New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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I love this story..... the best Hermione/Snape fic I've read! I'm on the edge of my seat each time, waiting for more. Thank you for the long chapter!
Wow!
Great update!!!
John, Paul, and George?....was Ringo busy? :)I'm really enjoying this story, good work.
Mehr, bitte! Liebe das Geschichte!:D This is currently my favorite WIP, and I'm always on the edge of my seat waiting for updates. Keep up the excellent work.Thanks for writing,-ickles.P.S.How long will this be? I'm rooting for an epic here.
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Oh, you're cruel. This was a great long chapter, but however will I survive until the next? ;)
Hmmm. The "Babel Fish Translater" claims that ' Frohe ' means glad ... and that ' Fröhlich ' means merry.
What an excellent chapter! Long and filled with information. I get the impression that Madam Prince is not very thrilled with Severus giving the Nexus to Hermione. What a sneaky trick to give her the necklace, without explaining, and make HG into a walking advertisement!
I’m curious though… Herr Singer, is he Morgen’s husband or their father? She’s rather blatant in her quest for Severus’ attentions if she is married. Also, it’s a good thing Tiberius does not have a fourth son! Imagine explaining a “Ringo Prince” at Durmstrang! And Madam Prince asking Severus about treating her home as a brothel because of Hermione; would she have had the same talk with him had he spent the ‘expected’ evening with Morgen? OMG, what a despicable cad Severus was for telling Hermione he was leaving her bed for another! Even if he 'made his excuses' to Morgen, he still left Hermione thinking something else.
So many cans of worms you’ve opened! Can’t wait to read where you take it all once they’re back at Hogwarts. And what sort of trouble SS will be in with Voldemort.
What an interesting visit! I can't blame Hermione for not wanting to face any of those people again though. ;-)
I'm hoping Madam Prince is playing matchmaker in her Slytherin way and not being a general troublemaker. She must have known someone of the younger males around would have shown active interest in Hermione, which would lead to Severus being jealous - which might well make him draw even closer to Hermione. Most intriguing, in any case.
I must admit, this is now my favorite chapter, I love the whole backstory and the characters in the Family Prince. Wunderbare!
I also feel mortified for Hermione as well, the whole family knows? The walls certainly do have ears, eh?
Hot! Hot! Hot! And getting intriguing... Nice work.
What, no Ringo?Another excellent chapter! Snape's Grandmother seemed kind and sympathetic, but she clearly knew the consequences of having Hermione wear the nexus. What is her Slytherin mind plotting?
Oooo, very interesting! I wondered if we'd learn more about this Nexus. Heh, and now Voldy's going to know where his curse imprinted... looking forward to the next chapter!
Dang, that was quite the chapter. So much of so much. LOVED it! =DI'm glad the Nexus was explained. And I always love it when you name your "other" characters. John, George and Paul. And Morgen - I'm taking it as in Morga(or e)n Le Fey. Don't know if you totally meant it that way, but she sure fits the bill.As wonderful as this blockbuster of a chapter is you know I'm already craving more. Sorry, just the price you pay. ^.~
Fantastic chapter!
wonderful chapter!! And what is Grandmother up to? What will Voldermort do to our Severus when he finds out?! Loved all the details about the Nexus- lovly writing as always.
what a wonderful chapter. your writing is amazing. i wonder what his grandmother has planed for them. i can't wait to see what you do next. please update soon. keep up the good work.
Hermione's reaction to his approval on Christmas morning -- that she feels the urge to wriggle like a happy puppy -- reminds me of me, every time I read something new of yours!
See?!
Oh my. The dynamics of Severus' family are ... very interesting, to say the least. His grandmother is certainly sharp, but what is she playing at? She had to know what would happen with Hermione once she put that Nexus on. This certainly adds a wrench to things! Excellent as always!
Response from firefly124 (Reviewer)
Oh, and I have to add that I got a huge kick out of the brothers John, Paul, and George! What, no Ringo?
I do love me some jealous!Snape. :)
Hmmm,is gran playing matchmake,or troublemaker? Very intesting.
Wow! As hot as ever (I liked that image of Snape's face framed between the pointed black shoes...) and besides we have plot, lots of plot, and with the Prince family too!Nice touch with Morgen - I took a malicious pleasure in seeing that green eyes and red hair are not always an open sesame to Severus' heart.Thank you for writing this, it's a delight.
Awesome chapter!!
I must admit, this is my favorite chapter. I also must disagree with Ms. Karen Detroit. It is *very* likely that there still exists a Prince family. Seeing as how this is *your* story, and you can include whoever you choose. It is richly written; some are on the Dark Side, and is well hinted that others side with the Light.Your story has developed well, and I have enjoyed reading each tidbit you send along.&hugs&
Excellent chapter as always. Sev's jealousy, his admission that he hadn't slept with Morgan - yeah :) Love it!
Frohe Weihnachten: Yep it is. I take German at school.