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Magical Betrothal
cocoachristy634 Reviews | 6.67/10 (634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )
Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.
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Oliver Wood? Well, it's a fascinating story, and I can't wait to see where you take it, and what the gentlemen's reactions will be. ...I notice Harry got no missive...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Yep, old Ollie! Decided to play with him this time! More up soon!
I had a wonderful time reading this story all over again:-))
I loved this story!!!it was amazing!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much I'm happy you liked it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much I'm happy you liked it!
Awww, I liked how everything ended so nicely for all our couples. Well done!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
I l— well, I can't tell you what I feel about this chapter because I wouldn't want to admit how much I enjoyed it. ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
HA HA HA! Very cute! Thank you!
What a sweet moment between Severus and Hermione at the end of the chapter. I loved that little touch of humility and apology from Severus.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thank you! He's proud, but he knows when he's wrong!
Too funny that Ron and Luna end up in Azkaban, and Luna just seems amused!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Yeah, I had to have someone end there! hehe
These first two chapters are a great set-up to this story. You couldn't have designed a messier mess. ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I just love to get messy!
Yay for Severus. I am so glad he is finally really sticking up for his wife. And that he is insistant he wants to stay married to her.Good for Ron. I am also glad he finally swallowed that enourmous pride of his. He will definately be happier for it!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed seeing the men come around!
I think it was about time that Severus stood up to his friends I suspect that it made Hermione feel much more secure.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Yes, it did. And I agree, it's about time!
Very good....I love that Snape stood up for Hermione....I look forward to how you will rap all this up
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! Me to, it's about time, eh? Should be up soon, almost finished with the epilogue!
Wonderful story!
I love the interactions between Hermione and Severus.
This was probably my favorite chapter yet. Great job!
I'm hooked on your story. Off to read more!
And the plot thickens . . . Snape's reactions is very well written.
This is such a creative idea! Can't wait to read more.
I can't wait to see the rest! I've really enjoyed this story.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you've enjoyed!
Yeah, for George! Knocked som sense into ROn - finally! before he'd completely blown it and this were irreversabley damaged.Whoot! Severus! He sure;y handled this friends well, damn Narcissa! I'm glad Madeline got someone, and that Lucius and Cissy are going to come around.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
:D Thanks! Yep, Ron needed to act fast! Uh huh, he let them know he was not giving Hermione up for ANYTHING!
I really love the Hermione-Severus interaction. I'm glad he could make clear to the Malfoys that he and Hermione will stay together.I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed them!
Yay! Looks like Ron finally got it right. And the much-anticipated dinner at the Malfoys' was worth the wait. I like how your Severus and Hermione are so fiercely in love.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
THanks! It was about time, right! Glad you enjoyed the dinner and my SS/HG!
Tulip!! Bwahaha!! :D That caught me off guard and I was laughing like crazy despite my colleague around! *deep breath* Oh God, you're just so funny!I absolutely love the update though. Everyone seems to have made up their mind and getting closer nicely. Very good! The part where Hermione woken up from nightmare was definitely touching. Especially when Severus insist on not going if it disturb Hermione that much. Ooh, can't wait for the last chapter!!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
LOL! Thanks! I love that I could make you laught out loud, especially at work! :DGlad you enjoyed it! I am hoping to get the last chapter done by this weekend.
I love the happy endings. It's about time Ron came around!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I agree!
Yeah, your Madeleine rocks! Ron and Luna starting to work things out brought tears to my eyes.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! I am glad you liked the Ron/Luna!
Such a fun chapter. :) Looking forward to seeing more. And do they realize that all these women (except Hermione) shagged Dean Thomas? LOL
Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)
Thanks! You know, I'm not sure that they do. Only one or two people have mentioned it in a review! ;-)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)
that's because they don't read things as closely as I do. Probably never put two and two together.