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Magical Betrothal
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Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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great chapter. thankyou.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, Patti! Glad you enjoyed!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, Patti! Glad you enjoyed!
I know I've said this before, but I'm really l voing Ron and Luna :) Sev and Hermione are cool... but for me, Ron and Luna are stealing the show :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I am glad you like them, though you are one of the few. I like Ron, too, though he is not very popular in our ship!
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Thanks,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I am glad you like them, though you are one of the few. I like Ron, too, though he is not very popular in our ship!
Oh good grief I read the last 2 chapters in the wrong order! I am a moron. I hope RL settles down to give you more time for writing. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Ha Ha Ha! Too funny! RL is calming some now. More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Ha Ha Ha! Too funny! RL is calming some now. More up soon!
Good grief there were lots of high emotions in this chapter! I am not sure who I am more irritated with, Harry, Ron, Draco or Severus. Wait they are all men, do I detect a trend?
Thanks for the chapter
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yes, this was an angsty chapter. LOL I do believe you do detect a slight one!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yes, this was an angsty chapter. LOL I do believe you do detect a slight one!
Poor Severus, he hasn't done anything wrong and Hermione still gets mad at him. Well, he should have guessed that Lucius, Narcissa and Draco were up to no good.Update soon please, I really enjoy your story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, he wasn't totally in the wrong, but he did leave her alone with more his type of croud than hers...
So happy you enjoy! More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, he wasn't totally in the wrong, but he did leave her alone with more his type of croud than hers...
So happy you enjoy! More up soon!
Yet another fabulous chapter! Three months in, and it appears all of our couples are little more attached than believed they could be. Definitely more thinking to do on everyone's part. I look forward to the next chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Yep, reluctantly attached! teehee More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Yep, reluctantly attached! teehee More up soon!
Kick RL and write next eqally good chapter :-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
;-) Thank you much! More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
;-) Thank you much! More up soon!
For a change, Severus is the only one who is not being hard-headed and stubborn!Oliver and Ginny are cute, and neither want to be the first to tell the other how they feel.I just wish Ron would realise how he really feels about Luna before he loses her for good.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I know--go figure!
Spot on about OW/GW!
Ron is just so stubborn...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I know--go figure!
Spot on about OW/GW!
Ron is just so stubborn...
fun chap very fun chap....I love it when Sev is so smug...and good!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I love when that happens, too!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I love when that happens, too!
Poor clueless Cho, Doesn't she read the papers? Too bad she hasn't thought to catch up on the gosip. I love George in this, amybe he can finnally get Ron to pull his head out of his arse? Luna is being soooo patient it's almost pathetic, poor kid.And Oliver and Ginny - why can't they just say what's on thier minds?Once again intrigued... looking forward to the next installment!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, Cho is in Italy, I don't think that the papers there would print gossip from London--though I could be wrong. *shrugs*
Glad you're enjoying my George. He is getting a kick out of Ron's protests because he knows better. Funny you should say that about Luna, you will see why in my next chapter, which is almost done.
OW/GW-neither one of them wants to be the first to admit anything. LOL
More up soon!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, Cho is in Italy, I don't think that the papers there would print gossip from London--though I could be wrong. *shrugs*
Glad you're enjoying my George. He is getting a kick out of Ron's protests because he knows better. Funny you should say that about Luna, you will see why in my next chapter, which is almost done.
OW/GW-neither one of them wants to be the first to admit anything. LOL
More up soon!
Anonymous
RL might be kicking your arse, but you still managed to bang out a great chapter! Honestly, this has replaced my afternoon soaps. Now, if you could just write a wee bit faster...
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much! ~grins hugely~ The next chapter is just about complete...
Good work. I'm totally enjoying everything (all couples). HG/SS seem to be moving right along, but not as well as Ginny/Oliver. :) The other couples will catch up soon enough, I think.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you're liking them all! Right, it wont be long!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you're liking them all! Right, it wont be long!
heehee, coping nicely!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks!
I must be completely honest and say I skipped the Harry/cho thing and most of Ginny and Oliver. The Ron/Luna and the Severus/Hermione part is progressing very nicely though. I quite enjoy Ron's sillyness. Luna is a bright girl, she'll have him right were she wants him soon. And it is nice to see Severus and hermione getting along :-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad you're enjoying the two couples you are reading! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad you're enjoying the two couples you are reading! ;-)
I am really enjoying this story. The Oliver/Ginny pairing was unexpected for me, So glad you have Cho and Harry ont the track to together. I always liked that pairing, and was sorry to see it end in canon. I like the way we see all the couples going about their lives.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you like HP/CC! More up soon.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you like HP/CC! More up soon.
Hee. George was being tricky. LOL! I am so interested in the plot lines of all four couples. Especially Harry and Cho. I don't think I've ever got to experience wanting to see more of that before! =) I can't wait to see what happens if Ginny andHarry do see each other again. I hope that Cho will see it and be made aware that Ginny is married to Oliver. That ought to be entertaining, however she finds out. Thanks for another great chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am so glad my story (and HP/CC) interests you! Cho will find out next chapter! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am so glad my story (and HP/CC) interests you! Cho will find out next chapter! ;-)
Thank you so much for the update! I love the progress in Hermione and Severus relationship and you write it so well! What surprices me, and I think I have said so once before, is that you give me a growing facination for Ron's lovelife. I admit that he will never be a favourite of mine, and in most fic's I am most pleased if he stays far away from Hermiones relationship with Severus (or almost everyone else than Ron). But, this Luna you present her, she is so breathtakingly intriguing and fun to read about, I cant help my self chearing for her and her brilliant comments. And since what makes Luna happy will be to make Ron happy, I sincerely hope you will make Ron happy too:-)). I do hope that all four couples will be happy of course and love reading about each and every one of them, especailly since you make them so easy to differ, giving each couple their own story, but I must admit that Hermione/Severus and Luna/Ron are my favourites at the moment:-)) Update again soon!!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad I could get you interested in Ron. I know that most people don't like him, but I like Ron. I just don't like him with Hermione... LOL! More will be up soon, I've almost finished writing the chapter!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad I could get you interested in Ron. I know that most people don't like him, but I like Ron. I just don't like him with Hermione... LOL! More will be up soon, I've almost finished writing the chapter!
-squeee-
I'm so glad Severus and Hermione are getting along better now. I don't think Oliver and Ginny are really connecting yet; they should talk more, and Luna and Ron are slowly growing one each other. That's definitely good. . .
Oh Lord! I sound like a psychiatrist! Gaaaah!
~Katie
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks!
Yep, SS/HG are getting along better... for now. ;-) Oliver and Ginny are in the position to where they want the other to admit their feelings first, and you know how that can be... Ron and Luna will have a long talk up next.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks!
Yep, SS/HG are getting along better... for now. ;-) Oliver and Ginny are in the position to where they want the other to admit their feelings first, and you know how that can be... Ron and Luna will have a long talk up next.
yeah things are working out for hermione and snape lalala and even ginny is strting to feel the pull to her soul mate i loved the chapter thank you
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! So happy you liked it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! So happy you liked it!
RL can be a pain in the arse sometimes, *nods* I hope you've resolved yours... :)
Anyhow, thanks for another great chapter! Things are certainly moving on better for all of these couples. Well, except for Harry and Cho... I wonder how Cho is going to find out.
But of course, my favourite is always SS/HG. Oh man, I think if only Hermione knew that Severus was waiting for her to initiate first, she'd done that weeks ago. But how can Severus expect that, Hermione was a virgin when she married him... surely she's still a bit reserved on that part. Ah, but now, she's well on the right path, she is... :)
Can't wait for more!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
!
Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Cho finds out next, and is not pleased. LOL
I think that it was BECAUSE she was a virgin he wanted her to make the next move, uncertain if she wanted him that way and not wanting to force his attentions on her if unwelcome. Yep, on the right path now!
More soon!
The update is completely worth the wait! Great chapter! I love how Ron is falling in love with Luna but he isn't going to go without a fight... It's sort of interesting that the explosive relationship is Harry and Cho. I would have guessed that honor would have gone to Hermione and Severus but obviously they are suited... As usual you leave us wanting for more. (pant pant) I patiently await an update.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! LOL You're right about Ron! (It must be a pride thing! ;-) )
Glad you like Harry and Cho!
HG/SS are suited, but they will have their share of troubles...
More up soon, I've stared the next!
Great chapter as always. I really enjoy the Hermione-Severus relationship, I think they're great together.Poor Harry, it seems he is the only Auror with a sens of caution, I can't believe all his co-workers just hope for the best while planning the capture of a vicious murderer. I'm sure something will go wrong and Cho will land herself in TROUBLE. Maybe Harry could plan for an alternate solution, just in case .Update soon please
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying SS/HG!
Acutally, Harry is being more emotional than rational at the moment. If you remember, the Aurors spent hours planning their stratigy. To me (who is from a family full of cops!) it would be the same as a female cop going under, say, dressing as a hooker or some such, to catch someone. She's a trained Auror that matches the description of the women the killer takes, so I don't think it's too far fetched she would do this.
I have already started on the next chapter! Shouldn't be too long!
Witty and humorous continuation with all parties. All these funny denials there, hehe.
Loved how S&H seemed to get on rather well. Looking forward to Draco's wedding.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Draco's wedding is up next!
Our couples are indeed making progress! What a lovely new chapter (still drooling over the early morning Severus/Hermione interlude and thinking Luna is sweet for bringing breakfast to Ronald the Prat.)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Teehee! Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! So glad you enjoyed this one! ;-)
Oh, a fabulous chapter! Poor Harry and Cho -- misunderstandings all the way around. I don't blame Harry for being wary. He's been terribly hurt recently, and he's going to be a bit more self-protective. Oliver and Ginny -- I think they both protest too much! LOL As does Ron, but I adore Luna. She is sooo "handling" him! I love this kind of Luna! And things are moving along quite well for my favorite couple of all! YAY!
Looking forward to more, as always!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks sshg! Yep, Cho is bitter and tightly guarding her heart at the moment, just as Harry is.
Yep, OW/GW both want the other to say something first. ;-)
Glad you're enjoying my Luna. She's full of surprises when it comes to our Ron, and that's just what he needs. George sees right through him, eh?
More up soon!