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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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::high-pitched SQUEE::
Three cheers for progress! Well, four rather…
Great chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! WooHoo! Glad you enjoyed!
Oh my! First of all, thank you so much for the update, seccond, I am sure that the sorting hat was totally wrong about both Luna and Hermione. If anyone belonged in Slytherin it would be those two, especially Luna, her making Ron demanding just what she wants him to was so brilliantly done I almost gaped in awe. That girl has a whole lot more about her than what I first thought. I hadn't thougth it possible, but I am starting to care just as much about Luna/Ron as I do Hermione/Severus, and that is saying quite a bit. You do this pairings so brilliantly and at the same time so differently, I am so impressed. I don't think all authors would have manage to do the same. The plot is the same; happy ending for all of them, but you keep them so in cannon with regards to personality, at the same time let them grow up way past where JKR left them, and we can all see the different problems each pair has to work through to reach a happy ending! Hermiones challenge towards Severus about orgasms, fantastic, not only a total trill to read, but what an effective metode; I don't think any man with an unce of selfrespect (and interest in women:-)) could have not raised to the challenge, and to challenge the king of Slytherin.... I can't wait to read the next update, I do so look forward for Lunas fieldtrip:-)) (I am almost sad to only being able to give you 5 stars, this chapter had deserved at least six:-))
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed! Luna knows what she's doing all right, but Hermione didn't start out with that in mind. She was surprised by his reaction, but happily so! THanks so much, I am glad you like my pairings and the way things are going. Right, Hermione challenged his 'honor,' and he had to defend it! ;D More up soon!
Ha! Harry/Cho. Never thought I'd read that and go 'hey, where's she going, come baaaaaaack! WAH!' I guess I learn something new every day.
Oliver keeps insisting it's only for one year and then he picks out something with the infinity symbol on it. HA again! Definitely some subconscious work getting into play there. I would have thought Ginny would point it out, but either she doesn't put that much thought to the symbol beyond 'oh infinity, how ironic' or her subconsciense is playing tricks too and forbidding her to do it. Or she's secretly pleased with the symbolism. :p I love that he got so jealous though.
Luna is such a smart girl. She's really doing miracles with total honesty. Saying that she hadn't asked him because she didn't think he would want to go or even care was a stroke of genius. I think Ron's right though, he lost control of the conversation somehow, but the thing with Luna is you're never quite sure she's even doing it on purpose. I love Luna.
Severus said 'my dear'! HA times three! And they had proper sex at last. He is so caught. And while it's true that she didn't really give him any signals of being interested either, I'd still say he was more at fault for shutting her out so completely after the first time.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad I could make you care about HP/CC--for this chapter at least! Teehee!
Oliver suddenly felt very posssessive of Ginny, something he has never felt for a woman before. Ginny is still wondering if he understood the symbol or not. LOL
Right, she just says and acts exactly the way she thinks--all the while knowing how Ron is likely to react.
YEs, finally! Yes, and he is also the more experienced of the two.
Clever girls! it seems they are finally learning hoe to get around their stubborn husbands, escpecially Luna. Good for them!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying the cleverness! LOL
Wow! The heat is on all over! Harry/Cho sure flared up hot! Ron was pretty darn jealous and so was Oliver for a couple of guys that say they're only going to stay married for a year. And Severus and Hermione? ::Fans self::
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
!!! Yeah, lust just took them over! Uh huh--here I say actions speak louder than words. Glad you enjoyed SS/HG!
Whoa, I'm now loving the couples. Harry and Cho going at it like that and then her explosive rant - terrific. Loved how Oliver sudenly got all possesive when Ginny's been having to deal with all his groupies. Dupe! And Ron, how thick can you go! Poor Luna matched to suck a wet sap. He simply is too clueless. And GO Snape! that was Hot! Woo hooo!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks bea! Glad you are loving things now!!! (Gotta have faith ;D)
Yep, now he can see how she feels!
He is clueless for now, but he will clue in at some point!
SO glad you like the SS/HG!!
Woo -hoo! The plot thickens! Harry and Cho - should-a seen it coming but didn't. I love Hermione and Snape - very hot. Great job - can't wait for the next chap!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad you didn't see it--more surprise for you! ;) Glad you liked SS/HG! More up soon!
whoa! that was a pleasant surprise - I had been expecting that S&H would have the hardest time adjusting, but it's probably going to be Ron (the lunkhead). At least Ginny is getting matching wedding bands with Oliver. Too bad Luna didn't get the Italian lingerie from Ginny.... Harry and Cho might do very well, as soon as he quits being such a hardhead. Thanks for the new chapter!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Thanks June. Now--correct me if I'm wrong--but I get the impression that you really do NOT like Ron Weasley? ;D Ginny still has shopping to do... Yep, Harry needs to tell her, but alas, I see angst there.
WOW!The last scene and the scene with Harry and Cho was so decadent and enticing.I see things are moving along nicely for Ron and Ginny and their spouses!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Yep, everything is moving right along!
LOL I loved Ginny and Oliver's tift. Can't wait to read more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I'm so happy you liked it!
Woo-hoo! The heat is onis right! I LOVED how you worked the Snape/Hermione "Orgasm Challenge". That was HOT! I loved this chapter, all our little couples are making progress and Harry and Cho, saw that one coming a mile off- if anyone needed to get laid it was those two, the sexual tension was out-of-control!
Best chapter so far!! 10/10!
Livvy
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you, thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed their little sparring match! ;D Yep, poor Harry and Cho! LOL
well i am caught up in this story and it is getting better with every chapter i cant wait for the next one so now ginny has a ring harry aught to love that lol and poor luna things might just be going her way lol
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! Yep, things are finally starting to look up!
Aw, Severus and Hermione are getting along wonderfully. I love how Ron got so confused with his conversation. Luna is handling him perfectly.
I can't wait for Cho to see Ginny and Oliver together. it's bound to happen.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Yes, Luna wasn't sorted in Ravenclaw for nothing! ;D
Yep, it'll happen all right!
I find Luna with Ron to be quite fun. SS/Hg was hot :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Drox! Glad you are enjoying my Luna and Ron! (Oh, and my SS/HG too!)
Yep, that was hot. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much!
Harry, Harry... maybe you'd better drop a copy of the Prophet under Cho's door, lest she hex you!
Poor Oliver, having to come to grips with the old 'goose and gander' problem! Rings with infinity symbols indeed. Is he daft, subtle, or oblivious? Just because he's an athlete, I don't want to assume the worst.
Ron, however... is a dunce. Talk about running roughshod over the feelings of someone who could put laxatives in your coffee, were she so inclined!
Severus and his tongue, finally being put to good use. Now that's something to celebrate.
Thanks for the update!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks, GG! I think he will avoid her for awhile! ;D
I am going to have to say oblivious at this point--don't worry though, it'll come to him!
LOL Ron is just so confused! He has feelings for Luna, but he really does not want to.
I agree! It's about time Severus used his tongue for something good!
Now, that's more like it, Severus! LOL
Seems like everyone is taking steps forward, albeit some more reluctantly than others. Although, your summary makes me think that more angst is on the way! I love how Luna manipulates Ron into doing what she wants. Such a clever girl.
Looking forward to more, as always!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, sshg! I agree! Go Severus!
I am enjoying Luna and Ron, too! Moreso than I thought I would actually!
Probably be about a week for the next update!
I like George being the voice of reason.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed my George!
What a mess! Evil Luna... Poor Hermione, Ron, Ginny and Harry.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Ha ha! Not evil--influenced by that wine!
Is it Draco? ((hopes))
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Nope, not Draco. Remeber in the first chapter when I said Draco is marrying Pansy? ((Besides, I am NOT a good slash writer...))
i really like it so far, but where's the rest?...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks! More coming soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks! More coming soon!
hehe- killing snape with kidnness...thats going to be interesting. Poor Harry too.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Don't worry, I have plans for Harry! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Don't worry, I have plans for Harry! ;-)
Hmmm, it seems Ron is determined to punish Hermione too, more so than he wants to punish Luna.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yes, but consider, Ron is the one who... suffered? the most. Not only did he lose his fiancee due to a charm she researched and performed, but then he HAD to marry someone that he doesn't want to. Remember, at this point and time, he loves Hermione.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yes, but consider, Ron is the one who... suffered? the most. Not only did he lose his fiancee due to a charm she researched and performed, but then he HAD to marry someone that he doesn't want to. Remember, at this point and time, he loves Hermione.
it seems Severus is determined to punish Hermione for this. When will he see the light?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, at this point, he can't stand her really... And consider, he never really wanted to get married either...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, at this point, he can't stand her really... And consider, he never really wanted to get married either...