New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
Subversa1,365 Reviews | 6.59/10 (1,365 Ratings, 0 Likes, 977 Favorites )
Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Oh please please tell me that Morgen gets hers at some point. She's such a bitch and it's a testament to how you create the characters that I can dislike her so much.Another fantastic chapter.
THAT. WAS. EVIL.A great cliffie (if you like cliffies) at the end of a really wonderful chapter, but please make it quick and update again soon!!!Just really great work! Thanks for updating!gab
Oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no oh no! Bad Morgen! Bad, bad, bad, bad, BAD, bad Morgen! Oooh, I am seething with anger! She was uncomfortably similar to Bellatrix with all her insane chuckling and maniacal cackling. *shiver*Oh, I do hope everything ends up okay, but I have to say that I really hope there's difficulties ahead, and I trust you to make the path of Severus and Hermione rocky and trying. Kind of an odd thing to hope for, but I sure do.Thank you for the wonderful update!~Katie
oh god I hate her, congrats on making me honestly hate a fictional character!please update soon!
Will you stop mentioning Hagrid! The visual imagery is not pleasant!
I knew you would update as soon as you finished Across the Anvil and you did!! I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a such a great story!
i'm confused severus said that it was his first time as well, but in the begining of the story he was worried about being with Hermione because he'd never been given a girls virginity before. did i misunderstand something?love this story to death by the way <3
Every time I read a chapter of this story, I think that there is no way you will be able to out do yourself. And every time I'm wrong! This chapter... oh my. What to say.First of all, go Hermione! I was practically cheering outloud for her when she so aptly defended herself against Morgen.And Severus knows, now, says Scampy. I can only hope that he knows he loves her. *sigh*And the evil, evil cliffie. That Morgen... wow. You have created a truly memorable orignal character. Its hard to create original characters and have them fit so seamlessly in the HP world, but you have brilliantly done so with Morgen and Severus' family. ~Brava!~As always, this update was well worth the wait. I camnot wait to find out what happens with voldemort *shudders*
nothing matches the excitement of seeing that you have updated this story. (except maybe getting a review for my own story, but even then it's damn close.) but --aaarrgghhh! evil, evil cliffie! and that evil, evil b*tch of a witch! i really want to do horrible things to that woman. you know, that woman who doesn't even exist but is a construct of your amazing imagination. i love that severus took hermione's side. poor hermione - it's hard being in love with someone who doesn't want to hear it. i wonder when/if she'll figure out what scampy was talking about, or if now she will be too distracted.please don't make us wait too long for the next! i'm worried about what will happen, even though we know severus will do his best to protect hermione. but - aaarrrggghhhh!
argh. why? who in the wizarding world comes up with these charms???? seriously? aaaauuugh, I'm in pain....but I have to know what happens. I hate that.
Yikes! Hell hath no fury... seriously. I hope Morgan gets her ass kicked, but you never know with the Dark Lord I suppose. I can't wait to find out. This story has to be my most favorite of all fanfiction. I get so excited everytime a new chapter is posted. Keep up the amazing work!
Now that is a masterful cliffhanger.......
First of all, my sincere gratefullness for the update! I have been thinking of nagging you for an update, but luckely you updated before you got a mail from a simpering fan, begging you for more chapters to read:-)That said, this was one evil cliffhanger, of all evil cliffhangers I have ever read, this one will be among the worst of them I think.:-)) Don't you dare wait so long for the next update, and more than that, don't you dare letting Hermione or Severus get into any harm due to Morgans petty actions. I guess one shouldn't be surpriced by her actions; she is among Voldidorks followers and have been snobbed by a "mudblood", her anger must feel no limits. I hope you have a very suitable revenge in store for her? Married of to an old toad would be very suitable if you ask me.... Again, don't let Hermione get into any harm, I hate it when Hermione is physically and sexually abused as entertainment for the Death Eathers. Malfoy have already gotten her into this situation with his curse, please don't let them have any more "victories" at her cost. Don't forget, update soon!!!!
Argh. May I hate Morgen? ;-) She's a delicious character, really, a truly wicked witch in all her gorgeousness.That was some cliffie though... very much looking forward to seeing how they'll come out of that!
Lovely. Always a pleasure to read this story. Thanks.
Morgen is a splendidly wicked character, with whom one could have just a leetle sympathy until this point. What has she done???
Oh, snap! Morgen is one vicious witch! Snape and Hermione are in a tight spot now!Livvy
Oh you wicked, wicked woman! How could you create such a turmoil as this and then just end the chapter! Morgen is a wonderful story catalyst, but she needs to go! She's as crazy and as dangerous as Bella. My imagination runs wild as to what could possibly happen in the aftermath of Morgen's meddling... none of it good for Hermione and probably not for Sev.
YIKES! Those women scorned are nothing but trouble. Hoo, doggy, can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh my! Evil cliffie!I do love this story. You never fail to serve up the drama along with the lemons.I especially love how beautiful your Morgan is, as well as how childish and selfish and conniving and ambitious. The juxtaposition of her and Hermione is really quite delightful.
I hope that Voldemort turns the tide against Morgen. She deserves to be tortured for what she has foolishly done.
yay! I'm so very glad you updated this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Very exciting. Loved it. You're managing to run a very decent plot here, admist all the steamy sex. Very well done. Can't wait for more.
What?!! No! Don't stop there! That was pure evil! Evil! Argh!*deep breath*Oh dear, I'm really scared to read the next chapter now. That stupid cow Morgen! They shouldn't have made her angry! But then again, he managed to convinced his grandmother not to invite her again. And Hermione seemed more respected in the eyes of the Prince family. But at what price! Now, she's determine to break them apart. She's one nasty bitch that one.Wonder what Morgen said that had provided her with the favor light from the Voldy. Surely Severus could think of something... but the last time... *shudders* This is bad, this is bad.But still... I just have to say, that no matter how many times they have sex in this story, the next one just seems hotter than the last. Wow, the way you visualize the scene... simply perfect. Very hot and steamy scene at the beginning, very satisfying after a long wait for update.Also, I like Scampy... yes, I do... *nods*
What a witch with a capital "B"! Morgen really needs to get what's coming to her.