New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Aww, poor Hermione. What an ordeal it must have been for her to be kidnapped by Voldie.
Ahhhhhh... lovely! :)
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I enjoyed every line. Can I beg from every reader just for a one shot epiloge or maybe more. Thank you again
just wonderful how you tied up all the loose ends. but how could he make her wait so long?! and wait so long himself. this was lovely: "For the time being, Petal, know that you are my Hope and my Reason." so many highlights - the scene with kreacher and scampy was funny. and the scene where the prince ladies came and gave her that present was perfect. and then the cottage, and the whole explanation of the vinculum, and then the long-awaited happy togetherness. this story has been such an amazing journey. i am thinking what a joy it will be to reread it now and see all the significance of everything that i might not have noticed on the first go. thank you so much for letting your little "pwp" totally outgrow its britches and become this story. :D
...I have tears in my eyes!! Happy ending- sad that the story is ending. I'm amazed at writers who can truely make AU real! You are amoung the few who CAN do this. Sereously!!! True to life characterization, realistic plot (as realalistic as fanfic can get!), feelings, emotions, layers of stories...you are one of the BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to your next adventure!Please go have a bowl a gallon of ice cream, & chocolates & loads of lemons...you deserve it! Thank You!!
Excellent!!! Truly Excellent!!!!!Please say you'll compose an epilogue. I would be so sad if you didn't.
Excellent ending to a wonderful and rich story. It was intense and colorful throughout. I will miss this universe you have created, but look forward to your next offering. Good luck in future adventures. Thanks again for sharing, JoAnne
Hmm, I regret that you skipped a few crucial scenes and only presented them in narrative summary at the beginning of this chapter.I should have very much liked to see how Hermione was truly feeling and holding up and experiencing her last year, now free of the curse, but still in love with Severus...I believe that there are really important moments missing by fast-forwarding to the happy ending like that.However, the ending is very nice.Strangely enough, the very last bit - with the grandmother - is my favourite part of the chapter. I'm wondering how it was for her to bind herself that way, to lose that bond, and to have the echo of her husband still with her in the painting...I've been following the story almost from the start, and it's been one HELL of a ride.I applaud your courage for writing a story about the darkest aspects love spells can take. That was brilliantly conceived, and executed ruthlessly, but always compassionately.Although I was a bit disappointed how the last chapters played out - they came across a bit flat and hurried to me - this is certainly one of the most powerful SS/HG stories I've read in the past year.Thank you very much for sharing your talent with us!
Ohh, I am intrigued. What a horrifying thing!!! I thought that line from the US ootp was familiar.I'd like to read the UK versions just to see the differences.
Beautiful! Loved this.
I loved that chapter, it was great! I'll have to search for the story you did after HBP now...
Fluffy to boot and befitting the story, I love this final chapter. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your post-DH therapy works for us, your readers, as well. AU is just so much more satisfactory. The final Madam Prince touch was marvelous. You crafted her as a very interesting and moving character, and the last scene you gave her brought her storyline to a closure with much respect. Thank you for her too.
Absolutely wonderful and enchanting story. Bravo dear.
Perfect.
Thank you sooo much for this amazing story.I loved every chapter and I will reread it a lot of times.I'm sorry it is over now but the ending was wonderful.Thank you; Hope you will come back with another story.
Thank you sooo much for this amazing story.I loved every chapter and I will reread it a lot of times.I'm sorry it is over now but the ending was wonderful.Thank you; I hope you will come back with another story.
Awwwww!!!! I love it when Sev finds happiness!!
Thank You for this beautifle story . It has been a real pleasure reading it , and waiting for each new chapter , and I must say I will miss this. But in the end I congratulate You and hope for new one to come . I think I will rearead it soon.
A wonderfull story, it has been a pleasure reading it, looking for updates. Now I will reread it from the beginning. You are a very talented writer, all your stories are something special. Hoping for a new story beginning soon.
What a wonderful ending to a wondeful story, no doubt i will read it again, unless you decide to write another epic like this?? x.x
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!Thank you.
What a perfect ending to a most excellent story. Thank you so much for sharing this labor of love with all of us!
beautiful..... i loved "his draught of delicate poison" and i loved this fic.... u potray severus in such a brilliant manner while remainging tre to his character.....its amazing.... btw just wanted to clarify.... did ron also get an order of merlin third class or which class did he get as u havent killed any weasleys and just mentioned that the five oldest sons got the order second class.... just curious....
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I'm always worried when a long story comes to an end, because I'm not always satisfied with the ending. You closed this beautifully, though. It has been a wonderful journey. I can't believe it's over. I will certainly have to go back and read it from start to finish sometime.
That was gorgeous! The ending was absolutley perfect!