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Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge Magical Betrothal
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Magical Betrothal

1: Chapter 1: Lunacy

2: Chapter 2: Truth and Consequences

3: Chapter 3: Reaping What You Sow

4: Chapter 4: Reactions

5: Chapter 5: Dealing With Fate

6: Chapter 6: First Day of Many

7: Chapter 7: Coming to a Realization

8: Chapter 8: Time Marches On

9: Chapter 9: Making Adjustments

10: Chapter 10: Accepting The Situation

11: Chapter 11: Making Progress.

12: Chapter 12: Discovery

13: Chapter 13: Two Steps Back

14: Chapter 14: Admissions

15: Chapter 15: Power of Love, Part One

16: Chapter 16: Power of Love, Part 2

17: Epilogue

Magical Betrothal

cocoachristy

634 Reviews   |   634 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )

Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potter Place's Post DH Prompt Challenge 64,690 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Oliver Wood Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Luna convinces Hermione to perform a specific charm, and the results change the lives of four unsuspecting wizards.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Lunacy

Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Truth and Consequences

Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Reaping What You Sow

Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Reactions

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Dealing With Fate

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: First Day of Many

Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Coming to a Realization

Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Time Marches On

Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Making Adjustments

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Accepting The Situation

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Making Progress.

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Discovery

Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Two Steps Back

Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Admissions

Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Power of Love, Part One

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Power of Love, Part 2

Chapter 17: Epilogue


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10/10

potionmastersmistress

Severus and Rhett, my two literary loves!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! You and me both! ;-)

0/10

potionmastersmistress

HA! Everyone got laid except for poor Luna! What a git Ron is, he should have been happy that he was finally getting some.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL Thanks! Yeah, you'd think, wouldn't you?

0/10

potionmastersmistress

Oh Ron. Luna isn't so bad! Another great chapter!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! No, she's not, and he will discover that soon!

9/10

potionmastersmistress

Brava!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you!

9/10

potionmastersmistress

When Ron punched Severus, I had this fun little mental image of him as a Bobo Doll, popping right back up and laughing! Well done!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it!

9/10

potionmastersmistress

Great start! Oh, how we girls cause mischief at slumber parties!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! yes, exactly! Thanks!

10/10

June W

Idiot!Ron does not deserve sweet Luna!  Still treating her like dirt, talking to Hermione in front of Luna as if she wasn't even there.... grrr!!  I hope Severus will make the Wolfsbane for the 13-y-o boy; poor kid.  thanks for the new chapter!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks June! Emotions were running high for him (and Luna too) that morning. He was confused about Luna and their connection, and then running into Hermione after being so intense with Luna startled him, and he lashed out.More on all that with the boy coming up!

9/10

zyra

Moving forward a month in next chapter? Hmm, I wonder how successful Hermione did in 'killing Severus with kindness'... I'm sure she has plans, she always does.

Stubborn, stubborn Ron... I pity Harry more in this matter actually. I thought Ginny might have a harder time to make Oliver falls for her. That suit her right for doing that to Harry.

Anyhow, I hope there will be Severus in next chapter! 

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, gonna go forward a month...Ginny feels really guilty and does hurt. The problem is she loves how she feels with Oliver, something she hasn't felt with Harry in a very long time. And too, right at that moment, she was a tad jealous! Don't worry, I have planse for Harry...A lot of Severus up next!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I look forward to seeing Hermione and Snape interacting. I feel so sorry for Harry. Maybe he'll find a nice little Italian witch, eh? She can feed him pasta and take him on lovely little walks. Ah the romance.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! HG/SS are up next!Yep, I definitely have plans for Harry.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Dang, Dean's been getting around, eh? LOLOL

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! Yes! He's our regular little playboy! ;-)

10/10

Moreteadk

Great! This was exactly what I needed today!

That was a nice touch on Severus and Hermione. I had never thought about that being part of the reason he keeps her at arm's length. Poor man! I suspect he doesn't stand a chance against Hermione. He won't know what hit him.

Oliver and Ginny seem to be getting on nicely. Sooner or later they're going to realise that being married to each other is really rather nice and I think they probably won't even be aware of falling in love until afterwards. If that made sense. I think happiness is going to sneak up on them when they're otherwise occupied.

Ron and Luna probably requires a lot more work. It must have been terrible for Luna to stand there and listen to them arguing, but I'm a little less mad at Ron now, because he's right that she should have given him a warning instead (and yes I do know that they were under the influence of the elf wine when it happened)

I really hope Harry will meet a nice girl. The Gryffindor/Slytherin lover in me wants to suggest Pansy. *grin*

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you so much! Your reviews are always great!We are going to learn a lot more about Severus and his feelings next chapter. Right. Oliver and Ginny do seem to be the ones adjusting the fastest right now because Oliver has the mind of, "Nothing I can do about it, mine as well enjoy it." ;-)Ron (imo) is a very emotional guy. He is very hurt, and when hurt, he lashes out. His anger never lasts though...Oh, I have plans for Harry!

0/10

nightshift

Sounds like there are still some adjustments to be made. Ron's still treating Luna like a second class citizen, and she's still putting up with it.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, it's not been long enough for them to have adjusted just yet...Keep in mind that Luna feels very guilty and feels also that all of this is her fault, so it causes her to put up with more than she usually would!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks! Yep, it's not been long enough for them to have adjusted just yet...Keep in mind that Luna feels very guilty and feels also that all of this is her fault, so it causes her to put up with more than she usually would!

0/10

WriterMerrin

I think Luna's going to be able to convince Ron way easier that Hermione will with her new husband.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! Yeah, Severus is older, and more set in his ways! LOL

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! Yeah, Severus is older, and more set in his ways! LOL

0/10

WriterMerrin

Interesting scenarios.  It's so like Snape to fight against his own happiness, and so like Ron to just sleep through what's supposed to be this eventful moment.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you! Uh huh, that's what I think too. ;-)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you! Uh huh, that's what I think too. ;-)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Looks like Luna's on to something.  I like that Hermione is the first one to remember that it is about being soul mates.  That should ease the transition.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! You would think... but Hermione seems to be the only one right now who remembers and believes that.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! You would think... but Hermione seems to be the only one right now who remembers and believes that.

0/10

WriterMerrin

Great job with everyone's emotions.  I'm really looking forward to seeing how the couples start to fit together.  Looks like Ginny and Oliver are good together after all, and it's nice that Ron wasn't left out in the cold.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THank you so much! It will take awhile for some to get there! No, I couldn't leave Ron out, and I won't forget about Harry either!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THank you so much! It will take awhile for some to get there! No, I couldn't leave Ron out, and I won't forget about Harry either!

0/10

WriterMerrin

Even after seeing his name at the top, Oliver Wood is still a surprising choice.  I really enjoyed the scene at the Malfoys, especially Matchmaking Narcissa.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! Glad I could surprise you! Yep, couldn't you just see her doing that? teehee

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

THanks! Glad I could surprise you! Yep, couldn't you just see her doing that? teehee

10/10

whitmirec

Severus, severus, severushe will never learn hurry and write the restI cant wait

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! He might! ;-) More up soon, I promise!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! He might! ;-) More up soon, I promise!

10/10

whitmirec

oh nowhat is ron and luna going to do

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! Leave it to Ron, eh?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

LOL! Leave it to Ron, eh?

10/10

whitmirec

ahahere comes the good stuff

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

**Rubs hands together...**

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

**Rubs hands together...**

10/10

whitmirec

oh man everything is happening so fast what will they all do?

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Yep. didn't want to give them time to think about it all!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Yep. didn't want to give them time to think about it all!

10/10

whitmirec

yikescant wait to see whats next

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thanks!

10/10

whitmirec

hahahahhhahha liking it already

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Glad to hear it, and glad you are reading!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Glad to hear it, and glad you are reading!

10/10

zyra

Ah. Very intriguing. I can't wait to see how Severus realizes that Hermione *is* his soul mate and that he loves her despite his feeling for Lily. I hope it won't be rushed. Severus is a complicated man, that we agree... so since he had stated that he loved Lily and Lily only, I hope that there's a developing stages in their relationship. But reading this, I have a feeling you won't disappoint me. :) Will this story spans up for a year? I wonder how these three couples would be after a year is up...

Those moments between Ron and Luna was really hilarious though!! Update quick please!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

! I will have more on SS and his feelings for LE soon. It won't be rushed... Yep, we will go through the year and see the development of each relationship.LOL Glad you enjoyed my RW/LL!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

! I will have more on SS and his feelings for LE soon. It won't be rushed... Yep, we will go through the year and see the development of each relationship.LOL Glad you enjoyed my RW/LL!

9/10

kimjo2

protest indeed!  looking forward to further developements.  thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you! I should be finished with the next one by Sat.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of Magical Betrothal)

Thank you! I should be finished with the next one by Sat.

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