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A Murder of Crows

1: One For Sorrow

2: Two for Joy

3: Three for a Girl

4: Four for a Boy

5: Five for Silver

6: Six for Gold

7: Seven for a Secret

8: Never to be Told

9: Eight for a Wish

10: Nine for a Kiss

11: Ten for a Time...

12: ... of Joyful Bliss

13: Eleven for a Party

14: Twelve for a Lie

15: Thirteen for the Truth

16: Hidden in a Sigh

17: Fourteen For a Question

18: Fifteen for the Past

19: Sixteen for Discovery

20: Of Passions Unsurpassed

21: Seventeen for Fear

22: Eighteen for Surprises

23: Nineteen for the Family ...

24: ... For Spirits and for Guises

25: Twenty for a Gift

26: Cloaked in Shadows Black

27: Twenty-one for Letting Go

28: And Never Looking Back

29: Twenty-two for Denial

30: Twenty-three for Pain

31: Twenty-four for Dying

32: Then Finding Peace Again

33: Epilogue

A Murder of Crows

HogwartsClassof91

1,052 Reviews   |   1,052 Ratings, 0 Likes, 798 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance General Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 148,962 Words 33 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Original Character

Adult Hermione wants to forget the mistakes of her past. Snape
knows all about secrets and lies. Forced to work together, their dislike for
one another turns into reluctant desire. Will they learn to trust each other in
time to stop the insidious plot bent on changing the future of the wizarding
world forever?

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Chapters (33)

Chapter 1: One For Sorrow

Chapter 2: Two for Joy

Chapter 3: Three for a Girl

Chapter 4: Four for a Boy

Chapter 5: Five for Silver

Chapter 6: Six for Gold

Chapter 7: Seven for a Secret

Chapter 8: Never to be Told

Chapter 9: Eight for a Wish

Chapter 10: Nine for a Kiss

Chapter 11: Ten for a Time...

Chapter 12: ... of Joyful Bliss

Chapter 13: Eleven for a Party

Chapter 14: Twelve for a Lie

Chapter 15: Thirteen for the Truth

Chapter 16: Hidden in a Sigh

Chapter 17: Fourteen For a Question

Chapter 18: Fifteen for the Past

Chapter 19: Sixteen for Discovery

Chapter 20: Of Passions Unsurpassed

Chapter 21: Seventeen for Fear

Chapter 22: Eighteen for Surprises

Chapter 23: Nineteen for the Family ...

Chapter 24: ... For Spirits and for Guises

Chapter 25: Twenty for a Gift

Chapter 26: Cloaked in Shadows Black

Chapter 27: Twenty-one for Letting Go

Chapter 28: And Never Looking Back

Chapter 29: Twenty-two for Denial

Chapter 30: Twenty-three for Pain

Chapter 31: Twenty-four for Dying

Chapter 32: Then Finding Peace Again

Chapter 33: Epilogue


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"A Murder of Crows" was my first foray into fan-fiction, and I treasure the lessons I've learned while posting it.

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0/10

Zigflorian

Yay, that was very good!

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thanks so much - I'm pleased you enjoyed it!

10/10

irishredlass

Funny, I had just been wondering about this story so glad to see an update.  I can understand Hermione's feelings about Severus' reactions, but I think had Lucius seen his reaction he, himself, may have been concerned for his own safety.  One must remember still waters run deep and the deeper the valley the more dangerous it is to reach the bottom.  Narcisus might benifit fromLucius taking out a life insurance policy.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thanks so much for the lovely review and stars!'Still waters run deep' ... That's just an overall fabulous way to describe Severus in any situation, isn't it?!  Yes, indeed.

10/10

keske

awws

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

*grins*Thanks very much for the pretty, shiny stars!

10/10

Nessa

An update!Loved the ending conversation bewtween Hermione and Severus. Glad they have sorted their differences out. Look forward to more.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

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Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thank you so much for the lovely review and stars!  So glad you liked the conversation and the gradual path of reconciliation.  Thanks for not giving up on the story, despite my hiatus!

10/10

gabi1791

Very nice chapter indeed!! I really like your new and improved Draco and I liked their "fight"...Great work!gab

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thank you so much - I'm so pleased you liked it!  And thanks for not giving up on the story, despite my hiatus.  :-)

10/10

pookah

I'm glad they are talking.  That Legilimency session did some good, I suppose.  Now they are more honest and open with each other.  It didn't upset me as much as it has some of your readers.  She offered, she was the one who wanted to talk now, and she offered.  Granted, he took her up on it immediately, but she did offer it.- and push for a discussion right then.Really this is such a good story.  Looking forward to more.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thanks so much,

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

!!I think they both made some horrible choices, but you're right - in the end, some good came out of it.  Perhaps everything happens for a reason.I'm so glad you're enjoying it; I posted the next chapter "Hidden In a Sigh" a few days ago and hope to get the following one up soon, as well.  Thanks so much for the review and stars!

10/10

pookah

Severus's Lily comment can be interpreted more than one way.  An interesting scene.  And yes, a lot of people in love, or in lust, or just being stupid, DO act this badly.  Well done!  Sadly, it reminds me of some folks I know.  I am happy to see there is another chapter yet to read.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

I think Severus often makes comments that can be interpreted more than one way ... He chooses his words carefully at times.Thank you very much for your praise.  I know it can be frustrating to read characters we like doing something we don't like.  But you make an excellent point - people make bad choices when their emotions are involved.Thanks again for the nice review!

10/10

pookah

catching up on this Splendid Tale.  I love your choice of the name Arglist.  Thank you for explaining that!  I'm glad we got some more information about Hermione's old job (and her mentor, too.)  he's probably being coerced into working there.  I am looking forward to more of this! 

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Honestly, I'd been DYING to explain the name Arglist from the first time it was mentioned.  This chapter was quite a relief for me.  So glad you enjoyed some more details from her past ... Thanks for the lovely review and stars!

0/10

blankstare

Woo, an update!!!!/cheerI rarely leave comments, but the story has been lovely thusfar.  Keep up the great work :D

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thank you so much - I'm pleased you're enjoying it!  I appreciate the review!

10/10

countrymouse

My favorite sentences in this chapter are the second and the last.  The second, I chuckled over because it is soooo true: "Each day seemed endless; morning seeped into afternoon, and evening lingered over its slow death before reluctantly bleeding into night."---dear old "Janu-ugly" and "Febru-weary"!And the last, because it is so beautiful:  "She was, quite simply, his."Sighs, indeed!Greedily awaiting more.....

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

So glad you liked it!  I think the dreary days of winter have been getting to me ... It's beginning to feel like evening starts at lunchtime.  :-)The next chapter has been written, and I'm in the process of editing it.  And it's more than twice as long as this one!Thanks so much for the lovely review and stars!!

10/10

kittylefish

right - like quitting this story is an option!  this chapter was like a teaser, an appetizer, a tasty little morsel that just whetted my appetite for the next, hopefully much more substantial, course.  i hope you will serve it before i expire from starvation!  (okay, so i forgot to eat dinner tonight and it's showing.)  i particularly loved your imagery in the first couple of paragraphs.  :)

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Funny you should mention food, because there happens to be a lemon or two in the next chapter!  :-)Thank you, as always, for the lovely review and stars.  This is perhaps the shortest chapter I've posted to this story ... What a dreadful thing to do after such a long absence.  Or perhaps it's my way of easing you back into the story ...I'm so pleased you enjoyed the imagery.  I admit it got a bit heavy-handed there, but I suppose these dreary winter days have been getting to me!  Thanks again, my friend!!

0/10

snapefan2007

great chapter, i can't wait to read the next one!  I hope it comes soon!

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

I hope so, too!  I'm working on it right now, and it's a long one - about twice the size of this chapter.Thanks so much for the review!!

10/10

faeriebell

I'm so very happy to see this updated! Severus is off doing things behind the scenes again, the man just can't live without subfurtage can he? I have to admit my heart did a little flip flop when he possesively called Hermione his. I, like her, do not often find possesiveness an endearing quality, but I make exception for Severus. :)

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Severus does possessive well.  I know I shouldn't like it, but I simply cannot resist him that way.  :-)Thank you so much for the lovely review and stars.  I'm in the process of editing the next (much longer) chapter and hope to post it soon!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Ooh, an intriguing little chapter! Hmm, we need some vengeance against that blonde rat-bastard... soon...

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Glad you found it intriguing!The bastard is toying with them, methinks.  No doubt he's the kind who enjoys a subtle battle.Thanks so much for the review!

10/10

sareliz

Oh.  Lovely.  Lovely, lovely.  I was so worried after where we'd left the characters in the previous chapter.  I will admit: I was fretful.  Thank you for resolving that - or at least, taking them toward resolution.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

it's a slow and difficult process, undoubtedly.  But they've had some time to work on it.  I think the last chapter takes place in January, and this one ends in March, so ... time heals all wounds, they say.Thank you very much for the lovely review and stars!

10/10

Melenka

My only problem with this chapter is that it is entirely too short. :)  This feels like a chess match - the pieces move but nothing topples.  At least not yet.  I can't wait to see what happens next.Also, <i>something of mine</i>  is full of win. Thank goodness they've gotten back to the kissing place!

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

LOL - It's about half the size of my usual chapters.  I'm easing my way back into this story ...  :-)Glad you liked possessive!Snape.  I find him incredibly appealing, even though I know I shouldn't.Yay for the kissing place.  And just in time, too.  The next chapter has a certainy lemony smell to it ...

10/10

countrymouse

Please update soon!  I so miss this story!

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Thank you so much!  I actually just submitted the next chapter to the queue!  (I hope you were sitting down when you read that ... I know some folks may fall over from the shock of it.)Thanks again for pinging me ... I appreciate it!

10/10

Saille

Wow, what a wonderful  journey these characters took me on!  Thank you for writing this and sharing it here.

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Please forgive my delay in responding to this review; I don't know how I missed it. Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm delighted you enjoyed the journey (what a nice way to say it, btw!). And thank you for the lovely stars!

10/10

countrymouse

Please tell me that you're returning to this soon!  I'm DYING for an update of this story!!!

Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)

Yes!  I'm so sorry to leave you hanging.  I just bought a new house (well, a used house ... but new to me!).  Just closed yesterday, and I've been swept away in title company craziness.  So sorry!!  I solemnly swear to update soon, though!  Thanks so much for pinging me ... it's nice to know you were thinking of it!

10/10

sunny33

Love the way the magie counting rhyme came back at the end. Lovely story Puffbuddy!:)

10/10

sunny33

Sweet ending. :)

10/10

sunny33

Clever. Another Unbreakable Vow explains all the secrecy and machinations behind the scenes. :)

10/10

sunny33

Foolish girl, she should have trusted him.  Now, he can't protect her without blowing his cover. :0

10/10

sunny33

Ye Gods, what is he up to now? :)

10/10

sunny33

The fact that he fought loving her so long makes it all the more precious. :)

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