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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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whoot a baby and ginny and oliver make up whoot and double whoot
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Whoot! Whoot! ;D
Boy, Ron really is an insensitive clod, isn't he? Honestly, he can ruin any relationship in nothing flat. I do feel sorry for Ginny who is in a right pickle seeing as Oliver was one of the Quidditch's if not Britain's most eligible wizards. And Snape... well, he seems to be doing alright, but despite what Narcissa has said, I'm not sure I trust her.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Well, to me, yes and no. I can actually see Ron's side, although he is NOT popular at all here! LOL! No, never trust Narcissa! ;)
WOOT thank you thank you for letting Cho rescue herself. Girl power! I am glad she and Harry have outed their relationship as well. Looking forward to Ron & Luna part 2
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
! I thought she needed to! ;-) Also SS/HG in part two...
Marriage is never easy, is it? Especially not when forced.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks, Phoenix! no, it's really not.
WHEEEEE! Everything is beginning to work out! Harry and Cho have admitted things and accepted things and had a little bonus thing.Oliver has come to his senses and Ginny admitted that it was wrong not to think he'd be affected by seeing her with Harry, although I still think Oliver was the most unreasonable one this time.Severus and Hermione seems to be getting along fine, resolving their misunderstandings in a sensible manner. I'm not particularly worried for them.That just leaves Ron and Luna. Ron's coming to his senses, so now it's just a question of convincing Luna, although given what he's put her through so far, he might be in for a bit of work there. Serves him right, though. And still, for some reason, I'm suspecting that they'll be the first to have children. Apart of course from Cho and Harry.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
:D! Yep, things are working out for Harry and Cho...Yes, Oliver did come to his senses, even if he did have to get jealous to do it! ;)I have much more of SS/HG in part two!Ron is realizing he does have feelings for his wife, and since that talk with Hermione, now I think he can move forward.
They don't have making up to do, they have making out to do.Oh, and thank you for reconciling them! It was feeling so awkward with everyone, and now everything's fine (well, Harry and Cho have a baby. . . I have to say that I was kinda expecting it. I mean, not before now, but with that whole scene in the hospital. . . I knew there was a baby. It was just a little obvious. Nice, but obvious) with two of the couples. Now on to Luna and Ron and Hermione and Snape! Oh, yeah. There isn't anything going on between Hermione and Severus. Ah, well!Thank you for the chapter and I can't wait fo the next one!~Katie
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! You're right, Katie! They do!I think you're the only one so far who wasn't surprised by my baby twist! Ron and Luna, Hermione and Snape will be up next! Well, Severus did accept a dinner invatation to the Malfoy's without consulting Hermione....
I love Oliver and Ginny! I think I say that in every review.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! I love to hear it, no matter how many times you say it!
Well, at least one couple seems to be coming to realize the spell could have been right. :)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Yep, for now, anyway!
The heat most definitely is on. I like how Ron is jealous, actually so is Oliver. Interesting for two blokes who don't want to be married. LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Tee hee! Too right!
I'll admit that I did not see Cho coming. Interesting touch.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! I was trying to think of someone that isn't used a lot.
Yeah, who would be so unhappy to see Harry? I have an idea, but I'm not sure. I think you are doing a good job showing the transition period the different couples are going through.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Was it who you were thinking? Glad you're enjoying!
Response from phoenix (Reviewer)
Absolutely not. LOL I don't know why I didn't see Cho, but that has been a very good way to keep Harry involved in the amorous mess the girls created. LOL
I can really see Harry entering full mope like that. He does have his moody streak. And I really like how Neville is actually sympathetic to Snape. I think those two really have a lot in common as outsiders in their houses as students.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I agree, he broods a lot in the books, I think. Not that I don't think he has reason to... I agree about Neville!
Oh, deeper and deeper. What a tangled web that is being woven. I really love the gruff nature Severus is showing. I wonder if he will eventually come around. And the Rita Skeeter headline was pure genius. :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad you're enjoying Severus! (And Rita Skeeter!)
LOL What a comedic ending to what was sort of passionate chapter. I daresay Hermione has learned a thing or two about Severus - that perhaps she has misjudged him.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
TEEHEE! Thanks! I do believe she has!
I'm glad Ollie came to his senses.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
oh, my. Poor everyone. And the shocks just keep rippling. Something tells me settling down won't go smoothly.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! No... Not smooth at all.
I love how wonderfully gruff and sarcastic Severus is over this whole thing. Boy are they deep into it. I hadn't expected them to give in so easily, but I'm sure these marriages will be anything other than easy.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am really working with him! ;-) Right, nothing easy!
Yay! So glad Cho made it out of there and that they caught the bastard - and baby? A bit of an oops there for Harry!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yep, a baby, and they were only together the one time.
Oh, my. That really is a huge mess... and it doesn't look like there is any way out of it, though something tells me all involved will be working hard for 3 days to figure one out.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Yep! No way out whatsoever!
Oooh, I love how you have swapped everything up. Obviously it's not Ron and Ginny but I'm interested in seeing the pairings. :D Oh, love the chapter name. LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I thought the name fitting since it was Luna who created this huge mess! ;-)
Another great chapter! I'm so relieved that Cho made it out okay. And, finally! Oliver is listening. He had to make Ginny stay and talk, but fortunately that seems to have worked!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
!! Yes, it's about time he listened, I say!
Did I read correctly : "a baby"? I would have thought they knew about protection. apparently not. Well things should be even better from now on. And I'm glad Oliver's finnaly listened to Ginny.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Teehee! Yep, a baby! Well, they were only together that one time, and right then, their emotions were running wild and they were definitely not even planning sex! Yep, it was time he listened!
*whew* I'm glad Oliver has gotten over himself! He's too hot to be such a pinhead.Also glad Cho is ok, and that Harry has declared himself to her. *sighs happily* And wot's all this about a baby? Harry must be losing his mind wondering!Notice we didn't see Ron and Luna; they must be in the other half of the Very Long Chapter?Also very nice how you managed to make Harry and Severus feel in accord with regard to Hermione. Having a common interest (meaning her best interests) might just help them begin to get along.Thanks fora great update!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks M! Yep, it was time he listened to Gin!Harry would've done things sooner but was holding back, giving Cho the time she needed. Oh yeah, that is a huge surprise!Ron, Luna, Hermione and Snape all up next!Glad you enjoyed it!
Response from Gardengirl (Reviewer)
Ooh, whoever you are, you know who I am! *iz curiouser and curiouser*
Seems like it moved a little quick when dealing with the other wizard. granted it seems he thought CHo was a muggle and being delusional would help with the whole, "Chantel" thing but is that going to be explained maybe?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I don't understand what you mean... Do you mean will his behavior and thoughts be explained? They will be discussed later on.