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Ladder
ubiquirk912 Reviews | 7.45/10 (912 Ratings, 0 Likes, 311 Favorites )
Victory did not make life perfect, and two years on, the shock of surviving the war is finally starting to wear off. Waking to everyday realities, Hermione and Severus discover the delights and pains of living - all prompted by a ladder. HG/SS eventually, but HG/RW and SS/NT for the first bit. Multiple award winner.
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ubiquirk
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I am a longtime fanfic fanatic, having entered the realm via Buffydom. One day I read a Willow/Severus crossover and I was hooked – on Snape that is! He's been in every HP story I've done so far.
I write in multiple fandoms on LJ, esp. BtVS and Firefly. If you're interested in reading my fic for other/crossover fandoms, it can be found at:
http://community.livejournal.com/ubific/
Reviews for Ladder
A well-written story that I enjoyed to the end. Congrats on a job well done!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and found it well written!
Lovely!!! I love this whole story, great work!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked the whole story!
Enjoyed this story thoroughly from beginning to end. This is a story I could read again and then take a cold shower, lol.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the entire story so much that you may reread it! (even with cold showers - wink)
OMG, hats off to you for such dedicated research. I don't think I could have asked those kinds of questions from my husband. I blushed more from your research statement than the story. I hope as I develop stories I will have the ability to research as good as you.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Yes - it was a very interesting discussion to say the least!
A definitely fitting end. Gotta love that you researched this, I would have too. ;D I can't comment on the authenticity since I'm femme but it was definitely another PHWOAR worthy chappie. ::offers chocolate:: Congrats on finishing! :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked the ending and the sex from Severus's POV! (nibbles chocolate)
So glad to see a happy ending, from both sides, on this one-thanks :)
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the way the story ended in these last two chapters!
Nice work in translating your research into this HOT chapter I definitely plan to reread this ff in Snape's POV, and see if I prefer it that way.
Thank you for sharing such a well-written and well-thought out ff.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked the chapter and the story as a whole! Why do I have the feeling more people want to read SS's POV? (grins)
I can't believe this story is over already, I've enjoyed it from the very beginning to the end - thank you so much for giving us a wonderful story to read!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked the story from beginning to end!
Nice story ubiquirk!
It is true that reading each chapter from the both perspectives sometimes is too much. It feels like here is not enough new information in the 2nd part. Perhaps you could keep the two different viewpoints, but with only partial overlap of the timeframes ? This way each chapter advances a little more in time, like you have your two feet on different steps of the ladder, then you step up with one foot, but the other foot keeps on the same step. So the next chapter goes back a little in time, and then expands the story beyond the previous chapter's end.
Anyway please write more stories !
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story enough to read all 27 chapters! And the use of alternating POV here is purposeful - if you take a look at my other work, I know how to write other types of POVs. The joy in this is to explore the differences between the chapters, but it may not be for everyone.
Thank you for an awesome update and wonderful story.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the story!
First off, thanks so much for the story. It was truly fun.
In ref. to reading the story only from one of the POV's ... this was the only fault I found with "Ladder". The repetition. It would get a little ho-hum. I think it's a great style, but something 'more' has to happen to seperate the two sides, to make both sides of the story more interesting. A surprise or two thrown in that only one character experiences without it being repeated.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so much!
And the use of alternating POV with overlap is purposeful. The joy in this is to explore the differences between the chapters, teh differences between the characters, but it may not be everyone's cuppa.
It's over? This was such an amazing story. One of my absolute favorites on this site. I loved it. The ending was very good but I can't help wanting to know about their lives in the future. Well I can't wait for some more stuff from you! Thanks for sharing this story with us!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story so much! The waking up scenes at the end of these last 2 chapters foreshadow their lives!
Much as I want to beg for more, this is pretty much a perfect point to end with.
More soon? It's all very well saying that, but I did see that this is marked complete. Call it a knee-jerk!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed the story and think that it ends well!
I'm not a man, but I thought Severus' pov concerning sex was believable. It sounded right to this lowly female. Do you have a link to the Quill and Parchment Awards? I'd vote for you. I love the set up and form of this story. Are there any more chapter coming? an epilogue?
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed the chapter and the sex from SS's POV! The little morning scenes were a kind of epilogue - a hint of their life to come.
The link is: http://quilltoparchment.com/nominee.html
Lots of great stories!
If I had to try and decide which version of this scene was hotter, I'd be thinking for a very long time. Damn, they're both extremely hot! And the wake-up scene is just the perfect last bit of resolution.
I like the alternating POV. (Shocking, I know.) But if you decide to post versions with just one or just the other, it would be interesting to see what it's like to experience the story that way.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed both of these last 2 chpaters so much and found them hot! The little morning scenes were a foreshadoing of their life via symbolism - glad it worked for you!
It's so good to hear you liked the alternating POV. I'm going to copy/paste together the other sometime soon.
An absolutely delightful read... Though these last two chapters completely contradicted my previous assertion. Severus' perspective was every bit as delicious as Hermione's; and while it felt complementary, the intensity of his perception in this part didn't overwhelm those Hermione displayed in her rung. Their respective emotions simply resonated throughout their individual point of view.
A tiny, minute typo that slipped through - 'her hips flair nicely,' when they should 'flare.' ;-)
Ooh, and the culmination of the chapter made for an exquisite ending to the story as a whole.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much! I'm also glad that you found both POVs equally compelling - at least for these last 2 chapters. Thanks for the catch!
Fabulous! Brava! You're the best!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!
Oh please tell me it's not over...this has been one of the best stories I've ever read. Have you thought about a epilogue??? One POV...maybe? Just hate to see this all end. Thanks
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed the story so much! The little morning scenes were a kind of epilogue - a foreshadoing of their life.
I've liked it from beginning to end.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and the story as a whole!
A very satisfying conclusion to a wonderful tale!
I must admit to being a bit saddened that it's over, but I look forward to your next project!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm amazingly glad you liked it and found it satisfying! And hopefully on a few different levels!
Well worth the wait. That was a beautiful scene, really captures the heat between the two....and the best part of all is I get to read it again from Snape's POV next. God, I love this story!!!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the chapter and found it full of heat! Yes - SS is coming up next!
He is beautiful in that unguarded moment when he comes.Flawless, intricate and beautiful!! So very much worth the wait, my dear.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed the chapter and that line! And it's also good to hear that you found it worth the wait!
OMG that was the hottest scene Ive ever read I rthink. Wow. Perfection!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and found it hot!
Yay a bed is coming! Hehe. Great chapter as always.
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and the part about the bed! (grins)
Woo-Hoo! Go Hermione!!! *YAY* GREAT Chapter!
Response from ubiquirk (Author of Ladder)
Thanks! I'm so very glad you liked the chapter and HG's decision and actions!
And thanks again for the lovely banner!