I love this story so much!  Please update soon.  Poor Hermione having to compete against Morgan (red hair and green eyes really are stunning).

This was my favorite chapter yet, not only because it was the longest (!!) but also because it really emphasized the struggle between Hermione's physical satisfaction and her emotional turmoil. I think you may be right, these lemons are nicely cushioned with some highly intriguing plot.I also love where and how you ended this. It provides a very interesting transition to the next chapter, which I can't wait for :D Thanks for writing and for sharing!-ickles.

So did she really just want him because it was him or has she just convinced herself of that even though it's acutally part of the curse?? hmm.... I'm not sure, if it is the latter, whether Sev would correct her or just patronize those feelings - don't really know alot of what he is feeling right now. Looking forward to seeing how it all pans outs.

I'm all for the love!!!  This chapter ... what can I say?  Hot sex in the potions' storeroom.  Him telling her, "No" after he made her *BEG* him to fuck her.  *happy sigh*  Her finding that she wants him, even without the 'need' being present.Ahh, the possibilities!!

You know, there's an awful lot to be said for a "wild, primitive fuck".
Damn I love this story!

Loved the picture.... Great chapters (pc was down so I'm catching up lol).

Yay! Great chappie!!

What is happening with his hair in that picture? Haha! Nonetheless, a fun few chapters so far!

Excellent,  I'm glad Severus finally came around, Albus has bad timing lol.

He wonders if she's up to something because she's unusually quiet, not chatty--well, I guess getting one's brains shagged out on a regular basis makes one disenclined to make idle chat

OMG...amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter.

It would seem that Severus wanted to ignore Dumbledore because of the news that he might've brought. Or I could be reading too much into it, and Dumbledore only wanted to check on Hermione.  I like how Severus finally gave up on the impotence potion, and decided to make a potency potion so that he can keep up with Hermione. I don't think he'll be able to let her go when the time comes, and I don't think Hermione'll do the same.  The reality of the situation is Severus' boggart, as he puts it, gives me the idea that he fears losing Hermione for good.

If this is a curse then sign me up.  The only problem I could see, is being sure you have the right person there in the morning to wake up to.  I mean Dumbledore ew!

Hmmm, what is she up to then?Great chapter, especially that last section, it was really lovely.

Oh my! An amazing chapter, I loved it, so intense and emotionally charged, well done, and then comes the picture! I don't know what it is about your writing that sets you apart from so many other writers, but you realy do "get" them, if you know what I mean!OMG! That is so much more evil than a cliffie, totally unexpected, I made the most bizarre noises as I choked on my drink! I love it!

I loved that last paragraph, it ended the chapter so well!  Now I'm very curioius as to see what happens next...

Yes ... exactly what *is* Miss Granger up to now???I enjoyed this chapter and all of Severus' emotional ups and downs.  I can't wait to know what she is thinking!

Wow, here we sit on this precipice overlooking "reality" for our two characters (poor things) but MAN, what a precipice it is. (all hot and sexy, yet sweet and soft at the same time)  I can't even pinpoint what I love most about this whole chapter.  I'll just say that I can't wait for more and leave it at that. ^.^

If I could only read one fic over and over for the rest of time....THIS WOULD BE THE ONE! I want to know what happens next, but I don't want it to end ever.  This is a wonderful story.  I love it.

Hot, hot, hot!! I love this story, but I am starting to wonder how they will manage when school starts again? I guess you have thougth of that already and I do so look forward to where your plot takes us:-)) Update again soon.

I like how you've captured the shift in him as he first steps away from that distance he's tried to keep and towards simply doing what must be done and then actually surrendering to her ... but yet knowing she's under a compulsion.  There's this sense that he's finally having this moment of being someone's entire focus, and yet knowing it's not truly real somehow.

This is a great chapter! Too bad it isn't longer! I can't wait for the next one! How long is this story going to be?

Whew...it's hot in there with Hermione and Severus. But also a little bit enigmatic, which makes things interesting. With the story being strictly Severus' POV, there's definitely a bit of mystery about Hermione and her quiet moods. Another mystery is how they'll cope with a regular school day, which should be REALLY interesting.

Is she up to something?That last section is probably my favorite passage of yours EVER.  I don't exactly know what it is about it that makes it so beautiful ... but that goes to show just how much thought and care has gone into its creation, yes?  What an amazing mental picture -- not just the two of them physically, but the way Severus' world has changed because of her.I'm not saying that I'm sure everything's all right in the story, since they do have to go back to that real world and function in it.  But I see hope here, now.

I was trying to remember what this reminded me of, and it's that story by Darnedchild (I think).  One of my favs of the fandom.  This is a nice rendition.