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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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Well at least Ginny and Oliver seem to be making the best of it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Yep, so far so good!
Hmm. Snarky Sev, Hopeful Hermione, Nice Neville, Hurt Harry, Oversexed Oliver, Grateful Ginny, Loving Luna and Raging Ron...think I've got it so far.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! You most certainly do! *Claps and whistles* Good Job!
Dean is the Man...wonder who else he deflowered?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
~Smirks~ Only you and one other person have picked up on that! ;-)
Poor old Ron , now he has to consummate his marraige in Azbakan to get out, NOT the most romantic of venues.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Right. Not at all. I hurt for Luna!
Oh dear, consummation is going to be a rocky road to travel, isn't it?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, in those situations definitely...
O Goddess of Snark, I worship thee!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you so much! *smiling*
Oops , not a lot of happy punters then. Even Luna is having second thoughts now the wine has worn off.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Right... One of those OPPS! What did I do??
There seems to be numerus stupid people in there. First Cho for not listening to Harry, then Ginny for going out alone in a country with women's predator in the street. You can add Ron for being a prat with Luna. Fortunately, there is our golden couple who's a lot above the others of course. Looking very impatiently for the next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
HA! HA! Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Well, at this point, Cho and Harry are both on guard where personal relationships are concerned as both have been burned. Ginny has only been in Italy a short time, she is likely not even aware that there is a killer amongst them. Ron is still fighting his feelings, but I do think he was a bit nicer, or trying to be at least. Though, George sees right through him... ;-) I have started the next so it shouldn't be too much longer!
I'm really liking the Ron/Luna story, and I'm interested in reading more about Harry/Cho too. I think Oliver and Ginny pretty much have it hashed out, whether they'll admit it or not. As for SEv and HErmione... I don't really know what to think of them. Sev seems pretty laid back about the whole situation since the initial shock, and Hermione almost seems to think that it could be good, but it's like, since she's positive it's going to end in a year, she's not really holding out any "false hope".
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Glad you like my Ron/Luna, though you are one of the few! tee hee! Also, glad you like Harry/Cho! Right, with OW/GW, they are afraid to admit anything until the other does.
Right, with SS/HG, I think its like he is finally getting used to having her about and actually enjoying her, but you're right, she is trying not to read too much into things at this point.
This story is both complex, sweet, and fluffy. I'm really enjoying this, and I am looking forward the wedding. Oliver knows what the symbol means, and he means it, even if he doesn't know it yet.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! (Cute name, btw!) I am glad you're enjoying! Wedding up next, and you're right about Oliver! ;-)
Oh, lovely! I loved all four updates. Yum!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, mia!! Glad you enjoyed!
Luna is very devious but who could argue with the wisdom of the Charm?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Tee hee! Too right you are, mate!
that was absolutely delicious! loving this story and await further developements with bated breath. thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Kim! I have a lot of RL issues going on this week... but I hope to have the next chapter done by this weekend.
Another great chapter with things moving along. Nice chapter title. It seems to work for most of the couples. So glad Ginny and Oliver have mad the ‘ring’ step. I feel warmed by the progress Ron and Luna have both made. I think it’s safe to say that Severus and Hermione have both been feeling the sexual tension. I’m so glad her held her this time. I hope he doesn’t revert to type and do something to make the morning after awkward. So glad he’s going to work on the wolfsbane thing.
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
And I do appreciate that you go in the same order in each chapter; it does help!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! Yep, as of this time, everyone's moving right along... Yes, I think at this point really, all of the couples except Ginny and Oliver were feeling the sexual tension! ;-D
Glad the order helps you!
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
And I do appreciate that you go in the same order in each chapter; it does help!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! Yep, as of this time, everyone's moving right along... Yes, I think at this point really, all of the couples except Ginny and Oliver were feeling the sexual tension! ;-D
Glad the order helps you!
This chapter was hot hot hot. I love Sev and Oliver. Ginny and Oliver are such a cute original idea.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it, and GW/OW!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it, and GW/OW!
Jealous Ron and Sweet Sev. Great chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Glad you enjoyed!
I hope Harry finds a nice Italian girl
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Well... He'll find A GIRL.... ;-D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Well... He'll find A GIRL.... ;-D
I'm starting to like Oliver
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! He's one of those OC's that we don't know a whole lot about, so I have some leway there.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! He's one of those OC's that we don't know a whole lot about, so I have some leway there.
I love Sev! You are doing a great job with him...Sometimes he gets so OOC that I don't even recognize him and it ruins a story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am really trying to keep them all IC...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am really trying to keep them all IC...
That's funny that Ron and Luna ended up in Azkaban. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Isn't that just like Ron?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Isn't that just like Ron?
Well - the three couples - things are a changing.
The infinity sysmbol rings - a hidden message that even Oliver does not realize - I think.
Ron and Luna - Ron is jealous - he cannot help it but does not understand why yet.
Severus and Hermione - the sex was oh so fantastic - I loved it
They are all making progress and it was good
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Right, Oliver does not realize the significance yet! ;-)
Uh huh, Ron is confused!
Glad you enjoyed my SS/HG!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Right, Oliver does not realize the significance yet! ;-)
Uh huh, Ron is confused!
Glad you enjoyed my SS/HG!
I loved Luna's reaction to Ron's miserable attitude. I know he has a right to be angry, but really, does he have to be pissy for a whole year?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! It's only been a month!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I know in your story it's only a month, what I ment and poorly stated was will Ron be a jerk for the whole year?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Never fear! He won't be able to fight his feelings much longer... ;-D
I really like where you are going.....Severus seems to be a bit doting on his wife, as it should be!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying!
I'm pulling my hair out! Great chapter, but I suspect I missed some chapters, thank merlin I can play catchup now.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Don't pull your hair out! ;-) Yep, catchup!
Wow. What a start. Bad Luna. :) I love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!