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Magical Betrothal
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Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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Glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next part.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! More up soon!
Italy... so I'll go for Zabini. Guess I'll have to wait to find out, though!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks GG! You won't have to wait long, it'll be up next!
Wonderful story so far! Just a complete delight. I'm secretly hoping that person speaking to Harry is Draco Malfoy… but I could be a bit biased in that respect! =)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! No, not Draco! ;-)
Yay for Ron and Luna! A break through of sorts, there. Way to tell him, Luna.
Severus and Hermione ... slow going but they're on their way.
Ooo! Who doesn't want to see Harry? I have a guess. Can't wait to see if I'm right!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Yep, now she knows that he is at least attracted to her...Right, him talking to her about Lily was a breakthrough for him!Harry and myster person up next! ;-)
Hermione has a plan. I wonder how it will go? I really like your mature Neville.
Ginny and Oliver seem to be doing the best so far. Let's see what a month has brought ...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! Yep, Hermione wants to give this marriage a real try.Too right...
Oh, they're gonna fight it tooth and nail, aren't they?
Loved this:
“Do not stand here in my home and call me a liar, Granger!” “Then don’t sit here in your home and lie, Snape!”
GO HERMIONE!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Yep! They will have their moments! Glad you enjoyed!
Draco!! Draco!! Draco!! heehee-- I'm hoping its him or I'm stumped.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
HA HA HA Thanks! I will tell you this much--it's not Draco!
ROTFL!! Of course Ron would sleep through the deadline! Love Luna's reaction, too! It's just so her!
Oliver and Ginny seem to have hit it off fairly well.
As for Severus ... I wanted to scream at him, "Come on, man! You can do better than that!" LOL
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Tee Hee You gotta Love Ron!Yep, Oliver seems to take it in stride....Severus does NOT want to be married, especially not to Hermione.
Loved the conversation with Harry and Hermione. I'm glad they've talked things out somewhat. George has a good head on his shoulders. I really like the brotherly interaction. But what's Ron thinking going to sleep?
I am really enjoying this!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I know, I didn't want to leave that hanging. Ginny will talk to him too at some point...Glad you're enjoying!
Oh, be Malfoy! C'mon for some Drarry!
XD
I love how Luna is making progress with Ron and forcing him to accept his own culpability. If she allows him to play the "You Owe Me For Trapping Me" card, he will always hold it over her head as a debt she can never fully repay. The same goes for all of the couples, really.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
HA HA! Sorry dear Charmed! Not Draco!Right, a person can only take so much and then they explode! ;-)
Loving it more and more! Have I mentioned how much I like seeing Oliver? He's really an underused character in fanfic. It's nice to see him here, and putting him with Ginny really makes sense.
So much anger all the way around. These wedding nights should be interesting. And what will Harry do? So glad there's more for me to read!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you like my Oliver! I wanted to do something different for me, and I have never used him.Yes a lot of anger. Most were involved with someone they love, and the rest just dont want to be married. LOL
Woot! Drama and angst galore! I love it! Severus is really in full Snape-mode -- yay!
Loved this line the most: “Right,” Severus said, making the word long and drawn out. “Azkaban it is then.”
Oh, this is gonna be so much fun to watch!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! I LOVE angst! ;-) Ha Ha! Glad you're enjoying my Severus!
I love this! There are so many great things, but I really have to say I love a scheming Luna! One of my favorite things ever! I can just picture the scene with all three of them. *giggles* All six reactions were priceless! I'm so glad there's more for me to read!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Yep, she wasn't selected for Ravenclaw for nothing! teehee Glad you like it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Yep, she wasn't selected for Ravenclaw for nothing! teehee Glad you like it!
This is funny. I like it.My guess for the last question would be Draco Malfoy :-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, Red! Glad you're enjoying! Nope, not Draco! Good Guess though...
Erm, Uncle Vernon? LOL. Sorry, he's the only one I've read who'd use the word 'effing'... although what Uncle Vernon doing so far away in Italy, I have no idea...
It seems to me that the two couples we have here seems to be so determine to call it off after a year. Well, on the husbands' side though. I don't know if *I* can face it, let alone live together for a month now by having to listen to such hurtful remark. "Really, we may live under the same roof but comes a year, you and I are nothing but two separate people..." Urgh!
But I see Ginny and Oliver are moving on just fine... at least one out of three eh?
I love Mrs Weasley's howler though... I wonder if the howler will only disperse when Ron had rectify the situation...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
HA HA HA! Not Vernon...RIght, although, a lot can happen in a year! ;-) Remember, it's only been a month...Yep, Ollie is taking it in stride!Couldnt you just see her sending him a howler?
i cant wait for the next chapter and is ron really being and ass and how slytherine of lunashe is playing a very good gamethank you for the story
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Ron is very upset. Remember, not only did he not get to marry the person he wanted to, but he had to watch her marry someone else, and he had to marry someone else too, that he did not love!More up soon!
YAY!! Another great chapter! Thanks so much for your timely updates! This is one of my favorite stories!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Spicy! SO glad you're enjoying!
OMG Who is it???! It's a Slytherin I'm sure of it. I want to say Draco, but... Hmmm... I also want to say Zabini, because I don't care what the colour of his skin is, he could still be half Italian, dammit! Or it could be a girl! OMG it could be Pansy and they could fall in love! :D How about a hint?
And yay Luna getting enough, and Ron beginning to realise how he's treating her. They are totally on the right track now, and I'm sure the Howler will burn once he accepts that.
And Severus and Hermione are getting places too, although somewhat more slowly. At least he seems to begin to understand that he's got more forthcoming. That whole thing was his own fault, he could just have told her that it was because of Lily and there wouldn't have been any misunderstanding. But on the other hand it was probably a good thing that he didn't at first. They're getting places now. Hermione definitely is, she's totally falling :D
I missed Ginny and Oliver, but from the bit about the Prophet it appears they're doing quite well without too many problems. I'm not surprised, they've been the most rational people about it all along.
A serial killer though? I wonder who that could be?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL Thanks! No, not Draco--Not going to say anymore than that?Luna had just had enough. She loves him, but can only take so much! ;-)Right, a little slower for Snape and Hermione. He liked beging single! Plus, he didn't like his new wife--at first! ;-)There will be more Ginny and Oliver in the next chapter.
"Harry effing Potter," eh?
Right off the bat, I'm not sure, other than Draco?
And of course I'm also wondering whether Harry is gay or straight in this fic.
But mainly I'm looking forward to seeing how our favorite pair spark together, with a side order of Ron and Luna!
Good story! I'm glad to see it updated and look forward to the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks Mia! Nope, not Draco, but good guess! I am so happy you liked it. Something will happen that will make Ron see that maybe he does like Luna more than he admits! ;-)More up soon!
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
I'm delighted that it's not Draco. You've already thrown a wild card into the mix by bringing in Oliver Wood so it's going to be great fun seeing who Harry is about to meet.
I think your interpretation of Ron and Luna is spot on, too. Ron is giving up a dream as well as a love. If we accept that Sev is still missing and feeling guilty for the loss of a friend he loved, then how can we see Ron any differently? The fact that she's not "the one" doesn't lessen the fact that they are life-long friends who interpreted their love as Love (ahem) and he had that yanked away from him. I don't blame him for being slow to grow accustomed to his sudden marriage, and he's certainly more caring about Luna even so than Sev is about Hermione so far!
Again, great job, and I hope for a quick update!
Draco seems to be the obvious choice for Harry to meet, but I'm not sure if you would go with obvious. I'm also not sure that Draco would say Harry Effing Potter. The only people I can think of who might say that are Tonks, Seamus, and possibly some of the courser Slytherins. When you think of all the possible interactions with people you would normaly have in a school that large we barely got to know any of the characters. I know, it's Hufflepuff Justin. lol.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! No, not Draco! ;-) But Italy will be up next! ;-)
Seems like Ron needs to come off it - he obviously does fancy his new wife. And Sev needs to stop feeling sorry for himself as well. I wonder if Hemrione will pull a Luna and tell her husband off, right and proper one day.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Oh, yeah, he fancies her. I don't know that Severus is feeling sorry for himself... Well maybe just a little, but that would be a hard thing to live with I think. She might. Hermione is not known too much for being patient.
You continue to write well-crafted chapters that keep me interested and eager to have more. Thank you.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I am so happy you're enjoying!
gits... those boys are gits. being mean to Luna is like beating a baby - cruel. I hope Molly really whomps down on Ron! thanks for the new chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Thanks June! I know, Ron is mad at his situation and taking it out on the closest person to him--Luna. That does not make it right, that's just how it is. It won't last long!
This chapter was great! I love that the relationships are tumultuous and exciting and that no one really just jumped into "Hey, here we are. I love you now!" My only critique would be that Hermione isn't quite as huffy and puffy as she is normally, but your characterization of her makes total sense with your plot line. Hell, if I performed a charm and got matched up with my soulmate, I'd want to make it work too! Great work, and I can't wait for more.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I am so happy you enjoyed! Right, especially since the majority of them loves someone else! Hermione is really trying to get to know her husband, and act a little more mature in this one. More up soon!
Thank you so much for the update! I must say that I absolutely looooved your Luna in this chapter! Not only did you give her a backbone, you also let her say some very needed words to Ron. Yeh, yeh, I know he is supposed to pine for Hermione, his "true" love a while yet, but as Luna points out: the "poor me" routine he so often uses are tiering and unattractive. He is not un-intelligent, his skills in chess and quiddish shows that, but his "my way or no way at all" attitude is not very attractive and does not give much room for symphaty. In that regards, maybe his relationship with Hermione had been much better off if he had not only noticed that something wasn't quite right, but actually done something mature like talking to Hermione and tried to work things out in stead of pretending that everything was fine and dandy. Anyway, so far he is the kind of guy who needs to have someone yelling at him to allow some information into his brain, at least Luna got his attention that way. I hope for him that he will start using some of the analytic brain he uses in chess and sport to start analyzing his realationships with the opposite sex too, he migth find that he would come out the winner if he does:-))So, who did Harry meet in Italy? Something makes me guess that it is Draco Malfoy? Probably because it most often is, I belive he is more often paired with Draco than Ginny in the fanfic-world:-) Though I don't mind said pairing and have seen it very well done many times, I would love it if you proved me wrong and paired him with someone else, like Pancy, Millicent, or some other, most likely Slytherin, who doesn't admire the boy-wonder, but will come to like Harry for being just Harry. It was as usual a very well written chapter, and I loved it. It really makes me happy to see this story updated, i love it:-)) Update again soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! Yep, I think it was time that Luna said something. It would have to be hard to watch someone you love pining for another. Luna is smart--she will figure it out! ;-)Not Draco! It will be up next...Glad you enjoyed!