New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Finally, the dark faction get their just rewards! Loved Hermione's blue bell wall, Morgan had it coming. Glad Tonks was there before she was dispatched permanantly. It was a good sign that SS was able to help Harry keep up the golden shield. Love the title and chapter names (my favorite beatle song). Irritating Creavy boy, no matter, would have worried more if Ginny had been the one to cast the attack. Great chapter in a great story. Can't wait for the last chapter.
Please don't leave us hanging here for too long!!!! This was such a great chapter! The line "I think I'm loving people." just made my day. Everything was soooo sad and soooo desperate and you throw in this great line of all. I really enjoyed it. Now on to the happy end, right?gab
What a chapter! But only one left! Please write another like this.I hope Severus doesn't die! Pretty Please! lol
Looking forward to the ending.
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great chapter! that was intense! I can't wait to read more!
Ohh, I loved this solution for getting rid of Riddle! Wonderfully done.A terrific chapter in every way. Now it's just hoping that young Dennis used a Stunner or something simple like that...~Kribu
Oh wow. Now that I've finished reading this chapter, I might try and finish biting my fingernails as well. How on earth did you manage to put that much plot into less than 9500 words? The ruse to lure Harry to Voldemort from different angles, the attack on Hogsmeade, Hermione's revenge on Morgen, Harry to "Hermione's" rescue, the DA to Harry's rescue and, as the cherry on top, Lord Thingy's demise. Once again: oh wow. Ok, I admit I'm really lousy at reviewing, especially concerning the frequency, but I really, really like this story and I fervently hope neither Hermione nor Severus have suffered permanent damage - I'm one of these happy-ending-addicts, you know?!Thank you for writing this gem and for sharing it! Hope to read even more stories by you! :o))
I usually dislike the finale battle because of roughnes and death of innocents , but I just love how You done this one.Love the golden love -shild which kill Voldermort . I hope that Severus is only stuned , and after all the recovery he will finally find peace and happynes in the end with his Hermione. Can wait for finalle , lemon and sugar in the end. I am also sad that this story is come to end , and hope You write a new one as well as this is .
Great chapter (and I usually don't like battle scenes). I hope that everyone is okay and you give us at least one steamy scene before you finish this story. I loved that the good guys get to have some of the cool things the Deatheaters have/do in the books, Severus passing through the gates at Hogwarts and Dumbledore's mark replacing the Dark Mark are fabulous and I don't remember seeing these details in other stories I've read.
hopefully some hermione severus lemons if he's up to it! i hope the younger creevey didnt hurt sev too badly. this has been one of my favorite stories for so long, i'm really sad to see it come to an end. you're a brilliant writer and i hope to see more stories by you up
bloody insufferable Creevey child! I applaud you as usual, cant wait for the next, and sadly final, chapter!
This fic just gets better and better! Great to have a Snape/Prince chapter, very interesting.And thankyou for making it such a lovely, long chapter, such a lovely treat!Wondering why Grandma told Hermione to wear the Nexus, is she up to something?
That was quite romantic wasn't it?! I really liked it, and bless her for wanting to get the mistletoe for him!
What do you mean this has developed a plot? What a wonderful story from the start.....I love the shagging....everything else is candy, window dressing, and icing and what adorements you have created....you write them (SS/HG) oh so well.....You're updates are like Christmas morning for me! Thanks for this wonderful gift!
I don't review very often, but I just wanted to say that this is one of my favorite H/S fics ever. Very intense!
LOVE the picture!!
Blaaah! Hagrid!! He won't be able to hold out much longer..
I feel bad for Severus because I have no doubt that in the end he'll think she'll want to leave him.
Poor Severus! (kind of...!)
I've read this before, but I'm reading it again! Your writing is wonderful, and I feel so much for both the characters and their predicament!
FANTASTIC update!OMG I am on the edge of my seat here. I'm enthralld by the twists this story has taken. Really really godo work. How do you update so quickly? (Not that I am complaining!)Awesome, keep it up.
I've reread this chapter several times. it's so rich with details that raise more and more questions, and hint at more plot twists to come, plus the continued emotional and sexual tensions that manage to keep building relentlessly. There are so many fabulous things to itemize, but instead i'll just say that one thing struck me hard -- Severus "chuckled" as he spoke to Morgen. Talk about cut like a knife! That one word made him seem more relaxed and contented than I've ever seen him, and it doesn't seem in his repertroire of spy-tricks that we've seen so far. Oh, poor Hermione! (Yes, I realize he doesn't love Morgen, but does he have to be so damned comfortable with her?)
Breathlessly awaiting the next chapter....
Apart from the fact that flushed cheeks and squirming posture are not appropriate signs of concentration at work and bring me uncomfortable embarassment, I enjoy said embarassment immensely. Congratulations to such a chapter!
But I must wonder now if the fact that she made love to him while wearing the Nexus might mean that she had bound herself to him? We will surely find out soon enough. Hopefully, you would then also reveal why Severus's grandmother coerced her into it then. Most intriguing home dynamics. I also can't wait to see Snape slithering his way out of his post-Christmas conversation with Voldemort.
Except for being unbelievably hot, this chapter presented so many exciting questions it hurts to wait for more.
My first five stars for you in this story. With an extra bow, Madam.
ooh..... nice long chapter..... John, Paul, George, but no Ringo? Well, I'm glad Hermione finally knows more about the Nexus. Will you tell us more about why Severus' mother married a Muggle? That Morgen needs a good Obliviate and/or Memory Charm, and I think Severus' grandmother could do it in her sleep. Thanks for the chapter, sweetie. It was worth the wait!
Das war ein super Kapitel!!! oops wrong language
This was a fantastic chapter!!! I'd been hoping right from the start that there would be more than just shagging (as much as I've been enjoying that part), and now it's happening more obviously, that's wonderful. As always, I'm tremendously looking forward to the next chapter. :-)