seeing big action in future chapters! thank for writing this fanfic...

love the various scenes!!! 

loving the story: what a wonderful plot... don't I read this fanifc before...

I like this, but I will admit that I'm very confused about all the various brands and tattoos...

So if it wasn't a Horcrux, then what was it? Another great chapter, more soon please!

Ok then, if whatever he pressed over her heart wasn't a Horcrux, what was it??  I'm ding to find out...Great chapter, sore soon?  Cheers!

So complicatedly wonderful.  I love the feelings of confusion  and turmoil that this fic brings up in me.  Your writing is amazing and I love hoe you keep me guessing.

Another good chapter, I'm not sure who is more distressed Hermione or Severus.  Guess I'll have to stay tuned and find out.  Very enjoyable.

more more more..... I really like it, I really like it.. more more more... ;) hehe..

Hm.  I love this story, but I'm spending a lot of time very unsure as to what is going on.  The diary required Ginny as sacrifice, the cup McGonagall (weep!), the ring Dumbledore, the locket Molly, the snake Hagrid, the scar possibly both Severus and Hermione- though this is apparently under debate.  The diadem is yet to be discovered?  The arithmancy bit was very cool, but parts of it left me trailing in the wind.  I suppose it would, since I'm not Hermione Granger.  Anyways.  This is extremely cool, but my biggest piece of advice would be to eschew obfuscation, maybe spend a little more time making things nice and obvious for dunderheads like me.  :)

wow, thats a powerful chapter,  What will severus do next.

turning the vow into a compulsion that gives him an out if Harry fails, very clever!

I hope the stove still works after it's traumatic experience!

I'm afraid I really don't understand what's going on.  will this be more thoroughly explained later?

Interesting chapter with all the vows and Severus taking the vow with Lily. I loved the little thought snippets he was having like that mind and mine - made it more interesting to hear his unspoken thought - good

Interesting chapter - the book and your description of what it is is physically doing is like a little comic relief in this tense situation. So much more.... Oh do please tell - cannot wait for the next chapter.

I think his gratitude means more to Hermione than a thousand house points.

I loved the idea of the vow between Severus and Lily!  It really is unusual and workable to prove Severus's intent.

OMG, Voldemort and Wormtail were standing right outside their door! Gives me the willies just thinking about it.

So she's figured out a way around two of the sacrifices. Well done, HG. Now what would she need Wormtail for, I wonder?

oh my god, what a place to be left hanging, excellent story

Wow the old man finally speaks, never really understood the sleeping portraite guess he was faking it so he wouldnt have to answer any questions.

So these people are all going to die to destroy the horcruxes.  Not sure I like that.  The writtigs brilliant but still a bit above me head :) I'm trying my best to follow along.

So these people are all going to die to destroy the horcruxes.  Not sure I like that.  The writtigs brilliant but still a bit above me head :) I'm trying my best to follow along.

Okay Im lost an usual, but I nejoyed their interlude if thats what it was LOL.  It very abstract.

wheeww, very involved.  I commend your mind in working all tis out.  Very entertaining.