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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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Oh dear. There is so much adjusting. Oliver is the only new husband who is not being a complete prat to his new wife.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep, Oliver has the attitude, "Ah well, can't chage it, so may as well enjoy it!"
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep, Oliver has the attitude, "Ah well, can't chage it, so may as well enjoy it!"
Poor Ginny.I would not want to be the one to explain that to her mother!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! No, Molly will be upset, and understandably so.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! No, Molly will be upset, and understandably so.
"Black" wine! Silly Hermione for not thinking about something that had been in the Black house for so ling before she opened the bottle.Must go see what happens next!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep, she wasn't even thinking of that!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep, she wasn't even thinking of that!
Oooohhh, Sneaky Luna! I just know who she was hoping for!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Teehee! She's not in Ravenclaw for nothing! teehee
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Teehee! She's not in Ravenclaw for nothing! teehee
I'm glad Harry is going to be leaving for Italy for a month. It'll be good for him to separate himself and work things out in his head.
Great update, and I hope the next chapter comes quick.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Yes, he will heal in Italy. ;-) I am almost finished with the next one now.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Yes, he will heal in Italy. ;-) I am almost finished with the next one now.
poor harry! will you have him come out of the closet or ...? loving this story, thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! No, he won't be coming out, but I do have something in store for him! ;-) So glad you're enjoying it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! No, he won't be coming out, but I do have something in store for him! ;-) So glad you're enjoying it!
Wow, what a difference betewwn the two couples.Silly Ron, he never quite gets that his actions have consequenses.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL True! Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL True! Thanks!
I think my favorite part in this chapter was Neville and Hermione's conversation. Neville's decision to not torment Snape is exactly how I would picture it in canon...and it was a nice twist to see Hermione want to gossip about Snape, usually she's the one who opts not to. Lovely chapter, looking forward to the update and hopefully more Snape and Hermione interaction--not even the lemony variety.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! That's the way I see it too with Neville. Right, I think it was more of wanting to know her husband a little better, and being naughty in the process. Yep, I am almost done with the next, and there is a lot of SS/HG interaction!
So Hermione has a little werewolf on her hand - and her husband just happens to have a dap hand with the woolfsbane potion! I look forward to negotiations on that one. And poor Harry - I hope someone turns up and shag him silly soon. he sounds like he could need it.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep... she'll come to that realization quickly! ;-) Oh, I have big plans for Harry!
Hmm, suddenly I think Ginny and Oliver are the ones who'll need counciling after the first month.
Great chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
*Raises eyebrow* Oh, really? ;-) Why is that?Thanks, my dear!
Heh. Ron's such an idiot.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Tee hee! You gotta love Ron!
I love this story..I really enjoy stories that play along with all the other couplde IE SS/HG, RW/?? HP/?? GW/??..Those are the ones that really excite me,lol.I wait on pins and needles daily for this story! its that good!Can't wait til the next update.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! ME too! As long as it's SS/HG! ;-)Glad you're liking it so much! I am almost finished with the next chapter!
*gasps for breath from laughing* Oliver and the little pinky... HILARIOUS! Thanks for the speedy update! I really enjoyed this.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks GG! LOL! I am so happy you enjoyed!
Oh, I do like this story. :) The reactions of all of them feels so right. Of course Severus and Ron are so angry! They would be. Heck, I'm surprised that Oliver was so understandable, but he just got another woman in his bed for a year. LOL! So convenient. ;) And Harry... poor Harry.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks my dear! So glad you understand the reactions and feelings! LOL Too right, it is convenient! Don't worry, Harry will be okay! ;-)
Thank you so much for the update. :-) Good luck to Hermione if she thinks she can make Severus care with showering him with kindness. I would predict that is one sure way to get your hart and selfesteem broken. She should absolutely treat him with respect and kindness, but otherwise keep her distance, she will never get an ounce of respect from Severus by behaving like a doormat, quite the opposite I would presume. Severus is to locked up in the idea of Lily being the perfect saint he should have had to ever find anyone kind enough, or pretty enough to take her place. Until he wakes up and realise that Lily was a young girl of flesh and blood who loved someone else, not him, and did so more than willingly, no woman will stand a chance. Nor does anyone deserve to live in the shadow of a dead "saint". Ginnys way of handling Olivers groupies was marvellous and the pinky-trick was fantastic. It also look like Oliver knows just the way to make is wife shut up. They might not love eachother, yet, but at least they agree to find some pleassure from the situation. For Ron, I stand by me saying that he behaves like a brat who has lost his toy, even more so after this chapter. He knew the charm wouldn't pic him?? That is obviously a knowlegde he forgot to share with Hermione. Lusting after Luna while being engaged to his so called love also seems to slip his mind. And when meeting Hermione at the ministry he sure had to prove once more that what bothers him the most is that Hermione slept with someone else before him, making one think that what really nags him is that he didn't get first dib. I don't doubt that he at some level love Hermione, but not as a husband should love his wife, and the worse part is that he knows so him self, but in typical Ron-manners he has set his mind on something and react with tantrums and childish and hurtful words towards whoever he feels have stepped on his toes. Your writing is as usual exellent and you have the caracters very well portraited. We don't know to much about Oliver so you have pretty free range there, and so far you have done a exellent job with him. I look forward to see how you will let the other caracters develop, update again soon (and find some happiness for Harry too, someone special who makes him see that loosing Ginny was a blessing in disguise.)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I dont think being kind equals being a doormat. She definitley won't just sit there and let him be mean to her, but she can try to talk to him more and get to know him better. Severus doesn't think Lily is a perfect saint, she is someone that he loved who died very young. I don't want to say more on that, because it's explained in the next chapter.Glad you enjoyed Ginny! Ron didn't know Hermione would do the charm, so he really had no say whatsoever in the matter. Rons life has turned upside down through no fault of his own. He did find Luna attractive, but he would not have acted on it while he was with Hermione. I have been married seven years, and I do find other men attractive, but I would never act on it. Not so much that Hermioe slept with Severus, although that DID bother him, but the fact that she was supposed to be for him and (in his eyes) the fact that she had to marry someone other than him didn't seem to bother her at all. Thanks for the review! Don't worry, I have plans for our Harry!
Nice to see the tangled web as it's woven... good job
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
I am really enjoying this story--everything about it has been a surprise! Poor guys. They've all suffered quite a shock, but I bet you sweeten things up for everyone by the end. Great work!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! They have suffered a shock! I do have a sweet tooth! ;-)
yay, lots of severus up next! i look forward to seeing exactly how difficult it will be for hermione to kill him with kindess. i expect he will put up quite the struggle. the little interlude with neville was nice for giving hermione some perspective. i'm enjoying how things are progressing with the other couples, and i think sending harry to italy is brilliant - what better place to recover from a broken heart?!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am so happy you're enjoying my story! Oh, yes, I have plans for Harry in Italy! ;-) Yep, lots of Severus up next.
This is very intriguing. Keep up the awesome work.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much Dragon!
I love how everyone saw that coming with Ron and Hermione. And I love Neville.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! You know how when you are married, or even dating, and you split and then everyone comes to you and says, "I never thought you would last," or some variation of it? That is what I saw there. Glad you enjoyed!
Harry is so full of self pity. not the most attractive "quality". i hope he will be better soon.snape is still a git (anyway, that's how i love him). it seems hermione has her work cut out for her.UPDATE SOON
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Thanks! I have to say though, if I was engaged one day, and then the next not only am I not engaged, but my fiancee is MARRIED to someone else, I would be majorly depressed. ;-) More up soon, I am almost finished with the next chapter!
Yes a great ideal indeed. Get his mind off of all the craziness. And maybe he can find something there that will make him happy. Or someone. It seems that at least Wood and Ginny have sex to look forward to in their marriage. Maybe something will come from that. Ron has been interested in Luna for a little while now. Hmm that's something to basic his relationship on. Now if we can get Severus off the DENIAL train all will be moving right along.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I have big plans for Italy... Ginny and Wood enjoy each other, though Ginny still feel very guilty and hurts for Harry. Yep, Ron has been at least attracted to her, he just needs to work through his hurt feelings. More on Severus next! ;-)
Well, I expect Severus to be the hardest case. What fun it is to read your work!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am so glad you like it! What a wonderful review!
I think Hermione has just found herself a new pet project. All of this is too good ans it's always a pleasure to have a new chapter to read.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks! Yes, she really wants to understand and help her husband! So glad you're enjoying it!
Can't wait for more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! More Up soon!