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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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beautiful........ really loved it.....
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you so much!
Brava! Brava!Wonderful ending!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you liked it, Mia!
wonderful conclusions my dear you wrapped it all up neatly thank you for a wonderful story
good luck in the voting i am sure you will do fine
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed the ending!
Lovely ending! And I giggled about stud!Dean - was wondering already earlier on in the fic, when Luna and Ginny admitted to Dean being their first one, just what he'd been up to at Hogwarts.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! LOL! I did give hints earlier, but not many commented on it... :D
Wow, this story truly is a gem and I'm soooo glad I finally decided to read it (which I did during the past day, only stopping for eating and going to work). It has everything I love in a good fic: SS/HG plus other couples, Severus turned nice, misunderstandings and make-ups...Really great work!gab
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am glad you decided to read it too! ;-) I love angst too, as long as the ending is happy!
Wonderful ending, a perfect happily ever after. Congratulations on finishing!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! I wanted to make the deadline!
LMAO! OMG Dean! Studly Dean! I love that. :D If Hermione hadn't gone off with Ron and Harry, I'm sure he would have got to her as well. :pA fitting ending. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! LOL! Don't you love studly Dean? Who would've thought? Glad you enjoyed it.
Nice cheerful ending - way to go Severus - and your serial killer was seriously frightening. Great story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Glad the killer was scary! ;-)
a delightful ending to your lovely story. you wrapped it all up very nicely, with a pretty bow. i'm really looking forward to finding out who you are, as i've enjoyed this story very much.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Won't be much longer now...
Aw, it's over! However, very well done! You tied up the loose ends in a lovely manner. I look forward to reading more of your fic!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Glad you liked it!
yay!!!! thank you for the epilogue and last glimpse of all the couples. looking forward to your next!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks June! I do have this little... er big... plot bunnie...
Yeah and cheers for you - good way to end the chapter at the aniversery part. I loved where you took them and indeed they just fit together. Great job.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the party!
Very nice endings for each couple.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you!
if oliver is playing keeper for the harpies...isn't the harpies team girls only??
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Yep, it is... Keep reading, that part's explained.
What a great closing line from Severus! I just love that Dean was such a man back at Hogwarts... that's worth a giggle!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!Studly!Dean!
*claps* Oh, I love it, I love it, I love it!! What a great way to end this story. First, I like the way you start the chapter in George's POV. And Dean!! LOL, that stud! It was hilarious! And oh ho, aren't Severus gloating that Hermione was untouched? I love that part. Hehe.I really like each and every one of the couple's moment together. Ginny and Oliver was really funny, lol, especially the way Mr Weasley was blushing when Ginny said her leaving. LOL. Oh, and Luna was humming Weasley is Our King, but of course! That's a good canon fact that says how Luna had been admiring Ron all this while. Splendid! But hey, you really know how to keep the best for last, eh? I really like the romantic side of Severus in this one. He's making me drool all over my laptop! Lucky, lucky Hermione, lol!I can't wait to find out who you are so I can go check out your other stories. :) Promise me one thing, don't stop writing!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks!So happy you enjoyed it!Glad you liked the George part. I wanted someone watching the couples so we could "see" them all... Gotta love Studly Dean! Smug!Severs!Yep, I always save the best for last! ;-)It won't be long now, only a couple more days... I won't ever stop writing! :D
Very sweet ending. I really enjoyed reading this story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
Sweet, very sweet. I really enjoyed that.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed!
great story! I really enjoyed it - 10/10!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Woo hoo! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!