One For Sorrow
Chapter 1 of 33
HogwartsClassof91Adult Hermione wants to forget the mistakes of her past. Snape
knows all about secrets and lies. Forced to work together, their dislike for
one another turns into reluctant desire. Will they learn to trust each other in
time to stop the insidious plot bent on changing the future of the wizarding
world forever?
Chapter 1: One For Sorrow
Although every day at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry was magical, the first day of the new school year was by far the most enchanting. Anticipation crackled the air. Throughout the grey stone halls of the old castle, the sounds of fevered activity rang forth as house-elves and staff prepared for the onslaught of students. The long slumber of summer had finally ended, and the building shimmered as if waiting for the living and learning that would soon take place inside its ancient walls.
Without a doubt, today was Hermione Granger's favourite day of the year. She had to stop herself from skipping up the stairs as she made her way into the Great Hall. Along the way she admired the suits of armour lining the walls...just last week they'd been dull and dusty, slouching idly against their swords and shields. But today they stood to attention, gleaming and proud, the sun from the open windows glaring off their shining breastplates and nearly blinding Hermione as she walked past.
Entering the Great Hall at last, she watched in silence as the Headmistress, Minerva McGonagall, flicked her wand at the ceiling in a series of complex motions. When she had finished, the massive enclosure perfectly reflected the sky outside...a brilliantly clear blue without a single cloud in sight. Hermione had always loved the effect of the ceiling, but she had never before witnessed the enchantments being performed. The smile on her face fled when she lifted her gaze and saw an enormous Thestral fly overhead.
One for sorrow, she thought, remembering the old rhyme Muggle children sang to count magpies. She wondered if there existed an equivalent in the wizarding world for counting Thestrals but dismissed the thought at once. Children shouldn't be able to see Thestrals. The exceptions, of course, were all the children present at the Battle of Hogwarts more than fourteen years ago. There were a great many who could see Thestrals after that day. Too many.
"Ah, there you are, Hermione." McGonagall's crisp voice broke her reverie.
"Yes, you wanted to see me?" she asked. For reasons beyond her comprehension, she was always pleased by how little Minerva McGonagall had changed since the first time she'd seen her. As a child, the stern face and uncompromising disposition had nearly terrified her, but the consistency of her demeanour proved quite comforting now.
"Indeed, Professor. I summoned you for a very special reason," replied the headmistress. A small smile lifted the corners of her mouth. "You have been chosen to bring the firstyears into the Hall for the Sorting tonight," she said, and the rare smile spread to the rest of her face.
Hermione gasped. "But this is only my fourth year of teaching!" It was a privilege to be trusted with such an important task, and the thought of being the first to welcome all those fresh, new faces to the school thrilled her.
"You have proven yourself admirably in the past three years. I consulted the senior staff and Heads of House, and nearly everyone agreed the honour should belong to the Potions professor this year."
"Thank you so much, Headmistress...I look forward to it," she said.
She hoped McGonagall hadn't noticed the way she had started when referred to as the Potions professor...it would hardly be prudent to show how uncomfortable she was with the designation despite the three years she'd worn it. With a new lightness to her step, she made her way to her Potions classroom in the dungeons. There was still a great deal of work to be done prior to the start of term tomorrow, and as she set herself about her tasks, she allowed her mind to recount the circuitous journey that had brought her back to Hogwarts.
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In the weeks and months following the Battle of Hogwarts, life had slowly returned to some semblance of normality. The remaining Death Eaters had either fled the country or been sent to a fully restored Azkaban. The long process of grieving had begun, and there had followed a blur of funerals and memorials, of visiting families and offering condolences, of tears and nightmares.
Hermione had retrieved her parents from Australia and reversed the charms on their memories. They'd been shocked to learn what she had done, and the novelty of having a witch for a daughter had lost a considerable amount of its charm. It had taken only two tales of Voldemort's terror to convince them of the wisdom of their relocation, and she had spent the rest of the summer savouring their company, aware of how lucky she was to have them when so many had lost entire families.
McGonagall had been appointed headmistress of Hogwarts, and a directive had been issued for all students to repeat their existing year at the next term. It had been determined that the students' education during Snape's stint as headmaster was not up to Hogwart's usual standards, with Death Eaters roaming the halls, pummeling students, and hijacking classes with teachings in the Dark Arts. The decision had also helped those forced into hiding during the deplorable Muggle-born Registration Act of Dolores Umbridge and her supporters.
To say the decision had not been popular with the student body would have been a gross understatement. Hermione had been quite alone in her agreement with the edict, eager to finish her education properly.
Ron had spent the entirety of seventh-year grumbling. His constant dissertation on the unfairness of their return to school had soon pushed Hermione beyond her limits of tolerance. Although they had considered themselves a couple throughout seventh-year, they had spent most of it bickering. Without the intensity of their Horcrux search...and the constant fear of death awaiting them around each corner...their relationship had regressed to what it had been before: one of semi-tolerant friendship.
When Ron and Harry had begun Junior Auror Training, Hermione had travelled to Poland to simultaneously attend the Muggle university in Krakow and the magical Jagiellonian University hidden beneath it. As a caveat to her attendance at Hogwarts, she had promised her parents many years earlier that she would attend a Muggle university.
It had been an easy commitment to make when she'd been eleven, but the fulfilment of the promise had proved difficult. Knowing she would be woefully behind all the other non-magical students...a sensation she'd never been comfortable with...she had spent seventh-year cramming her head with Muggle knowledge. She had been glad for the tremendous workload. There had been no room in her mind for grief, and exhaustion had kept the nightmares at bay.
With the help of Professor Flitwick's Reddo charm, she had learnt an effective tool to comprehend and speak a foreign language. McGonagall herself had produced enchanted Muggle transcripts for Hermione's entrance into the Krakow University. The headmistress had even made special arrangements to secure the use of the sole Time-Turner owned by Jagiellonian.
"I support the decision to honour the commitment you made to your parents, Miss Granger," McGonagall had told her at the end of seventh-year. "But you cannot allow your magic to languish whilst you pursue your Muggle studies."
That Poland was not far from Bulgaria...the home of Viktor Krum...had not escaped Ron's notice and had contributed to his constant foul mood. And although she had remained uninterested in Viktor, the effort required to soothe Ron's ruffled feathers had soon outgrown her desire to remain committed to him. By the time they had finished school and had prepared to embark on their post-Hogwarts journeys, she had told him, "Perhaps some time apart will do us good."
"Yeah, maybe," he had said. "Let's just see how it goes."
The first several months had passed with the exchange of a few letters, but he hadn't seemed at all heartbroken over their separation. The realisation had provided her more relief than sadness, and the lack of emotion on both their parts had confirmed the death of the relationship, as lost as their childhood. Perhaps it had been yet another casualty of the Battle of Hogwarts.
She had remained friends with Ginny Weasley and had later learnt that Ron had left Junior Auror training after five months. In Ginny's words, "... he realised studying is a bit more work when you're not around to help!" He had moved to London and had helped George at Weasleys' Wizarding Wheezes. Ginny had said he was much happier there, and Hermione had deemed it a good solution for both brothers.
Harry had also left Junior Auror training early, though for very different reasons. In typical Harry fashion, a chance encounter had somehow led to his meeting the Athletic Director of the Wimbourne Wasps. The Wasps had had a decent Quidditch team that year, but they had been in dire need of a Seeker. One thing had led to another, and soon Harry had been playing Quidditch professionally and had been instrumental in England's subsequent win at the Quidditch World Cup. He had married Ginny on his twenty-first birthday, and the couple had had three children together.
Hermione had continued her magical coursework with a concentration in Charms and Transfiguration, but halfway through her university career she discovered that her studies at the Muggle university were impacting her magical thinking. She had become enamoured with the Muggle chemistry classes and had found herself surprisingly adept at many of her scientific studies. Even as a child, she had loved the preciseness of science, the endless quest for proof, and the free exchange of ideas and thoughts.
She had risen to the top of her science classes at the Muggle university when something strange had happened: the work she had performed in her Potions classes had begun to dramatically improve. No one had been more surprised by this than Hermione. She'd always been competent in Potions, but no one would have accused her of being particularly gifted. All that had changed as she had gained more knowledge about science on a molecular and sub-molecular level; suddenly she had been able to see the ingredients and processes of her potion-making in an entirely new light, and very good things had begun to happen.
The Potions master at Jagiellonian University, a large bear of man named Mikolaj Brukowski, had been famous for the invention of Bru-Bier, the Eastern European equivalent of butterbeer and a good deal stronger than anything served at the Three Broomsticks. Hermione's sudden improvement in his subject had seemed to impress the old wizard, and she'd soon become his personal protégé. By the end of her fourth year at university, Hermione and Brukowski had jointly published two papers in the prestigious Bibliotheque de Remede Europe & Worldwide (BREW): one on their discovery of an additional four uses for dragon's blood, and another on potion-brewing methodology that had rocked the wizarding world and had garnered them a large feature in the Sunday edition of the Daily Prophet.
By the end of her sixth and final year at university, the duo had again gained notoriety for the now-famous "Brukowski-Granger Principle": a complex theory combining various elements of magic and science, set to revolutionize the world of potion-making and medicine. Unfortunately, there had existed a great many 'old-school' wizards who had publically protested against anything that might change the established methods, especially when it had blatantly involved the incorporation of Muggle scientific theorem.
The Brukowski-Granger Principle had created a bit of an uproar for awhile, but the furore had eventually died down when most wizards and witches had been either unwilling or unable to devote themselves to learning the science required to put the Principal into practice. Still, Hermione had been quite proud of her work and everything she'd accomplished while at university. She even believed the controversy had been a good thing. Encouraging the wizarding world to enter into a debate on such things had been a step in the right direction.
Her success at Jagiellonian University had earned her several lucrative offers for employment after graduation, and finding herself in such demand had been a heady experience. It had been Mikolaj Brukowski who had ultimately helped her choose the direction in which to take her career. When she'd initially approached him for advice, he had encouraged her to give serious consideration to the position offered by the Ministry of Magic. ("You cannot deny the appeal of government benefits," he had told her.) But one week later he had pulled her aside to rescind his earlier direction.
"I hope you are not taking my advice to work for the Ministry of Magic seriously, Hermione," he had told her quietly. "You must realize I was playing a joke on you."
Hermione had been shocked: in the six years she'd known Mikolaj Brukowski she had never witnessed anything even slightly humorous about his countenance. He had never once teased her, and the thought that he'd choose her career path to start his foray into the land of practical jokes had been less than amusing.
"You ... what?" she had asked.
His dark face had flushed with embarrassment...another first. "Yes, it was just a joke. You must of course pursue the offer from Arglist Industries."
She had searched her memory and had recalled that Arglist was a private research facility in Eastern Europe with significant financial backing.
Brukowski had confirmed this by telling her, "They are well-established in Germany and Austria, and they have a large facility in England, which would suit you, no?"
She had nodded absently and had told him, "Okay, I'll think about it." But as she had turned to leave, Brukowski had grabbed her arm. She had been shocked: other than shaking her hand, he had never before touched her.
"No, Hermione! Do not just 'think about it'," he had whispered harshly, and his eyes had darted around the room. "I strongly advise you to accept their offer."
She had thought he had sounded desperate, and his fingers biting into her arm had not escaped her notice. She had nodded solemnly and had assured him she would take his advice seriously.
Then he had released her arm, distractedly patting her on the head while saying, "Good girl."
She had dismissed the encounter and had attributed her professor's odd behaviour to his ill attempt at humour.
If only I'd known, she thought now. Tension caused her shoulders to stiffen.
If only she hadn't dismissed Brukowski's strange behaviour so readily. Perhaps then she wouldn't have accepted the position at Arglist. Perhaps she wouldn't have been so blinded by the amazing facility, by the intoxicating enticement of running that cutting-edge lab all by herself. Perhaps then she wouldn't have ...
CRACK!
She jumped when the glass phial in her hand exploded into dozens of jagged pieces. Blood ran through her fingers and dripped onto the table. She shivered at the unexpected but appropriate correlation. Blood on her hands...
"Hermione!"
For the second time in the space of just a few seconds, she jumped when her name was shouted from the door. Neville Longbottom stared at her with a worried expression.
"Are you alright?" he asked, coming into the room and nodding at her bleeding hand. "Do you need some Dittany?"
"I've got some, Neville. Thanks." She pointed her wand at the storeroom while silently casting an Accio charm, and a small green bottle floated towards her. She checked the label, satisfied when she read, 'Tincture of Dittany MILD' written in her own precise handwriting. Another wave of her wand removed the remnants of broken phial and excess blood from her hand and bench. She was relieved to see the cut wasn't bad, and just one drop of the Dittany tincture instantly sealed the wound with the tiniest puff of green smoke wafting up from her palm.
Neville still watched her, his face still creased with worry.
"Just being careless, Neville," she told him. "I must be overly-excited about start-of-term tonight," she finished with what she hoped was a reassuring smile.
His round cheeks broke into a smile. "That's why I came to see you," he told her. "I just heard that you're in charge of firstyears tonight. Congratulations, Hermione! Well done!"
"Thanks, Neville!" She beamed a genuine smile at him now, the pride she'd felt from McGonagall's earlier announcement returning. "I was delighted...it's such an honour."
"Ah, you deserve it. You've done brilliantly here," he told her. "I mean, I've been here ten years, and I'm still not as comfortable as you are," he added with a laugh.
She tried to assure him that she was just as scared of meeting all the new students as he was.
He looked a tad doubtful, so she added, "As soon as you get into your greenhouses, you are completely in your element. You're a wonderful Herbology professor. I would have been thrilled to have you for a teacher, and you know how picky I am."
He blushed at her praise, but she hadn't said it simply to be kind. Neville truly was gifted in Herbology, and she'd observed his ever-present doubt and clumsiness melt away the moment he entered the massive greenhouses of Hogwarts.
She hadn't been at all surprised to find Neville at Hogwarts. After leaving school, he had spent a few years touring the Magical Gardens of Europe before returning to Hogwarts to start an apprenticeship with Pomona Sprout. When Pomona had finally decided to retire, Neville had become a full-fledged Professor of Herbology. His appointment had coincided with Hermione's acceptance of the Potions master post, so that they were both officially introduced as new professors just three years ago.
Three years, she marvelled. Had it really been three years since she'd left the horrors of Arglist? At times it seemed as if a lifetime had passed since she'd fled her beautiful lab in the middle of the night, running blindly with no destination, no plan, nothing but an overwhelming need to flee. But whether she had been escaping from Arglist...or herself...was a question that still haunted her.
With a shake of her head, she realised how glad she was to be here, poised to begin her fourth year as Potions professor. She'd even begun to allow herself to feel happy again, daring to hope she'd escaped from her period at Arglist with no lasting detriment.
"I hope I'll be back in time for the Sorting," Neville said. "I'm trying for a quick trip to St Mungo's before the Feast."
She frowned. "I thought you always went on Sundays."
"I do," he confirmed. "But I didn't get a chance to go yesterday with all the preparations for start-of-term." He looked decidedly uncomfortable for a moment and then added, "Not that they'd notice if I wasn't there."
She gazed at him and nodded, uncertain of whether or not he'd welcome her sympathy. He rarely mentioned his parents, and she knew it was unwise to push. She suspected he had taken it very hard when Molly Weasley had deprived him of the chance to avenge his parents by eliminating Bellatrix Lestrange.
"How are your parents, Neville?" she asked him quietly. "And how is ..."
"Snape?"
"Yes." She swallowed. "How is Professor Snape?"
He shrugged. "The same as always." As if wanting to reassure her, he hurriedly added, "The Healers at St. Mungo's treat him really well."
"It's very good of you to visit them every week."
He blushed again when she patted his arm. He really was a very good sort of man. It was amazing he was still single.
"I hope you make it back in time for the Sorting," she said, "but don't despair if you're late. Perhaps Minerva will let us play with the Pensieve, and you can watch from my memory."
The thought seemed to cheer him. He chatted a bit longer before departing for Hogsmeade, where he could Apparate to London and St Mungo's. And eventually, to Severus Snape.
Hermione's stomach clenched as it always did when she thought of Snape. It was perhaps appropriate she'd just seen Neville, because it had been Neville, fourteen years ago, who had spoken about Snape with the words that had first turned her insides to ice.
It had been several hours after the Final Battle, after the defeat of Voldemort, and after Harry's decision to return the Elder Wand to its rightful place. Witches and wizards had been coming and going all night, but Hermione had found an opportunity to separate herself. She'd felt strangely compelled to retrieve the memories that Snape had given to Harry. She had just removed the last filament of thought from the Pensieve where Harry had left them when McGonagall and Filius Flitwick had entered, trailed by Ron, Neville, and Harry.
"What are you doing in here alone, Miss Granger?" McGonagall had snapped at her, but before she could answer, there had arrived several officials from what remained of the Ministry along with dozens of portrait occupants, and everyone had spoken at once.
Information had been at a premium in those first hours, and it had taken some time to sort the facts from the rumours. And all the while, flocks of owls had been swooping in and out, carrying urgent missives while issuing plaintive hoots.
Hermione had glanced at Neville, who had been sitting in a corner scratching his head while he had stared at the walls of the office. "Where's Snape's portrait?" he had asked her. And although he had spoken the question quite softly, everyone in the room had somehow heard, and everything had gone quiet.
She had searched the walls, frantic to find the familiar sneer. A cold fear had spread through her body when she had wondered if they'd made a terrible mistake. He had been dead when they had left him in the Shrieking Shack. Hadn't he?
Her eyes had met the piercing blue gaze of Albus Dumbledore's portrait, and a moment of understanding had passed between them.
"Headmaster?" she'd whispered, desperate for the old wizard to offer any other explanation for the missing portrait.
"It should have been here by now," he'd informed them all gravely. It could only mean one thing.
Severus Snape was still alive.
There had been a great rush to the Shrieking Shack where they'd left him so very many hours earlier. She'd had only a brief glimpse before Flitwick had Apparated him to St. Mungo's, but the image of his lifeless form lying prostrate on the floor would be burned in her mind for eternity. There had been vivid red fang-marks on his neck, covered in drying blood that had seemed to also cover the floor and his hands where he had earlier tried to stop the bleeding. The dark crimson had provided the only colour to be found on his ghostly white body.
At that moment she had been sure they'd all been wrong: there could be no possibility for life in that corpse on the floor. There simply had to be some other reason his portrait hadn't appeared in the headmaster's office. His short tenure, perhaps, or the fact that he had been installed by Voldemort, rather than through a legal vetting process.
But a faint pulse had indeed been found when Snape had arrived at St Mungo's. After three weeks and several rounds of treatment with pure Essence of Dittany, his wounds had begun to heal.
He had survived the snakebite, but no one had been able to hazard a guess as to his prognosis. Since Nagini had been harbouring a piece of Voldemort's soul when she'd attacked, very Dark Magic had been at work within him.
As the months had faded into years, he had remained unconscious, existing in what had reminded Hermione of a Muggle coma. The Healers at St. Mungo's had never seen anything like it. They had coined the term 'semi-Petrification' solely to describe his condition: a bizarre sort of unconscious immobility. He appeared to have been frozen in time. His body had not aged, his muscles had not weakened. But unlike standard Petrification, the lack of sustenance had not resulted in his death. Yet. Even the most skilled Healers had been baffled, completely unable to predict whether he might someday awaken, succumb to death, or remain in a state of stasis forever.
The revelations about his true loyalties and the amazing role he had played in the downfall of Voldemort had soon become public knowledge. Within a year of Voldemort's defeat, he had been exonerated for Dumbledore's death and pardoned for all previous crimes. His name had become legendary, and he was still celebrated throughout the wizarding world as a hero.
Initially, visitors had flocked to the hospital. Fourteen years without any sign of hope had eventually disheartened even the most zealous of supporters, leaving Neville as his only faithful visitor. Neville had made a habit of visiting his parents at St Mungo's each Sunday, so adding a stop at Snape's bedside wasn't an altogether huge inconvenience for him. Others had found the task of chatting to a non-responsive body rather daunting, but Neville had solved this by using the time to peruse the Sunday edition of the Daily Prophet, reading certain bits aloud.
Hermione had visited a few times but had never been able to speak to Snape. The guilt over having left him in the Shrieking Shack for so long had mingled with shame for never noticing his portrait had been missing. And then there were the memories she had removed from the Pensieve. She had kept them safe for many years, but the temptation to view them had been a factor she had not been fully prepared to deal with. She couldn't predict what he would do if he ever learnt she had possession of such intimate recollections.
The visits are best left to Neville, she assured herself.
From the storeroom, she retrieved a bag of obsidian chips and began to sort them by size. The black stones glittered in her hands like a turbulent, midnight ocean. She stared at the pieces, but in her mind she saw only the dark, accusing eyes of her former professor. The thought of never again seeing that familiar flash of anger in those eyes filled her with a sadness that was as surprising as it was intense.
"Why are you still lurking about in the dungeons, woman?"
She gazed across the room to where Draco Malfoy stood in the doorway. After three years of working together, she was surprised and pleased to count him among her friends. The years had been kind to him, and although he still resembled his father, his frequent smiles made him appear more attractive than haughty.
"Have you descended from your tower to fetch me?" she asked with a smile.
She had been shocked when she had first learnt Draco had become a professor at Hogwarts. The knowledge that he had chosen to teach Divination, of all things, had completely struck her dumb.
"Perhaps," he answered and sauntered to her desk. "Will you promise to be nice?"
"Oh, I'm certain you can divine the answer to that," she said.
He rolled his eyes. "And me without my crystal ball. Be a love and brew me some prediction potion, will you?"
She stuck her tongue out at him.
"Nice," he chided. "Very adult."
She encouraged his banter, finding it balanced the drastic leap in maturity he had experienced since his stint with the Death Eaters. She suspected the events leading to Voldemort's defeat had had more of a life-changing impact on Draco than on anyone else.
After the war, a short trial had sent both his parents to Azkaban: his mother was released after two months, but his father had spent more than two years in the wizarding prison. Draco had escaped prosecution and had returned to Hogwarts for his final year a much quieter and subdued young man.
He'd become a keen observer of others and approached Divination with the premise that the answers one seeks already lie within, and one need only learn the proper tools with which to divine them. Hermione was actually quite impressed by this, although she'd never admit it, as she still viewed Divination as a very imprecise branch of magic.
Stowing the obsidian with a flick of her wand, she said, "I'm ready. Let's get this over with."
"Nice try, Granger."
"What?" she asked.
"Don't pretend you're not practically jumping out of your skin with excitement over bringing the firstyears to the Sorting!"
"Oh, that!" she laughed. "Yes, well... it is rather exciting, isn't it?"
"Indeed it is!" he agreed. "A grand occasion."
Their footsteps echoed through the dungeon hallways. "How are Luna and the little imps?" she asked.
His face broke into a smile. "They are wonderful, as always. Luna owled to say Niobe has found a nest of armour-headed pinticklers," he said, referring to one of his twin five-year-old daughters.
"What's an armour-headed pin..."
"Don't ask," he begged. "I haven't yet had the heart to tell her they're just Flobberworms."
She chuckled. Perhaps even more surprising than his career choice had been his decision to marry Luna Lovegood twelve years earlier. Luna had seen something in Draco that everyone else had missed, and they seemed to have a happy marriage. Their twin daughters, Niobe and Nemma, reminded Hermione of paintings she'd seen of angels; their long, platinum hair and serene smiles seemed almost otherworldly.
"Nemma set fire to the curtains again last week," Draco said. "The ones in the drawing room this time."
"Oh, dear." So much for the angelic perception.
They had almost reached the Great Hall. Hermione smiled a greeting to the other professors who had gathered in small groups to chat before the castle opened its doors for the new term.
"What about you?" Draco asked quietly, studying her. "Any summer romances that set the house on fire, so to speak?"
"I spent the summer with my parents, as you well know. Other than a torrid love affaire with my father's herb garden, there was nary a romance to be had." She kept her tone light, unwilling to confess the way her current stretch of celibacy had begun to niggle at her. A relationship had been the last thing on her mind since escaping Arglist. But perhaps the very fact it had begun to bother her was a sign it was time to start dating again.
"You should start dating again," Draco said.
She hated when he did that. Pouting her lips, she said, "There was only one Slytherin for me, and he's already taken."
"Sadly, I am but one man," he agreed with a sigh. "But we can't have you pining away the rest of your life. You should get out more. You know, you're not unattractive."
She held her hand to her forehead and pretended to swoon.
"Stop that," he said. "I realise I was quite rude to you when we were younger, teasing you about your awful hair and your giant teeth."
"Wow. You sure know how to compliment a woman. Or are you trying to apologise?"
He frowned. "Both, I suppose."
"I think you should stop before you hurt yourself."
"Do you want me to tell you you're pretty or not?"
"I doubt I should risk it."
"That's probably wise," he said. "Besides, you have a mirror...you don't need me to state the obvious. Loads of men would fancy you. Would you like me to introduce you to some of my single friends?"
"Are they Slytherins?"
"Perhaps. Is that a problem?"
"Do they possess your obvious talent for flattery?"
He smiled. "They haven't been married for the past dozen years: no doubt they are far more skilled than I."
She patted his arm and said, "Thanks, I'll think about it."
He watched her for a moment, as if considering whether to pursue the matter further. Finally, he asked, "However did you manage to tame your hair, by the way?"
"Ah, I wish I could claim credit for it, but I had to pay a small fortune to a witch in Paris for this," she said. "I never could figure out how to replicate the Charm." Not that she hadn't tried for a full year, stopping only when she had run out of volunteers and had nothing but a bald Kneazle to show for her efforts.
"Surely you're not having troubles with a Charm?" asked a high-pitched voice behind her. She turned and smiled down at Filius Flitwick.
"Yes, the one that permanently smoothes hair and..." she began, but Flitwick cut her off with a wave.
"Ah, yes, cosmetology Charms can be some of the trickiest," he agreed. "No time for that now, though. It is time for you to greet the firstyears!"
She heard the returning students before she saw them, hundreds of voices combined in a unique symphony of shouts and conversations, cat-call whistles and sing-song melodies. The older students entered the Great Hall first and meandered toward their appropriate House tables. Hermione was touched when several students smiled and waved at her. She hadn't known whether or not she would enjoy teaching, but she had found the past three years unexpectedly rewarding.
In a side corridor, she stopped at the top of a sweeping staircase and awaited the firstyears. She heard the shuffling of feet below, the noise rising as they made their way higher, past the first landing, and then finally stopping before her, eyes wide as they tried to drink it all in at once.
We were never that young, she thought instantly. How easily she could remember her first glimpse of Professor McGonagall at this very spot, all sharp features and austere manners. Hermione knew she could never make a similar first impression, so she tried for scholarly instead. The little faces before her swivelled left and right, one minute staring at the portrait occupants waving down at them, the next watching with mouths agape as a House ghost floated by on its way to the Feast.
After a moment, all whispered conversations ceased, and their attention rested solely on Hermione. For the benefit of those unaccustomed to seeing a real, live witch, she had taken great care in dressing and wore long, black robes with a rich burgundy lining. She had chosen one of her more ridiculous hats, adorned with tiny shooting stars that winked and sparkled from the base all the way to the tall, pointy tip.
"Welcome to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry!" she said and abandoned her serious expression for a smile.
Several of the children smiled in return.
"As you will spend the next seven years in this castle," she said, "I recommend you carefully study the book Hogwarts: A History, so you may fully appreciate your new surroundings."
A gangly girl near the front of the queue removed a book from her robes and showed it excitedly to the boy standing beside her. He did not seem impressed.
"In a moment," Hermione said, "we will enter the Great Hall, and you will be Sorted into your Houses. While you are at Hogwarts, your Houses will be like your family: you will dine with them, room with them, and take classes with them." Some of the students exchanged fearful glances, and she wondered what sorts of friendships and rivalries had already been formed aboard the Hogwarts Express.
"Your House will be awarded points throughout the year for your achievements," she continued, "and points will be deducted from your House for any rule-breaking. At the end of the year, the House with the most points wins the highly coveted House Cup."
There appeared a calculating gleam in the eyes of some children, and she didn't have to guess which House they would end up in. Which reminded her ...
"The names of the four Houses are Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin..."
Her speech was interrupted by the sound of someone running through the corridor behind her, their heavy footsteps echoing loudly with each slap of boot against stone. Several firstyears tried to peer around her to see who was causing the commotion, and Hermione issued a huff of disapproval.
She turned on her spot, eyes widening when she spotted Neville racing towards her, his arms flying out from his sides as if a thousand Dementors pursued him.
"Her ... Her ... Hermione!" he shouted and panted as he ran.
From the corner of her eye, she caught a glimpse of Peeves the Poltergeist hovering in a doorway and quickly shouted, "Neville, slow down! You're going to..."
But it was too late. With perfect timing, Peeves flung a piece of chalk into the corridor just as Neville's shoe met the ground. He was airborne at once, arms flailing and hands clutching wildly for something to grab onto, which, unfortunately, turned out to be an enormous suit of armour. The resulting crash had the first-years covering their ears as it reverberated off the stone walls. After what felt like an eternity, the noise faded along with the delighted cackling of Peeves.
The Great Hall emptied. Headmistress McGonagall rushed forward with a look that would have intimidated even the bravest of knights.
"It's alright, Neville," Hermione said as she helped him to his feet. "The Sorting hasn't begun yet."
He shook his head and seemed to struggle for each breath, making her wonder if he had run the entire distance from Hogsmeade. She removed a small phial of Calming Draught from her robes and urged him to drink.
The effect was immediate. Unfortunately, there wasn't enough Calming Draught in the castle to counteract the effects of his next words.
"He's awake," he said.
The ground shifted beneath her feet. She didn't require the clarification, but he seemed compelled to offer it, looking first at McGonagall and then back at Hermione. "Severus Snape is awake."
A/N: My deepest thanks to ladyinthecloak and little_beloved for beta reading and to lettybird for Brit-picking. b>
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Already loving this, do tense! Can't wait to find out more about Argilist and Snape!!
Our reactions to threats may differ, but let me assure you, I take it quite personally when something of mine is threatened. His gaze travelled over her face, his expression almost desperate.
Mine, she thought. The term should have annoyed her, should have had her rebelling at the very notion. She was her own woman, strong and independent. Possessive men had never held any appeal for her. But somehow, this was differentthis man made it different. Where she was independent, he was autonomous to the point of being a recluse. He didnt appear to need or want anyone. What could it mean that hed claimed her, of all people?
Have I made myself perfectly clear? he asked, interrupting her train of thought.
Perfectly. Unlike earlier, her smile was genuine.
He released her arms, cradling her face with both hands. This time, he didnt bother to glance at the open door. He kissed her without hesitation, without concern as to who might see. His lips were greedy, his mouth covetous, and she responded with a hunger that matched his, clinging to his warmth far longer than wisdom would have allowed. Through the haze of passion, her thoughts once again returned to her earlier quandary, but she no longer cared whether he considered her his girlfriend, his lover, or something else entirely. The need for such description had passed.
She was, quite simply, his.
Absolutely the sexiest ending to a fan fiction chapter EVER!!!!!!!!
That was amazing! The dialogue just crackled with energy & wit & snark. Loved reading this fic so much. Has become a favourite & hope you continue to write. Well done!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. I haven't written fanfic in ages, but I will ALWAYS love it (and defend it to the death, LOL). Thank you for reading my story and leaving lovely reviews. I've been writing original fiction, but I'm currently taking a break after getting chewed up and spit out by the publishing world. ;-) I can't tell you how nice it is to receive a reminder of why I loved writing in the first place. xoxo
Still reading but just had to stop to say, this story is wonderful! Enjoying it so much & happy there's still more to read.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww ... thank you so much for taking a break to let me know you're enjoying it! xoxo
Love, love, love this story!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Awesome - I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading, and thanks especially for leaving a review to let me know you liked it. xoxox
I finally finished reading this story! Wow! It been awhile but it was wonderful and truly enjoyable. I loved your characterizations of Snape and Hermione. They were perfect! Thank you so, so much for sharing your talents with the rest of us! Wonderful!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Yay - I'm so glad you finished it. Thank you so much for reading this story and for leaving such a lovely review. I'm pleased you enjoyed it! xoxox
Absolutely wonderful! Thank you for devoting your time to writing. This was a masterful work. I know it's fanfiction. My husband often tells me to read something written by a REAL writer. I wish he understoon what your writing proves... this is REAL and REALLY GREAT writing! It's special because it's done with love and community. And your efforts are appreciated. I'm sorry if you got negative reviews - because, honestly, you diserve great praise for not only sticking with it but creating something so beautiful. You made me feel for these characters. I love the way you write. I've read quite a bit - I've got a Masters in Literature. I've read what everyone considers to be the best literary works. Yet, it astounds me that so many people don't appreciate what fanfiction writers create. You bring that world alive for me, and you give characters like Snape a chance to breathe free and LOVE. THANK YOU!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thanks so much for saying this. I hate to see fanfiction writers maligned, although I understand some of the criticism. I've read some truly awful fanfics (and written some, too, LOL!), but the idea that ALL fanfic writers are hacks is just silly. I haven't written fanfic in several years, but I can tell you that my process didn't change when I moved to original fic. If anything, fanfic took more skill (or at least a different skill set), because I was forced to stay within the constraints of the world and characters someone else had established. (It's one of the reasons I prefer writing original fics now - there are no rules or boundaries!)Thank you for defending fanfic, and for reading fanfic, and for dishing out such lovely praise. You're the best!! xoxo
THis is one of the most awesome stories I've read so far. Thank you for writing. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I was just so engrossed in the story. But had I done so, they would have been effusive,glowing reviews telling you that each twist and turn has kept me at the edge of my seat. THANK YOU!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Being engrossed in the story is probably the biggest compliment any reader can give to a writer, so THANK YOU, dear
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
, for letting yourself get swept into the action. I'm so glad you've been enjoying it, and I'm glad it's kept you guessing!Thank you very much for this lovely review. :-)
I love this story and i love your Snape!!! I am sure I will read this one again!! I think I hve read this twice and I can not remember leaving a review!! wonderful great work!!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww ... thank you so much, deedeebug! I'm rather fond of this story and this Snape, too. ;-) Thanks for reading!!
Heard of this story for ages. It. Ever read it. It's quite compelling. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thanks so much for giving this story a shot! There are soooooo many things I'd change if I ever had an extra month (or six) to re-edit it. But it's also fun to see how the writing changed (and improved, mostly) as the story progressed. But still, I cringe at the first half ...And if THAT isn't a resounding endorsement, I don't know what is! Now we see why I'm not in sales or marketing. :-)Thanks for the review!
This was a fantastic Fan Fiction, well put together, long enough to have a perfect story-line yet not long enough to be incredibly boring. I hope to read more of you work sometime.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you liked the story -- and I'm glad it hit the sweet spot as far as length for you. Thanks so much for reading it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you liked the story -- and I'm glad it hit the sweet spot as far as length for you. Thanks so much for reading it!
Wonderful story so far, I'm quite enjoying it. Great job!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it ... it's always so nice to receive reviews on a story that's been around for awhile. Thanks for reading!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it ... it's always so nice to receive reviews on a story that's been around for awhile. Thanks for reading!
Amazing! I like drunk Hermione. She's rather humourous!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I had a lot of fun imagining that scene. Thanks so much for the review!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I had a lot of fun imagining that scene. Thanks so much for the review!
Interesting first chapter, I rather enjoyed it! I love that you paired Draco with Luna, that is defintely a pair I haven't seen very often at all! Your description of the surroundings was fantastic as was the dialogue. I can't wait to get to the next chapter. Severus was always my favorite. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
He's my favorite, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the pairing of Draco and Luna; it was fun to imagine them together. Thanks so much for reading the story and leaving reviews. I appreciate it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
He's my favorite, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the pairing of Draco and Luna; it was fun to imagine them together. Thanks so much for reading the story and leaving reviews. I appreciate it!
I really loved this chapter!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm glad! Thanks for being patient with Snape's arrival ... hopefully it was worth the wait. ;-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm glad! Thanks for being patient with Snape's arrival ... hopefully it was worth the wait. ;-)
What a superb piece of writing, your Hermione and Severus in particular are so well written. I've read it all in one go, though I think I may have read the begining before, when it wasn't finished. Very satisying, I know I shall be reading it again. Thanks
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
What lovely praise - thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and leave a review. I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
What lovely praise - thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and leave a review. I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
I started reading this not long after you started posting.....then I stopped reading fan fics for a while. I remembered how much I liked this one, and was happy to see that it was finished, so I just read the whole thing in one sitting. I cannot believe this is your first fic! I've been reading HP fan fiction for YEARS and this is one of my favorites. You write Snape so well! That's no easy feat. Thanks for an amazing story!
I cant believe that was your first attempt at a fic. it was excellent! I thouroughly enjoyed it. !
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :-)
First, let me apologise if I have not reviewed before..I simply cannot remember! I have as of now read this lovely story three times and it is like putting on a wonderful pair of slippers. After reading the MOST OCC Severus Snape story EVER I had to read one that would help me wash my brain to remove the wierdness of that story. I chose "A Murder of Crows" and I am glad I did!! Wonderful story...I would NEVER have thought this was a forst attempt!!! Well done! Hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
You are too sweet! Thank you so much for leaving this lovely review. I can't tell you how much it means to me, especially since I received some very bizarre reviews on this story (all from one reader) yesterday at a different archive. Everyone is entitled to their opinions, of course, but reviews like this REALLY help me shrug off the other ones. I am SO glad you left me this review. Thanks for reading, dee!!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I read the other reviews,you put it mildly "it" being the MANY reviews....wow!!! I think the reviewer liked the story over all...boy I have read many,many stories and have never seen anything like that on a review page!! A great story Severus and Hermione are in character the flow was great!! Don't let the bizarre reviews get you down!!! Hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
You are too sweet! Thank you so much for leaving this lovely review. I can't tell you how much it means to me, especially since I received some very bizarre reviews on this story (all from one reader) yesterday at a different archive. Everyone is entitled to their opinions, of course, but reviews like this REALLY help me shrug off the other ones. I am SO glad you left me this review. Thanks for reading, dee!!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I read the other reviews,you put it mildly "it" being the MANY reviews....wow!!! I think the reviewer liked the story over all...boy I have read many,many stories and have never seen anything like that on a review page!! A great story Severus and Hermione are in character the flow was great!! Don't let the bizarre reviews get you down!!! Hugs~dee
Okay, I am always wordy, but this might be a whopper. And disjointed because it has been a long day, and being tired might make me ramble more than usual. As just evidenced, LOL.
This may well be one of the best epilogues that I have ever read. Frequently, they either feel like they are just extra junk, not needed in the story. Or characters that were once strong and serious become all mushy and unlike their former selves. Or they try to cover the next fifty years in one thousand words, and in doing so, diminsh their importance. Not a single one of those things happened here. And epilogue should enhance a story, not drag it down, and that is exactly what happened here. Perfection.
I think that you could have killed Hermione and Snape off and I wouldn't have cared because I was so joyful about Sandy and Neville. I had sort of forgotten about both of them, and since I loved both of their characters, why not let them be happy together? Yay!
What a time for Luna's baby to decide to make his appearance. I loved that Hermione considered the fact that Severus may have planned this to get out of his speech.
Let's see ... oh yes, Ron ended up with the pretty-eyed girl. I was happy to see everyone happy. And you made all of that happen without any of it seeming forced. Things just naturally fell into place for everyone.
As for Severus and Hermione, I have loved their interactions-both good and bad-throughout, but I think that this ending scene, where he asks her to marry him, just might be my favorite. Your Severus was perfect to me because he was serious and sincere in the sentiment, but he didn't turn all lovesick and gooey. And Hermione continued to tease him just like always. Their banter has always been fabulous, and this was no different. I loved her taunting him with "old man", and then later him capitulating and calling himself old man. They are adorable in spite of Severus' wish to the contrary.
Okay, I could go on and on, but surely there is a cap on how long a review can go. Although if I haven't reached it in this point of my reading career, I surely never will.
I have very much enjoyed conversing with you through review and responses. I feel like I owe authors a review, not because they demand it, but because they have spent so much time and effort, and poured their heart into something for which they will get minimal recognition and no money. If I had to pay, even a penny, for every hour I have spent reading fanfic over the last few years, I would owe a ton of money. I can't even imagine. I also don't feel like authors are required to respond to review, but I always think it is lovely when they do. I have always wished as I was reading through books, that I could tell the author the things I loved and the things that didn't work for me, or be able to get insight into their reasons for making a literary choice etc. What a delight to be able to do so in fanfic!
I can't believe I waited so long to finish this thing! Truly one of the best I have read in a long time. And I've read a lot. I hope you continue to write. I have read "All You Need is Love," and recall being very amused by it. Perhaps I shall go back and reread since I don't remember much of it, and I wasn't reviewing at the time I read it *listens to you groan over an inbox full of more reviews* :)
Okay, I'll shut up now. You are super talented and I really hope you continue to write. Thanks for entertaining me over the last week!
What a lovely chapter. I was worried that the first time between Draco and Hermione would be more awkward than it was. I mean, it was sufficiently awkward for reality sake, but it could have been worse. I think in the end, his family may be better off without Lucius.
I think maybe Hermione was wise in keeping her memory of the day prior, for the exact reason she mentions.
Poor Severus can't come up with a name for his ... woman. How about the love of his life. That goes quite well with a happy ending, I think.
Off to the epilogue ...
Yay! If Hermione had died, she would have simply died. But it would have completely killed Severus. He would never recover from losing love number two.
I loved that he was under an unbreakable vow. It certainly explains the way he handled some things throughout.
So good that Hermione isn't held responsible for her activity in the lab at Arglist. A happy ending may well be in sight.
Sadly, I must be off to bed (and hopefully finish tomorrow), and I hope that Hermione and Severus do the same.
I know I am not quite at the end yet, but I love when stories go out on top, strong all the way to the end. Barring any unforseen awfulness in the next two chapters, I'd say this one is going to do just that. So excited for the conclusion!
If she had only trusted him, they could be celebrating now. I have no doubt that she will be okay, because you wouldn't bring us this far, only to kill her off, but still, I am nervous.
Good for Severus to be calm and cool (on the outside, anyway) and force her to see the good memories.
And speaking of memories, did I understand that hers were ruined? I was reading so fast by the end that I may have misread that, though. What will she do without them? Not that I think those are pleasant memories that she would want back, but I hope there is no damage from all of their removal. And I suppose that renders them completely unusable, so no worries about someone trying to steal them from her.
I must know more!!!
Okay, I retract my statement from the last chapter in which I said that Hermione was going to kill Severus. Because he will surely kill her first. What was she thinking?!?! I do understand what was at stake if he were on the wrong side, but how furious and hurt is Severus going to be that she doesn't trust him ... again. That is if they make it out of the situation in one piece. Not that I doubt for a minute that Severus could take Lucius with minimal effort, but how is he going to proceed with the plan, if he has to rescue her?!? Stupid girl!
Boy, Hermione is a persistant little thing. She really should have removed the memories over two days time, but I can't fault her for wanting it over and done with.
What is Severus doing to Hermione? I mean I know literally what he is doing, and you can't blame him for not telling her because she would surely protest. But, she is going to kill him, regardless.
“Remember the mare.”
That was the smartest thing he could have said to her. Sill ... she is going to kill him.