Great end to a great tale! :)

What a great story. I'm hooked! I can't wait to see what happens next. Mystery, suspense and romance -- you've tied them together very well. Update soon!

Thank Merlin! I'm NOT a big Drarry fan!!

Ooh. I finally got around to taking a look at the Potter Place challenge stories today, and have thoroughly enjoyed this one, with all the ups and downs for the couples.So glad to see that Severus and Hermione at least seem to be acknowledging their feelings being mutual - and I hope Ron takes Hermione's advice to heart, too. And that Oliver (who seemed the most reasonable at first!) stops being a fool! And that Cho will be okay.

*yeling and taping foot with frustration*. Stupid Harry who has always a bad timing. And Severus who was about to say that he l... Argh, I'm dying. Please somedy help me. Author, Please, have pity in me: that cliffie is going to kill me. Pleeeaaaaaaase.

Oh, dear. I feel so bad for everybody now, except Hermione and Severus. They seem to be realizing the depth of their feelings for each other. I can't wait for the next chapter so I can see how things go with Cho and Ginny. And Luna… I'd like to see what Ron does now. I love this story.

Very Good, More soon Pleease.

Jeannie

Hooray! another chapter.  One glaring error leapt out at me:"She’d been more hurt than Severus had realized. Mostly because she’d felt that he’d abandoned her. Perhaps he had, but it had been unintentional. He’d just never took the time to think about the fact that she’d had no friends there as he’d had, though he now understood that he should have."It should be taken not took, 'he had never taken.'  OR if you wnat to keep took, 'he never took.'   My sister does it all the time.Sorry to nit-pick, I amr eally enjoying your tale!

Oh God! Severus to the rescue!! Oh please, let him able to create the tracking potion, it's horrible what's happening to Cho! *shudders* The thing he'd do when she's unconscious... eww...You know, I think when (not if) Severus succeeded in creating the potion, Harry will look at him with a different eye. Funny how he still able to ask Severus' help when he was sure hate him for killing DD. I hope this situation could end their hatred towards each other. And now I wonder, if Severus decided to leave Wizarding world and live as muggle/in hiding after the war (cause we *know* that he didn't die in the war, oh no no no...), in times like this, would Harry say 'I wish Severus is here'...Makes you wonder, doesn't it? Hmm...Can't wait for more! The suspense is killing me...

Meep!  I hope this is the last big blowout before good things start happening again.Your characters sure know how to hold a grudge.  Oliver really is being piggy about this.  What does he expect Ginny to do if they show up at the Burrow and Harry's there or something?And your Luna's usually so good at reading Ron, why didn't she see his apology?  Scary that of all of the characters, Ron seems most likely to do the right thing next concerning his relationship.I wondered if I'd missed a chapter in the Sev/Hermione plot, but I guess the Malfoy thing was just a red herring?  Fascinating to see the plots converging a little more.  I can't hardly wait for Severus to finally make Hermione realize that he does love her.

yikes!  my biggest sympathies are with Severus and Harry here, as Oliver/Ginny and Ron are just in need of a good sound thumping.  I hope Severus can find Cho quickly.  the tracking device should've been something more hidden - like a pierced belly-button ring.  will Harry tell Hermione that he might love Cho?  thanks for the new chapter!

I'm really enjoying reading about Ginny and Oliver as a couple. I hope things work out for them...and well all the rest of the couples, too!

OMG  Another seat-gripping chappie!  Loads of angsty drama (love it!) and oh, I hope Cho is going to be okay!  I love how you interwove the four different storylines here a bit.  As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow.  A very emotional chapter.  I hope Oliver and Ginny make up.  I think they are such a cute couple.

Uh oh...  What is Cissy up too?  Great chapter.

I'm glad Sev went back and got her.

This chapter was worth the wait.

Oh good Lord... action packed chapter. It seems like Ron finally has the information he needs to move forward. Poor Ginny is just going to make a mess of things, I'm afraid. I can't wait for Severus to explain why he is so distressed.

I'm glad things are starting to work out for everyone. but with ginny slipping out before her husband realises will something almost tragic happen to her? or will she help with the hunt for cho waiting for more

An American wizard is the nervous villain huh? I am rooting for Cho to save herself so that Harry doesn’t have do his “rescuing people” thing again. Possible?

Ginny & Oliver they are still fighting about this issue 3 months later? How do they stay mad that long? Has Ginny finally given up then since she appears to have run away?

Ron telling Hermione that they might be able to be friends again someday felt true to me. He has been betrayed and needs some distance from Hermione before they can repair their friendship. I hope Luna makes him work for her affections.

And Snape was about to admit he cares about Hermione OUT LOUD? Thank goodness Harry burst in and saved him from such a sin. Ha.

Cant wait to see how this turns out! How many chapters left do you think?

Loved it!! Ron's going after Luna, Harry's doing relatively well with Cho (hopefully she'll be alright) and Sev almost admitted to loving Hermione... ahhh.... :)Now if Oliver would just get his head out of his arse they could all live happily ever after LOL

Oh dear, misunderstandings abound .

Jsut as the other guys seem to be coming on, Oliver has to be a great big prat. If he is not careful he will lose Ginny completely.I hope Ron isn't too late with his realisation that he won't lose Luna too.When will Snape be able to tell Hermione how he really feels?!

Wow, all kinds of stuff hitting the fan in this chapter.  It's chockfull of some reeeeeaaaalllyyyyy EVIL cliffhangers!!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  Yikes!

The emotions were very intense in this chapter.  Looking forward to the next intense installment.