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The Unforgiven
livvy6398 Reviews | 6.68/10 (398 Ratings, 0 Likes, 42 Favorites )
Fourth Place Winner in the Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009. Life after Voldemort isn't as everyone thought it would be.
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I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for The Unforgiven
Excellent story!I've enjoyed reading it.Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it :)
Nice wrap up to the story. I think he has finally found peace.
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Yes, Severus can now rest in the peace of his family as a content man.Thanks :)
awww! is it over? IS THERE A SEQUEL!?will you writes more stories (or at least let meh knows when yer off the hook of being hidden? i wanna read everything else ya gots!)
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
When all is revealed, you'll be able to look me up on TPP, and my profile will direct you to other places.Thanks :)
wow! that was touching and erotic! thanks so much
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Next chapter shall be in queue soonThanks :)
Wonderful to read again and to have the faith and good message an added bonus. I'm pretty sure I've read this one before:)
Looks like Hermione and Severus will have a little explaining to do when Eugene gets home. Eugene had part of it right; sometimes hugs, understanding, compassion, and good food are enough to heal a hurt soul. Reading your fantastic story has been such a wonderful way to spend my morning! I'm very glad that I found this gem and can't wait to read the next chapter. Well done, Mystery Author! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Thank you! Now that things are wrapping up with Severus and Hermione, it's time to fix things with Harry.Thanks for reviewing!
I'm very happy that Severus and Hermione are going to be married and officially adopt Eugene. *doing cartwheels*And thank goodness he's not going back to that house. I hope they sell it! Great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Severus never owned that house. He made that house with his wandless magic. Remember, one boy said that he never remembered it being there before? Severus made it with his wandless magic, but was so weak, he couldn't do more. He made the outside old, like it had been there forever. They are done with that house for good.Thanks :)
omgosh! I don't think that I would have had Hermione's poise or patience dealing with the situation in front of the mirror. I probably would have blasted a hole through the wall. Fantastic chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Well, she was close... she just blew the hell out of the mirror.Thanks :)
With experiences like the ones he told Hermione about, it's no wonder that Severus avoided women all those years. I'm so very happy that Severus trusted Hermione enough to allow in. What a fantastic, lemon filled chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Thank you! I love to build up the angst and then bring out some nice lemonade!
No wonder the talk with Eugene was so stilted. Severus hasn't had a positive experience with a woman to impart to him. Looks like Hermione will be getting her wish soon as well. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
LOL! Next chapter is going to be good!Thanks :)
He said he loved her, then he kissed her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy! :D The sex ed talk was a bit bizarre, but knowing Severus hasn't been able to engage in a relationship for the last 20 or so years, I'm not that surprised either. Fantastic chapter!
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Yes, Snape and sex ed? That's a recipie for awkwardness.Oh, yes... he's in LOVE!Thanks :)
Well, that meeting didn't go very well at all. Too many hurdles to overcome at one time. Tomorrow is a new day. Harry's depression hasn't improved any at all. I was hoping that the news of Severus' survival would help him, but no such luck. His comments to Harry were inappropriate. They have a long way to go before any compassion or understanding will be possible. I wonder if Severus knew Eugene's birth parents? Great chapter. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Knowing that Harry knows so much about his memories and past is WAY too much for his private nature. He was a complete prat about it too...ah, well.Thanks :)
I'm glad that Severus wants to get his memories back. I hope that once they're back in his mind that the obsession with Lily will end. I'm also glad that he is opening up a bit and reaching out to Hermione. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Baby steps. It's going to take a lot of time and patience for everyone.Thanks :)
I'm not surprised at Severus striking out at Hermione. His comment about her appearance made it clear that HE was uncomfortable with his reaction to her being in shorts and disshelveled. If he's attracted to Hermione, then he is being disloyal to Lily. And he is attracted, isn't he??? Fantastic chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Oh, yes! It's all very confusing for Severus. A flesh and blood woman vs. a cold woman in a mirror? Yes, he is very angry with himself.Thanks :)
omgosh! Severus is going to need a lot of care. Hopefully, Hermione can get the memories back from Harry and get things straightened out. At least we know why Severus ended up at Grasmere, and why he is still stuck on Lily.Poor Eugene, having to go back to his aunt and uncle must have been awful for him. I hope that Hermione will be able to send for him soon. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Oh, yes. This is a huge undertaking for Hermione and a real step of faith for Severus. But don't worry, Eugene will be back.Thanks :)
I agree that Hermione can't fix Ron or Harry problems, nor should she be expected to. Ginny's rant is borne out of frustration, nothing more.Eugene's guardian is a piece of work. What a horrible woman. Now that Hermione has found out that 'Mr. Black' is Severus, hopefully things will change for Harry and Eugene. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
True, Ginny just needs to vent. Eugene needs to get away form his home life. Hermione will be good to him.Thanks :)
Eugene the Matchmaker, kind of has a nice ring to it. He might be pretty good at it if Mr. Black doesn't hex him into next week. Hermione is really falling hard for the little guy. I hope she can make a difference in his life. They all deserve some happiness. Great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Thanks! Yes, Eugene has quite a gift. Hermione is just crazy about Eugene. She'd do anything for him.Thanks :)
I think it's sweet that Eugene thinks that Hermione's hugs can cure 'Mr. Black' of his ailments. The kid has seen enough of the ugly side of humanity, maybe Hermione can help him see the beauty. Mr. Black's use of the word know-it-alls is intriguing. Hmmm... Great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Yes, he is a lot like Harry. Not much love, but still has hope. Hermione will be good for him. Yes... Mr. Black does have a thing about calling little, nosy children know-it-alls!Thanks :)
Hermione must have been devastated by her parents reaction to her. 'Thanks for saving our lives, but we didn't like the way you went about it, so piss off.' What a pair of idiots. Heartbreaking!At least she's free from Ron now. No more savagery in the bedroom. What a pig! Great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
I could see how Hermione's parents would be afraid about her abilities, but for some people, they can't handle it and get paranoid. As if Hermione would use her magic to hurt them! I think that was what hurt her the most-that they thought she would do evil things after fighting to save her world from evil. She's got a lot to heal from. And yes, Ron needed to be out of the picture.Thanks :)
After a month, Hermione finally stopped bleeding - A MONTH!!! I would have hexed his testicles off. My god, what an ass. Ron is just plain thick. She needs to trade up.Harry is suffering horribly. It's sad seeing him almost raving over the loss of Severus. Great chapter! :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
It's a pity some really book-smart girls don't know when they are getting the short end of the stick in the bedroom. She loves Ron. She's put up with a lot of crap for him.Poor Harry... he has a very unhealthy sense of responsibility. I think it comes from his having to save the wizarding world. But it shows how good he is. Snape was looking out for him and he loved his mum. Harry's not the kind of guy to not repay a kindness.Thanks :)
Fantastic beginning. Severus' body missing, Harry trying to curse Lucius and the Weasley's loss - that's one hell of a chapter. :D
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Glad I got you into it at the get-go!Thanks :)
It's is fun to see Severus so overcome with emotion, so thrilled to know that he, the greasy git of the dungeons, has the love this beautiful witch, and so "smugly" proud that he is going to be a father. Hermione's love for him and acceptance of him has helped him to heal.I wonder how Eugene will react when they tell him that Hermione is going to have Severus' child. I'm thinking he will be thrilled.Very nice chapter!Beth
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
Yes, he will be thrilled. It's what they all wanted: love, family, acceptance, forgiveness. Everyone is finally getting the things they deserve.Now onto Harry...Thanks :)
Hi there. I am still enjoying your story very much. I don't mean to boast but I actually saw Red Bank Road the other week. We were staying at our caravan in Coniston for the week and paid Grasmere a visit. The road is directly across from one of the main car parks in the village. Didn't spot the cottage though. As usual it was absolutely deluging down and we got drenched. Hopefully Sev has now ditched Mrs Potter (nee Evans) for good and will get on with his life with Hermione. Well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
The cottage is there. It is an actual place. It's a good stretch of the legs from Garden Cottage to Red Bank Road, though. That was nice you were there whilst reading this fic! Yes, Severus is now convinced Hermione will love him and has loved him more than Lily ever did. Thanks :)
After everything, he has the right to be smug.
Response from livvy6 (Author of The Unforgiven)
LOL! That's a good point.Thanks :)