Eighteen for Surprises
Chapter 22 of 33
HogwartsClassof91A visit to the Ministry yields more questions than answers, but at last they arrive at a plan. Perhaps.
Chapter 22: Eighteen for Surprises
Hermione squeezed the arms of her chair.
The stiff leather refused to yield, much like the man before her. Too many hours had passed since she and Snape had taken their seats across from Gregor Ustinov, the Minister for Magic. With each wasted minute, the ability to hold her tongue proved almost too difficult to manage until she was certain one more inane question would make her scream. She thought of her parents and watched her knuckles turn white.
"It was delivered to the Hogwarts Owlery and accepted by a house-elf," said Snape, answering the Minister's question about how they had obtained the scroll. Again. "A return was neither provided nor requested."
The Minister peered at the photographs, the tip of his tongue protruding from his abnormally large lips.
"And your tracing spells revealed nothing?" he asked.
"Only the approximate date and time the letter was written: Thursday, quite late in the evening," Snape replied. He did not relate the string of expletives he'd muttered when their many spells had failed to reveal proof of the author. "Perhaps your Aurors will have greater success."
The Minister grunted. "We shall see. You can hardly expect me to confront Mr Malfoy otherwise."
The last thread of her patience stretched so thin it could cut stone. "On the contrary, that is precisely what we expect," she said, no longer caring that she spoke to the titular head of the wizarding world. "We have explained exactly what he has planned and how he will accomplish it."
"Your claims have been noted, Miss Granger," Ustinov said. "But if the Ministry arrested citizens solely on accusations from former, disgruntled employees, I assure you, Azkaban would fill in a day. Perhaps less."
"I understand. But we're not asking you to arrest him solely on accusation." She was aware of Snape shifting beside her, ostensibly to catch her eye and issue a warning. She ignored him.
"I see," Ustinov said. "Then you are prepared to offer something more ... conclusive?"
"Miss Granger has already told you everything she knows," Snape said.
"Mr Malfoy must think she knows a great deal more," he replied, waving the photographs at Snape. "That is, if her story is to be believed."
"It is simply one more indication of how desperate he's become," Snape said. "I assure you, Miss Granger cannot offer the type of evidence you seek."
Although the room was almost stiflingly warm, her skin chilled as she listened to Snape spin more lies. The duplicity itself did not disturb her nearly as much as she had anticipated...after countless hours of bureaucratic babble from Ustinov, she could muster little remorse for the act. She just hadn't been prepared for how easily Snape could manipulate the truth. She searched for the tiniest of signals when he strayed from the facts: a subtle change in breathing, too fast or too slow. She watched his eyes, waiting for them to shift ever so slightly. Perhaps he would blink too much or too little. But despite her intimate familiarity with his expressions, she could find nothing to indicate when the truth ended and the lie began. It unnerved her.
She told herself she was being ridiculous: a spy wouldn't survive an hour without the ability to lie, let alone several years as the enemy's most trusted advisor. By all rights, Snape should be considered the most skilled liar alive. The realisation brought little comfort.
The Minister watched her expectantly, so she cleared her throat and agreed with Snape. "Any physical evidence I might have been able to provide was destroyed during the lab accident at Arglist, several years ago. Mr Malfoy believes my return would enable the recreation of the lost research, but he is mistaken."
Ustinov tapped the tip of his quill against his desk and narrowed his eyes. "I find the timing of this so-called accident rather intriguing. It coincides directly with your departure from Arglist Industries, does it not?"
"It does."
"Coincidences can indeed be intriguing to contemplate," Snape said, drawing the Minister's gaze. "But they hold no bearing on today's discussion."
"I'll decide what does and does not have bearing today, Severus." Ustinov shook his index finger at Snape, as if lecturing a toddler. "My predecessor might have been willing to ignore procedures and rules for you, but times have changed. Shacklebolt acted on instinct far too often. You'll find this office adheres to much stricter guidelines now."
Snape cocked his head to the side and spoke so slowly...so deliberately...each word stood as its own sentence. "Is. That. So."
After casting a quick glance at Hermione, the Minister glared at Snape.
Hoping to diffuse the brewing quarrel, she quickly interjected. "We know his intentions for the research, Minister, and the lengths he will travel to implement his plan. These photos prove what he's capable of. He murdered Mikolaj ... Surely an investigation is warranted..."
"An investigation was already conducted into the death of Mr Brukowski," Ustinov replied. "It yielded nothing more than an inconvenience to Mr Malfoy and a waste of Ministry resources."
"Lack of evidence hardly proves he's innocent," she countered. "It simply means he's cleverer than your investigators."
"Hermione ..." said Snape in warning.
"Cleverness isn't the issue here, miss, given the severity of the charges you've made," said Ustinov. "The Ministry follows a strict protocol when dealing with allegations from former employees. We would need a great deal more than anonymous notes and wild speculation to pursue one of the most well-respected members of our community, who, I might add, happens to sponsor several Muggle charities."
"And has he sponsored your re-election campaign as well?" she asked.
Both men spoke at once.
"You are out of line, young lady..." said Ustinov, slapping his desk.
"That's enough, Hermione..." said Snape.
She raised her hands. "I'm sorry...truly, I am. That was uncalled for." Extending her palms towards the Minister, she beseeched him to understand. "But please, try to imagine you had received those pictures ... that you were looking at a photo of your own parents. Surely, you'd be just as concerned as I."
To her surprise, he returned his gaze to the photos and frowned at them for several moments.
"Perhaps the Ministry can spare some Aurors to protect the Grangers?" Snape suggested quietly.
Ustinov sighed but pushed his quill and some parchment across the desk. "Provide your parents' address, and I will arrange a Ministry guard for them."
"Thank you." She did as instructed. "How soon do you suppose they could begin?"
"No later than this evening." He gathered the papers and photos from his desk and shuffled them into a file. "I'm sure you are anxious to forewarn them."
She didn't care for the finality in his voice. "I appreciate your concern for my parents' safety," she said, "but until Mr Malfoy is stopped, they will remain in jeopardy, as will all future Muggle-born witches and wizards. Isn't there anything the Ministry can do?"
"Not without a good amount of evidence, all of which seems to have been destroyed when you last left Mr Malfoy's employ," Ustinov said. He leant back in his chair and regarded her with raised eyebrows. "Unless you'd like to accept his offer and return to Arglist?"
"That's out of the question," Snape said.
She frowned. "I ... I suppose it would enable me to prove what he's..."
"Don't be foolish," Snape interrupted.
"Now, Severus, let the lady speak," Ustinov said, his smile strangely cunning. "After all, she was Mr Malfoy's ... employee ... long before she was your ... colleague."
Snape's whisper held more warning than a shout. "Just what are you implying, Gregor?"
Hermione wondered at the tension filling the air, the obvious animosity between the men. The undercurrent felt large enough to swallow her whole.
After several uneasy moments, Ustinov's shrug dispelled the mounting friction. "Surely, Miss Granger's many years as an Arglist employee give her a unique advantage. Who better to find the proof needed for a conviction?"
"It's too dangerous," Snape said. "Send someone who is specialised in undercover field work, someone who has experience infiltrating an operation such as this. Not her."
"That would require a significant commitment of Ministry resources." He studied his fingernails. "Why should I bother?"
A muscle twitched in Snape's cheek.
"Because it's the right thing to do," Hermione said. Neither man acknowledged her...Snape continued to stare at the Minister, who in turn continued to stare at his fingernails.
Finally, Snape asked, "Do you have a Pensieve?"
"Of course," said Ustinov.
He turned to Hermione and said, "The memory of when you first saw Lucius at Arglist."
Her stomach tied itself into a knot. The time had come to pay the piper, but she couldn't help wonder how high the cost would be. Nothing about the Minister seemed particularly trustworthy. She stared into Snape's eyes, and beyond all reason, something in his dark gaze reassured her, convinced her. She lifted her wand to her temple and extracted the proof the Minister seemed so desperate for. The memory swirled in the stony depths of the Pensieve as she explained, "You'll recognise Mr Malfoy, of course. The other man is Henri Garnier, who was the Executive Director of Arglist."
While the Minister viewed the memory, she tried to suppress her own recollection of that night. Lucius's voice rang through her mind, dark and twisted, and she relived his cold delight over a Muggle-born discovering the means to eliminate her kind. She jumped when Snape squeezed her shoulder, but before she could summon a grateful smile, the Minister spoke.
"Such a pity the Wizengamot has declared memories inadmissible as evidence," he said, his lips pursed. His tone seemed to indicate that given the opportunity, he'd prosecute her right alongside Lucius. "I assume the mysterious lab accident occurred shortly after this incident?"
"That's correct," she said. "I provided a full report to Kingsley after the ... accident. Did the Ministry never investigate Arglist?"
"That information is classified," he said. He reopened the file on his desk and sifted through several papers. "You accepted employment at Hogwarts after leaving Arglist?"
"Yes."
"Once there, you began working with the younger Mr Malfoy?"
"Yes," she said with a frown. "But Draco doesn't have anything..."
"Has the father never attempted to contact you through the son?" Ustinov asked.
"No, of course not."
"Other than an occasional invitation to dine at Malfoy Manor," Snape clarified.
She turned to him and shook her head. "But ... Draco wouldn't have known ..." she began, her words failing as she remembered how keen he'd been for her attendance at the Christmas Eve ball. She clenched her fists when a scene from her recent nightmare surfaced. What had Lucius said when she had told him he had no business at Hogwarts? Nonsense. My son is here. She shook her head again to clear the dark smoke of doubt. "Draco has no involvement with Arglist," she stated clearly.
"Just another coincidence, then?" asked Ustinov.
"That's right."
He turned to Snape.
"It seems likely," Snape offered. "He was hired several years before Miss Granger, and there are indications the relationship between father and son is somewhat strained."
The Minister drummed his fingers on his desk.
"The most damning evidence will only be procured from a well-placed spy inside Arglist," said Snape.
Although the thought filled her with dread, Hermione had to admit she was the perfect candidate. "That could take months, Severus ... years, even," she said. "We don't have that kind of time. If I went back to Arglist..."
"No."
"Lucius is losing patience," she said.
"Then we shall find a way to placate him until the Ministry can act."
"But how?" she asked, searching for some method to stall the progress at Arglist. "Perhaps I could ... recreate ... certain notes and offer them in exchange for my parents' safety," she said. "If I changed some of the data, it would take months to discover the discrepancies."
"Too easy," said Snape, shaking his head. "Lucius is not a fool...he is certain to suspect you would never provide him with anything truly useful."
The Minister cleared his throat. "Miss Granger, your memories appear to be remarkably vivid. Why not offer some of those instead?"
The thought sent her mind reeling. "Never! I'd Obliviate myself first!" She turned to Snape for support but found his gaze distant, almost calculating. "No, Severus," she said. "It's not an option."
"No doubt Lucius has already considered how valuable your memories are," he said, making her shiver. "Fortunately, there exists a high risk of damage when one attempts to forcibly extract something so delicate. I imagine that is the only reason Lucius has not already wrested them from your mind."
"In that case," said Ustinov, "he'd almost certainly be willing to deal for them."
"No," she said again. "We cannot risk the information ever seeing the light of day."
"Not as they stand now, perhaps," said Snape. "But if the memories were altered, the risk would be negligible."
"You just said he isn't foolish, Severus," she reminded him. "Altered memories are terribly obvious."
"That is true ... in almost all known cases."
The Minister laughed. "So you've heard of Remy, have you?"
"Remy who?" asked Hermione when Snape did not comment.
"An old French wizard...Remy Nissante," explained Ustinov. "The very reason memories are not, in fact, admissible as evidence."
Snape elaborated. "He could alter memories so that the change was transparent, making it impossible to discern fact from fiction. The Department of Mysteries spent years trying to learn his methods, to no avail. It was a natural-born talent, impossible to replicate."
"What happened to him?" she asked.
"He was exiled when the Ministry deemed his skills too dangerous."
"It's an old witch's tale, Miss Granger," said Ustinov. "Nothing more."
"I'm loath to contradict you, Gregor," said Snape in a tone that belied his sentiment, "but I've seen his work firsthand."
With a frown, Ustinov asked, "How is that possible? No one has been able to find him for at least three decades. He can't still be alive?"
Snape shrugged. "He was fifteen years ago," he said. "Dumbledore maintained contact with him throughout the war."
Hermione wondered what uses Dumbledore might have had for altered memories during the war and found the possibilities endless, if a bit alarming. The ethical debate fled her mind when she found both men watching her, waiting.
She couldn't guess how a memory was altered, but the process undoubtedly involved its removal from her mind, the very thought of which left her cold. Her gaze sought the open file on the Minister's desk. She watched the photograph of her parents, the casual way her mother tilted her head to laugh at her father. The knot in her stomach tightened. What choice did she have?
"If ... if the memories are thoroughly altered," she said, "then I suppose I could offer them as a premium for my parents' safety. At least it would allow us to control the flow of data at Arglist while the Ministry builds a case against him."
"Then it's settled," said Ustinov, closing the file once more. They stood to leave, but he said, "I need to speak with you alone, Severus. You may wait outside, Miss Granger: this will only take a moment."
She found the Minister's secretary waiting in the outer office and smiled when the plump witch offered tea. "Thank you, er ..." she said, searching for a nameplate.
"The name's Mildred, dear. Mildred Gibbons, but everyone calls me Millie."
"Thank you, Millie. I'm Hermione."
"Oh, of course I know who you are," she said with a wink. "It's not every day we get a visit from a war hero. Two at once is indeed a rare occasion!"
Hermione accepted a paper cup full of strong tea and complimented the intricate tatting on the tea towel.
"When you get to be my age, you enjoy making things like that," Millie said. There appeared a distinct twinkle in her eyes when her gaze slid towards the Minister's closed door. "Of course, you probably have much more ... interesting ... things to occupy your time."
She was far too mature to be blushing like a schoolgirl, so she ignored Millie's implication...as well as the heat on her cheeks...and changed the subject. "We appreciate how quickly you were able to arrange the meeting today."
"It was a pleasure, my dear. More so for me than the Minister, I'd wager," she added in a whisper as she pushed a plate of biscuits towards Hermione.
Despite her reluctance to encourage gossip, Hermione couldn't stop herself edging closer to the desk when Millie leant forward. She nibbled on a biscuit and asked, "What makes you say that?"
With a nod towards the Minister's door, Millie said, "There are plenty around here who'd rather see Severus in that office."
Hermione blinked. "Severus? As Minister for Magic?"
Millie nodded. "And don't think the Minister doesn't know it."
From inside the Minister's office came the sound of voices raised in argument.
"... not a professional ..."
"... have a job to do ..."
She tried to decide which voice belonged to Snape while she strained to hear more.
Millie offered a knowing smile. "You see?"
She frowned. They were rather insulated at Hogwarts, but still ... Snape as the Minister for Magic seemed a bit far-fetched. "Do you truly believe he could run for Minister, if he desired the job?"
"Run ... and win," she answered. "I'd be surprised if he hasn't already been approached."
She remembered the way he'd been treated like a celebrity at the Malfoys' Christmas Eve ball. Maybe Millie was right. He hadn't seemed very keen with the attention, though, and she had always assumed a quiet life held more appeal for him. But perhaps she was simply projecting her own preferences.
The door to the Minister's office opened. Snape looked furious, but he quickly turned his back and shut the door, his head down. When he approached Millie's desk, his features were placid once more.
"Millie, my love, you have my endless gratitude for organising this meeting so expeditiously," he said.
Hermione found it difficult to decide what shocked her more: Millie's flustered giggle or Snape's agreeable temperament.
"Anytime, Severus," Millie said. "Anytime. And here are the details of that other thing you asked me to arrange." She handed him an envelope while cocking her head in Hermione's direction with a notable lack of subtlety.
"Eight or nine?" asked Snape.
"Eight," Millie replied.
"Perfect." His smile was so charming Hermione felt a rare...and completely inappropriate...stab of jealousy when he added, "I'd be lost without you, Millie."
She could only imagine how ridiculous her expression must be.
He smirked and offered his arm. "Shall we?" he asked.
"Of course." With a wave to Millie, she joined him at the door and frowned at the envelope in his hand. He merely quirked his lips when he caught her staring at it.
The Ministry had been empty when they'd arrived, but now a moderate crowd of witches and wizards dotted the corridors. Many stopped to speak to Snape or shake his hand. By the time they arrived back at the Atrium, she couldn't help but wonder why he'd returned to a diminished, job-sharing role at Hogwarts when he likely could have had any job he desired at the Ministry.
Despite the distraction, her thoughts soon turned to the upcoming conversation she'd be forced to have with her parents. She fidgeted with the clasp on her cloak and tried to imagine their reaction to hosting a pair of Ministry guards for the foreseeable future. But at least they would be safe.
She stopped at the Apparation area and placed her hand on Snape's shoulder. "Thank you, Severus."
"For?"
"For everything ... for ensuring the Minister sent Aurors to my parents, for convincing him of what Lucius intends, for helping to clean up this mess I've made." She sighed and added, "For lying on my behalf."
He scowled. "I've lied for far less worthy causes," he said. "And you must stop blaming yourself for the situation at Arglist."
Before she could look down, he caught her chin and forced her to meet his gaze. "I am quite serious, Hermione," he said, his voice stern. "Had you not made this discovery, someone else would have. And I doubt they'd care half as much about setting it to rights."
She nodded, grateful for his viewpoint as well as his support. "Thank you," she whispered. She wondered if she would ever be able to express how relieved she was to have him on her side.
"Do not thank me yet...there is still much to be done."
Drawing a deep breath, she prepared herself for the next hurdle. "I'll see you tonight, back at Hogwarts. I need to ring my parents and figure some way to explain why wizards will soon be watching over them."
He frowned at her, his lips drawn into a tight line. Without even drawing a breath, he blurted, "Ishouldcomewithyou."
It took her a moment to realise what he had said. Comprehension left her speechless, staring at him with her mouth agape.
"Aurors are competent, but at the end of the day, they are nothing more than employees of the Ministry," he said, lifting his chin. "There are several spells that should be performed, as well as some very intricate enchantments to be placed upon your parents' home and property."
"Okay," she said and refrained from mentioning the many protective charms she had cast during the Horcrux search. She had every confidence in her abilities to protect her parents' home, but his concern for their welfare overruled any compunction she might have felt to prove her skills.
The idea of taking Snape home to meet her parents caused a ball of nerves to bound through her body, making her voice sound a bit strangled when she suggested they use the Ministry Floo to reach Diagon Alley.
Once inside the Leaky Cauldron, Snape commandeered a table in a hidden corner while Hermione entered Muggle London in search of a telephone kiosk. She returned a few moments later, having arranged to meet her parents in an hour's time.
"They were home," she said. "I told them we'd be there at three o'clock. It's not far. Of course, nowhere is very far when you can Apparate, right? They live in Marsh Gibbon. It's outside Bicester. In Oxfordshire. There's a small park not too far from their house. We can Apparate into the park and walk the remaining distance. It's a lovely area. They really seem to like it. So ... yes ... three o'clock." She cleared her throat and clasped her hands.
He pushed his glass towards her. The small sip of whiskey burned a trail down her throat. She hoped it would prove just as caustic against her nerves.
"We should have plenty of time to perform the necessary enchantments before the Aurors arrive," he said. "When we return to Hogwarts, I shall speak to Albus and see whether or not he can direct us to Remy."
She nodded and stared across the room. Anxiety filled her when she thought of the task she'd agreed to, the dangerous memories she would need to produce.
"Tell me about your parents," he said.
It was obviously meant to distract her, and she welcomed the change in topic. "They're dentists," she said, as if the simple statement could offer everything he needed to know about them.
He rolled his eyes. "You were an only child?"
"Yes," she said, thinking it was something else they had in common. "They were nearly forty when they had me...I believe they had tried for many years to have a child and had given up hope when I came along."
"What was their reaction when they learnt you were a witch?"
She smiled. "Well, they're both quite practical, so I think they were more relieved than surprised. As far-fetched as it had to have sounded, at least it explained the bizarre activities in our home."
"What sort of bizarre activities?"
"Oh, the usual things, I suppose. The random levitation of toys, the spinach changing into spaghetti, the clocks stopping whenever bedtime approached." She ticked the incidents on her fingers as she spoke. "And then there was the mystery of the disappearing bathwater. They'd spent a small fortune on plumbers by the time I had turned ten."
His laughter floated in the air and wrapped around her like a blanket, spreading warmth through her body.
"It's quite mind-boggling for Muggle families, really," she said with a smile. "I daresay they should be warned from infancy. Actually, I'm surprised this hasn't been addressed before now."
"Ah, I believe we have stumbled upon the source of your next crusade," he said.
She stuck out her tongue. "I just think there needs to be a better way to alert them."
"No doubt," he agreed.
"My parents were very accepting ... very supportive. I know everyone isn't so lucky."
"Indeed," he said. "Some Muggles take a great deal of convincing before they will allow their children to learn magic. Others have outright refused."
She tried to imagine her life without magic. They might as well have told her she wasn't permitted to breathe. "Those Muggles give the whole lot a bad name," she said. "Like those dreadful people Harry lived with."
He paused, his drink raised halfway to his lips.
She was too lost in the memories of decades past to wonder why he had grown so pale. "Harry always hated going back to Surrey each summer, and rightly so. His uncle was mean-spirited, and his aunt was horrid." She shook her head and remembered how cold the woman had been. "I cannot understand how someone could treat their own relation so poorly."
"Petunia always had a penchant for cruelty," he said quietly.
She frowned over the long-forgotten name. How had he remembered...
One look at his face, and it felt as if a bucket of ice water had been dumped upon her head. How could she have forgotten his connection to Harry's aunt? She had only meant to make a point about certain Muggle families. "I'm sorry," she said, "I didn't mean ... I forgot ..."
His curt nod only made her feel more wretched. He had spent his morning confronting the Minister...fighting on her behalf...and had insisted on personally ensuring the safety of her parents. In return, she had reminded him of the disastrous consequences his choices had carried. She cursed her wayward tongue and blamed his many years at St Mungo's for her memory lapse. Given the time he'd spent in stasis, it was difficult to imagine him as a contemporary of the Dursleys.
He swallowed a large gulp of whiskey. "It is true I never cared for the boy," he said. "Still, it brings me no pleasure to learn he had a miserable childhood."
"Of course not," she said. "I never meant to imply ... I wasn't trying to blame you." She frowned again, certain they both knew he was hardly blameless but unable to fathom a way out of the moral quicksand she had wandered into.
"I am fully cognisant of the role I played in orphaning the boy."
She thought about mistakes and blame and regret, and out of nowhere, Dumbledore's odd Christmas cake analogy popped into her mind. In very short time, Snape had forgiven her crimes against him: the stolen memories and the lies she'd told to avoid their discovery. Yet he had spent decades denying himself a similar absolution. "Everyone makes mistakes," she said. "You once told me atonement was far more important than fault. Look at everything you've sacrificed in the name of redemption, Severus. Don't you think you've paid for your sins by now?"
The fury that crossed his face should have frightened her, should have had her knees trembling beneath the table. Instead, it only elicited an unfamiliar ache deep inside her chest.
He rose and swiped his empty glass from the table. In a deadly whisper, he said, "You have no idea what you are talking about," before walking to the bar.
She crossed her arms and fought the sting of his words. It was not the first time someone had snapped at her for offering unwelcome advice. And it was unlikely to be the last, considering her inability to stop providing it. With a scowl, she wondered what had disturbed him more...having his own words used against him or being told he was worthy of the redemption he had earned. Perhaps he had lived so long with remorse that the alternative was simply too daunting to contemplate.
She had to admit it was somewhat hypocritical to insist he forgive himself when she still clung to regret like a lifeline. Being a perfectionist was yet another trait they seemed to share. The personality made it nearly impossible to tolerate failure and accept forgiveness. They were their own worst critics.
Snape returned with two full glasses and a surprising absence of anger. He pushed one of the glasses across the table and watched her with his brows drawn. "There are some sins that can never be forgiven," he said, resuming their conversation as if he'd never left.
"Quite so," she agreed, then, daring the return of his ire, she added, "but this isn't one of them."
His nostrils flared, but before he could speak, she said, "Perhaps some things happen for a reason."
"That is an insult to empirical thinking," he said. "It sounds suspiciously similar to something Dumbledore would say."
"Thank you," she said, deliberately misinterpreting the barb. "Although, the headmaster has been far too busy lecturing me about love to mention destiny."
His eyes widened, and he quickly looked down. With a furrowed brow, he stared at his whiskey glass and rubbed at an errant water spot. "Can you truly believe we are destined for the choices we make?" he asked after several moments. "Was I nothing more than a pawn to the whims of Fate?"
"Of course not," she said. "But you were integral to the defeat of Voldemort, and you would not have been in that position but for one poor choice."
"Only one?" he asked, abandoning the smudge and rolling the glass between his hands. "I assure you the figure is much higher."
"One hundred?" she asked. "One thousand?" When he frowned and shook his head, she merely shrugged. "I don't see anyone blaming you for the past; do you? We've all had fifteen years to arrive at quite the opposite conclusion, in fact. You are the only one denying yourself now. Everyone else has forgiven you."
His jaw clenched. "The dead cannot forgive."
"No, but the living can," she said. "And among the living, Harry would have the most reason to resent you, yet he's forgiven you, as well."
He raised his glass to his lips.
"He's even named his youngest son after you: Albus Severus."
Her timing could not have been worse. A fine mist of whiskey sprayed her face, her clothes, and the table as he choked on his drink. Without a word, she withdrew her wand from her cloak and performed a silent cleansing spell.
"You ... um ... hadn't heard that before?" she asked.
"No."
She hadn't meant to smile, but his panicked expression forced her lips to twitch. "Ginny was surprised by the choice, too," she told him. "But she said Harry was adamant. He told her you were one of the bravest men he'd ever known."
His scowl was immediate. He withdrew slightly, just enough to hide his face in the shadows.
She wondered how it must feel to suddenly learn one's familiar, mutual dislike for another was no longer so mutual. There was little time to consider it, though, as a glance at her watch showed it was time to leave.
The inn had grown busy, and they jostled their fellow patrons to reach a quiet spot from which to Side-Along Apparate. Snape's hand on her back steered her towards a secluded corner. Her anxiety over the upcoming visit to her parents fled at his touch. She smiled, and for the second time in as many days, she thought of how far their relationship had progressed. Considering how badly their recent conversation could have ended, the exchange of opinions only confirmed her assessment. She felt closer to him than ever before.
Something told her she was not alone in her feelings when, rather than take her elbow for Side-Along, he drew her into his arms and kissed the tip of her nose. She slid her hands along his chest and returned the favour to his lips. His arms tightened around her.
After their lips parted, he arched one dark eyebrow and asked, "Has anyone else named their children after me?"
"Oh, yes ... hundreds have," she said, fighting to keep the smile from her face. "For several years after the war, Severus topped the list of most popular wizard baby names."
"You cannot be serious."
The smile won at last. "You're right...I made that last bit up," she confessed, squealing when he pinched her bottom in revenge. "But I should probably warn you about Harry's other son."
"Don't tell me..."
"James Sirius Potter."
He winced.
"I believe he'll be starting Hogwarts in a few years," she said.
"Not another one," he said, disdain mingling with resignation.
Rather than comment, she patted his shoulder and then spun, Disapparating them both with a gentle pop.
Many thanks to little_beloved and Karelia for their beta of this chapter!
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Already loving this, do tense! Can't wait to find out more about Argilist and Snape!!
Our reactions to threats may differ, but let me assure you, I take it quite personally when something of mine is threatened. His gaze travelled over her face, his expression almost desperate.
Mine, she thought. The term should have annoyed her, should have had her rebelling at the very notion. She was her own woman, strong and independent. Possessive men had never held any appeal for her. But somehow, this was differentthis man made it different. Where she was independent, he was autonomous to the point of being a recluse. He didnt appear to need or want anyone. What could it mean that hed claimed her, of all people?
Have I made myself perfectly clear? he asked, interrupting her train of thought.
Perfectly. Unlike earlier, her smile was genuine.
He released her arms, cradling her face with both hands. This time, he didnt bother to glance at the open door. He kissed her without hesitation, without concern as to who might see. His lips were greedy, his mouth covetous, and she responded with a hunger that matched his, clinging to his warmth far longer than wisdom would have allowed. Through the haze of passion, her thoughts once again returned to her earlier quandary, but she no longer cared whether he considered her his girlfriend, his lover, or something else entirely. The need for such description had passed.
She was, quite simply, his.
Absolutely the sexiest ending to a fan fiction chapter EVER!!!!!!!!
That was amazing! The dialogue just crackled with energy & wit & snark. Loved reading this fic so much. Has become a favourite & hope you continue to write. Well done!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. I haven't written fanfic in ages, but I will ALWAYS love it (and defend it to the death, LOL). Thank you for reading my story and leaving lovely reviews. I've been writing original fiction, but I'm currently taking a break after getting chewed up and spit out by the publishing world. ;-) I can't tell you how nice it is to receive a reminder of why I loved writing in the first place. xoxo
Still reading but just had to stop to say, this story is wonderful! Enjoying it so much & happy there's still more to read.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww ... thank you so much for taking a break to let me know you're enjoying it! xoxo
Love, love, love this story!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Awesome - I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading, and thanks especially for leaving a review to let me know you liked it. xoxox
I finally finished reading this story! Wow! It been awhile but it was wonderful and truly enjoyable. I loved your characterizations of Snape and Hermione. They were perfect! Thank you so, so much for sharing your talents with the rest of us! Wonderful!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Yay - I'm so glad you finished it. Thank you so much for reading this story and for leaving such a lovely review. I'm pleased you enjoyed it! xoxox
Absolutely wonderful! Thank you for devoting your time to writing. This was a masterful work. I know it's fanfiction. My husband often tells me to read something written by a REAL writer. I wish he understoon what your writing proves... this is REAL and REALLY GREAT writing! It's special because it's done with love and community. And your efforts are appreciated. I'm sorry if you got negative reviews - because, honestly, you diserve great praise for not only sticking with it but creating something so beautiful. You made me feel for these characters. I love the way you write. I've read quite a bit - I've got a Masters in Literature. I've read what everyone considers to be the best literary works. Yet, it astounds me that so many people don't appreciate what fanfiction writers create. You bring that world alive for me, and you give characters like Snape a chance to breathe free and LOVE. THANK YOU!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thanks so much for saying this. I hate to see fanfiction writers maligned, although I understand some of the criticism. I've read some truly awful fanfics (and written some, too, LOL!), but the idea that ALL fanfic writers are hacks is just silly. I haven't written fanfic in several years, but I can tell you that my process didn't change when I moved to original fic. If anything, fanfic took more skill (or at least a different skill set), because I was forced to stay within the constraints of the world and characters someone else had established. (It's one of the reasons I prefer writing original fics now - there are no rules or boundaries!)Thank you for defending fanfic, and for reading fanfic, and for dishing out such lovely praise. You're the best!! xoxo
THis is one of the most awesome stories I've read so far. Thank you for writing. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I was just so engrossed in the story. But had I done so, they would have been effusive,glowing reviews telling you that each twist and turn has kept me at the edge of my seat. THANK YOU!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Being engrossed in the story is probably the biggest compliment any reader can give to a writer, so THANK YOU, dear
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
, for letting yourself get swept into the action. I'm so glad you've been enjoying it, and I'm glad it's kept you guessing!Thank you very much for this lovely review. :-)
I love this story and i love your Snape!!! I am sure I will read this one again!! I think I hve read this twice and I can not remember leaving a review!! wonderful great work!!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww ... thank you so much, deedeebug! I'm rather fond of this story and this Snape, too. ;-) Thanks for reading!!
Heard of this story for ages. It. Ever read it. It's quite compelling. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thanks so much for giving this story a shot! There are soooooo many things I'd change if I ever had an extra month (or six) to re-edit it. But it's also fun to see how the writing changed (and improved, mostly) as the story progressed. But still, I cringe at the first half ...And if THAT isn't a resounding endorsement, I don't know what is! Now we see why I'm not in sales or marketing. :-)Thanks for the review!
This was a fantastic Fan Fiction, well put together, long enough to have a perfect story-line yet not long enough to be incredibly boring. I hope to read more of you work sometime.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you liked the story -- and I'm glad it hit the sweet spot as far as length for you. Thanks so much for reading it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you liked the story -- and I'm glad it hit the sweet spot as far as length for you. Thanks so much for reading it!
Wonderful story so far, I'm quite enjoying it. Great job!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it ... it's always so nice to receive reviews on a story that's been around for awhile. Thanks for reading!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it ... it's always so nice to receive reviews on a story that's been around for awhile. Thanks for reading!
Amazing! I like drunk Hermione. She's rather humourous!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I had a lot of fun imagining that scene. Thanks so much for the review!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I had a lot of fun imagining that scene. Thanks so much for the review!
Interesting first chapter, I rather enjoyed it! I love that you paired Draco with Luna, that is defintely a pair I haven't seen very often at all! Your description of the surroundings was fantastic as was the dialogue. I can't wait to get to the next chapter. Severus was always my favorite. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
He's my favorite, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the pairing of Draco and Luna; it was fun to imagine them together. Thanks so much for reading the story and leaving reviews. I appreciate it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
He's my favorite, as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the pairing of Draco and Luna; it was fun to imagine them together. Thanks so much for reading the story and leaving reviews. I appreciate it!
I really loved this chapter!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm glad! Thanks for being patient with Snape's arrival ... hopefully it was worth the wait. ;-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
I'm glad! Thanks for being patient with Snape's arrival ... hopefully it was worth the wait. ;-)
What a superb piece of writing, your Hermione and Severus in particular are so well written. I've read it all in one go, though I think I may have read the begining before, when it wasn't finished. Very satisying, I know I shall be reading it again. Thanks
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
What lovely praise - thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and leave a review. I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
What lovely praise - thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and leave a review. I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
I started reading this not long after you started posting.....then I stopped reading fan fics for a while. I remembered how much I liked this one, and was happy to see that it was finished, so I just read the whole thing in one sitting. I cannot believe this is your first fic! I've been reading HP fan fiction for YEARS and this is one of my favorites. You write Snape so well! That's no easy feat. Thanks for an amazing story!
I cant believe that was your first attempt at a fic. it was excellent! I thouroughly enjoyed it. !
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
Aww, thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :-)
First, let me apologise if I have not reviewed before..I simply cannot remember! I have as of now read this lovely story three times and it is like putting on a wonderful pair of slippers. After reading the MOST OCC Severus Snape story EVER I had to read one that would help me wash my brain to remove the wierdness of that story. I chose "A Murder of Crows" and I am glad I did!! Wonderful story...I would NEVER have thought this was a forst attempt!!! Well done! Hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
You are too sweet! Thank you so much for leaving this lovely review. I can't tell you how much it means to me, especially since I received some very bizarre reviews on this story (all from one reader) yesterday at a different archive. Everyone is entitled to their opinions, of course, but reviews like this REALLY help me shrug off the other ones. I am SO glad you left me this review. Thanks for reading, dee!!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I read the other reviews,you put it mildly "it" being the MANY reviews....wow!!! I think the reviewer liked the story over all...boy I have read many,many stories and have never seen anything like that on a review page!! A great story Severus and Hermione are in character the flow was great!! Don't let the bizarre reviews get you down!!! Hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of A Murder of Crows)
You are too sweet! Thank you so much for leaving this lovely review. I can't tell you how much it means to me, especially since I received some very bizarre reviews on this story (all from one reader) yesterday at a different archive. Everyone is entitled to their opinions, of course, but reviews like this REALLY help me shrug off the other ones. I am SO glad you left me this review. Thanks for reading, dee!!!
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
I read the other reviews,you put it mildly "it" being the MANY reviews....wow!!! I think the reviewer liked the story over all...boy I have read many,many stories and have never seen anything like that on a review page!! A great story Severus and Hermione are in character the flow was great!! Don't let the bizarre reviews get you down!!! Hugs~dee
Okay, I am always wordy, but this might be a whopper. And disjointed because it has been a long day, and being tired might make me ramble more than usual. As just evidenced, LOL.
This may well be one of the best epilogues that I have ever read. Frequently, they either feel like they are just extra junk, not needed in the story. Or characters that were once strong and serious become all mushy and unlike their former selves. Or they try to cover the next fifty years in one thousand words, and in doing so, diminsh their importance. Not a single one of those things happened here. And epilogue should enhance a story, not drag it down, and that is exactly what happened here. Perfection.
I think that you could have killed Hermione and Snape off and I wouldn't have cared because I was so joyful about Sandy and Neville. I had sort of forgotten about both of them, and since I loved both of their characters, why not let them be happy together? Yay!
What a time for Luna's baby to decide to make his appearance. I loved that Hermione considered the fact that Severus may have planned this to get out of his speech.
Let's see ... oh yes, Ron ended up with the pretty-eyed girl. I was happy to see everyone happy. And you made all of that happen without any of it seeming forced. Things just naturally fell into place for everyone.
As for Severus and Hermione, I have loved their interactions-both good and bad-throughout, but I think that this ending scene, where he asks her to marry him, just might be my favorite. Your Severus was perfect to me because he was serious and sincere in the sentiment, but he didn't turn all lovesick and gooey. And Hermione continued to tease him just like always. Their banter has always been fabulous, and this was no different. I loved her taunting him with "old man", and then later him capitulating and calling himself old man. They are adorable in spite of Severus' wish to the contrary.
Okay, I could go on and on, but surely there is a cap on how long a review can go. Although if I haven't reached it in this point of my reading career, I surely never will.
I have very much enjoyed conversing with you through review and responses. I feel like I owe authors a review, not because they demand it, but because they have spent so much time and effort, and poured their heart into something for which they will get minimal recognition and no money. If I had to pay, even a penny, for every hour I have spent reading fanfic over the last few years, I would owe a ton of money. I can't even imagine. I also don't feel like authors are required to respond to review, but I always think it is lovely when they do. I have always wished as I was reading through books, that I could tell the author the things I loved and the things that didn't work for me, or be able to get insight into their reasons for making a literary choice etc. What a delight to be able to do so in fanfic!
I can't believe I waited so long to finish this thing! Truly one of the best I have read in a long time. And I've read a lot. I hope you continue to write. I have read "All You Need is Love," and recall being very amused by it. Perhaps I shall go back and reread since I don't remember much of it, and I wasn't reviewing at the time I read it *listens to you groan over an inbox full of more reviews* :)
Okay, I'll shut up now. You are super talented and I really hope you continue to write. Thanks for entertaining me over the last week!
What a lovely chapter. I was worried that the first time between Draco and Hermione would be more awkward than it was. I mean, it was sufficiently awkward for reality sake, but it could have been worse. I think in the end, his family may be better off without Lucius.
I think maybe Hermione was wise in keeping her memory of the day prior, for the exact reason she mentions.
Poor Severus can't come up with a name for his ... woman. How about the love of his life. That goes quite well with a happy ending, I think.
Off to the epilogue ...
Yay! If Hermione had died, she would have simply died. But it would have completely killed Severus. He would never recover from losing love number two.
I loved that he was under an unbreakable vow. It certainly explains the way he handled some things throughout.
So good that Hermione isn't held responsible for her activity in the lab at Arglist. A happy ending may well be in sight.
Sadly, I must be off to bed (and hopefully finish tomorrow), and I hope that Hermione and Severus do the same.
I know I am not quite at the end yet, but I love when stories go out on top, strong all the way to the end. Barring any unforseen awfulness in the next two chapters, I'd say this one is going to do just that. So excited for the conclusion!
If she had only trusted him, they could be celebrating now. I have no doubt that she will be okay, because you wouldn't bring us this far, only to kill her off, but still, I am nervous.
Good for Severus to be calm and cool (on the outside, anyway) and force her to see the good memories.
And speaking of memories, did I understand that hers were ruined? I was reading so fast by the end that I may have misread that, though. What will she do without them? Not that I think those are pleasant memories that she would want back, but I hope there is no damage from all of their removal. And I suppose that renders them completely unusable, so no worries about someone trying to steal them from her.
I must know more!!!
Okay, I retract my statement from the last chapter in which I said that Hermione was going to kill Severus. Because he will surely kill her first. What was she thinking?!?! I do understand what was at stake if he were on the wrong side, but how furious and hurt is Severus going to be that she doesn't trust him ... again. That is if they make it out of the situation in one piece. Not that I doubt for a minute that Severus could take Lucius with minimal effort, but how is he going to proceed with the plan, if he has to rescue her?!? Stupid girl!
Boy, Hermione is a persistant little thing. She really should have removed the memories over two days time, but I can't fault her for wanting it over and done with.
What is Severus doing to Hermione? I mean I know literally what he is doing, and you can't blame him for not telling her because she would surely protest. But, she is going to kill him, regardless.
“Remember the mare.”
That was the smartest thing he could have said to her. Sill ... she is going to kill him.