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The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Dumbledore is a master of manipulation, isn't he? Although in this particular situation, I suppose he is trying to find the best possible solution out of the many bad ones.
An intriguing start, in any case!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Yes, no twinkly Dumbledore, sadly. I will agree that he's trying to find the best possible solution, but it is also another example of him sacrificing Severus without a backward glance. Thanks so much for the note!
Love it! I love the last line is heartwrenching
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thank you, Spikesra. I'm rather addicted to disturbing last sentences - I'm glad you liked that one. More to come!
WHEEEEE!!!! Off on another wonderful journey at the fingers of you!!! ^.^ A little mourning time was needed by all, but now we continue with the "good stuff". Can't wait to keep reading!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Ooh, journeysome fingers! Mine wave back to yours:
Yes, I've mourned, and now I've said fluck it! I'm gonna write some MASHED POTATOES WITH GRAVY. NO FREAKING CRUNCHY GREEN VEGETABLES.
Yes, good stuff ahead. Later, I'll do post-DH. probably.
Oh, yeah! *sits back, puts up feet, crosses arms behind head* I'm in for the long haul on this one!Peace ~ j
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
LOL! Lovely image, doll. More to come soon!
Yeah!! Terrific beginning and I love the premise. Looking forward to more. Ahh, I'm in heaven just dreaming of the possibilities....
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
A true SSHG fan, I can tell! There are so many places to go with such a beginning, I agree. Thanks for the note!
Squee!!!!! Another HG/SS from Subversa! My summer is now complete. Whooo Hooo. Very compelling start. I can't tell who my heart is breaking for more, Severus, because what he has to do, or Hemione, because what she will become part of, or Maybe even Dumbledore, for what he must witness and excuse because it is war. Awe.... It just hurts. Either way, I'm loving every minute of it.... More pretty please... Oh, and of curse hugs to SubHub....
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi, hon! Boy, I barely got this one in under the wire for summer, didn't I? After DH, I'm afraid my store of sympathy for AD is at an all-time low, but I do feel for both Severus and Hermione. Thank you for letting me know you'd read it, sweetie - more to come, soon.
Yes!!! finally another story. I look forward to the rest of it. By the way, you write a great 'Snape'.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! I'm glad you like my Snape - he's a tortured soul, but I can't help but love him. I'm very pleased to know you're looking forward to the rest of it!
There are a lot of references to the sould here. A DH's legacy, probably. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I would hate to think anything of this story is DH's legacy, but obviously, my characterization of Dumbledore comes from my feelings around DH. I think Severus mentions his soul because, I think the necessity of opening himself up to Hermione to some extent equates, in his mind, to surrendering the hidden, protected core of himself to someone else - and for this to be at AD's instigation is just too much, for him. Thank you for reading, my dear.
oooh this sounds like a interesting on *patiently waits for next chapter* My screen name is a somewhat obscure Paul McCartney reference so go you for having the beatles thrown in there :))
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
So far, we SSHG folk seem to be a Beatles-loving lot! I'll have to investigate the origin of Calico Skies, though. Thanks for taking the time to leave a note, my dear.
*impressed whistle* I'm worried, but better Severus for what you've implied than anyone else mentioned.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Yes, he's the best one, because it is a horrible thing them both, to be forced into something they would not have chosen at this juncture of their lives. I do ache for him, having to risk his terribly solitary soul in a forced intimacy.
I was wondering whether or not the title came from a Beatles' song. Excellent beginning. I look forward to reading more.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
We Beatles-lovers recognize their lyrics, don't we? I'm tickled that it caught your eye. I'm glad you like the beginning; I hope to post the next by the weekend.
This is the Dumbledore that I can easily buy into. Not necessarily evil, but does everything in his power to see to the right thing being done.
This promises to be another one of your interesting and long stories. I look forward to its unfolding.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
I'm so pleased that you aren't put off because the story is not canon-compliant. I just find comfort in spending time in AU, don't you? Thank you for the lovely encouragement.
Response from wsanders (Reviewer)
Well I honestly don't understand why some people turn their noses up on AU by default. I'm certainly keeping this story on my TPP bookmark list.
Very interesting start. Hope to read more soon.
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Thanks,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! I hope to update by the weekend.
I'm so intrigued by this story. I don't know that I can put into words how excited I am. :-)Lovely beginning!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
LOL! Well, I hope it lives up to your excitement, love. Thank you for the beta and the endless support.
Wow! I love what you have so far and can't wait for more!
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
Hi,
Response from Subversa (Author of The Love You Take)
! I'm glad you like what you've seen so far - more to come soon!
I told you. someone should have AKed that Morgen years ago!
Gotta feel sorry for Sev when he was young, just as well he's got better taste now.
A deeply twisted cliffhanger - what a choice!
Around 10 years ago I read this story and was absolutely in love with it. Now, here I sit, with liquid pooling in my eyes as once again this tale has touched my heart. Thank you so much for having the courage to share this pure joy with all of us. Your writing is flawless, your respect of the characters is top notch and your story telling sucked me right in to every single moment. Thank you so much again. Much Love ~ Brena
so, um, more please. I hope it's just the holiday season that has you too busy to update and not the lose of plot kitties.
I really loved this story. You did a great job and it is beautifully written. The whole thing was a pleasure to read.
This is one of my favorites by you. I love reading your work!! =)
What a wonderful way to end this magnificent epic. I have really enjoyed your story, and I have no doubt I will read it again and again.
I adored this story. It has been such a joy to follow it as you've written it. It was sexy, suspenseful, frightening, moving, and ultimately extremely satisfying. Thanks for writing!
Hi. I really enjoyed this story. it was well written and very moving at the end.