"Harry decided to just leave her be a while"Harry is an utter moron and this just proves it. I liked the interlude with Hermione & Snape the best. I am all caught up now!!

So I wasnt the only one to guess Draco huh? Too funny. I am glad Luna finally stood up for herself and yelled back at Ron. She should not be his door mat. I am surprised at Hermione for not realizing she is married to a potions master who could certainly make the potion her client needs. She must be overworked to not think of it. I want to read the rest of what you have posted by I am so tired my vision is blurring. I'll be back !

Snape you big emotionally dummy! He is going to make Hermione drag his feelings out of him isnt he? I am rolling my eyes at you Snape. Poor Ginny and all her guilt. I expect it will take her awhile to get over that. Maybe she should set Harry up, that might help?I feel really bad for Luna. Seems like everyone is blaming her. Sex at the prision? Even the author is mean to her! :D

Ha! I am never right in predicting what will happen in stories and LOOKIE I got Ron's oversleeping right. I need a medal or something for that. When Snape commented that he had nothing left inside to love another woman, I may have teared up a bit. That really rang true for me. Well done mystery author.

How lucky Hr is to be in book land where SexGod!Snape can assure she gets the minimal two orgasms of the romance novel.   I almost wish  he had failed. But maybe I'm just jealous. :)

Oh good greif is Ron's nap going to be more than 12 hours? George is a good brother. Im glad Harry & Hermione were able to have a talk, question is will he remember it when he sobers up?Poor Luna who does she lean on in times of stress?

Your Severus is one funny guy: "Trust me, she traded up, Minerva.” All the fangirls agree with you there!

“Azkaban it is then.” That line had me rolling on the floor laughing! I can certainly see why the guys are upset, their choice has been removed. Mawhahahahah

Oh how fun! I liked the banter with the Malfoys & Severus. Too funny that the betrothal owls made them all use profantiy.

I think that is a brilliant idea to have Harry cast the charm for himself. I wonder if it works if you have never met your soul mate? Maybe Harry's true love is a muggle in Italy?

Very steamy and hot,

Wow - exciting chap here. I realy love to read about the developments in the relationships of our four soul-mate couples.

Oh, yes, the heat is definitely on!

I find it very interesting that Oliver chose a ring with the infinity symbol on it. He didn't even seem to know. . .

I think that although right now they all think it's just gonna be a one-year thing, they're all going to end up perfectly happy. I mean, Oliver buys a ring for Ginny, Ron and Luna are going to Ireland together (and sleep in the same roon as they do!), and Severus obviously loves Hermione (and having sex with her).

Can't wait for the next chapter! This one was wonderful!

~Katie

wow, great chapter!  that final scene sizzled!  of course severus couldn't let a challenge like that go by!  and, i can't wait for further misunderstandings and revelations in the harry/cho matter.  honestly, i really liked everything that happened to all of the couples in this chapter.  i am really enjoying how you are moving the story along - very nice pacing. 

steamy

Oh, finally... how loevely for them. I must admit the swichting between the four couples is a bit much for me to keep straight. But I really do enjoy it.

I like the way the Hermione and Luna manipulate their men to get what they want.  The Great Orgasm Gauntlet that Hermione threw to Severus was brilliant!  He always was motivated by a need to prove himself.  

Great heat between Harry and Cho, and so glad to see Oliver and Ginny "marking their territory."

Brilliant, simply brilliant!  I chortled my way through this chapter.

Oh my, yes--the heat is DEFINITELY on!  Now, will they have any regrets in the morning?

And Harry and Cho are terrific.  I'm so glad you did that.

Ron and Luna, yes!  Ginny and Oliver, yes!

I love your pairings and I love reading about them.

And every time I come to this story I notice something that I've never mentioned before--your first chapter title, "Lunacy," is spot-on brilliant!

Ah, Harry, Harry, hot Harry! It seems like we have four couples to keep up with now. Brilliant!

However, as hot as Harry can get, Severus is definitely hotter! Oh, yes... hmm, yummy, yummy Severus! :D

I really like the way the story progress. It seems like these couple are moving on nicely. Even Ron and Severus who talked about divorce in last chapter.

Keep it coming! (or them, which ever suit better ;))

~fans self~LOLI'm really enjoying Harry and Cho in this story. All the others, too, but yeah, I like what's going on here.

as usual, this is GREAT!about time hermione and severus became closer.and i must say the thought of a pupil actually reading a romance novel during potion is very funny: snape must be losing his touch if he cannot scare the students enough to keep them in line.

I love it!!  If only, if only--  now if you can just get Harry to perform the charm and have it pick Cho.  Heehee  just a thought.

Nothing like a spot of jealousy to get Ron and Oliver with the program. Luna is subtle on a whole other level--Ron is way outclassed. I like the Harry/Cho interaction, but I have a feeling she'll make him pay for not telling her sooner about his broken engagement. And Hermione might just have taken the right approach with Severus for a change.

This is hard to review a story like yours because it's just like there are 4 at the same time. So I decide to write my impressions after each part which I think will reveals more acurately my feelings at the moment. So here we go :Part 1 : Harry and ChoOyez Oyez People : Great Knight Harry with shining armor has come to save damsels in danger.Wow the end of that part was rather much unexpected but very much apreciated. I just wonder if she will come up to the good conclusions concerning Harry and his "it's been a while for me" thing. That is if she finds a Daily Prophet and read it of course.Part 2 : Oliver and GinnyNow now Oliver aren't we a bit jealous? *evil grin* Strong sense of propriety it seems too. Part 3 : Ron and LunaSo clever Luna. I always knew it's not that hard to manipulate boys but she's making an art of it. Maybe she even asked Stanly to play his part.Part 4 : Severus and HermioneIt's good you saved the best for the end. And maybe I should bring a book to someone of my knowing too.