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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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another yummy chapter. here is my favorite moment:“Nice to meet you, Mrs. Weasley. I’m the mate the charm chose for your daughter.”makes me think, yup, he's her soulmate all right (in between all the laughing).looking forward to the next installment!
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! Glad I could bring a smile for you today! :D More coming soon!
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Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Glad I could bring a smile for you today! :D More coming soon!
wooo hooo! i can hardly wait for the consumation! thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Won't be long for the next chapter... But the consumation will be the one after! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Won't be long for the next chapter... But the consumation will be the one after! ;-)
OMG- Harry finally played the know-it-all card didn't he. And If its an all-girl team, I wonder what position Oliver plays. I'd say the angst is out of the bag and ready to roll.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! LOL Yep, he did! Oliver is a Keeper... Yep, rolling on!
Wonderful up-date. The sex should be very interesting!!!! Please do not make Snape go all soft too fast.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Oh, yes, I have some interesting situations planned...No, not soft too fast! ;-)
Oh, this is just getting better and better. I love you've made Snape so mean and still in love with Lily. And for once I really do think Ron is right. That spell really should be an unforgiveable.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am so happy you are enjoying this! I think the circumstances with Snape and Lily would make it very difficult--or take someone else very special--to ever get over Lily!Yep, I was trying to show that Ron really does love Hermione and even though these couples are soul mates and are basically made for each other, before this spell they did have lives and were not unhappy. Having doubts sure, but not unhappy.
This is a really neat story!! I can't wait for the rest!! :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! More up soon!
Excellent story! Can't wait for more!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying!
This is absolutely fantastic and so funny. ANd I'm really looking for the wedding night and hop efor some more fun ... or not
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! More coming soon!
wow, that was a rather pathetic sad wedding for all the couples. doesn't it mean anything to them that the magic determined they were each other's soul-mates, and that they might not want to be divorced in a year? ah well, there would be no story if they were calm and logical. looking forward to the next chapter - thanks for updating!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks June! No, at the moment, the soul mates things is not really an issue for anyone, except maybe Luna. Most already had someone...
i'm still loving this story and you've written another terrific chapter. i like how you've turned everyone's world upside-down. it's fun to watch them all try to cope. does that make me seem heartless? i hope not; i'm just really enjoying your story!
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! So glad you like it! Nope, not heartless! ;) More up soon!
I love the detail of the binding cord colors. I can't wait to see how you use the meanings of them through out the rest of the story. Can't wait for more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am happy you are enjoying it!
I love this. I can't wait to get to the various honeymoons.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Honeymoons coming up in two more chapters!
Too funny, lemons I hope?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Oh yeah, lemons! I didn't rate this NC-17 for nothing! ;)
I've loved this story since first reading it. My one and only concernation; I can't see Ron Weasley using the word 'ruination'! It's just too.... Hermione for him lol
Great work!
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! LOL Glad you are liking it so far! (Maybe being with Hermione has rubbed off on him a bit?)
That was rather enjoyable. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much blue! More coming soon!
I see such potential here - to actually be married and cohabiting with your soulmate for at least a year - and wouldn't it be great if that potential weren't completely lost upon the characters in the story. All of the reactions so far come from a place of complete self-centeredness. None are thinking about the marvel of finding that one person who will know them and love them utterly. I would love to see Hermione melt the resentment in Severus' heart with a million tiny, tender, sincere kisses. Maybe he would see that, through no efffort of his own, he landed in a very enviable position. But I fear that tenderness will be the path not taken in preference to resentment, blame, and hostility - all of the refuges of the self-centered immature.
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I have to disagree with you about the self-centeredness, though. We are talking about six people, well seven if you want to count Harry, four of whom were engaged, and suddenly they have to marry someone else. Hermione and Severus don't truely know each other, nor do they really like each other at the moment.Ginny and Oliver? Same deal. They are practically strangers really.Ron and Luna are well aquainted, but he loves Hermione--or at least he thinks he does. Their lives have been pulled out from under them, even if the girls did bring it upon themselves--with help from the dark wine. So naturally nobody would be happy at all at this point!
Awe, Severus' feathers are all ruffled. Poor Ron, gonna try to keep Luna out of his room and Ginny... I'm surprised that Harry wasn't really all that upset - only mad. Hummmm?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Bea! More will be explained about Harry in future chapters... ;)
I absolutely love this story. Can't wait to see how all of our couples make out - hee hee - I guess in both ways :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much mazzy! :) More up soon.
What a fun story! And I'm so glad you brought Oliver Wood in. it's great having one of the lesser-used characters in the middle of things.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am so happy you like it! Yeah, I wanted someone different to play with! ;) Umm, still looking for a COMC update.... :D
I can't wait for the next part. LOL Good work
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Working on the next now!
Oh I loved the binding chords!!!... this is really a great story!.... thanks for the update!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I am so happy you're enjoying it!
Interesting that Ron blames everyone but his sister. And Harry seems the most angry at Hermione even though it was his 'special' wine that influenced them, Luna's idea and insistence, and Ginny's casting that caused Harry's freedom...which he sorta wanted anyway. If he had kept the wine in a safe place (rather then in the kitchen where a thirsty person might stumble upon it) or had brought it into the Ministry at any time prior, this never would have happened! But then again, you wouldn't have had a story either, so it's good he didn't. Still don't like him picking on Hermione though...
Just from their reactions, I'd say that Ginny's and Oliver's match will be the quickest to becoming 'wedded bliss'. Although Luna is the only one actually in love with her spouse at this point, I doubt Ron will come around anytime soon. As for Severus and Hermione, they have the most baggage to work through, but they're already quite passionate about not wanting the match.
Really like how it's going. Am looking forward to the next one!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Aura! The points about Harry you brought up are interesting because I am currently writing about those very things in the next chapter! (Um... Are you in my head?) ;)OH I have something coming up for Ron and Luna in the next chapter that I hope will be found unexpected! Yeah, at this point, SS/HG don't really like one another.More up soon!
I just love your take on Severus. You have his bite down perfectly. Nice set up chapter. Your flow is very good -- quick but with a satisfying amount of story for one chapter. I look forward to your next installment. Thanks, JoAnne
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Thank you so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! You've made my day! Working on the next now!
Ron and Luna actually makes sense if he'll just grow up and stop worrying about what others think. I'm wondering if Severus is really angry, or just doesn't like having his life rearranged on the spur of the moment. I'm also wondering if Harry is really attracted to women, or if he's just entranced by the idea of having a family. I guess I'll see.
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Right, it's going to take some time because remember, they didn't even think of the other that way...Severus will go though periods of both actually! :DStraight or gay, Harry really wanted a family most of all.
This is such a funny read. I'm curious how they'll cope with each other after the first wave of high emotions at the Ministry.
I expect most of all Ginny and Ron to have some difficulties because they really thought to have their life mate.
Although she seems to be secretly happy, I'm feeling a little bit sorry for Luna, because she's in love with Ron, and he isn't at all, and tends to show that quite thoroughly.
And I hope you'll bring someone in for Harry, too.
Can't wait for the next update.
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Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Yep, now they have to sort things out and see.Yes, true about Ginny and Ron.What you have to remember is that Ron is in love with (or thinks he is) with Hermione and at the moment, he thinks Luna is the most blame for the situation, so of course he would be a little mean towards her...Couldn't leave Harry hanging! ;-)Working on the next now!