to say or do anything for way too long.  He wasn't about to let future happiness slip through his fingers, especially knowing how Hermione had felt about him before.

10/10

apisa_b

Somehow that was easier that I had anticipated. YAY!And they accepted their feeling for each other.Now the chase begins! I can't wait to read what is going to happen next.

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Free Severus from spell... check.Declare love to one another... check.Find Dumbledore and make Umbridge and Lestrange pay... hopefully very soon.

10/10

BrenaMarie

OmG Yay! He's Back! I'm sooooo happy that everything worked itself out! Very, Very cool. Now to catch the bad guy! Thanks for the update. Much Love ~ Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

Thanks, Brena!  It's nice when everything goes well, even if you're expecting it not to.  Hopefully, their luck can continue.

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BrenaMarie

Hey There! So, Obviously I've seriously fallen behing on my reading/reviewing... I'm so sorry! This updade was awesome, and so sad at the same time! I feel so awful for the two of them! I actually had my hopes up that the Legillemency idea would work, oh well. This story still rocks! I'm off to read the latest update. Much Love ~Brena

Response from debjunk (Author of Empty)

It's okay that you've fallen behind.  Real life can do that.  Thank you for reviewing no matter what!  Unfortunately, Legilimancy was a failure.  Poor guy, trapped and miserable. 

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