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A Murder of Crows
HogwartsClassof911,052 Reviews | 7.3/10 (1,052 Ratings, 0 Likes, 798 Favorites )
Adult Hermione wants to forget the mistakes of her past. Snape
knows all about secrets and lies. Forced to work together, their dislike for
one another turns into reluctant desire. Will they learn to trust each other in
time to stop the insidious plot bent on changing the future of the wizarding
world forever?
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"A Murder of Crows" was my first foray into fan-fiction, and I treasure the lessons I've learned while posting it.
Reviews for A Murder of Crows
naughty naughty! and more secrets. tsk tsk. and tenderness from snape. and love! poor hermione - how terribly distressing, to have come to such a realization and with such awkward timing in relation to all the secrets and trust issues. the edge of my seat is getting uncomfortable - i hope we start getting answers to some of these questions soon!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm sorry the edge of your seat is uncomfortable—it's been my goal to keep you there throughout this story. :-)You're right about the timing of that article. Not only are the contents quite disconcerting, but to find Snape hiding it had to have been ominous. We'll see if she's able to dismiss it, or if it will niggle at her.Thanks so much for the review and stars, Betty LeFish. :-) Next chapter has been posted ...
She's going to be all pruney. Hot sex in the Potions store cupboard. With students nearby! Oh, my goodness, Hogs, you are wicked! But I still adore you! :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Ehhh ... Only you would take away pruney skin from that entire chapter. :-)*blushes* Oh, dang ... I suppose my schoolgirl fantasy bit is out in the open now. Tee hee. Thanks for loving me even when I'm wicked!! And thanks for the awesome review!
Another excellent chapter! thanks for sharing this. glad to see they are not actng like children, but getting on with the living and learning.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
So glad you liked it! Funny how people can often regress to childhood—tantrums and accusations—while in a relationship. Perhaps they're over the worst of that now and can act like mature adults. Or not. :-)Thanks so much for the review and stars,
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
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Oh my goodness....I erm...now have a whole new Snape fantasy to play in my head....thank you so very much for that!!! It willbe great on the nights when my finacee is being a grump! lol great chapter!!!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
LOL - so glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks for the review and nice rating. The next chapter has been posted!
This chapter was breathtaking. Hermione's terror at Draco's invitation was palpable. Oh, mercy, the last bit was gorgeous.I'm looking forward to the rest - whenever it happens to come along. :D
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Awww ... thank you SO much, hon'!! You should know better than to feed my ego with words like "breathtaking" and "gorgeous." LOLAnd OMG, the next chapter is in the queue - can you believe it?! I hope the shock doesn't hurt anyone ...PajamaPants's response: *dies of shock*
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Damn it, I knew that would happen.
The opening lines of this chapter read like poetry: "With the arrival of February, a veil of boredom covered Hogwarts, and the grey weeks passed in a fog of cold monotony. Each day seemed endless; morning seeped into afternoon, and evening lingered over its slow death before reluctantly bleeding into night."
I wonder what "previous engagement" Severus has this night? Could he be meeting with his contact at the Ministry? When Hermione had asked if he'd heard anything from his contact, he had simply told her, "No." But he did not say that he was not meeting with him tonight. Hummmm...
I could not believe my ears when Draco invited Severus and Hermione to Malfoy Manor... Lucius is a very manipulative arse, and I think he knew with certainty that they would not accept the invitation. He only wanted to remind Hermione that he had not "forgotten" about her.
I could have kissed Severus when he spoke up and told Draco that they had other plans for that evening. Well, I would kiss Severus for no reason at all. Wouldn't we all?
Draco's reply to Severus' declining the invitation led me to wonder if he knows that his father is up to something unsavory: “I rather assumed you’d find better ways to occupy your time,” he said with a smirk. “I’ll relay your regrets, however false they may be.”
I'd give a pretty penny to know what Severus was talking about with Draco before he left. Could he have possibly been warning the son about the disturbing actions of his father? Or was he trying to find out whether or not Draco could have any involvement with Arglist?
I was delighted when Severus reassured Hermione that just because he did not outwardly react to Lucius' provocations didn't mean he didn't care or take them seriously: “Our reactions to threats may differ, but let me assure you, I take it quite personally when something of mine is being threatened.” His gaze travelled over her face, his expression almost desperate.This was very interesting chapter. It answered some questions and brought new questions to mind. Well done!Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Ooh - I see this chapter raised some new questions for you. You didn't think the mystery was over simply because we know the truth about Hermione's past now, did you?! :-)Thanks very much for the lovely review and stars. This chapter was a bit of a bridge ... I wanted to show that they are still working to rebuild their ruined trust, and there will continue to be disagreements. But it's important to see they can argue and achieve resolution without jeopardizing the overall relationship.I'm halfway through editing the next chapter and hope to have it submitted soon. Thanks again, Beth!!
YEAH!!! updated!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
LOL! Sorry to have kept you waiting! I'm halfway through editing the next chapter and hope to have it posted soon.Thanks for the shiny stars!!
YAY! for an update!Your true fans will never leave you love! I can't wait to see where the story goes. Great chapter!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much, love, I'm glad I can count on you!!I'm nearly halfway through editing the next chapter and hope to have it posted soon. Thanks so much for the shiny stars!!
I just stumbled across your fic the other day and I have to say I'm completely hooked! I love your style, love the characters and I love the plot. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Wow - thank you so much!! I'm glad to hear you're pleased with the story thus far! I'm polishing up the next chapter and hope to have it posted soon. Thanks again for the lovely review!!!
though I am late in catching up with this story, all I can say is WOW! you write very well and have held me captivated and now yearning to see what lies in the next few chapters (of many I hope!) to come. I have enjoyed reading these and felt the happy times, as well as the difficult coupled with the guilt and the misguided assumptions of our dark haired tall wizard - sometimes, it would be great if a hand would slap them (men) at the back of the head and say 'open your eyes you fool!', but alas, this is not the case in reality nor here where it lends to the excitment and lead up to the somewhat apology. However, for Severus to react the way portrayed infers some emotional connection between himself and Hermione, even if he does not fully comprehend it himself ...as yet. Very nicely conveyed and done I must say, simple gesture of the hand and few words - always the best ! Enough to bring a few tears to my eyes... ! Though, at times Hermione's actions, or lack thereof, can be equally frustrating, but nevertheless understandable given the circumstances. before I digress fully - please keep writing and PLEASE do not leave so long in posting the next chapter. I will keep a eye or two out and await with anticipation on the edge of my 'real' life..... I really enjoyed Little Beloved's works, so with her on board as a beta, and the others, I will keep expecting greatness from you !!! Redz
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much - I'm glad you took the plunge and decided to read my story! It's actually complete in 33 chapters, so we're more than halfway through. :-)I think you're the first who's pointed out that the vehemence of Severus's reaction implies some sort of emotional connection. You make an excellent point - if he cared nothing for her, surely he'd just walk away. What's the old expression? "We only hurt the ones we love" or something like that? Hmm...Thanks again for the review and stars. I'm committed to posting updates every couple of weeks now ... As I mentioned earlier, the story is complete. It's just very rough. I like to spend a couple weeks cleaning up each chapter before submitting. I'm halfway through editing the next (longer) chapter, though, and hope to post it soon.
I loved how you made Draco so perceptive. There is a lot of tension in this chapter which made it interesting.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm quite fond of this Draco, too. It's such an incongruous notion to imagine him as Divination teacher. And to picture him with Luna is just too much fun. :-)Thanks so much for the review and stars!!
When will you be updating? I love this story and have been following it religiously. You are such a good writer, I love how you draw the reader in. Pls update soon!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Oh! Thank you so, so much for this comment!! My deepest apologies for the delay in updating ... that blasted nuisance known as "real life" has thrown a few monkey wrenches in my path (as well as various other handtools) of late. The next chapter has been written (actually, the entire story is finished, but each chapter requires quite a bit of "clean up" prior to posting). I've gone through about 75% of the next chapter, so I should be able to send it for beta this weekend and (hopefully) post again next week?Again, thank you so much for pinging me. It's so very nice to know you've been enjoying the story thus far.
Amazing chapter as always of course:))But the most surprising part to me was when you mentioned Germany,Stuttgart,Böblingen,because I´ve been there:)Cant wait for the next one!!!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Wow - what a coincidence!! I hope you avoided Arglist Industries while you were there ...:DThank you so much for the review; I'm pleased you enjoyed this chapter. My apologies for the delay in updating. I hope to have the next chapter up soon!
I'm super impressed. Hermione's characterization stems naturally from her younger character in the books, as does Snape's. The situations are funny and the characters' reactions believable; well done, you.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so very much!Please forgive my delay in replying to this review. Real life pulled me away from writing for awhile, but I'm back now and eager to continue posting this story.I'm so glad you've enjoyed it this far. The next chapter is in the queue...
Nice chapter, I like the way Severus spoke to Hermione. It appears he has learned a few things as well, and perhaps together they can stop Lucius's plans.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I certainly hope so ... She's going to need all the help she can get, going against the vast resources of the Malfoy fortune.Thanks so much for the review and stars. Please forgive my delay in responding - I appreciated it all the same. And the next chapter is in the queue now.
I have just read the entire thing ... from the first chapter to this one ... and I'm just floored at the power of the emotion in this entire story. You've had me on a rollercoaster ride, from the exhilirating highs to the lowest of depths where I just wanted to curl up in a ball and retreat from the world. Hermione did better than I would have, I have to admit. Amazing. Amazing writing. Amazing story. You have my complete adoration.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Ah, crap. How am I supposed to post, "My hand hurts... The end." after a lovely review like this?!Thank you so much for reading my story. You would think I'd have words to properly express my gratitude, seeing how I call myself a writer and all. But I simply cannot articulate how much reading your review meant to me. You have bolstered my confidence and inspired me more than you'll ever know. (Even if you've simultaneously robbed me of my brilliant, magical ending.);D
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
But it's a magical ending. You can't rob someone of a magical ending. LOLOL
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Hahaha - you got me! Do you suppose if I tell Litc my commas are magical commas, she'll allow more of them?!
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Perhaps. Or maybe, you could leave them all out and say they magically disappeared.
Well, it's hard to know how Severus really feels now, if Hemrione really is his substitute for Lily or if he was being truthful when he said she wasn't. It's hard to know if he's forgiven her for her curiosity also. I think you painted him as still struggling with his own thoughts in all regards, and although that last paragraph said '.. his mind had been decided' it seems like it really isn't. Or at least not totally and completely. We'll see...
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
This POV really sucks, doesn't it?! It makes it so hard to figure out what's really going on his head ... Especially since the evil author only provides Hermione's perceptions of his reactions and expressions. All said, though, I think your assessment of him as 'still struggling' is quite accurate. We cannot be certain, of course, exactly what elements he's struggling with, but suffice it to say he's conflicted.Thanks so much for investing your time in reading this story. My apologies again for the delay in posting an update, but they should begin to roll in regularly once more. The next chapter is in the queue!
I've come to this story rather late and was able to read everything till the last chapter, so this chapter is my first real "instalment". I love how you manage to keep all characters very much in canon while developing them in truly believable directions. Your plot idea of putting Snape "in stasis" largely eliminates the power and age divide that mars so much of SS/HG relationship and power dynamics and never lets them get out of a kind of father/daughter relationship which is kinda icky. With you they are truly equally matched.I also love how you balance Snape's current relationship against his relationship with Lily. I had never thought how the Harry/Hermione friendship must have reminded Snape so much of his old schooldays when Lily hung out with the Marauders. But of course Lily proved unforgiving and chose Potter, Hermione has forgiven a lot (and I am afraid I am still reading the legilimency session as mental rape which is pretty unforgivable...) and she never chose Potter. So I'm really hoping Snape wakes up and realizes (and embraces!) the differences!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
My apologies for the delay in responding to this review! Real life pulled me away from writing for awhile, but I'm back now and eager to continue posting this story.I'm so pleased you've decided to read the story ... I realize the current set of chapters are pretty tough to get through. It's been pointed out that such angst is much harder on the reader than the writer, since the writer knows everything will work out in the end. So I appreciate your forbearance in slogging through all the angsty bits!!Thanks again for the review ... The next chapter has been uploaded to the queue!
That was so heart-wrenching. I feel like crying myself for these two people. Again I could totally be wrong, be you seemed to lace a subtle regret into Severus' expressions and actions at the end of their fight, as if he too couldn't quite belive things were unraveling between himself and Hermione. Just as it did Hermione, it sliced through my heart when he told her she'd never be Lily. So cold. I think, based on how you've painted him, that Severus has some regret about saying that to Hermione but I'm not positive on that. He does seem pretty admament in his stance that he shall only love Lily and never anyone else. I have to wonder if that is just out of habit at this point or if those feelings are still genuine. I think it may be a combination of both, but I also think loving someone else will chip away at those old feelings rather quickly and make them nothing more than a memory.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Wow, what an amazing review! You raise many excellent points. I like to think the remorse she saw on Snape's face after their fight was genuine. I also like to think that once again his words might be interpreted in a number of ways (specifically, his comments about Lily). I could be wrong, though ... Only time will tell. ;-)Interesting to think about just how much of his feelings for Lily are habit at this point. After all, he's been in and out of reality for the past 14+ years, so the war (and his debt to Lily) just ended a few months ago in his mind. I think it will take him quite a bit of time to assimilate into his new reality, although he makes it easy to forget at times. (And at other times, not so much!)Thanks for the provocative review and the shiny stars. I appreciate them both!!
I understand htat Severus may have overheard in a way that sounded very bad, but at the same time, I can't believe that he would so easily dismiss Hermione and assume that she wanted something to do with Lucius. I mean, Snape's not dense. He knows how Lucius tormented and torutred her and her friends. I guess Severus really doesn't ever intend to give Hermione his heart because he sure was easily able to leave her behind. :(
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I agree, he reacted poorly. One might also say he reacted like a man with limited self-confidence and numerous doubts. Or like a man who has spent the past 14-15 years in a state of semi-consciousness, who really has *no* idea what the heck his lover might have been up to during that time.Perhaps all of the above??
Did I just read that wrong or did it seem like Snape was almost talking to someone else when they came together that first time? His shout of "now" - and Hermione's assessment that his voice sounded 'unfamiliar' - seemed to be either someone else saying it to him, or... I don't know what, but a little off somehow. Also his cry of "damn it" for no explicable reason and then his assessment long afterwards of how she trembled at his touch seemed almost erie rather than as a sentiment. For a second I wondered if he was really someone else. Then I wondered if he somehow had a split personality. And now... after thinking that... I hope it isn't something to do with Voldemort and a piece of him moving from Nagini to Snape during the attack. Maybe my mind wanders too much. LOL The phrases jsut somehow seemed out of place to me during a session of love making. I guess I'll see in the chapters to come.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Sorry for any ambiguity! I really wasn't trying to mislead the readers (at least not in this chapter). :OI think the "now" comment was simply a warning, because he was getting dangerously close—just from watching her—and had to have more right then and there. And the shout of "damn it" was partially because he feared he was being too rough and partially because he realized the coupling would be over quickly too soon. (In fairness to Snape, though, It had been more than 14 years since he'd been intimate with a woman... How long did he really imagine he could last?!)As far as trembling at his touch... I think he has some insecurities, and he questions why she'd be attracted to him. Perhaps seeing her respond to him the way she does surprises him.Thank you so much for leaving reviews for all of the chapters you've read. I really appreciat the individual feedback!!
I"m glad they're working it out, but it makes me sad that Snape is so adament - or at least in Hermione's mind he is - that he can not offer her love. By his words though, I didn't get exactly what Hermione did. It seemed to me that he was saying he didn't love her right now. However, that could just be my wishful thinking. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I think you're very observant to have noticed that subtle little distinction - not many people did! And I also think Snape is very careful about choosing his words; there are often numerous ways for his statements to be interpreted. This may indeed turn out to be one of those cases. :-)Thanks so much for the reviews and stars!
I loved it. The change in their relationship was subtle and obvious all at once. The intense passion, both scary and enticing, shown in Snape's actions, and the fact that Hermione was thinking of him all day - for several days really - jsut showed that he had gotten under her skin regardless of what had transpired between them and she couldn't let it go even by force of will.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm glad you liked it! He's an interesting contrast of restraint and passion, and I really enjoy it when the restraint slips a bit. :-)
I think Snape may be realizing that his actions may have cost him something much more precious than a bit of hurt pride. I hope they can remedy this situation.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Yes, exactly! The tension between the two was bound to come to a head eventually, but I think he's regretting his methods of dealing with such a great deal.Thanks so much for the review!
Wow. That was cold. I didn't really expect them to even get that far being that Snape was in the middle of teaching a class, but to get her all worked up and then dismiss her so easily... *shakes head* What is that man thinking.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Well, I can't say for certain, but I'd imagine he's thinking about a cold shower at this point. :-)Serioulsy, though, I agree: that was pretty friggin' cold. But in a karmic way, I do believe he'll soon be regretting his actions far more than Hermione.